Honestly, that write up sounds very logical. It ignores where these people might be in their emotional state. Depression isn't just being sad. It is an honest to goodness inability to see outside of one's perspective, to ask for help, to think differently. It takes pushing, prodding and even reaming to sometime seek help, at least in my experience.
The past doesn't need respect.
It also does little in terms of expanding the universe or characters. It is the same heart of gold style story as Han Solo.
Thank you but I didn't ignore the characters' emotional states. I just rejected them because they didn't come across as believable to me, especially Picard and Seven. And it's notable about reaming, that Picard was the person that got reamed the most. Raffi got a little from her son, but this season was about finding and throwing stones at all the supposed or freshly created flaws of Picard as part of the trendy deconstructionist storytelling of iconic characters. After Kirk and Spock, Picard is arguably the most iconic, and was the ripe choice for this kind of tearing down, and Sir Patrick was very willing to hand Chabon, etc. the dynamite.
The past might not
need respect, but not respecting the past after selling a new series based largely on nostalgia for a revered Trek hero, from the
past, doesn't make much sense. If CBS Trek doesn't want to respect the past then why go back to Picard at all? This could've been a series about Rios, Jurati, Elnor, and Raffi aboard the La Sirena. And CBS Trek swaddled itself in nostalgia as well when it came to DISCO, by setting it a decade before TOS, making Burnham Spock's sister, bringing in Spock and his parents, Pike, Number One, and the Enterprise. So to me if you are going to go back to the past, make it consistent with what came before, and if you don't, or going to tweak it, be as careful and respectful to the past as you can while also telling a good story.
I'm an amateur writer, and I've written a lot of fan fiction that I've posted at TrekBBS over the years, and so the way I look at PIC and character development stems from that. Things need to flow in an organic, explainable manner, and even if there are swerves, one might go back and find some seeds planted for those seemingly out of the blue changes. It helps with suspension of disbelief. I can buy Seven's depressed state more easily than I can Picard's because we saw years, if not decades, of Picard's resilience. It's easier to see Seven turn her back on a humanity that been taken from her and she found difficult to fully embrace again, than Picard stewing in his vineyard for
fourteen years, while the Romulans were suffering.
I disagree that The Mandalorian is the same kind of story Solo was. Solo was an unnecessary excursion that IMO screwed up Han Solo's character arc in A New Hope. Mandalorian shed new light on what was happening right after Return of the Jedi, things we hadn't seen in live action before, while also introducing new characters, and expanding on Star Wars lore. While not without flaws, it is has been, thus far, a prequel series done right. It hasn't felt shoehorned in, it hasn't overturned what came before, it's been respectful of established characters, while creating new and interesting characters that hold their own. I can barely say that for CBS Trek, though the casting has been good for both their live-action series, but the execution (definitely with PIC) has thus far been lacking. DISCO started off stronger and has gotten better, in many respects, each succeeding season, but it's still hasn't hit the sweet spot for me.