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Worst plot resolutions?

I was sort of stunned by the sheer afterschool special banality of the end of Take Me Out to the Holosuite. As Solok said, they are manufacturing a victory where none exists, and it feels trite and forced and honestly the whole episode was a waste of a pretty cool premise. But the ending feels like a non-ending it's so poor, and definitely not worthy of being called Trek.
Problem was, where else could they go? Having them win would be not only ridiculous but really cheesy as an ending, and having them get nothing at all is hardly an ending at all. The ending isn't great, but out of a holodeck episode where the jeopardy is a game of baseball, probably the best we could hope for. The signed ball was self indulgent though, I'd cut that.
 
Should have used this guy
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Or what would happen if Yoda fell in love with a Gremlin.
What is that, a pug mixed with a Chinese Crested?:lol:
 
VOY: Year of hell part two

You knew it was going to end with a magic reset button though. After all, it was running alongside the fifth season of DS9 and they'd already established in Trek canon that one season = one year.

It would have been great to have had Voyager suddenly one year of DS9's adventures. It might even have had a great impact on the story when Voyager did eventually get in touch with Starfleet.

"We are sad to report the loss of the USS Defiant in action." Can you imagine hearing that as a throwaway line in Voyager and then wondering what the hell was going to happen in DS9 over the next twelve months!

My vote goes to Justice though. Okay it was a crap episode anyway but thoroughly let down by Picard just taking Wesley with no thought to the Edo legal system.
 
I always thought the Voyager episode Repression could have been a decent two-parter but as it was...Tuvok clears up Chakotay's brain, there is a short scene on the bridge where he stops them from marooning everyone on a planet and then everyone is all happy together back watching a movie. Zoom to the finish. Everything was resolved in the blink of an eye. Same thing with Dragon's Teeth. That should have been a two-parter.

And the folks on the Voyager forum already know what I think of the episode Extreme Risk. I rag on it every chance I so to spare them having to sit through that again let's just say...I didn't like how it ended. Maybe it's harsh to say it's the worse plot resolution ever because the rest of the episode isn't bad but...I better shut up or I'll go off again. Same thing for Memorial.
 
Cogenitor from Enterprise. Trip criticises an alien culture's society, in this case the role of the titular "Cogenitor" in the Forehead Race of the Week's society. His actions in the end result in a person committing suicide, which destroys one family's chances at procreating. By extension, relations with a potential ally in the form of an advanced and friendly race are irreparably screwed, and what's his punishment? Archer sets him aside and delivers a fatherly "I'm not angry, just disappointed" lecture.


I was on Trip's side on that one. There is something wrong about developing diplomatic relations with a people that treats one of its genders so badly.

Assuming it still existed, should we have maintained friendly diplomatic relations with nazi Germany? Not if we wished to keep our humanist values intact..

I think Archer behaved like an ass (not for the first or the last time) and that he should have supported trip all the way on that one.
 
Problem was, where else could they go? Having them win would be not only ridiculous but really cheesy as an ending, and having them get nothing at all is hardly an ending at all. The ending isn't great, but out of a holodeck episode where the jeopardy is a game of baseball, probably the best we could hope for. The signed ball was self indulgent though, I'd cut that.
You do make some good points. It's win or lose and it's a lighhearted episode. The Niners losing in a squeaker would have been nearly as ridiculous as their winning, so that wouldn't work either. We do learn that Vulcans 1) can make very poor winners, and 1a) are definitely capable of bad sportsmanship. It makes Vulcans a little more accessible in that sense, I'll give it that. I mean it's good to see them characterized with some low-level petty foibles for a change. They should be unemotional in response and logical, not paragons. Plus I did like Odo as an ump.

Although now I have to go back and check...did Sisko and the Niners ever at least congratulate Solok's team? You should at least do that as well, when you lose--need to be gracious from both ends. Ah I just recalled something about my reaction at the time I saw this--I remember that I did think the Niners were, to some degree, poor sports for using their celebration to devalue the Logicians' victory. There's more than one way of being a poor sport. This, though, is characterization and I can't really call it part of the ending let-down. Why should the DS9 staff be any more paragons than the Logicians?

