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To boldly go

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TO BOLDLY GO


1. Blast from the past
USS Corsair. NCC-1721-C

Captain’s log. Stardate 48671.2

With the situation in Lykandia quiet for now, Starfleet have sent us to investigate the Sagan anomaly, and we have tried to launch several probes inside, but all of them seem to have been destroyed. Originally this mission should have been undertaken by the Enterprise, but…


Captain Antonia "Toni" Castro, aparently a young woman in her late 20s, sighed and deleted her last words from the memory of the computer. Then, she added a pretty dry entry, detailing the progresses in the study of the anomaly, and adding the data collected during the last few days.


“What’s wrong, captain?” asked Commander D'Arla, the half-deltan, half-vulcan Counselor, who over the years had learned that with Captain Castro, it was always better a blunt approach.


“Jim’s death”


The Counselor didn’t need to ask who was ‘Jim’. Tony had been very affected the last few days, since the second death of Captain James T. Kirk.


“You know that he died as he wanted, making a difference.”


“Yes, I know. But to discover that he had been spared all these years, only to die again. Sometimes I wonder what would have happened if...”


“If...”


“Nothing really, Amia. It’s no use to brood about the past. What’s done is done.” said Toni “You know, I met him briefly when I was rescued, but I never saw him again until I enrolled in the Academy. We were somewhat friends, as friends as an Admiral and a cadet can be, you know.”


Darla nodded, remembering her own rough time in the Academy caused, ironically, by captain Castro, then assigned there.



“He hitched a ride on all the training cruises that he could. He never liked to fly a desk in Starfleet Headquarters, he wanted to be out there, between the stars.” She closed her eyes, remembering with nostalgia “He was always there to see the Enterprise sail away or come back home, like a man looking for the love of his life. I was aboard her also on a few training cruises, but we only coincided in her last training cruise, one that I’ll always remember.”


“The Genesis incident?”


“Precisely. As I was saying, I served on her a few times, but I sensed the… How could I put it? The magic of the ship. The Enterprise-A was almost a carbon copy, but I never got the same feeling from her.” said Tony. “But every one of them was special. The best ship of the fleet. Archer, April, Pike, Jim, Decker, Spock, Harriman, Chekov, Demora Sulu, Garret and Picard. Without the Enterprises they would have been good captains, but with them, they became legends. One ship has fallen, but another will replace her. The Enterprises are Kirk’s legacy.” As she spoke, Amia could feel how the sadness lifting, to be replaced by her usual energetic mood.




Commander Korg Ramirez, first officer of the USS Corsair, entered the bridge and looked around. He was still getting used to the modifications that had been implemented in the refit that accompanied the repairs after the Battle of Lykandia. Captain Castro had called in a few favors to get the bridge redesigned. Not that he complained about it, the new design allowed for a better communication between the bridge officers, being reminiscent of the one used in the Intrepid class, although retaining the three chairs arrangement in the center.


“Hi, Korg.” said Captain Castro when she saw him


“Captain.” acknowledged the half-Klingon first officer.


“Always so formal, even after all these years.” said Tony smiling.


Korg let flash one of his rare smiles and said:


“Naturality is a trait that I don’t posses in a great quantity, cap… Tonyi”


“Yeah. I still…”


“Captain.” Interrupted Khalev, the Andorian science officer. “The verteron emissions of the anomaly have increased, as if something was coming through.”


And then, before Toni could say anything the anomaly flashed. Although the filters kicked in immediately, that flash had been so strong that the afterglow still momentarily blinded them.


“Khalev! What has happened?” asked Captain Castro, knowing that the eyes of the Andorian, used to the blinding snow plains of his native planet, would have not been so affected as theirs.


And she wasn’t disappointed.


“A small craft has appeared through the anomaly. It seems like a Type 3 shuttlecraft.”


‘Type F.’ Translated the captain, remembering the old designation, and ordered. “On screen.”


What she saw on the screen was a white smudge over the red and blue nebula that surrounded the Sagan Anomaly.


“Magnification.”


Soon the image changed to an old-style shuttlecraft, whose name and registry number could be easily read now: Galileo II, NCC-1701/7, USS Enterprise.
 
