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Spoilers Explaining crew behaviour in "Temporal Edict"

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I have a theory to explain the crew's strange behaviour in "Temporal Edict."

We know the Gelrakians, despite spear-wielding, are technologically advanced (they have warp-capable space ships).

Cerritos was expected to debark the Gelrakian "honour crystal" and ceremonially return it to Gelrak V. Instead, the Bolian officer accidentally loads the incorrect package from storage, and the honour crystal is left on the ship.

It's my feeling that, as Cerritos approached Gelrak V, proximity to the crystal-heavy planet induced some type of subspace harmonic resonance in the Gelrakian honour crystal which caused it to generate a neurogenic or psionic field whose effect is cumulative over time, and causes those exposed to it to fall victim to their foremost anxieties.

In the case of Freeman, it was questioning her aptitude to command efficiently following the cancellation of her role in the peace conference on Cardassia Prime. "We have to do something to prove to Starfleet that our crew isn't just a bunch of slackers." For Shaxs it was about his ability to effectively secure the ship. For the lower-deckers, and the crew in general, it mostly became about their work demands (except Boimler, but I'll get to that).

I think, whether technologically engineered or simply a natural quality that was discovered and harnessed by the Gelrakians, that this aspect of the "revered" honour crystal is used deliberately by the Gelrakians to get the upper-hand against technologically-advanced adversaries, who show up for round two of first contact with their obviously mineral-rich planet, and fail to honour their prior agreements.

It would also explain why the Gelrakians reacted so strongly to the wood, and scrambled their fleet and invaded so quickly, only to (again, somewhat ceremonially) "crystal graffiti" the ship: This operation was always the Gelrakians' Plan B, because this is not their first rodeo. This might be an historic and ongoing cultural practice of theirs, maybe in response to past invasion or bad experiences of space empire colonialism.

Presumably some ceremonial process, storage system, or special location on the surface of Gelrak V (the equally-revered crystal murder-altar, perhaps?) would have rendered the effects of the honour crystal inert or harmless, once returned as intended.

T'ana may have failed to register the effects of the neurogenic or psionic field, as we know at least some sickbay systems (the five-hour bio-bed) were awaiting some repairs. Or, T'ana might simply have failed to detect it, or had done so off-screen and we never found out because no senior officer cared to explain what happened to the lower-deckers.

But why was Boimler seemingly the only crew member left on Cerritos not affected by this?

Well. The four lower-deckers were actually repairing an otherwise-unexplained phase variance in the brig forcefield at the beginning of the episode. Mariner uses a phaser setting on the forcefield which is higher than they are probably supposed to use for this type of testing. Then after completing these special calibrations, with Boimler as the guinea pig, he actually gently touches the forcefield with an unfamiliar tool to "test the field integrity," and energy from the reaction of the tool with the forcefield knocks him all the way to the back of the cell. This is an unusually strong effect from touching a Starfleet forcefield.

This transfer of extra energy from the forcefield to Boimler, with the phase variance recalibrarions, must have polarized his neurons against the effects of the neurogenic field, thus making him the only one on the ship immune to its effects. Add to that, the extra scheduling structure wasn't giving him as much anxiety as everyone else anyway, due to his proclivities.

All of the clues were there, we just had to unpack a 23-minute cartoon into a 44-minute Star Trek plot, and account for the weird framing of the show.
 
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I thought it was all made clear. Freeman, in a mood because she got reassigned a less important mission lashed out at her crew, who she perceived as slackers. She then put the gears to them, making them feel overworked and stressed out resulting in them making mistakes and being unable to properly do any part of their job. Boimler was unaffected because he gets off on this sort of harsh routine.
 
I thought it was all made clear. Freeman, in a mood because she got reassigned a less important mission lashed out at her crew, who she perceived as slackers. She then put the gears to them, making them feel overworked and stressed out resulting in them making mistakes and being unable to properly do any part of their job. Boimler was unaffected because he gets off on this sort of harsh routine.
That directly clashes with her "no one left behind" attitude about Cerritos and its crew from the first episode, her primary characterization to date. Besides, how could she get to her position as a Captain acting the way she did in this episode. It doesn't make sense otherwise.
 
That directly clashes with her "no one left behind" attitude about Cerritos and its crew from the first episode, her primary characterization to date. Besides, how could she get to her position as a Captain acting the way she did in this episode. It doesn't make sense otherwise.

Freeman felt she got disrespected by Starfleet and went overboard overcompensating.
 
