I'd move engineering further closer to the bow of the secondary hull, because there's no good logic behind making your plasma conduits and such have such looooooong runs. You'd want that to be as short and have as few bends as possible.
Plus, having a deflector dish mounted on that secondary hull would be defeated by the forward globe hull. It will block it unless you cut a notch out of your globular hull, or lower the deflector dish to clear it, neither of which would be in keeping with established TOS OR even ENT asthetic.
Plus, having a deflector dish mounted on that secondary hull would be defeated by the forward globe hull. It will block it unless you cut a notch out of your globular hull, or lower the deflector dish to clear it, neither of which would be in keeping with established TOS OR even ENT asthetic.