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How would you retcon Strange New Worlds?

One of the most annoying things about the ultimate resolution to Data's arc is that the series always, and very obviously, seemed to be showing that he actually did experience emotions, he just didn't process them the same way as organic life forms did, or hadn't learned how to process them, or hadn't learned how to express them (or even recognize them within himself.) And then they just with the dumb "emotion chip" and ruined it.
Yeah, I never bought in to Data as emotionless. Early on showed much differently. And the emotion chip was not a good fit.

TOS had its quirks, but it at least allowed Spock to have emotions and work hard to manage them, rather than just not have them at all.
 
I wonder if Ortegas wasn't as queer coded people wouldn't have as much of a problem with her.
It's certainly possible that I'm a victim of my own unconscious biases, but as far as my conscious thoughts, I don't care for Ortegas because she only seems to be there to be cringily snarky. I am bored by characters who exist only for that purpose, and we have way too many of them in pop entertainment these days. She seems like she was primarily relegated to "saying things we can make GIFs out of for social media clout" kinds of duties.

La'an is my favorite non legacy character. I love seeing a woman who isn't all smiles and supporting mens emotions. I find it refreshing and relatable.
I guess for me it's a matter of believability. Federation starships are supposed to be these model harmonious workplaces. How can someone be such a major-league asshole and not wash right out of Starfleet? I have the same problem with Shaw in PIC S3: how could someone so bigoted and personally nasty rise to such a position? I know they're softening him over the course of the season, but it's not working on me as well as I think it's supposed to. He's still the guy who said all that stuff in the first episode, and La'an is still the woman who cruelly, manipulatively, and abusively interrogated a junior officer for an extremely minor offense in "Spock Amok." She is portrayed, throughout the show, as repeatedly making a choice to be cruel, rude, and standoffish, as being proud of those choices. And you know, it's fine if you don't like being around people. Really, it's fine! But maybe don't choose a career that will have you being around people all the time?
 
Actually, the season finale left a hint that Ortegas has a personal connection to the Earth-Romulan War, with her behaving like Stiles in TOS.
That will need to be demonstrated more clearly. As it stands, it felt like bad writing, shoehorning her into a familiar role that wasn't really hers. We hadn't seen anything to indicate that she was given to such intolerance before that episode (in part because we hadn't really seen anything to indicate anything about her before that episode.)
 
Federation starships are supposed to be these model harmonious workplaces.

Are they though?

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I think that might be a little too small-universe-syndrome
I like SNW quite a lot--might be my #2 Star Trek series overall behind DS9--but the small-world-syndrome ship has sailed. Cadet Uhura doing her rotations on the Enterprise, Sam Kirk being posted to the Enterprise, Nurse Chapel being on the Enterprise this early on, M'Benga being the CMO years before he'll somehow be not the CMO on the same ship...

I would be inclined to pair her with Chapel as the more diplomacy-minded "dove" -- they're good friends now, and them realizing that they have fundamentally conflicting beliefs about Federation security would make for a fascinating complication to their relationship. Would they be able to stay friends? Learn from each other, see where sometimes the other is right and they're wrong?

And it would have the added benefit of being a conflict between two women that's rooted in fundamental beliefs and personality, rather than being about a man (as so often happens in pop culture).
On the one hand, this is good because it does give Ortegas more dimensionality as a character. On the other hand, it seems more correctly suited to the Una/La'an relationship.
 
On the one hand, this is good because it does give Ortegas more dimensionality as a character. On the other hand, it seems more correctly suited to the Una/La'an relationship.

I don't know if we've seen evidence La'an has strong opinions about national security policy. But I also think this is the sort of debate that would probably have multiple people on both sides, and others in the middle. I could see La'an and Erica both being hawks, Christine being more of a dove, and Una being somewhere in the middle.
 
The TNG stories where they upheld the Prime
Directive were far better than the TOS stories where they didn’t.
I guess I prefer a Starfleet that saves lives over a Starfleet that allows them to be extinguished by the billions.
 
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"In a pig's eye,"

"What do you know. I finally got the last word."

"The green blooded son of a bitch. This is his revenge for always losing those arguments."

"Wrong, Mr. Chekov there was one casualty; my wits. As in frightened out of, Admiral."
 
While I'm far from a stickler for "Gene's vision" (lol, ugh, gross, yuck), I do prefer the idea of a Starfleet that prioritizes healthy workplace conduct.

I would suggest that Starfleet tries, but has its own institutional blind spots and failings. And yeah, prejudice against XBs is something that hasn't fully disappeared from Federation culture, sadly.
 
