...The show itself? Comments from the staff in The Next Generation Companion?
The first couple of seasons, to a degree, yes, but still not to the extent suggested, at least to me. Then again, I'm not nearly as averse to utopic ideals as some - cursed with a streak of optimism that stubbornly refuses to curl up and die - so these elements might not have registered as strongly as they did with others. And I've not read the Companion. Certainly on the list now, though.
"BEVERLY CRUSHER – Leslie's 35-year-old mother. She serves as the chief medical officer on the Enterprise. If it were not for her intelligence, personality, beauty, and the fact that she has a natural walk of a striptease queen, Capt. Picard might not have agreed to her request that Leslie observe bridge activities; therefore letting her daughter's intelligence carry events further."
And that's exactly the kind of queasy detail I was referring to. Not Fleming semi-rape, tie-a-woman-to-the-end-of-your-bed bad, but still pretty egregious. Your point?
Also, I've just learned that (allegedly) David Gerrold produced the series bible, but Gene took credit. (from the Joel Engel Myth and Man book). Whether this is true or not, I'm not sure - but these definitely sound like Gene's ideas to me. Maybe Gerrold organized his thoughts into a formal document for him.
If the penned notes in the version you linked me were by Gene, that does strongly suggest he came up with the ideas, and someone else, maybe several people, collated them into a formal document.