Pardon the bump... I finally got my hands on this. Fun story. At first, the recap of "The Next Phase" in the flashback to the Garadius mission following it seemed gratuitous, but it eventually became clear why it was relevant. Clever use of the phasing idea, and I like the idea of showing one of those pre-episode or post-episode missions that TNG often alluded to. It's a good way to fill in new stories without adding even more clutter to the TNG timeline than there already is. (There are at least two consecutive unseen missions between "The Next Phase" and "The Inner Light" -- the Garadius IV mission seen here, and the "magnetic wave survey of the Parvenium Sector" immediately before "Light.")
Reading the story, I was pleased at how well JJM's explanations of phasing conundrums (like how they have air to breathe/hear through) meshed with my own ideas, and then I saw myself credited in the acknowledgments. Then I found this thread and read JJM's annotations, and I discovered that he was drawing on my comments in KRAD's Tor.com rewatch for "The Next Phase," rather than anything I'd actually put in a published story. So, John, I'm glad you managed to work those ideas into published fiction.
Reading the story, I was pleased at how well JJM's explanations of phasing conundrums (like how they have air to breathe/hear through) meshed with my own ideas, and then I saw myself credited in the acknowledgments. Then I found this thread and read JJM's annotations, and I discovered that he was drawing on my comments in KRAD's Tor.com rewatch for "The Next Phase," rather than anything I'd actually put in a published story. So, John, I'm glad you managed to work those ideas into published fiction.