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UT: TFV - Operation Vanguard

Another nice entry. As always, I really enjoy your attention to detail - without getting bogged down in it: everything from the size of the room and the images of Europa's predecessors to Shanthi's sensor window and the new sensor capabilities. I also like how you brought in the possible pheromone suppressant, and I thought the Counselor's insights added an important, yet unexpected perspective to the entire encounter.

Oh yeah ... and ROMULANS!?!?!? Hellz yeah!!! :bolian:
 
I really liked Liu's thoughtful analysis of this situation. I'm hopeful that it will ultimately be unnecessary but then on this ship ... or should I say, with this crew, you simply cannot be too careful.

And now the Rommies are crashing the party? First question. How did they get out there so quickly? Seconds question. How do they know about the refugees? Thought that was a secret. Third question ... never mind, I've got a lot of questions and I'm sure we'll get answers at some point.
 
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Good Installment. I also applaud Counselor Liu's assessment. He may actually be useful to the crew.

So, will the Romulans be a help or a hinderance?
 
Yes, how did the Romulans get all the way out there so quickly? Starfleet had several week/month head start.

I liked the way Sandhurst answered the question regarding the Husnock, excised from the universe indeed.
 
Those are some impressive sensors. I just worry that if they were active rather than passive sensors, everybody in the area now knows that the Europa hit them with something really, really powerful. Even the Romulans may suspect they've been seen. Are they based on Dominion technology in any way? The Jem'Hadar seemed to see through the Defiant's Romulan cloak...

As far as the Habertaem go...personally, I'd withhold judgment on them until a pheromone suppressant is developed and administered. Not to disparage any of your crew, but I'm not sure if they can trust that they're making objective judgments until that time. Liu's theory doesn't seem evidence-based yet.
 
Another nice entry. As always, I really enjoy your attention to detail - without getting bogged down in it: everything from the size of the room and the images of Europa's predecessors to Shanthi's sensor window and the new sensor capabilities. I also like how you brought in the possible pheromone suppressant, and I thought the Counselor's insights added an important, yet unexpected perspective to the entire encounter.

Oh yeah ... and ROMULANS!?!?!? Hellz yeah!!! :bolian:
The Romulans are indeed an unanticipated twist in TFV's mission profile, and I'm glad you're enjoying the counselor's contributions. :)

I really liked Liu's thoughtful analysis of this situation. I'm hopeful that it will ultimately be unnecessary but then on this ship ... or should I say, with this crew, you simply cannot be too careful.
:devil:

And now the Rommies are crashing the party? First question. How did they get out there so quickly? Seconds question. How do they know about the refugees? Thought that was a secret. Third question ... never mind, I've got a lot of questions and I'm sure we'll get answers at some point.
You may, indeed... then again...

Good Installment. I also applaud Counselor Liu's assessment. He may actually be useful to the crew.

So, will the Romulans be a help or a hinderance?
Well, they were quite a bit of help during the Dominion War, but aside from that they have a tendancy to serve as the proverbial Vulcanoid Monkey Wrench.

Yes, how did the Romulans get all the way out there so quickly? Starfleet had several week/month head start.

I liked the way Sandhurst answered the question regarding the Husnock, excised from the universe indeed.
I thought about going with 'Terminally Pimp Slapped by the Gods' but that sounded a tad too hyperbolic. :rommie:

Those are some impressive sensors. I just worry that if they were active rather than passive sensors, everybody in the area now knows that the Europa hit them with something really, really powerful. Even the Romulans may suspect they've been seen. Are they based on Dominion technology in any way? The Jem'Hadar seemed to see through the Defiant's Romulan cloak...
Well, Starfleet had to do something with all those wrecked Dominion ships littering the quadrant! And you know how those Starfleet engineers love to play with stuff and take it apart...

As far as the Habertaem go...personally, I'd withhold judgment on them until a pheromone suppressant is developed and administered. Not to disparage any of your crew, but I'm not sure if they can trust that they're making objective judgments until that time. Liu's theory doesn't seem evidence-based yet.
His admonition wasn't intended to be a comprehensive analysis of the species, just a warning of potential trouble based on the agonies visited upon them by the Husnock. I thought it was a bit more cogent than having him grab the sides of his head and moan, "Captain, I feel great pain!" :lol:

Thanks for the fantastic commentary, folks! It's feedback like this that fuels my Muse.
 
