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Treacherous Waters - Gibraltar/Intrepid Crossover

Re: Treacherous Waters - Chapter 14

Arguments are at its best when both sides manage to make very decent points, as in the case between Pell and Sandhurst.

That was some excellent character interaction, jam packed with poignant history of both these people. Gibraltar and her crew truly have been through a lot and this makes any further adventure an even greater read than the last.

I'm looking forward to more of this marvellous collaboration.
 
Re: Treacherous Waters - Chapter 14

Wow, the means of that message delivery was very...wow...very...

That was also a very nice compare and contrast with Glover vs. Sandhurst.

Look forward to more!
 
Re: Treacherous Waters - Chapter 14

Still excellent-I look forward to the resolution so I can re-read the entire thing.
 
Re: Treacherous Waters - Chapter 14

I aggree with Cejay. Very good interaction there. I think the more realistic the exchanges are the better the story, any story, is.
 
Re: Treacherous Waters - Chapter 14

Once again, we see the pitfalls of a CO in a romantic relationship with a senior officer. How can they reconcile the inevitable disagreements? Hopefully Sandhurst and Pell find a way.

And yes, a gory but effective method of slipping communications into Camp Hope. But what is the message?

Great stuff! :)
 
Treacherous Waters - Chapter 15

Chapter 15 <by Galen Holcomb>

“Return fire.” Aubrey directed after the second round of phasers raked over his ship. The Starfleet vessel stabbed back. The Velk warship seemed to ripple as its shields distorted from the impact.

Intrepid used the time to drop out of the line of fire, diving behind the outpost’s western hub. Each hub was one half of a dumbbell-shaped structure. Numerous docking arms sprouted from each of the two bulbs like thorns.

But the attacker moved with the agility of a hawk. The Velk ship accelerated into an elliptical course, coming within meters of Intrepid's stern. As the ship flashed by it unloaded a salvo of photon torpedos at close range.

The bridge quaked under the crew’s feet. A vacant bridge console belched out sparks. Aubrey was appalled at his enemy’s callousness. Using torpedos this close to the structure could easily destroy the dilapidated space station.

And the stakes had just risen higher, for the away team had managed to get out a brief message saying that they had located and were now desperately protecting Jivin Sharm. That had been the last contact before the station’s jamming field closed the communications window for good.

“Direct hit to our aft quarter. Shields at seventy-one percent.” Lt. Javier Rodriguez called out from the tactical station. The young officer had been with the ship since the Dominion War. His tactical skill was on a par with Lt. Commander Adol’s. “Still no response to our hails.”

From OPS, Lt. Douglas Pal scowled at his console. “Captain, those are definitely not Velk weapons.”

Aubrey contemplated the beating his ship was taking, mere minutes into the engagement.

“You don’t say,” He quipped.

“The energy signatures are similar to that of Jem’Hadar fighters.” Pal added solemnly. He knew the weight of this statement. Even without turning around, he could feel the tense stares upon his back.

“Mr. Pal, collect all the data you can for later analysis. Helm, Z minus two hundred meters, evasive pattern Theta-Four. Engineering, set auxiliary power to float. We’ll need it reallocated to different shield grids at a moment’s notice-----our friends are highly maneuverable and can hit us from multiple vectors.” Aubrey had snapped off the orders without hesitation, his mind effortlessly pursing several different avenues of thought at once.

And then, without warning, another memory fragment fell into place. He was a child again, many centuries ago. He had been in some type of gift shop with his father. There had been figurines of ballerinas and Olympic athletes sitting on a glass shelf. They were exquisitely crafted, particularly the ballerinas with their pretty long legs, shapely bodies and elegant feet.

The merchant had affixed a sign on the glass shelf next to the figurines. It read:

Lovely to look at lovely to hold.
But if you break it, consider it sold.

He swatted the recollection away with annoyance, noting ruefully that his new memories often found the most inopportune times to surface.

As the dueling starships regained their sights on one another, the space between them thickened with overlapping beams of phaser energy. The battle raged for a full minute as both opponents exchanged a barrage of weapons fire.

The news became worse with each round. Rodriguez somberly updated the damage report. “Shields at sixty-four percent. Structural damage to decks seven and nine. Rear torpedo launchers off line.”