Freeman felt she got disrespected by Starfleet and went overboard overcompensating.
I don't agree with that interpretation. Multiple characters begin to act irrationally on the ship, with an obvious and detectable cumulative arc of severity. We have seen this plot play out multiple times in Star Trek.

Ordering them to continue working on their assigned tasks while the ship is actively being boarded? That's unreasonably egregious and against her prior characterization. She was being influenced by the crystal. They all were, other than Boimler.

It was also very obvious that the Gelrakians expected the crew to be incapacitated when they invaded.
 
I thought it was all made clear. Freeman, in a mood because she got reassigned a less important mission lashed out at her crew, who she perceived as slackers. She then put the gears to them, making them feel overworked and stressed out resulting in them making mistakes and being unable to properly do any part of their job. Boimler was unaffected because he gets off on this sort of harsh routine.
Yup. Worked with managers just like that.
 
I think this was set up earlier when Mariner said that the senior staff are a bunch of glory-obsessed jerks who don't care about the little guy. It doesn't apply to any of the senior staff we've met in previous episodes so we assumed that was just Mariner being hyperbolic as well as immature.

But it PERFECTLY describes her mother.

The thing that we discovered here is the fact that she's exactly the kind of problem bumper time was meant to resolve. Because the person ordering the job has no idea what time it takes and she implements schedules based on, presumably, her gut or "best time" limits--that is NEVER going to work.

It's an interesting take that "the worst ship in the Federation" may be because its captain is...terrible at her job.
 
I have a theory to explain the crew's strange behaviour in "Temporal Edict."

We know the Gelrakians, despite spear-wielding, are technologically advanced (they have warp-capable space ships).

Cerritos was expected to debark the Gelrakian "honour crystal" and ceremonially return it to Gelrak V. Instead, the Bolian officer accidentally loads the incorrect package from storage, and the honour crystal is left on the ship.

It's my feeling that, as Cerritos approached Gelrak V, proximity to the crystal-heavy planet induced some type of subspace harmonic resonance in the Gelrakian honour crystal which caused it to generate a neurogenic or psionic field whose effect is cumulative over time, and causes those exposed to it to fall victim to their foremost anxieties.

In the case of Freeman, it was questioning her aptitude to command efficiently following the cancellation of her role in the peace conference on Cardassia Prime. "We have to do something to prove to Starfleet that our crew isn't just a bunch of slackers." For Shaxs it was about his ability to effectively secure the ship. For the lower-deckers, and the crew in general, it mostly became about their work demands (except Boimler, but I'll get to that).

I think, whether technologically engineered or simply a natural quality that was discovered and harnessed by the Gelrakians, that this aspect of the "revered" honour crystal is used deliberately by the Gelrakians to get the upper-hand against technologically-advanced adversaries, who show up for round two of first contact with their obviously mineral-rich planet, and fail to honour their prior agreements.

It would also explain why the Gelrakians reacted so strongly to the wood, and scrambled their fleet and invaded so quickly, only to (again, somewhat ceremonially) "crystal graffiti" the ship: This operation was always the Gelrakians' Plan B, because this is not their first rodeo. This might be an historic and ongoing cultural practice of theirs, maybe in response to past invasion or bad experiences of space empire colonialism.

Presumably some ceremonial process, storage system, or special location on the surface of Gelrak V (the equally-revered crystal murder-altar, perhaps?) would have rendered the effects of the honour crystal inert or harmless, once returned as intended.

T'ana may have failed to register the effects of the neurogenic or psionic field, as we know at least some sickbay systems (the five-hour bio-bed) were awaiting some repairs. Or, T'ana might simply have failed to detect it, or had done so off-screen and we never found out because no senior officer cared to explain what happened to the lower-deckers.

But why was Boimler seemingly the only crew member left on Cerritos not affected by this?

Well. The four lower-deckers were actually repairing an otherwise-unexplained phase variance in the brig forcefield at the beginning of the episode. Mariner uses a phaser setting on the forcefield which is higher than they are probably supposed to use for this type of testing. Then after completing these special calibrations, with Boimler as the guinea pig, he actually gently touches the forcefield with an unfamiliar tool to "test the field integrity," and energy from the reaction of the tool with the forcefield knocks him all the way to the back of the cell. This is an unusually strong effect from touching a Starfleet forcefield.

This transfer of extra energy from the forcefield to Boimler, with the phase variance recalibrarions, must have polarized his neurons against the effects of the neurogenic field, thus making him the only one on the ship immune to its effects. Add to that, the extra scheduling structure wasn't giving him as much anxiety as everyone else anyway, due to his proclivities.