I liked the inclusion of the councelor, too. It was an interesting perpective I hadn't thought of before, even though I'd still be inclined to say that Starfleet is obligated to help them since they're the victims.
I'm unclear what the general situation is with the Romulans in the UT universe since the last time we saw them in canon a sort of fragile connection had been forged. Like many otheres, i also wonder how they got there.
 
As far as the Habertaem go...personally, I'd withhold judgment on them until a pheromone suppressant is developed and administered. Not to disparage any of your crew, but I'm not sure if they can trust that they're making objective judgments until that time. Liu's theory doesn't seem evidence-based yet.
His admonition wasn't intended to be a comprehensive analysis of the species, just a warning of potential trouble based on the agonies visited upon them by the Husnock. I thought it was a bit more cogent than having him grab the sides of his head and moan, "Captain, I feel great pain!" :lol:

:guffaw:
 
TFV - Operation Vanguard (Chapter 5)

Captain’s Log, SD 55295.0 – (April 18th, 2378)

“We’ve entered our second week in orbit of In’Drahn station. I’d not anticipated spending so long here, but I feel that solidifying this First Contact is especially vital, as strong relations with the Habertaem and the rest of the species on their Custodial Council could pay dividends in the future. Fortunately, Admiral Jellico agrees with me.

Lieutenant Taiee and Dr. Multorlo are testing their first run of anti-pheromone serum on Habertaem volunteers. Hundreds of them have elected to undergo the procedure, despite our having explicitly detailed the risks involved. It seems that even the outside chance that they might be free from the emissions that raise their twisted genetics from merely unpleasant to outright horrific is enough to prompt more volunteers than we can use. According to our medical staff, the pheromone works just as effectively on the Habertaem themselves, making them repulsive even to one another, a final parting ‘gift’ from the merciless Husnock.

Meanwhile, Verrik and Ashok are sifting through the debris field around the station for samples of refugee and Husnock technology. It is hoped their research into this area will reveal more about Husnock weapons we might encounter, as well as some of the technology coming from deeper in the Delta Quadrant.

Our Romulan friends are still cloaked, holding position where we initially located them. So far they seem completely unaware that they’ve been detected. I’ve alerted Admiral Jellico to their presence, and he concurs with my assessment that for the time being we should make no move that would reveal that we’re on to them. Their presence here, however, begs a host of questions. Despite my suspicions regarding their intentions, I must remind myself that the Romulans have every bit as much right to be out here as we.

End Log.”


*****

The Astrometrics Lab aboard Europa was an enormous self-contained holo-tank that could display stellar cartographic information either on the surfaces of the dome-shaped chamber, or in mid-air. Data from the ship’s hyper-acute sensors was compiled here along with updated scans from other TFV intercept groups and advance reconnaissance probes to produce an increasingly detailed picture of the region.

Sandhurst sat alongside Shanthi at the main control station set atop a platform that extended out into the center of the chamber. The image shifted from a breathtaking view of Charossa, the Class-M planet around which In’Drahn station orbited, pulling back to display the entire sector where Intercept Group 3 was presently stationed.

“We’re still unable to detect any other Romulan ships at this distance,” Shanthi noted. “Perhaps we’re dealing with a Romulan version of Voyager?”

Sandhurst grunted. “I suppose anything is possible, but my gut’s telling me this ship was dispatched for the same reason we were. The questions are, when was it launched and how could they have beaten us out here?”

Shanthi glanced over at him, a playful smirk gracing his lips. “We could always ask them.”

“It’s tempting…” Sandhurst toggled a series of interface controls, centering the display on the image of the Romulan Valdore-class warbird. “I’m not reading any signs of excess gamma radiation bleeding through their cloak, which I’d expect to see if they’d been running their warp engines harder and longer than they were designed for.”

Shanthi quirked an eyebrow. “Meaning?”

“Meaning they were either transported here on high-warp sleds like we were, or they were dispatched out here under their own power over four years ago, prior to the start of the Dominion War.”

“Seems unlikely,” Shanthi admitted. “The Romulans have always been highly territorial, and there hasn’t been a large-scale push by them to expand the borders of their empire since the Earth/Romulan War.”

Sandhurst nodded slowly. “And if that ship out there was a D’deridex-class, I might be willing to entertain that theory. However, Verrik assures me that four years ago the Valdore design was still on the drawing boards.”

Shanthi frowned. “So, where does that leave us then, sir?”

“With a mystery, Lieutenant, and a damned vexing one.”