Aubrey had few options. He could retreat, and leave the away team and Jivin Sharm to their own devices. There was always a chance they might survive and he could attempt retrieval later.

Or he could continue the firefight. Intrepid had the heavier guns and would probably win the contest in the end. But it would take time, and the outpost could be destroyed in the process, given how ruthless his adversary was. The away team might also perish and Sharm could be lost or re-captured. And without him, all hope for Velkohn might die. He needed a third option…a tactical advantage over his enemy-----something that would make the battle short and one sided…

“Mr. Pal, when we first arrived, you told me the outpost has virtually no security to speak of. “ He inclined his body forward, his voice dropping low with urgency. “Could you tap into the central network and take control of the station’s main systems?”

“Yes sir,” He affirmed. Almost apologetically, he added, “But sir, the outpost has no weapons.”

Straightening in his chair, Aubrey allowed a half-smile to emerge. “That’s not what I’m after.” He issued new orders, emphasizing that what he sought would take perfect timing…

They played cat and mouse. The commander of the Velk ship was shrewd. He or she wasn’t underestimating Intrepid's firepower or enhancements. They were careful not to fight at close quarters, where the outcome would be dependant upon a contest of strength. Instead, they used their agility to full advantage, weaving between the cylindrical docking structures as they raced around the outpost, striking through openings in the traffic as various ships arrived and departed. They knew the Starfleet ship couldn’t match their maneuverability and would be cautious of returning fire near civilians.

Aubrey could only speculate that his attackers brandished some serious clout, since no other vessel or anyone on the station was challenging their dangerous behavior.

Once more, an opening appeared between the outpost and the two ships. The Velk cruiser prepared to unleash another series of rabbit punches before ducking swiftly behind a massive docking arm.

The intent never bore fruit. All at once, a tractor beam jumped from the station and snared the nimble attack ship, immobilizing it like a fly in amber. The ship’s commander was taken by surprise and made a knee-jerk decision; kicking the impulse engines into full power to pull away.

The station’s aging tractor beam began to buckle, slowly releasing its grip. But those fleeting moments were all the time Aubrey needed. His foe was now moored, her superior maneuverability robbed.

The Starfleet ship came about, lining up her forward tubes. In desperation, the Velk fired on the tractor beam’s emitter, cleaving the emission spire in half.

They nearly escaped. But just as the warship blasted forward, they were showered with quantum torpedos. The Velk twisted away and two of the explosives missed their mark, the brilliant flares streaking into empty space. The other four torpedos struck them amidships. Their shields dissolved and the ship was engulfed within a blinding flash. Relentless, Intrepid struck again, tossing javelins of phaser light.

Pal took a long gaze at his data. “The Velk ship has been crippled, sir. Weapons and engines are down.”

Aubrey didn’t respond. He watched his adversary on the main viewer. He thought about how vicious they were. He thought about their wanton disregard for life and what mercy they might have dispensed had the situation been reversed.

Something dark moved inside him, demanding to be heard. Perhaps an echo of the man who, in those alternate histories, had destroyed humanity’s future.

Lt. Pal eventually turned his chair to see why Aubrey hadn’t responded. For a moment, he didn’t recognize his commanding officer. It was as though a depraved stranger had taken the captain’s place.

The other ship spun helplessly, energy crackling along its hull.

All it would take is two more shots, Aubrey reflected mechanically. Two more shots and they would never threaten anyone in this sector again. His lips parted to give the order.

…But if you break it, consider it sold.

“Captain?” Rodriguez inquired gently.

Slowly everyone turned in Aubrey’s direction.

Rodriguez spoke again, this time with greater urgency. “Captain, I have the away team's location.”

…But if you break it, consider it sold.

Blinking rapidly, the starship captain stepped away from the viewer. And it seemed he was stepping away from something else as well. He took his seat, hard features softening into their familiar pattern. “Take us there, Ensign Sorna.”

*****
 
Great battle sequence! Captain Aubrey came very close to stepping over a line. What will he do when he's near that line again?
 
Whoah! Very well drawn out battle sequence and a powerful ending! Aubrey most definitely is a man of deep layers.
 
Whoah! Very well drawn out battle sequence and a powerful ending! Aubrey most definitely is a man of deep layers.
Like an onion? Seriously, this Aubrey chap does NOT seem stable enough to be a Starfleet officer commanding a ship. Nice, strong finish to that part.
 