I don't know if we've seen evidence La'an has strong opinions about national security policy.
No explicit evidence, but plenty of strong evidence. There's much more about her character that would militate in that direction than there is about Ortega's. La'an's entire personal history is structured around her suffering at the hands of an alien enemy. We also know that she believes deeply that her suffering, and that of her family, did not need to happen, that it happened because Federation society does not take the threats of the deep dark unknown very seriously. And we know that she views with some contempt the Federation's ideology that anyone can be reasoned with. Her words about (what she believes is) the absolute futility of negotiating with the Gorn are as hard-right-wing as anything any of the badmirals say about the Klingons in TUC.

But I also think this is the sort of debate that would probably have multiple people on both sides, and others in the middle. I could see La'an and Erica both being hawks, Christine being more of a dove, and Una being somewhere in the middle.
One of my issues with TUC is the idea that there were so many hawks in Starfleet. I think it was an artifact of the movies' entire vibe shift, switching Starfleet from primarily a research organization (as it had been in TOS) to primarily a military one. But the end result was that we had way too many hawks in an organization which is explicitly predicated on peaceful exploration. If you want to show me hawks in the Federation, I want to see them outside Starfleet. I want to see them in Federation politics, for instance. Maybe I want to see them in terrorist groups, as ENT positioned them. Maybe we should get a glimpse of non-Starfleet, sub-Federation-level local military groups like a local Vulcan defense force, a local United Earth defense force, etc., and these would be better-suited to hawks. I just don't see why a hawk joins Starfleet in the first place.

Unless it was Starfleet who played a huge and important role in that hawk's life. La'an is only alive because Starfleet rescued her. I get why she's in Starfleet, but she is very clearly a hawk to my eyes. Simply by default, I would expect most other crew (including Ortegas and Chapel) to be doves. With Una, I think we have specific onscreen reasons to expect her to be a dove: she's a victim of Federation intolerance, and what is hawkishness if not--ultimately--a particularly bellicose form of intolerance?
 
"In a pig's eye,"

"What do you know. I finally got the last word."

"The green blooded son of a bitch. This is his revenge for always losing those arguments."

"Wrong, Mr. Chekov there was one casualty; my wits. As in frightened out of, Admiral."
Like I said, I don't really like TOS.
 
No explicit evidence, but plenty of strong evidence. There's much more about her character that would militate in that direction than there is about Ortega's. La'an's entire personal history is structured around her suffering at the hands of an alien enemy. We also know that she believes deeply that her suffering, and that of her family, did not need to happen, that it happened because Federation society does not take the threats of the deep dark unknown very seriously. And we know that she views with some contempt the Federation's ideology that anyone can be reasoned with. Her words about (what she believes is) the absolute futility of negotiating with the Gorn are as hard-right-wing as anything any of the badmirals say about the Klingons in TUC.

One of my issues with TUC is the idea that there were so many hawks in Starfleet. I think it was an artifact of the movies' entire vibe shift, switching Starfleet from primarily a research organization (as it had been in TOS) to primarily a military one. But the end result was that we had way too many hawks in an organization which is explicitly predicated on peaceful exploration. If you want to show me hawks in the Federation, I want to see them outside Starfleet. I want to see them in Federation politics, for instance. Maybe I want to see them in terrorist groups, as ENT positioned them. Maybe we should get a glimpse of non-Starfleet, sub-Federation-level local military groups like a local Vulcan defense force, a local United Earth defense force, etc., and these would be better-suited to hawks. I just don't see why a hawk joins Starfleet in the first place.

Unless it was Starfleet who played a huge and important role in that hawk's life. La'an is only alive because Starfleet rescued her. I get why she's in Starfleet, but she is very clearly a hawk to my eyes. Simply by default, I would expect most other crew (including Ortegas and Chapel) to be doves. With Una, I think we have specific onscreen reasons to expect her to be a dove: she's a victim of Federation intolerance, and what is hawkishness if not--ultimately--a particularly bellicose form of intolerance?

Well, the thing of it is, Starfleet in TOS really isn't a primarily research and exploration org. We constantly see it engaging in missions like, settler-colonial support ("The Devil in the Dark"), holding proxy wars with the Klingons on less-powerful planets ("A Private Little War"), border enforcement ("Balance of Terror"), espionage ("The Enterprise Incident"), and direct military confrontation ("Errand of Mercy"). So really the fact that there were so many hawks in TUC makes perfect sense. Conflict with the Klingons, both hot and cold, has essentially been the defining feature of the Federation's place on the interstellar stage for forty years by that point.
 