*****
 
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Wow, a whole lota story has transpired since my last comment.
Glad to see someone else besides me remembers the Husnock. I referenced them in an older INT story. But here, you've detailed just how vile and sadistic they they were.

And Romulans crashing the party, aye? Personally, I think the Romulans were already wise to the approaching fleets, just like the Federation was. They're pretty resourceful after all. But we'll see...

The Habertaem...wow, it they're also repugnant to each other, one wonders how they reproduce. Yuck. Never mind.

Seriously, though...someone's gotta help these people restore there former bodies. Maybe Q feels like doing a favor here?

I echo what others have said about Liu.

As always, looking forward to more...
 
Something tells me the Habertaem would be horrified by Q. Maybe the Douwd could be convinced to do it from a distance, as penance. He erased one race--maybe he should heal one race.
 
I really find myself rooting for Taiee and her team to find a way to help the Habertaem here.

And I still think that adding the Romulans to the mix was a stroke of genius. I like me a good mystery and I'm looking forward to finding out more.
 
This has all been great. The idea of incorporating the Husnock back story was genius. It makes much more sense to deal with the 'native' population as well as the refugees.

Here's to hoping the Romulans are just voyeurs....yeah, right. :evil:
 
Gets more and more interesting in every chapter. Got me wondering what the Romulans are up to now myself. Had to play catch up since I haven't been on the site in awhile.
 
TFV - Operation Vanguard (Chapter 5 continued)

“DuaNam!” Koo’liik’s gravely voice carried across the gestation chamber, causing a flurry of activity as Habertaem scurried about to meet her unexpected intrusion. DuaNam moved from where he had been in conference with a group of other senior administrators, calmly intercepting the obviously agitated representative.

“Bringing these outsiders here is a violation of our benefactor’s trust!” Koo’liik was a gelatinous-looking multiform which appeared like a mass of translucent jelly lit from within by shifting primary colors. It was unusual for one of her species, the Telieu, to appear uninvited in the Habertaem’s gestation crèche. It was not forbidden for her to be here, but it was a breach of protocol and bordered on being shockingly so in its deliberate boorishness.

DuaNam took the intrusion in stride, consciously downplaying the discourtesy of the interruption. “They have never prohibited our contact with other outsiders,” he noted calmly.

“The only ‘contact’ they wish for us to engage in is drawing refugees into their feeding nets,” Koo’liik spat venomously.

“True,” DuaNam countered. “But these are not refugees or nomads, they are explorers.”

“The explorers as you call them will sate the benefactors’ hunger all the same.”

DuaNam’s voice took on an unaccustomed edge. “These outsiders have advanced technology and have offered to help us all throw off the genetic shackles the Husnock imprisoned us in.”

“Without the benefactors, we would have been overcome years ago,” Koo’liik pressed. “We have served them faithfully, and we have been rewarded with peace and prosperity.”

DuaNam skittered on his clacking legs over to where Koo’liik rested. “Is this prosperity, Representative Koo’liik? Is it? Merely to survive while trapped in these monstrous forms? Our every waking moment is an agonizing reminder of what we once were, and could be again. Do you recall what the Telieu used to look like? Your people were grand, noble beings, all scales and feathers and ferocious teeth, mighty carnosaurs with the gentlest of dispositions and the wisdom of the ancient scholars!”

“That ended with the Husnock,” Koo’liik snapped. “Despite all that has been done to us, we yet live! How many others species were extinguished by the Husnock, or in the endless war that followed their departure?”

“We will pay the benefactors their tribute as we have since the Bargain was struck, but they have no facility for, nor any interest in restoring us.” DuanNam pointed out.

Koo’liik rejoined, “At least not without feasting at their table, an act which we all agreed we’d rather perish than take part in.”

DuaNam observed, “There at least we are in agreement, Representative.” The Habertaem leader raised one manipulator in mollifying gesture. “Let us explore a cooperative relationship with the newcomers, Koo’liik. If they come to pose a threat to our prior obligations, we will simply ask them to leave. Their rules of conduct demand that they respect and comply with any such request.”

“And if they go back on their word and refuse to leave?” Koo’liik asked pointedly.

“Then the Amon shall feast well,” DuaNam answered darkly.

*****

Sandhurst glanced up as Verrik strode through the ready room doors in answer to the captain’s summons. The Vulcan officer drew himself up into a formal stance, a habit which Sandhurst had long since stopped trying to break.