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TO BOLDLY GO
1. Blast from the past

U.S.S. Corsair, NCC-1721-C


Captain’s log. Stardate 48681.2

With the situation in Lykandia quiet for now, Starfleet have sent us to investigate the Sagan anomaly, and we have tried to launch several probes inside, but all of them seem to have been destroyed. Originally this mission should have been undertaken by the Enterprise, but…

Captain Antonia "Toni" Castro, seemingly a tall, young woman with black hair and brown eyes, sighed and deleted her last words from the memory of the computer. Then, she added a pretty dry entry, detailing the progresses in the study of the anomaly, and adding the data collected during the last few days.

“What’s wrong, captain?” asked the ship’s Counselor, Amia D'Arla, a bald half-Deltan woman whose pointed ears revealed her Vulcan ancestry, and who over the years had learned that with Captain Castro, it was always better a blunt approach.

“Jim’s death”

The Counselor didn’t need to ask who was ‘Jim’. Toni had been very affected the last few days, since the second death of Captain James T. Kirk.

“You know that he died as he wanted, making a difference.” The Counselor tried to reassure her.

“Yes, I know. But to discover that he had been spared all these years, only to die again. Sometimes I wonder what would have happened if...”

“If...?”

“Nothing really, Amia. It’s no use to brood about the past. What’s done is done.” said Toni “You know, I met him briefly when I was rescued from that energy vortex, but I never saw him again until I enrolled in the Academy. We were somewhat friends, as friends as Starfleet brass and a cadet can be, you know.” said the Captain.

D'Arla nodded, remembering her own rough time in the Academy caused, ironically, by Captain Castro, then one of the Academy deputy headmasters.

“He hitched a ride on all the training cruises that he could. He never liked to fly a desk in Starfleet Headquarters, he wanted to be out there, between the stars.” She closed her eyes, remembering with nostalgia “He was always there to see the Enterprise sail away or come back home, like a man looking for the love of his life. I was aboard her also on a few training cruises, but we only coincided in her last training cruise, one that I’ll always remember.”

“The Genesis incident?” guessed the Counselor, remembering what she had read on the captain service record.

“Precisely. As I was saying, I served on her a few times, but I sensed the… How could I put it? The magic of the ship. The Enterprise-A was almost a carbon copy, but I never got the same feeling from her.” said Toni. “But every one of them was special. The best ship of the fleet. Archer, April, Pike, Jim, Decker, Spock, Harriman, Chekov, Demora, Garret and Picard. Without the Enterprises they would have been good captains, but with them, they became legends. One ship has fallen, but another will replace her. The Enterprises are Kirk’s legacy.” As she spoke, Amia could feel how the captain’s sadness lifting, to be replaced by her usual energetic mood. The Captain had her occasional dark moments, but they were always short-lived.
Commander Korg Ramirez, first officer of the USS Corsair, a middle-aged klingon-human hybrid who resembled the ridgeless klingons from a century ago, entered the bridge and looked around. He was still getting used to the modifications that had been implemented in the refit that accompanied the repairs after the Battle of Lykandia. Captain Castro had called in a few favors to get the bridge redesigned. Not that he complained about it, the new design allowed for a better communication between the bridge officers, being reminiscent of the one used in the Intrepid class, although retaining the three chairs arrangement in the center.

“Hi, Korg.” said Captain Castro when she saw him

“Captain.” acknowledged the first officer.

“Always so formal, even after all these years.” said Toni smiling.

Korg let flash one of his rare smiles and said:

“Naturality is a trait that I don’t posses in a great quantity, cap… Toni.”

“Yeah. I still…”

“Captain.” Interrupted Khalev, the young Andorian science officer. “The verteron emissions of the anomaly have increased, as if something was coming through.”

And then, before Toni could say anything the anomaly flashed. Although the filters kicked in immediately, that flash had been so strong that the afterglow still momentarily blinded them.

“Khalev! What has happened?” asked Captain Castro, knowing that the eyes of the Andorian, used to the blinding snow plains of his native planet, would have not been so affected as theirs. And she wasn’t disappointed.

“A small craft has appeared through the anomaly. It seems like a Type 3 shuttlecraft.” answered matter-of-factly the quiet Andorian.

‘Type F.’ translated Toni, remembering the old designation, and ordered. “On screen.”

What she saw on the screen was a white smudge over the red and blue nebula that surrounded the Sagan Anomaly.

“Magnification.”

Soon the image changed to an old-style shuttlecraft, whose name and registry number could be easily read now: Galileo II, NCC-1701/7, USS Enterprise.
 