I'd be very easy to cross the line in the heat of battle. But to be distracted by haunting memories at the same time...Aubrey's plate sure is full at the moment.
 
It is indeed very interesting that these memories have a tendancy to surface at the most inopportune moments. I wonder why that is? Considering Aubrey's possibly apocalyptic destiny perhaps it isn't all that suprising.

Jason Aubrey is one of the most fascinating and enigmatic characters I've come across in Trek fan-fiction.

Oh and nice battle sequence, too.
 
Thanks again for the input and support. More to come. It shouldn't be too much longer before the next segement. Of course, I am writing one handed with a baby on my knee...
:)
 
Reading through the third chapter, I'm really liking Aubrey a lot. Obviously, you've put in a lot of time sketching him out, because his depth shows through in the prose.

-- ZC
 
Treacherous Waters - Chapter 16

CHAPTER 16 <by Gibraltar>

The sub-surface bunker complex rotated slowly in front of them, rendered in three dimensions courtesy of the holosuite's projectors. Sandhurst, Ramirez, Lar'ragos and Tark stood analyzing their potential objective, each of them holding counsel with their own fears as they scrutinized the nearly countless threats and traps storming such a structure would pose.

"The first question," Sandhurst offered, "is whether it's even possible to successfully assault the target." He looked askance at the others, "Assuming it can be done, the question then becomes... is it worth the risk?"

Ramirez was first to answer. "This will be extremely difficult and highly dangerous, but I think it's doable." She locked eyes with her captain through the transparent hologram floating between them, "We'll lose people, that's a certainty."

"I'll second that," Lar'ragos said with nearly clinical detachment, rendering his professional assessment. "Even utilizing tactical drones, portable shield generators, and a reinforced assault team, we're talking about breaching a facility with a single entrance that's been hardened against just the sort of attack we're proposing."

Tark nodded reluctantly. "I'm afraid I must agree, Captain. With their transporter inhibitors preventing direct beam-in, any entry team will be forced into this pre-established kill zone," the Tellarite raised up on his toes to point to a series of hardened bunker-like rooms just below the main surface access hatch.

Ramirez studied the schematic for a few moments, then pointed to a corner of the rectangular-shaped facility. "What if we modified one of our phaser banks for sub-surface drilling and used it to punch down into the structure and knock out their transporter scrambler? Then we could use the same bore-hole to either beam out the prisoners or send an assault team in behind their primary defenses."

"Too risky," Sandhurst countered. "If what our informants are telling us is accurate, the transporter inhibitor is located in the center of the lowest level of the facility. Phasering down through the complex, even from an outside angle, risks collapsing the entire structure. The prisoners they're supposedly holding there won't do us any good if they're dead."

"Are we certain we're not being manipulated?" Lar'ragos asked. "It's awfully convenient that a padd containing the schematics of this facility and volumes of information on their defense setup just happens to find its way to us. Our going down there armed for bear would likely play right into the hands of any number of factions who want to appear as being opposed to 'foreign' intervention in their power struggle." He looked to Ramirez, who dipped her head in silent acknowledgment. "Someone could either be setting us up to take out their opponents, or is hoping to make us the publicly recognized bad guys, or both."

Ramirez added, "You can be certain that if we do this, our claims of neutrality will go right out the window. We'll have committed ourselves to opposing at least one faction in this civil war, and will therefore be suspected of supporting whoever they're currently fighting." She turned toward Sandhurst, "Pell is trying to bring the various power blocs back to the negotiating table as we speak. This Op would undermine everything the both of you have tried to establish since we arrived."

Sandhurst absorbed that in silence.

Tark took the opportunity to speak in the conversation's lull. "The question remains. Is it worth it to assault the target?"

Lar'ragos frowned slightly, "If the information we've been given is accurate, those prisoners may hold crucial data on who attacked our task force, and why. Ultimately, it's a matter of mathematics. Are the lives of a dozen Starfleet personnel worth discovering who was behind the murder of twenty-five hundred?"

“How do we know Intrepid isn’t tracking down who’s behind all this as we speak?” Ramirez queried. “We could attack the target and rescue the prisoners, taking casualties in the process while torpedoing our neutrality, only to end up with no actionable intelligence. How would we explain that to Aubrey when he returns, especially if he’s discovered the answers in his absence?”

