So my thoughts...
This was a risky choice as a first standalone. Timeloop episodes in sci-fi shows are a slightly dubious proposition at the best of times and we are dealing with the franchise that produced what I consider the pinnacle of the art -
Cause and Effect.
Discovery chose to do an action/comedy version of the plot which was probably wise - it avoids comparison with TNG and takes a different spin. Of course, it does attract comparison with the other giant of the genre, SG-1's
Window of Opportunity.
So. Did what we get work?
Mostly, yes. It was fast paced, punchy, and with an irreverent sense of dark humour which I enjoyed. There were some true laugh out loud moments, and once again Lorca shone through and stole the show. "I don't care", "still don't care".
@matthunter said that Burnham was Seven of Nine this week and this is bang on. The writers can't quite seem to nail down where along the Vulcan<-->Human spectrum Burnham actually is, and it seems to change subtly each week. This wasn't her strongest episode, and while I was sold on her arc, I'm conscious that without the voiceover bookends I may not have been.
Stamets did a good job of holding the story this week, and I enjoyed Rapp's take on someone going steadily mad with frustration. I would have liked a little more of Hugh in the episode, but it was pretty jam packed as it was.
Mudd was very good. I still think he's a bit of fanwank and the you're mad/no I'm Mudd thing got
all the eyerolls. But I liked how they made him unapologetically nasty, without seeming overly comic booky. He's a real twat, and it was played well. I'm not
entirely sold on the resolution (they had every opportunity to arrest him), but it was mandated by the need to set up the TOS character. Which only plays into the fanwank thing - this could have been an original character.
I loved the tone this week, and demonstrated that Discovery isn't the dour and joyless war series people claim it is. It did a good job with the premise overall. Enjoyed it. Just keep an eye on the fanwank.
Overall, 6/10