2. Heroes

“Khalev, scan for life signs.” ordered Captain Castro.

“One human female…” started to say the Andorian science officer when a new stream of data stopped him cold “Captain! The shuttlecraft life support is failing!”

“Brigitte, lock on her life signs and beam her directly to Sickbay!” ordered Captain Castro to the Tactical Officer, a shortish blue-haired woman.

"Done!" answered in a few seconds.

"Korg, you have the bridge. I'm going to see our guest."


A few minutes later, Antonia Castro was besides the new Chief Medical Officer, Sandra Pertini, an attractive blond woman in her early 30s, looking at the woman that they had transported from the shuttlecraft. She was a sandy-haired woman who looked to be in her mid thirties, a bit in the stocky side. She was wearing a mini-skirted variant of the green wrap-around tunic that she had seen Kirk wearing in recordings of his first five-year mission aboard the Enterprise. Although… there seemed to be some slight differences, as the center line of her captain rank braids was silver instead of gold, and the tunic was wrapped to the other side. Her face was somewhat familiar, but she couldn't place her.

"Well, Doctor, how is she?”

“She is well, only unconscious from a momentary oxygen deprivation.” said the doctor and continued “I have sedated her, only in case.”

“Well done, Sandra, and what can you tell me about her?"

"Human, female, 36 years old, good health, although seems to have not been well fed of late, nothing serious.” said the doctor, reading from the screen. “No sign of pregnancies. And she comes from another reality. "

"How do you know?" asked the Captain.

"After the Mirror Universe infiltrators of last year, I thought that it was a reasonable security measure to install a quantum frequency scanner in sickbay." explained the doctor.

"That's an excellent idea, Sandra. You are doing an excellent job as CMO. "

"Not as good as Dr. Tsen, he was the best doctor that I have seen since I left the Academy.” Said Sandra speaking of her late predecessor. “If I had checked Komarov then, maybe he would be here instead of me.”

"It’s not your fault, Sandra. How could you have known that he wasn’t... him?”

“Still, I...”

“It’s no use to cry over spilt milk, Sandra. We can only do our best to avoid repeat the same errors.”

They stood in silence for a moment before going back to the matter at hand.

"Sandra, I have seen this face, somewhere. Can you compare her DNA with the one of the Starfleet Officers of a century ago?"

"Yes, of course. How accurate do you want the match?"

"We don't know when the point of divergence of her universe took place…"

"Ok. "

She quickly keyed the appropriate commands, while Captain Castro studied the woman with more attention.

She had seen this face before, but where? Instead of focusing in the features that were there, she unfocused her eyes a moment to see the general frame. That jaw, that nose... “She can’t be...” she thought while the solution started to insinuate in her mind. She put the hand on the woman forehead, leaving out the elaborated hairstyle, so she could see the face better, and then, at the same time that the answer appeared on screen she knew the identity of woman. Even if it was impossible.

"Incredible." Said Dr. Pertini looking at the result. Captain Castro glanced to the screen, and saw the confirmation of what she had guessed.

"Not at all, I think that has its twisted logic. The slight genetic difference must be the change of the Y chromosome by an X chromosome." said the captain, still looking to the screen, where the computer had identified the woman, with more than 90% accuracy, as James T. Kirk,
 
Sweet-love Mirror Universe fun! Keep it coming!


The Mirror Universe reference is to a story that I have in the works (I tend to go back and forth through Trek history) about the Corsair crew confronting their counterparts from an alternate Mirror Universe where the Terran empire never fell.
 
I'm currently writing USS Seleya-Corkscrewed and am dealing with the Terran Empire too. Mine's on a slightly larger scale than personal confrontation though. Its about Federation v Empire, basically.
 
I'm currently writing USS Seleya-Corkscrewed and am dealing with the Terran Empire too. Mine's on a slightly larger scale than personal confrontation though. Its about Federation v Empire, basically.

Hmmm... are your stories here? or in your site?

Ah, by the way what do you think of my crew?
 
An interesting twist. I'm looking forward to see where you go with this.

I don't think a dramatis personae is necessary, but it might be an idea to weave in a little more backstory to each character as you introduce them, so we get a feel for them.
 
I'm currently writing USS Seleya-Corkscrewed and am dealing with the Terran Empire too. Mine's on a slightly larger scale than personal confrontation though. Its about Federation v Empire, basically.