“This isn’t about Aubrey and his people,” Sandhurst replied carefully. “I’m sure they’re more than capable, but we can’t simply take it on faith that the answers are out there in the Bog for Intrepid to find. If we don’t act now and the prisoners are executed or moved, we could lose our only opportunity to learn the truth.”

Tark stepped through the rotating hologram to come face to face with the captain. “How is this not a Prime Directive violation, sir? If we rush in to a Velk military facility, shooting up the place and releasing their prisoners, that seems to me to be the definition of interfering in another species’ internal affairs.”

Lar'ragos turned his senses on his captain and friend, trying to divine Sandhurst's response to what could easily be considered a challenge both to his authority and judgment. To his surprise, Sandhurst easily parried the verbal joust, "The attack on our task force technically occurred before their civil war started. Is that a flimsy justification? Sure, but under the circumstances it works for me, Master Chief." He looked down at the pugnacious Tellarite. "Where do you stand on this? Should we just turn around and go home? Leave a comm beacon behind to commemorate the unresolved deaths of all of our comrades?"

Tark's porcine features twisted in disgust, "Hell no, Captain. I want to go planetside and dish out some hurt on those bastards." Reigning in his instincts, the grizzled non-com relaxed slightly, "But what I want and what duty allows are rarely the same thing, sir."

"Sir," Lar'ragos interjected, "Ashok's managed to reconstitute our shields, but due to the pounding we took while rescuing that ship, our defensive capacity is only forty percent of nominal. If we poke this hornet's nest on the surface, you can be sure Gibraltar will quickly become a target herself."

Sandhurst studied his old friend while formulating his reply. He suspected that Lar'ragos had sensed his growing angst about the ship's relatively fragile condition. At her last major refit, the yardmaster had told Sandhurst that should the ship take any additional significant damage, her age and the accumulated wear from the tumultuous past year would necessitate Gibraltar being decommissioned and scrapped.

Sidestepping the El Aurian's observation, Sandhurst turned to look at all three of his personnel. "I appreciate your input, it's been invaluable. After considering your words, as well as the clearly precarious rationale behind the mission, I’m going to go ahead with the rescue operation, but on a volunteer-only basis.” In response to their surprised expressions, the captain added, “I’m prepared to lead the mission myself, if necessary.”

“Uh...” Lar’ragos began thoughtfully, then coughed into his fist.

Wincing ever so slightly, Ramirez shook her head fractionally. “Sir, that wouldn’t be an optimum utilization of your natural talents and abilities.”

Tark raised his bushy eyebrows appreciatively, and smiled broadly at Ramirez.

Folding his arms across his chest, Sandhurst found himself trying to repress an ironic smile of his own. “So, what I hear you saying is that my leading such a mission would result in--”

“...wailing and gnashing of teeth, sir.” Lar’ragos finished for him. “A disaster of biblical proportions, to use a human aphorism.”

“...significant problematic tactical permutations,” Ramirez threw in.

“...bad, bad things, sir.” Tark finished for the group.

Sandhurst pursed his lips thoughtfully, appearing to examine his subordinates closely. “Message received. May I consider those voluntary requests to join the rescue mission?”

The decision having been made, Ramirez shed the devil’s advocate role she’d donned for the occasion. Glancing at the others, she turned back to the captain. “We’ll get it done, sir.”

“You always do,” Sandhurst affirmed.

*****

Lar’ragos set his foot atop the bench in front of his security locker, cinching tight the legging on his combat armor. Frowning suddenly and without turning, he addressed the individual who’d entered silently to stand behind him. “Lieutenant... Mitsu, isn’t it?”

The junior lieutenant nodded at Pava’s back, “Nicholas Mitsu, sir.”

Turning to face the security officer on loan from the Intrepid, Lar’ragos queried, “What can I do for you?”

“Respectfully, sir, I’d like to ask why I wasn’t given the option of volunteering for your mission?”

“I’m taking nearly all my personnel with me, Mr. Mitsu. That leaves you and the others that Captain Aubrey transferred aboard to watch over Gibraltar‘s medical and relief teams currently operating on the surface.”

Mitsu protested, “I assure you, Lieutenant, my people and I have trained hard for any contingency. Commander Adol’s seen to that.”

