SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST by Sabine C Bauer
I wanted a female-written bit of SF, couldn’t quite reach the ones I most fancied without dismantling half the room…. And wish I’d settled for male-written SF or female-written non-SF.
So, this is a Stargate SG-1 tie-in, there are good bits of action, and a potential for a reasonable mystery to solve, as well as lots of guilt and betrayal among the characters.
Unfortunately it’s all arse-backwards, with all the mysteries answered to the audience before being asked by or of the characters. The action involves a lot of bumping against walls in tunnels, and the continuity is a bizarre mix of named trivia thrown at us, then actual important guest stars and plot bits introduced in deliberately obfucatory ways [e.g., Maybourne being introduced with a gap in hist teeth supplied instead of a name.] And then there’s the POV and characterisation.
Some characters are truer than others, which is fair enough of any tie-in, but…. OK there are usually three ways of giving us POV character pieces- train-of-thought, showing us them feel or react to stuff, and just telling us what they think and feel. Any one of them can work. Two you might get away with. This gives us all three for every thought and character moment, each repeating what we just got from the last, over and over again.
This may be the most-in-need-of-an-edit book I’ve read in a long while – there is a fun story in here, but it’s 370 pages of teensy print, of which about 150 pages are a decent brief tie-in novel, and the other 220 pages are pure repetitve, dragging, padding. And I hate saying, cos I remember my tie-in flaws – some of this reads as if someone took the worst bits of my style [notably characters pausing to have a sandwich, which I did so dubiously as to get quite well parodied for it] and then drags it out about four times as long. [In the sandwich cases, she keep coming back to them, to discuss the bread and the best outlets, and for amost every character at some point.]
It’s been about a week and it’s so padded and slow that I feel like I’ve been reading it for the whole three months of lockdown.