Hmmm... are your stories here? or in your site?

Ah, by the way what do you think of my crew?
Pretty cool so far-but I agree with Xeris about doing a little weaving.

My current story is on page 2 of this forum and most of the rest is posted at HopeStation. The first is The Fracture, the second is Frail Blood and I'm ongoing with Corkscrewed. FB is a stand-alone while Ckscwd is the sequel to Fracture.
 
An interesting twist. I'm looking forward to see where you go with this.

I don't think a dramatis personae is necessary, but it might be an idea to weave in a little more backstory to each character as you introduce them, so we get a feel for them.

On retrospective I should have told more about the backgrounds of teh characters (like for example, that Captain Castro served under Commander Ramirez father, or that Brigitte, the Tactical Officer, is a princess in her world). I'll rewrite a bit the parts already posted.

I'm currently writing USS Seleya-Corkscrewed and am dealing with the Terran Empire too. Mine's on a slightly larger scale than personal confrontation though. Its about Federation v Empire, basically.

Hmmm... are your stories here? or in your site?

Ah, by the way what do you think of my crew?
Pretty cool so far-but I agree with Xeris about doing a little weaving.

My current story is on page 2 of this forum and most of the rest is posted at HopeStation. The first is The Fracture, the second is Frail Blood and I'm ongoing with Corkscrewed. FB is a stand-alone while Ckscwd is the sequel to Fracture.

I'll look at them, thanks.
 
Good Lord! A female James Kirk! (sound of head exploding) :eek:

Actually, I think you've hit on an intriguing premise. Who's to say that each mirror universe "copy" is an exact duplicate?

I can see it now the She-Kirk with PMS: "Don't mess with me, bitch! I'm the goddam Kirk! (bursts into tears)" :wtf:

I'm looking forward to more!
 
Good Lord! A female James Kirk! (sound of head exploding) :eek:

Actually, I think you've hit on an intriguing premise. Who's to say that each mirror universe "copy" is an exact duplicate?

I can see it now the She-Kirk with PMS: "Don't mess with me, bitch! I'm the goddam Kirk! (bursts into tears)" :wtf:

I'm looking forward to more!

And here it is!
 
I have modified again the first and second chapter.


TO BOLDLY GO...

1. Blast from the past

USS Corsair. NCC-1721-C
Captain’s log. Stardate 48681.2
With the situation in Lykandia quiet for now, Starfleet have sent us to investigate the Sagan anomaly, and we have tried to launch several probes inside, but all of them seem to have been destroyed. Originally this mission should have been undertaken by the Enterprise, but…

Captain Antonia "Toni" Castro, seemingly a tall, young woman with black hair and brown eyes, sighed and deleted her last words from the memory of the computer. Then, she added a pretty dry entry, detailing the progresses in the study of the anomaly, and adding the data collected during the last few days.

“What’s wrong, captain?” asked the ship’s Counselor, Amia D'Arla, a bald half-Deltan woman whose pointed ears revealed her Vulcan ancestry, and who over the years had learned that with Captain Castro, it was always better a blunt approach.

“Jim’s death”

The Counselor didn’t need to ask who was ‘Jim’. Toni had been very affected the last few days, since the second death of Captain James T. Kirk.

“You know that he died as he wanted, making a difference.” The Counselor tried to reassure her.

“Yes, I know. But to discover that he had been spared all these years, only to die again. Sometimes I wonder what would have happened if...”

“If...?”

“Nothing really, Amia. It’s no use to brood about the past. What’s done is done.” said Toni “You know, I met him briefly when I was rescued from that energy vortex, but I never saw him again until I enrolled in the Academy. We were somewhat friends, as friends as Starfleet brass and a cadet can be, you know.” said the Captain.

D'Arla nodded, remembering her own rough time in the Academy caused, ironically, by Captain Castro, then one of the Academy deputy headmasters.

“He hitched a ride on all the training cruises that he could. He never liked to fly a desk in Starfleet Headquarters, he wanted to be out there, between the stars.” She closed her eyes, remembering with nostalgia “He was always there to see the Enterprise sail away or come back home, like a man looking for the love of his life. I was aboard her also on a few training cruises, but we only coincided in her last training cruise, one that I’ll always remember.”

“The Genesis incident?” guessed the Counselor, remembering what she had read on the captain service record.