All of the clues were there, we just had to unpack a 23-minute cartoon into a 44-minute Star Trek plot, and account for the weird framing of the show.

I haven't even watched Lower Decks and I still know this is nonsense.
 
Well, its a common problem of.. It Ain't My Fault! .. Its this person, or person's.. I'm golden!
So when she Re Learned about buffer time, she went full Jellico, and put the screws on the crew since she thought ITS There Fault Not Mine!.. though it was a nice touch that she put herself on the Timer program to, and burnt out like the rest.
 
The crew behavior is outlandish, even for a "comedy" (so what? it's still Star Trek). It's hard to imagine the Enterprise-D acting like this with Jellico in charge or TOS doing a similar situation with Spock or someone overworking the crew, but it must be possible because they are in the same universe. If the ship is being boarded, no sensible crewman is going to continue doing a diagnostic or whatever, even with Episode 1's conceit that "this kinda stuff happens all the time". So, an external force is preferable to explain rather than them just blindly following orders from a deranged Captain.

But this also reminds me of the cold open of last episode, where a transdimensional energy being appeared to disintegrate upon impact with Captain Freeman. Some have suggested that the being will return (probably not, I think it was just a one-off joke), and perhaps the being is influencing or even controlling Freeman.

The T.E.B. wanted Mariner and Tendi to supplicate themselves, but wanted Freeman to die, and I speculated that its goal was to take command of the ship, but its relative lack of power over others meant that it needed a crew to function. If the T.E.B. is influencing Freeman now, maybe her change in behavior is a result of that. It wants to control the Federation, through Freeman, and naively moved to bump up the productivity even at the expense of the crew's well-being. It doesn't explain why people are blindly following her, unless the entity's influence is echoing out and everyone onboard once promotion and acknowledgement now.
 
I thought it was all made clear. Freeman, in a mood because she got reassigned a less important mission lashed out at her crew, who she perceived as slackers. She then put the gears to them, making them feel overworked and stressed out resulting in them making mistakes and being unable to properly do any part of their job. Boimler was unaffected because he gets off on this sort of harsh routine.

Freeman felt she got disrespected by Starfleet and went overboard overcompensating.

I'll wager a dollar or two that it's really just that simple.

I think some of us have an over abundance of time on their hands
 
My answer to this would be: So what? It's still a comedy.

Star Trek is now branching into different storytelling styles. Everything doesn't have to be squeezed into the Berman-era default style box.

The answer to "Why is such-and-such?" should never be "Because it's a [comedy/science fiction/not real]." That eschews the entire reason for the speculation in the first place. This isn't a parody. This isn't a Mickey Mouse short with cartoon logic. McMahan himself said it's real Star Trek and I have yet to see anything to disprove that notion.

The Trouble with Tribbles was a comedy. A Fistful of Datas was a comedy. The Escape Artist was a comedy. The Way to Eden was an unintentional comedy. Yet we should feel free to speculate on the activities within these episodes just as much as we are free to speculate on Lower Decks or any other Star Trek series.

It's all just one series. One canon. One continuity. It's all Star Trek. Everything that is happening on my phone screen is something that Picard can go look up on his show. Teenage Boimler is somewhere down in the havoc during the Breen attack in DS9. Maybe Mariner was one of the kids abducted by the Aldeans. Shaxs might've been part of Kira's resistance group.

The style is beside the point. Rick Berman has nothing to do with this. Watch the show and get a good glimpse at the actual adventures of the Star Trek Universe in the year 2380.

That's just my opinion. I know it's a comedy. I know it's science fiction. I know it's not real. I just get a kick out of trying to fit these Legos together, ever since I saw Kirk and Picard on the big screen together as a child and my mind was blown at the possibility of them being co-existant.
 
The Trouble with Tribbles was a comedy. A Fistful of Datas was a comedy. The Escape Artist was a comedy. The Way to Eden was an unintentional comedy. Yet we should feel free to speculate on the activities within these episodes just as much as we are free to speculate on Lower Decks or any other Star Trek series.
There have been lots of comedies in Star Trek, but does every joke need intense scrutiny? Who was chef? What wisdom to Morn impart? Do we really need to go back to Sigma Iotia to see what the people did with McCoy's communicator?
 
When one goes down the route of coming up with an in-universe rationale for why characters are acting funny in a comedy, one might as well come up with an in-universe rationale for where the music's coming from and why words are appearing in space while they fly the ship back and forth.
 
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