Gesturing towards his desktop display, Sandhurst queried, “Okay, I just read your report on In’Drahn’s weapons array, but I can’t say I’m completely understanding your supposition that they’re not in control of their own defense grid.”

Verrik looked vaguely perturbed. “I apologize if I did not make myself sufficiently clear, Captain.”

“No, Lieutenant, I comprehend what you’re saying,“ Sandhurst smiled patiently. “I just require some greater detail as to the particulars.”

“Indeed, sir,” Verrik replied. “The variable thoron emitters laced throughout the hull of the space station make accurate sensor reading of the interior very difficult, as we noted upon our arrival here. Subsequent scans taken from inside the structure, however, indicate that the station’s weapons arrays have no hard-line, waveguide, or wireless command and control links to any of the station’s internal systems.”

Sandhurst leaned back slightly in his chair as he absorbed that. “So… who’s controlling their defensive systems?”

“Unknown,” Verrik said.

“Do you believe they’ve been deceiving us intentionally?”

Verrik paused, weighing his response. “At no time in my discussions with the Habertaem or their allies have any of their representatives specifically addressed opening fire on the wrecked vessels in orbit. The circumstances leading up to that engagement have only been alluded to, and even then, only vaguely. That said, their sin may be more one of omission than deliberate misdirection.”

“I suppose I shouldn’t be surprised that they’re keeping secrets,” Sandhurst mused. “In a First Contact situation, the contactees rarely put all their cards on the table right away.”

“Is this matter worth addressing with them,” Verrik asked, “or should we simply continue with our negotiations as before?”

“For now, we’ll leave it,” Sandhurst decided. “I don’t expect them to tell us everything up front, but if it becomes a safety and security issue down the line, we’ll reserve the right to address it with them.”

“Understood, sir.”

Sandhurst seemed on the cusp of dismissing his chief of security, but then thought better of it. “How are the Marines settling in, Lieutenant?”

“Reasonably well so far,” the Vulcan replied. “I have incorporated them into our security division training, and we are integrating our personnel to share shipboard duties.”

The captain nodded approvingly. “Good to hear. And how are you getting on with young Lieutenant Tiedermeyer?”

“Mister Tiedermeyer is indeed young, as well as ambitious, headstrong, and arrogant,” Verrik assessed. “He is everything I would expect of a junior Marine officer.”

Sandhurst looked at Verrik with guarded curiosity. “And that isn’t a problem?”

“For a Starfleet officer, yes, it would be. However, Lieutenant Tiedermeyer is a Marine officer. They are a breed apart.”

“Many of the characteristics you listed would seem incompatible with that of a good leader,” Sandhurst mused skeptically.

“The Marines function as the Federation’s warriors, sir. Their casualty statistics during and since the war bear that out. As such, they must espouse a warrior ethos that demands strict discipline and above-average levels of aggressiveness, even in the face of overwhelming odds. Such aggression requires a certain level of arrogance and naiveté.”

Sandhurst smiled ever so slightly. “That almost sounds like admiration, Lieutenant.”

“No, sir,” Verrik demurred. “It is merely a recitation of observable facts.”

As he inclined his head toward the security man, Sandhurst offered, “Thank you for your input, Lieutenant. Dismissed.”

*****

The shuttle Lisbon navigated slowly through the waste zone, utilizing her bow thrusters to avoid various chunks of spacecraft debris that proved too large for her navigational deflectors to push aside.

Lisbon and her sister shuttles had been trolling the flotsam disc accreted in orbit of the planet around which In’Drahn was stationed. Europa’s finely attuned sensors sought out the most promising bits of wreckage and then directed the shuttles in to recover them for further analysis.

“Junk,” Engineering Specialist Morovska assessed. “And junk, and more junk, and oh, here’s some mildly radioactive junk.”

Seated next to him, Petty Officer Carnegie rolled her eyes. “You know, after eight hours in here with you, I’ve come to the inescapable conclusion that you’re a real ray of sunshine.”

“Please,” Morovska’s sigh was laced with tedium, “tell me you’re having fun. I dare you.”

“This isn’t supposed to be fun,” she chided. “We’re working here, remember?”

Morovska groaned and leaned his head back against the seat’s neck rest. “Sifting space garbage is not what I’d envisioned when I was assigned to the task force. The excitement and intrigue of a challenging deep space exploration assignment…” he yawned theatrically.