“Precisely. As I was saying, I served on her a few times, but I sensed the… How could I put it? The magic of the ship. The Enterprise-A was almost a carbon copy, but I never got the same feeling from her.” said Toni. “But every one of them was special. The best ship of the fleet. Archer, April, Pike, Jim, Decker, Spock, Harriman, Chekov, Demora, Garret and Picard. Without the Enterprises they would have been good captains, but with them, they became legends. One ship has fallen, but another will replace her. The Enterprises are Kirk’s legacy.” As she spoke, Amia could feel how the captain’s sadness lifting, to be replaced by her usual energetic mood. The Captain had her occasional dark moments, but they were always short-lived.
Commander Korg Ramirez, first officer of the USS Corsair, a middle-aged klingon-human hybrid who resembled the ridgeless klingons from a century ago, stepped into the bridge and looked around. He was still getting used to the modifications that had been implemented in the refit that accompanied the repairs after the Battle of Lykandia. Captain Castro had called in a few favors to get the bridge redesigned. Not that he complained about it, the new design allowed for a better communication between the bridge officers, being reminiscent of the one used in the Intrepid class, although retaining the three chairs arrangement in the center.

Captain Castro was in her chair, talking quietly with Counselor D'Arla. It was odd how they had become friends, considering that the last time that they had seen each other before the Corsair was when Captain Castro, as Deputy Headmaster of Starfleet Academy had thrown Cadet D'Arla into the brig. He had never learned the exact details of the case, but he knew that Captain Castro had asked for a transfer to the Utopia Planitia Shipyards just afterwards. Behind them Lieutenant Brigitte Ta-Bej, the Tactical and Security Officer was alert in her post, although only somebody who knew her would think that her posture was other that the one of an officer bored out of her mind. Her very idiosyncratic approach to her job had been the cause of frictions with the Operations officer, Lieutenant Karl Grünning, at first. But oddly the animosity between those two had given place to love. They had been the official couple of the ship until Karl had died in... what exactly?

'By Kahless' beard, it was in that damned week early in the year that nobody remembers' he thought. Wanting to think about any other thing, he looked at the science officer, Lieutenant Khalevathir th'Uvyyn, or as he liked to be called, Khalev. Quiet, reserved, even a bit shy when he had boarded the ship three years ago, replacing the obnoxious lieutenant S'Tes, or as some crewpeople had nicknamed him, S'Tress, as science officer, Khalev had become a very capable officer. It was a pity to have to lose him, but apparently they needed him at home and soon.

Thinking about the bridge crew brought his mind back to the time where he had been a captain on his own right, commanding the USS Corsair, NCC-1721-B, this ship predecessor, and how his command had ended tragically in the Alkrian sector. One of the junior officers killed in the attack that had damaged the ship beyond repair, had been the son of an admiral, who had done all that was in her hand to see him demoted... As he resumed walking, his hands went to his neck where the three solid pips of a full commander now stood, instead of the lieutenant commander that ha had been for years, afterwards. He had been stuck in Records for years, and only an unlikely chain of events had managed to put him back into the bridge of an starship... although only as first officer. At first, he had resented that, and his relationship with Captain Castro had become very adversarial. But he had finally managed to put all of that back over the years passed on this ship.

“Hi, Korg.” said Captain Castro when she saw him

“Captain.” acknowledged the first officer.

“Always so formal, even after all these years.” said Toni smiling.

Korg let flash one of his rare smiles and said:

“Naturality is a trait that I don’t posses in a great quantity, cap… Toni.”

“Yeah. I still…”

“Captain.” Interrupted Khalev. “The verteron emissions of the anomaly have increased, as if something was coming through.”

And then, before Toni could say anything the anomaly flashed. Although the filters kicked in immediately, that flash had been so strong that the afterglow still momentarily blinded them.

“Khalev! What has happened?” asked Captain Castro, knowing that the eyes of the Andorian, used to the blinding snow plains of his native planet, would have not been so affected as theirs. And she wasn’t disappointed.

“A small craft has appeared through the anomaly. It seems like a Type 3 shuttlecraft.” answered matter-of-factly the quiet Andorian.

‘Type F.’ translated Toni, remembering the old designation, and ordered. “On screen.”

What she saw on the screen was a white smudge over the red and blue nebula that surrounded the Sagan Anomaly.

“Magnification.”

