Yeah, shorter or fewer reaction shots, and shorten the V'Ger flyover to still showcase the vastness but without dragging out each shot. Apart from that, it just needed one or two more scenes of some humour and/or interaction of the supporting crew.
By comparison, I was watching one of the Phase II fan episodes and there was a scene where Uhura, Chekov, possibly Sulu, and I think Peter Kirk are in the Rec Room taking a break and they lament the last time they got any sleep. It was short scene that added a bit of character and humour, and underlined their sense of camaraderie.
By comparison, I was watching one of the Phase II fan episodes and there was a scene where Uhura, Chekov, possibly Sulu, and I think Peter Kirk are in the Rec Room taking a break and they lament the last time they got any sleep. It was short scene that added a bit of character and humour, and underlined their sense of camaraderie.
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