“I know that,” Lar’ragos answered, sliding a combat knife into an integrated scabbard on the thigh of his armor. “In fact, I’m counting on it.”

“Sir?” Mitsu looked perplexed.

His expression caught somewhere between grim determination and sardonic humor, Lar’ragos sighed. “Look, son, I’m not questioning your abilities. I am, however, cognizant of the fact that those of us who’ve volunteered for this damned fool crusade face almost certain courts martial if we’re fortunate enough to survive the mission.”

“But, sir, babysitting the medics...”

His face darkening, Lar’ragos leaned forward, his voice lowering an octave. “Tread softly, Lieutenant. Those ‘medics’ have saved my life and those of my friends on any number of occasions. After we pull this little stunt there will almost certainly be reprisals aimed at our recovery teams.” He took a moment to look over the short but sturdily built Asian man, “Am I mistaken to entrust these people to your protection?”

Mitsu blinked, his gaffe suddenly very apparent, “No, sir. I’ll make sure they’re kept safe, sir. You have my word.”

“Good to hear, Mitsu.” Lar’ragos closed his locker, tucking the helmet from his commando armor under one arm as he passed the security JG. “I’ll hold you to it.”

*****

Sandhurst stepped into the observation lounge just as Pell was wrapping up the last round of negotiations. He could see the exhaustion written on her face and evident through her slow, deliberate movements as she switched off the viewer and took a long sip of Vulcan mint tea.

He moved just far enough into the room for the doors to close behind him, but otherwise remained still.

Pell craned her head to look at him, apparently too tired to bother rotating the chair she’d sat in for the past seven hours. She met his gaze with something approaching resigned acceptance. “You realize that there might be hope of stopping this, Captain?” she said with an awkward formality.

He nodded but said nothing.

She continued, “We’ve actually garnered a good deal of support through our humanitarian and medical support teams on the surface. Leaders of some of the main factions are starting to realize the situation is spinning out of control and they’re endangering the stability of their entire civilization.” She yawned unexpectedly and took the opportunity to rub her weary eyes. “Sorry.”

“No,” he sighed, “I’m the one that’s sorry.”

Pell fell silent for a long moment, choosing her next words carefully. “We have the chance to save an entire world from chaos and collapse. If you launch an attack on that installation, we’ll lose all support, and any chance of heading off a planetary disaster.”

“It’s not that simple...”

She rose from her seat, her eyes pleading but her voice strong and steady. “Of course it is. It’s exactly that simple. All you have to do in order to help save millions of lives is give up on avenging the deaths of twenty-five hundred.” Pell moved to stand before him. “That’s the kind of math that Captain Zorek would have appreciated.”

Frowning, Sandhurst blurted, “I’m getting tired of competing with Zorek’s ghost, Commander.”

Opening her mouth to speak, Pell found she had nothing to say to that.

“Noting that we’ve differing opinions on our next course of action is a grotesque understatement,” Sandhurst offered, his voice softening. “This isn’t about the Velk anymore, Ojana. I don’t know if what’s happening down there is the result of their being manipulated or of genuine factional infighting, but ultimately it’s their affair. My only concern now is finding who’s responsible for destroying our task force and bringing them to justice.”

“Well,” she remarked coldly, “that’s a pretty clear line in the sand, Captain. I hope you can live with the consequences.” She walked past him to the exit without another word.

“Me too,’ he whispered to the void after the doors had closed behind her.

*****

Gibraltar’s shuttle bay bustled with activity as engineering personnel put the finishing touches on the extensive weapons modifications to the three shuttles that sat abreast of one another in the cavernous hold.

Lar’ragos, clad in his full combat regalia, skirted an anti-grav pallet loader as a crew chief affixed one of the team’s special warfare hovercycles to mountings fitted to the side of the Type-8 shuttle Kon Tiki.

“It’s been awhile since you’ve been allowed to play with all your toys,” Ramirez remarked with forced humor as she sidled up beside him.

He ran his teeth across his lower lip in an unconsciously anxious gesture, “Yeah... I hope it’s enough.”

Glancing around to ensure their relative privacy, Ramirez pulled Lar’ragos aside into a small maintenance alcove. “This feels wrong.”

Lar’ragos shrugged as much as his armor would allow. “Not my call, Commander.”