Soon the image changed to an old-style shuttlecraft, whose name and registry number could be easily read now: Galileo II, NCC-1701/7, USS Enterprise.

2. Heroes

“Khalev, scan for life signs.” ordered Captain Castro.

“One human female…” started to say the Andorian when a new stream of data stopped him cold “Captain! The shuttlecraft life support is failing!”

“Brigitte, lock on her life signs and beam her directly to Sickbay!” ordered Captain Castro to the Tactical Officer.

"Done!" answered in a few seconds.

"Korg, you have the bridge. I'm going to see our guest." Said Captain Castro leaving the captain's chair



A few minutes later, Antonia Castro was besides the new Chief Medical Officer, Sandra Pertini, an attractive blond woman in her early 30s, looking at the woman that they had transported from the shuttlecraft. She was a sandy-haired woman who looked to be in her mid thirties, a bit in the stocky side. She was wearing a mini-skirted variant of the green wrap-around tunic that she had seen Kirk wearing in recordings of his first five-year mission aboard the Enterprise. Although… there seemed to be some slight differences, as the center line of her captain rank braids was silver instead of gold, and the tunic was wrapped to the other side. Her face was somewhat familiar, but she couldn't place her.

"Well, Doctor, how is she?” asked the Captain

“She is well, only unconscious from a momentary oxygen deprivation.” said the doctor and continued “I have sedated her, only in case.”

“Well done, Sandra, and what can you tell me about her?" said approvingly the captain. Alessandra Pertini had come a long way from the nervous wreck that boarded the ship three years ago

"Human, female, 36 years old, good health, although seems to have not been well fed of late, nothing serious. No sign of pregnancies.” said the doctor, reading from the screen. And turning from teh screen to face the captain she added. “And she comes from another reality. "

"How do you know?" asked the Captain, curious.

"After the Mirror Universe infiltrators of last year, I thought that it was a reasonable security measure to install a quantum frequency scanner in sickbay." explained the doctor.

"That's an excellent idea, Sandra. You are doing a very good job as CMO. "

"Not as good as Dr. Tsen, he was the best doctor that I have seen since I left the Academy.” Said Sandra speaking of her late predecessor. “If I had checked Komarov more deeply then, maybe he would be here instead of me.”

"It’s not your fault, Sandra. How could you have known that he wasn’t... him?”

“Still, I...”

“It’s no use to cry over spilt milk, Sandra. We can only do our best to avoid repeat the same errors.” Said the captain trying to comfort the doctor.

They stood in silence for a moment, before Sandra sighed and said:

"Yes, I know."

Seeing the look in the doctor face, she thought of scheduling a her a session with Counselor D'Arla, before trying to deflect her attention back to the matter at hand.

"Sandra, I have seen this face somewhere. Can you compare her DNA with the one of the Starfleet Officers of a century ago?"

"Yes, of course. But, why a Century ago?"

"Alternate universes time tracks sometimes don't run at the same speed. And judging from her uniform she hails from the 2260s."

Doctor Pertini nodded and said:

"How accurate do you want the match?"

"We don't know when the point of divergence of her universe took place…"

"Ok. Ninety percent will suffice, I guess."

She quickly keyed the appropriate commands, while Captain Castro studied the woman with more attention.

She had seen this face before, but where? Instead of focusing in the features that were there, she unfocused her eyes a moment to see the general frame. That jaw, that nose... “She can’t be...” she thought while the solution started to insinuate in her mind. She put the hand on the woman forehead, leaving out the elaborated hairstyle, so she could see the face better, and then, at the same time that the answer appeared on the screen, she knew the identity of the woman. Even if it was impossible.

"Incredible." Said Dr. Pertini looking at the result. Captain Castro glanced to the screen, and saw the confirmation of what she had guessed.

"Not at all, I think that has its twisted logic. The slight genetic difference must be the change of the Y chromosome by an X chromosome." said the captain, still looking to the screen, where the computer had identified the woman, with more than 90% accuracy, as James T. Kirk,
 
Parts 3 and 4

3. A brave, new world
Captain Jamie Theodora Kirk was slowly regaining consciousness. The memories of the last hours came slowly back to her… An oddly stable rupture in the space-time fabric… Debris of what seemed to be recognizable, although pretty advanced Federation technology… Only the most expert pilot could fly a ship inside. Her... She overruled her first officer, and took the Galileo into the rupture… A very rough ride… Suddenly a hull breach… Last thing that she saw before darkness was a ship in the distance…Voices…she was hearing voices… Suddenly she felt a ping in her arm and, just as suddenly, she was awake. Over her she saw two women dressed in what seemed like uniforms. Black jacket with colored shoulders, one red and the other blue, and a purple sweater underneath, with a variant of the familiar Starfleet delta over the left breast.