And what TNG story did that happen?
First of all, we must necessarily assume that the events which occur aboard the starship Enterprise are not unique, or even extremely uncommon. There are thousands of starships in Starfleet, zipping around all over the place. It is simply not believable that the Enterprise is the only one which keeps running into things like planets inhabited by pre-warp societies which are about to be extinguished by a natural disaster. So I'm going to assume that we agree to the premise that Starfleet vessels have encountered, at the least, hundreds of such worlds.

So moving on. In "Pen Pals," the Enterprise encounters the world Drema IV, inhabited by the Dremans. The Dremans appear to be roughly as advanced as mid-20th-century humans were, in terms of technology. If we assume similar advancements in health care, agriculture, etc., we can reasonably assume that there are, at minimum, hundreds of millions of Dremans, and probably more like billions. But according to Picard's interpretation of the Prime Directive, every single one of them must die. It is only after Data inadvertently violates the Prime Directive, and then makes an emotion-based plea to the rest of the crew to recognize Sarjenka's radio signal as a form of requesting aid, that the crew decides to violate the Prime Directive and save the Dremans. As if to drive home the point that Starfleet is institutionally opposed to such measures, this will later be implicitly brought up as a black mark on Picard's record by an activist judge in "The Drumhead" when she mentions that he has violated the Prime Directive nine times since taking command of the Enterprise.

A few years later, in "Homeward," the Enterprise again encounters a pre-warp civilization on Boraal II. This civilization is doomed to die due to the dissipation of its atmosphere. Crucially, it is fairly clear that Starfleet has known about this impending disaster for quite some time, which makes sense, because there is a Federation scientist observing the Boraalans. It beggars belief to surmise that Nikolai--who is passionately dedicated to the cause of preserving the Boraalan people--would not have reported their plight back to the Federation. So Starfleet is clearly making a choice not to save the Boraalans, either by artificially preserving their atmosphere or by relocating them. It appears that this has not even been given meaningful consideration at any level. And all of this is confirmed explicitly when Picard flatly refuses to help the Boraalans. The Boraalans are much less advanced than the Dremans, but we should still conservatively estimate several hundred million people are living on this planet. Nearly every single one is condemned to death by Starfleet's inaction.

In the same timeframe as TNG, we have the VOY episode "Thirty Days." Here, Voyager encounters the Moneans' ocean world (one of many truly interesting concepts tragically wasted on a show that refused to be interesting.) The ocean world was in danger of dissipating, and Voyager's crew discovered that this dissipation was caused by the Moneans themselves, and that it could be avoided if they would shift their economy to a more sustainable one. (One wonders if the people who complain that "Star Trek has gone woke because of the Kurtz Man" ever watched this episode, which came out in 1998.) But the Moneans refused to commit to such changes, even though Voyager determined that their world would dissipate completely within five years. Not only did Voyager choose not to assist the elements within Monean society which wanted to change their economy, Captain Janeway severely punished the one member of her crew who tried to help, and was willing to kill him to stop him. This world had five years to live. If the Monean government couldn't be bothered to shift its economy, do we really think they would have taken the necessary steps to evacuate the planet and colonize a new one? The Moneans are dead now. That is the only possible way to read that episode.

Now multiply those three instances (just the ones I could think of offhand) by the thousands of starships in the fleet, and try to imagine how many billions of people are dead because Starfleet didn't act. Now maybe you think that's really great and awesome, but I much prefer the Jim Kirk/Beckett Mariner approach to the Prime Directive, which involves saving the lives of people who are about to die. Not going back in time and saving Edith Keeler, just saving a world full of people who are about to die because of a preventable catastrophe.
 
Well, the thing of it is, Starfleet in TOS really isn't a primarily research and exploration org. We constantly see it engaging in missions like, settler-colonial support ("The Devil in the Dark"), holding proxy wars with the Klingons on less-powerful planets ("A Private Little War"), border enforcement ("Balance of Terror"), espionage ("The Enterprise Incident"), and direct military confrontation ("Errand of Mercy"). So really the fact that there were so many hawks in TUC makes perfect sense. Conflict with the Klingons, both hot and cold, has essentially been the defining feature of the Federation's place on the interstellar stage for forty years by that point.
My sense, with both TOS and TNG, was always that what we saw in most episodes was not what the ship was really "supposed" to be doing. That these were emergencies, or errands to be run on the way to what they were really doing, or surprise attacks, etc. The original Enterprise was on a five-year exploration mission! Their whole deal was exploring and discovering stuff, and the reason we didn't see that every episode is that people looking into microscopes for an hour is boring. Then in TNG, every episode opened with Picard talking into his log about how the Enterprise was en route to, like, look at a nebula or something.
 
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