Garak on the Niners would surely have made the ep more overall fun, too.

I had a thought of what this needed, maybe--an outside, possibly alien element, but one that wasn't TOO serious. Remember the photonic race that intruded on Tom Paris' Captain Proton holoprogram one time? Same idea, an unknown that spices things up. This may sound a little counterintuitive, given its original deadly seriousness, but how about the return of the anger/rage/hate-feeding entity from Day of the Dove? Part of the premise and even the funny would be that, in the end, a baseball game was as good for a meal for it as Kirk's and Kang's crews slicing each other up. In an homage, Sisko and Solok (not laughing, wouldn't go that far with a Vulcan) would mock the entity as Odo says "you're outta here!"

Also, the fact that one team is composed of Vulcans could add a slight level of seriousness to that idea, as disengaging the emotional cadmium rods, so to speak, on them, might be on the dangerous side.

Well all that didn't happen. But maybe something could have been better after all. I'm not a screenwriter though, just a Trekkie. :)
 
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"Dear Doctor." Had it ended by revealing that the Valakians' condition was incurable, or that researching and developing a full cure would have required time and resources that the fledgling Starfleet just didn't have, I'd have been okay with that. Instead, we get an ending where not only do they end up (indirectly) singing the virtues of the Prime Directive in a setting where it doesn't even exist, but where Archer and Phlox are patting themselves on the back for allowing millions to die.

Aside from how obviously distasteful the ending is, the episode is probably more guilty than any other of missing the point that Enterprise was a prequel series, a chance to show how things as shown in the chronologically later Trek shows came to be. So, instead of witnessing how disastrous mis-steps by the early generations of Starfleet explorers led to the adoption of the Prime Directive, it's just presented as something that any moral individual would think up on the spot. Yay for the audience actually thinking about things!
 
Reversible death has been used about a zillion times on the series; At least, that's how it feels.


The last one being: "Kirk's dead! Hell no he's not!"
24th century Trek ended on a very similar note. Data's dead! Oh hang on, this identical robot has his memories!
 
Having just rewatched DS9's "Paradise", I'm still annoyed by the fact that not a single one of the people Alixus duped for ten years expresses any interest in leaving the planet. Annoyed enough that I found myself wishing the planet would get sideswiped by an asteroid about ten seconds after the episode ended.

Now I'm imagining if "Lost" had ended with the characters telling a rescue plane, "We're all good here; thanks!"
 
Having just rewatched DS9's "Paradise", I'm still annoyed by the fact that not a single one of the people Alixus duped for ten years expresses any interest in leaving the planet. Annoyed enough that I found myself wishing the planet would get sideswiped by an asteroid about ten seconds after the episode ended.

Now I'm imagining if "Lost" had ended with the characters telling a rescue plane, "We're all good here; thanks!"

I was annoyed and still am by the fact that not one of those zombies was mad at her for all the deaths and misery she's caused over the years.
 
^That too.

I'd argue that she was even more annoying than Winn; her only redeeming feature was that she never shows up again.
 
Having grown up in a cult I can tell you it's not that easy just to 'snap out of it' and think for yourself. They should have arranged for a LOT of counselors to be sent to that place immediately.
 
Having grown up in a cult I can tell you it's not that easy just to 'snap out of it' and think for yourself. They should have arranged for a LOT of counselors to be sent to that place immediately.

Like Kirk did for the Onlies.

Incidentally, one of my worsts would have to be "The Mark Of Gideon". I mentioned this earlier here http://www.trekbbs.com/threads/episode-of-the-week-the-mark-of-gideon.281094/page-2.

What I don't like about this episode is that McCoy doesn't get a "what the blazes is wrong with these people that they would introduce sickness for the sole purpose of killing their people painfully?" moment. Though I suppose he might have vented after the episode ended in Kirk's quarters...

Also, why couldn't they suggest relocation and colonization of other suitable worlds? Nothing like a scarcity scare to promote one's space program.

Ideally, even though the hope is that people will die like they're "supposed to" (live shorter lives, die from sickness like most peoples do), it should be something that happens. Maybe if they left their home planet and became naturally exposed to more death-inducing things, it would happen, not seem almost forced to happen.
 
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