"Hello, Captain Kirk." said the dark haired woman, who was wearing the red-shouldered jacket. She saw that she was wearing four solid golden pips in the sweater neck.

"How...?" she tried to get up, but the blonde woman, the one with a blue shoulder strip, and two solid golden pips and a hollow silver one in the neck, pushed her gently, but firmly back into the bed.

"Not now, Captain. Our captain wants to ask you a few questions." Said the woman with the gentle, but steely tone that she had come to associate with doctors.

The words made Jamie a bit suspicious. What if this was something like that mirror-like Universe that she had found a while ago?. Although they were a lot less delicate there...

"Captain Kirk, I'm Captain Antonia Castro, and I command this Federation Starship...” sad the brunette woman.

Federation. Well, that sounded all right... if they weren’t putting on a show for her benefit. Besides, her instinct said her that there was something weird in Captain Castro. She decided to play along... for now.

“… as a Starfleet captain, I’m sure that you’ll understand why I’m asking you this.” said the captain “What the hell were you thinking, flying a shuttle that have seen better through a anomaly barely wide enough to let it pass?”

That startled her. Only “Bones” used that tone with her.

“How do you know my name?” she said trying to gain time.

“Well, your counterpart DNA is still in the record.” Said captain Castro, clearly not fooled.

She weighted what alternatives she had and decided that the truth was the best option. Whether she liked it or not, this was the only hope for the small convoy of ships that had managed to survive the Collapse until now.

“We are under very dire circumstances, captain Castro. My universe is dying.”

4. Truths to be told
Some minutes afterwards, after the doctor had given Captain Kirk a glass of water she started to explain:

“Back then, we didn’t know how it happened. We have been able to reconstruct part of the sequence of events, but...” she said and made a gesture of impotence. “We were at war with the Klingons. A war that started in a backwater planet on the Klingon-Federation border.”

“Organia.” guessed Toni. When Jamie looked at her with a surprised expression on her face, she elaborated “Your counterpart was sent there in the first stages of that very short war. Let’s say that the Organians weren’t what they seemed to be.”

“Well, I wasn’t sent there, even if the Enterprise was the nearest ship to Organia. Starfleet Command thought that a female captain wouldn’t impress the Klingon enough.”

“Yes, the old Klingon sexism.” commented Toni “So if the Enterprise was not sent, who had to deal with them?”

“The Constellation.”

Toni nodded, the pieces stating to fall in place.

“Matt Decker. According to your counterpart, a good man to have by your side in a fight, but not exactly a model of subtlety.”

“You did know my counterpart?” she said startled. How old was this captain? Thirty? She had imagined that her counterpart here had retired long ago.

“Yes, I knew him.” Said Captain Castro, smiling, and startling Jamie Kirk a bit more with that little revelation. “Yes, when we realized who were you, I was quite surprised. If things had been a bit different we could have been... more than friends.” Her smile vanished after saying this, and added “I served under him on the second Federation starship Enterprise, NCC-1701-A. Things being what they were, we became good friends..." She sighed and said "Continue with your tale, please.”

'Obviously it still pains her. I'll have to be careful.' She thought and asked then "Where I was?"

"Organia and the Constellation."

“Ah, yes. The Constellation arrived too late. There was already a good-sized Klingon fleet orbiting Organia when the Constellation went out of warp. They barely managed to flee in time.” Said Jamie, and then added, bitterly “Maybe it would have been better if they hadn’t.”

That surprised Captain Castro. She had always heard Jim speak well of Matt Decker. 'Different Universe' she thought 'Although it would not be a bad idea to ask.'

“Why do you say that?” asked the Captain

Jamie sighed and continued speaking.

“As you have said he wasn’t very subtle. A few months in the war, the Constellation followed a Klingon supply ship toward a planet that was emitting some kind of temporal disturbance. That was the last thing anybody heard of the Constellation. And soon after that, all Hells broke loose...”