She blew out a frustrated breath, looking away at a team of similarly clad security personnel walking up the aft ramp into the passenger compartment of the Heyerdahl. “I was hoping we’d be able to talk him out of this. Maybe I should have tried harder?”

“He’s the captain. It was his decision, and he made it. Besides, he’s pulled victory from the jaws of defeat before. Don’t we owe him the benefit of the doubt?”

She nodded uncertainly, then closed her eyes briefly and seemed to center herself. “Okay... sorry, just pre-mission jitters. It’s been awhile since I’ve led a combat assault team.”

“It’s like riding a bicycle,” he said comfortingly. “A bicycle with shooting and confusion and screaming and wounded people bleeding everywhere... but a bicycle nonetheless.”

Her mouth twisted into a barely contained smirk of darkest satire. “You’re a shit, Pava.”

“Always have been, sir. It’s my greatest failing.”

She pushed him playfully ahead of her towards his awaiting shuttle.

*****

Mmm, what you say?
Mm, that you only meant well? Well, of course you did.
Mmm, what you say?
Mm, that it's all for the best? Ah of course it is.
Mmm, what you say?
Mm, that it's just what we need? And you decided this.
Mmm what you say?
What did she say?


-Imogen Heap, Hide and Seek


The three shuttles plummeted from the sky like a single blazing meteor, their shields repelling the extreme heat of atmospheric entry and appearing as a brilliant fireball visible across most of the continent below them. They had maintained such close formation with one another that they appeared as a solitary sensor return to the defenders on the surface.

Piloting the lead craft, Brett Lightner fired a salvo of micro-torpedoes that swarmed ahead of the falling shuttles and sought out sensor arrays, phaser emplacements, and a surface-to-space missile battery mounted aboard a Velk naval vessel five kilometers off the nearby coast. One by one these targets vanished from his tactical panel's threat board, and the ensign looked across to Commander Ramirez in the co-pilot's seat. "First threat package neutralized, sir."

Ramirez's expression wasn't apparent through the closed faceplate of her special forces combat armor. The eerily organic-looking mimetic holomesh was currently inert, but it glistened wetly in a criss-cross pattern across the underlying ceramic shell. "Excellent, Mr. Lightner. I've successfully jammed local communications, and the thoron field I'm emitting should scramble any fiber-optic land lines in the vicinity of the bunker."

"Acknowledged," Lightner replied tersely as he reached out suddenly to toggle the phasers and vaporize an incoming missile launched from an unidentified source. "Getting a little busy out there," he remarked quietly to no one in particular.

Ramirez keyed the comms. "Pava, you ready over there?"

"Affirm," came his tinny reply from the Heyerdahl, cycled through a host of encryption matrices. "We'll drop off the SWIFT's on our approach, while Brett punches down through the first two 'kill zone' levels and then provides over watch."

"Copy that," she returned, checking her board once again to confirm all the chess pieces were in play. Hailing Gibraltar, she announced, "We're on final approach to the target, status is go."

"Gibraltar copies, Kon Tiki. Proceed as planned." Sandhurst's voice sounded tight with tension, even over the heavily scrambled channel.

"Alright, boys and girls," Ramirez breathed, "here we go."

*****
 
Chapter 16 - Continued

Chapter 16, continued <by Gibraltar>

Lar'ragos was first down into the dark, cavernous opening Lightner had blasted through the surface and the two underlying levels of ferro-steel reinforced thermocrete slabs that measured a meter thick apiece. The twin discus shaped tactical drones that had proceeded him were scanning the vicinity, looking for threats and traps. Bringing his phaser rifle up, the El Aurian followed the drones into the gloom, heading for the partially buried staircase leading deeper into the bowels of the facility.

Back on the surface, Petty Officer Dunleavy and her team continued to suppress any Velk activity on the ground from atop the backs of their SWIFT assault hovercycles, while two of the three shuttles kept enemy fighters and reconnaissance craft at bay.

Ramping the setting on his rifle, Lar'ragos vaporized the rubble choking the stairway before tossing a stun grenade from his satchel down into the well. After the muted thump and greenish flash, he sent the drones ahead as the internal tricorder display inside his helmet announced the silent arrival of Ramirez, Tark, and nine others as the rest of the assault team glided down behind him on the energies of their variable gravity harnesses.