“Would you rather have been assigned to one of the other intercept groups right now that’s locked in a running battle with an oncoming threat fleet?” she asked, her earlier humor evaporating in the heat of her growing irritation.

He glanced over at her, his expression growing sour to match her own. “You’ve been awake a full three weeks since coming out of cryo, Carnegie. I’ve been working for almost seven months, first on an exhausting redesign and rebuild of the warp drive and now on this scintillating refuse recovery mission.”

“Okay,” she conceded, “fair point.”

Morovska’s panel began to chime insistently, demanding his attention. “Here’s the bit Europa sent us after,” he said as he pointed to the sensor return of a roughly three-square meter chunk of refined metals.

“You’re the engineer, any idea what it is… or was?”

“No clue,” Morovska replied. “We’ll have to get it back to the ship and run a complete analysis series on it.”

A higher pitch alarm trilled on Carnegie’s board, prompting her to look at the navigational display. “Proximity alarm,” she observed, her tone one of concern.

Morovska looked down at his own panel, frowning. “I don’t see anything.”

“It’s the navigational deflector,” Carnegie explained as she worked to diagnose the problem. “Sensors say there’s nothing there, but the deflectors are registering something with definite mass at those coordinates.”

“Well, which is it?” Morovska scowled as he tried in vain to adjust the sensors’ acuity to reveal whatever the deflectors thought they’d detected.

Instead of answering her partner’s decidedly rhetorical question, Carnegie toggled the comms to the starship. “Lisbon to Europa, we’ve closed with the debris you identified, but something in our vicinity appears to have tripped the nav-deflectors. The problem is that nothing’s showing on sensors. Can you scan our immediate vicinity and advise?”

Lieutenant Juneau’s voice issued from the comms interface. “Europa copies, Lisbon. Stand-by.”

*****

Juneau illuminated the area immediately surrounding the shuttle with a scant fraction of the starship’s cumulative sensor power. Fully seventy-five percent of Europa’s sensor capability was being used to probe nearby sectors for signs of the expected incoming alien formations.

Energy bathed the shuttle, unexpectedly interacting with something that both was, and yet was not there.

A multitude of alarms in the shuttle’s cockpit were tripped simultaneously, and as the competing klaxons wailed in protest, the flight control panel flared with flashing red tell-tails.

The unexpected cacophony startled Morosvka so much that he reflexively recoiled from the control panel. “What the hell is—“

There was a barely perceptible flash from outside, visible through the cockpit window as a diffuse burst of generalized energy. Carnegie and Morovska slumped awkwardly in their seats as the alarms continued to scream.

*****
 
This is certainly a chilling development. Who or what is this "benefactor"?
Someone who employs feeding nets to catch unwary travelers, it would appear.

A favorable outcome depends on who has the greatest influence among the Habertaem's associates. If someone decides to move against Europa's crew, will the Habertaem intervene?

And now we have two crew under possible attack.

Looks like things are heating up all over...
 
This wouldn't be a 'Gibraltar' story without layers. Clearly these regretfully revolting Habertaem are much more dangerous than anticipated thanks to a so far unknown element which may or may not have already struck.

Good thing Europa has those Marines on board. Sooner or later, I fear, their services will be high demand. Hot headed lieutenant and all.
 
Are those the Amon from a previous story of yours, Gibraltar? I remember seeing them somewhere before, and IIRC they were not all that pleasant then, either.
 
This is certainly a chilling development. Who or what is this "benefactor"?
Someone who employs feeding nets to catch unwary travelers, it would appear.

A favorable outcome depends on who has the greatest influence among the Habertaem's associates. If someone decides to move against Europa's crew, will the Habertaem intervene?

And now we have two crew under possible attack.

Looks like things are heating up all over...
So it would appear. :devil:

This wouldn't be a 'Gibraltar' story without layers. Clearly these regretfully revolting Habertaem are much more dangerous than anticipated thanks to a so far unknown element which may or may not have already struck.

Good thing Europa has those Marines on board. Sooner or later, I fear, their services will be high demand. Hot headed lieutenant and all.
The odds, it would seem, are leaning in that direction.

Are those the Amon from a previous story of yours, Gibraltar? I remember seeing them somewhere before, and IIRC they were not all that pleasant then, either.
The Amon have been hinted at in DarKush's excellent story The Crucible, though not encountered directly (link below).

http://www.unitedtrek.org/Dark Territory/crucible.htm
 
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