This is actually where I think the new movie went totally wrong. The galaxy was so small in this movie. Yes, there were various aliens, and various space ships. But everybody knew each other, just happened to bump into each other, Pike knowing Kirk's father, serving on the Kelvin,
If he serves on the same ship, how unlikely is it that he'd know him, even if only as a superior officer (Kirk was XO)? Especially as he was a cadet at the time, and it's likely cadets would probably have been on a proverbial tight leash off a high ranking officer on ship to monitor their progress.
Kirk living where the Enterprise gets built,
Well if Kirk Senior is meant to be considered some kind of hero for his actions against the Narada, it wouldn't be a stretch to imagine the new flagship of the fleet may be built in his home state.
Kirk meets Uhura in Iowa, gets in a fight with "Cupcake", gets rescued by Pike.
Well, from the way Pike talks to Kirk, it almost sounds like he's been keeping an eye on him, rather than just 'reading his profile', waiting for the right time to talk to him.
Then he meets McCoy, also in Iowa, and look, there's Uhura again.
Well considering all the cadets seemed to be there, since it was a pick up point, it would be a bit odd if Uhura
wasn't there. McCoy, on the other hand, a bit of a stretch.
Spock wrote the Kobayashi Maru.
While it serves a storyline purpose to have him write the scenario, and have the difference in philosophies between him and Kirk come out, I don't see why Spock would have written the scenario.*
Then Kirk gets onto the Enterprise, and look who's there: Cupcake!
Yes, because Cupcake is a major part of the TOS line up.
Yeah and then Kirk gets exiled, runs into Old Spock, and Scotty is there, too, and so forth and shit. Everything felt really awfully small.
While not totally invalid, it just seems to make
Earth and not the universe smaller, but then again every significant human character seems to be born on Earth, despite the dozens of human colonies.
The thing with an introductory story where the whole of the original cast of characters has to be introduced, how much of a stretch would it have been for them to be darting all over the quadrant to random locations, and just happen to bump into a useful crewmember (who turns out to be a TOS character) at every single one and decide to take them on?
I didn't get that feeling with TNG, DS9 or VOY. I felt they greatly expanded upon the universe. And Voyager needed 70 years to get home, and she meet dozens of different species. Deep Space Nine greatly expanded the whole political situation. It was because of Deep Space Nine that you were finally able to draw a map of the Alpha Quadrant.
I really liked that. And I thought it made the galaxy feel bigger, not smaller.
True, this is undeniable. But then again, the series has many hours to develop the universe properly.
*Here's something though that bugs me about the Spock's storyline, but it may be mitigated if the time span is/was properly given. From how the scenes are arranged, it makes it look like that Spock joined the academy maybe a few years, if that before Kirk did, yet before Kirk's even done his time in the academy (and even that was faster than most cadets), Spock is already a commander.
While Kirk's rapid promotion makes sense (in terms of political PRing to 'distract' people from the rest of the disaster of the Narada incident/saga or give a public perception that the Kirk 'dynasty' has fought this menace at every opportunity, wartime-style promotion that the scenario seems to have, and the fact that it's likely he would have graduated as a Lieutenant, forget the meta-universe view we have of the Star Trek universe), Spock has no such factors working in his favour, except for Vulcan 'excellence' or whatever would drive him further.