Ramirez joined him at the mouth of the crumbling stairwell, her sarcasm evident over the comms channel as she swept the first visible stair landing with her rifle. "You're not terribly big on the subtle, are you, Pava?"

He rolled his eyes inside his helmet, "Please, like they don't know we're coming."

"True enough," she remarked. Gesturing to the descending stairs with her phaser carbine, Ramirez asked, "Care to take point, Lieutenant?"

"I'd be delighted, sir. Thank you for asking."

Communing briefly with the drone scouts from inside his helmet, Lar’ragos raised his compact pulse-phaser rifle and started down.

*****

The conflagration of weapons fire within the narrow concrete passageways chewed at the walls, ceiling and floor, sending bits of shrapnel zinging in all directions as a host of collimated energy beams and pulse blasts competed with sonic disruptors and ballistic projectiles.

Security Specialist Sharpe ducked back behind cover as his grenade skittered down the corridor, flaring briefly and sending a half dozen hastily assembled Velk soldiers slumping to the floor. A handful of their comrades staggered backwards in a clumsy retreat to the next descending staircase. “Resistance appears to be stiffening,” the young man observed helpfully.

Lar’ragos surged forward as Ramirez covered his advance, the El Aurian’s stun blasts catching one of the fleeing Velk between the shoulders and spinning him into the wall before the squat reptilian collapsed to the ground.

Reaching a T-intersection in the passageway, Pava sent one of the drones darting around the corner where it was met with a fusillade of heavy fire that overwhelmed its limited shielding and exploded the device in midair. “Bring the shield drones forward,” he ordered over the assault team’s comnet. Eight large spheres moved soundlessly up the corridor, a pair of the devices occupying each corner of the passage.

Utilizing the forearm control interface on his armor, Master Chief Tark urged the spheres forward into the adjoining corridor, where they divided into two groups of four, each quartet heading in separate directions. The drones extended a shield wall between them that deflected or absorbed incoming enemy fire, but was attuned to the rotating weapons frequencies of the Starfleet assault squad and permeable to their phaser discharges.

The Gibraltar team split in two, each moving up the corridor in opposite directions, firing through their advancing shield-walls as the Velk were forced back yet again. Ramirez called to Lar’ragos as their individual fire teams separated down the hallway, “Pava, things are getting too hot down here.”

“Really? Damn, apparently I’d missed the memo--”

“Shut up and listen! We’re on level four of eight, and at this rate we’re going to be chewed all to hell long before we ever get to the prisoner containment bloc. We need to split up. I’ll take my team to the lowest level and knock out the transporter scrambler while your team locates and rescues the prisoners. That’ll give them two groups of intruders to defend against, and hopefully once you’ve got the prisoners we can beam straight out of here.”

Lar’ragos winced as a photon stun grenade whistled over his shoulder from the under-slung launcher on Tark’s phaser rifle behind him. “Seriously, Master Chief, what the hell? You want to switch sides and fight for the Velk, all you have to do is ask!” Turning his attention back to Ramirez, he answered, “It’s a good plan, though I’m not crazy about halving our resources.”

“It’s that or we pack it up right now and back out.”

He considered it for a brief moment, ‘No, you’re right.” He crouched, gesturing for Tark to move up to take the lead position and continue the advance as Lar’ragos utilized the helmet’s limited neural-link to call up a schematic of the complex on his faceplate. “Okay, let’s map this out...”

*****
 
Re: Chapter 16 - Continued

You write good action sequences. And we get to see Pava at work. How cool!
 
Taking a team down there was a tough call. Which is more important: solving the mystery of the lost fleet or to stabilize a civilization? Hopefully, his relationship with Pell won't suffer.
 
Nice hard-edged action sequence. I like the idea of the recon and shield drones--they make perfect sense and are very logical developments of what we're doing already with robotics. Nice landing too--nothing like coming in with a bang!

Very well done!
 
I have a feeling when all is said and done that bythe end of this mission, Gibraltar may no longer have a Diplomatic officer.
 
Nice hard-edged action sequence. I like the idea of the recon and shield drones--they make perfect sense and are very logical developments of what we're doing already with robotics. Nice landing too--nothing like coming in with a bang!

Very well done!

I agree-too bad I didn't have my strike team properly equipped on Seleya! Maybe all of those deaths-oops, I mean, um, yeah, this is logical stuff. Wish I'd thought of it!
 
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