She closed her eyes, remembering the wave that had hit the Enterprise when they were engaged in combat with a Klingon D-7 cruiser. The D-7 had been twisted into an impossible shape before... evaporating, while the Enterprise had barely managed to stay in one piece. When they managed to restore sensors, they found that while the local stars where more or less where they should be, everything else had changed...

“How much time had passed since then, Captain.?” asked captain Castro.

“Two... no, three... three years.” answered Jamie.

"The Guardian." Said captain Castro cryptically.

“Uh?" said both captain Kirk and doctor Pertini, who have been on sickbay making herself busy while the captains spoke to each other, although she was clearly hearing everything.

“The Guardian of Time or Guardian of Forever was an artifact discovered by James Kirk a few months after the Organian incident, a self-aware time portal. I wouldn’t be surprised if in your Universe, Captain, beacause of the war, the Klingons discovered it first and that was where the supply ship was headed. After all that kind of device could be used as a weapon with devastating consequences" explained Captain Castro.

"It's possible..." said Jamie "But how is possible that the destruction of that... Guardian could destroy the Universe."

"Back when I was a Helm officer under Kirk, somebody tried to destroy the Guardian and Spock theorized that... basically, he said that it would cause the collapsing of the Universe at an exponentially accelerated rate. Spock needed near an hour to explain it and almost everybody was lost after the first five minutes.”

“That sounds like Spock, right.” said Jamie with a sad smile, then added with curiosity and a note of caution “When did that happen?”

“Year 2288... eighty-three years ago.” Seeing the look on Jamie’s face she said, sadly: “I'm much older than I look... but as I discovered recently, only because I'm a cocoon for something with a power beyond imagination”

Jamie looked at her with alarm, remembering a friend that uttered those same last three words nearly five years ago. A friend that she had to kill.

“I’m not Gary Mitchell, Jamie. I don’t have delusions of godhood.” said Toni, remembering that haunted face of Jim when he had to confront his old friend again, so she could guess what was passing through Jamie’s mind, but she couldn't avoid to add, bitterly. "The being inside me will hatch in five years... killing me in the process. And I can't do nothing about that."

They remained quiet for a moment, until Captain Castro remembered something, that at least would made the conversation go back to the guest..

“If I remember well what Spock said, your universe must be now in a rather heavy state of temporal fragmentation.”

“Yes, a mosaic of pieces of different eras, and the same energies that made the universe such a mess destroyed or left uninhabitable almost all planets, so we have gathered the survivors that we have managed to find in a convoy, bur our resources are finite. My science officer thinks that we have a couple years at most until the Universe totally unravels itself” explained Jamie.

“And you intend to cross the Anomaly into our universe.” Said Toni

“Yes, that is our intention.” Answered Jamie and then asked defiantly “Is there any problem?”

“If the situation is as dire as you say, I don’t see any problem. But Starfleet Command can be more difficult to convince.” said Toni. “How many ships? And how many people?”

“Our flotilla is composed of thirty-two ships, excluding shuttles, fighters or cargo drones. Of them, seven are combat capable vessels, although the Enterprise is by large the best armed, and the rest are cargo freighters, passenger ships, surveyors, science vessels, and a hospital ship. Fifteen to twenty thousand people”

‘Battlestar Enterprise’ thought Toni whimsically, and then she asked “How many of them are Federation?”

“The Enterprise and an old J-class training ship. There is also a pre-Federation Earth ship and an Andorian Imperial Guard ship from the time of the first Klingon-Federation war. And finally there is a Klingon D-6 battlecruiser from thirty years ago, a contemporary Romulan Bird of Prey and an ancient Gorn warpship.” Said Jamie. “The other ships are an even more motley collection. There is even a ship from the Gamma Quadrant.”
 
Twisty. Battlestar Enterprise? Lol. So what'n'hells growing inside her and why am I thinking the ship "from the Gamma Quadrant" is trouble?

I like your edited version better-there's a bit more substance to the crew. You keep leaving unknowns lying around(it seems) though, like why are they losing their Andorian officer? Did I miss something? If I didn't that is something to watch out for-unexplained threads that confuse the reader. Which isn't to say that a little mystery isn't interesting....
 
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Twisty. Battlestar Enterprise? Lol. So what'n'hells growing inside her and why am I thinking the ship "from the Gamma Quadrant" is trouble?

I like your edited version better-there's a bit more substance to the crew. You keep leaving unknowns lying around(it seems) though, like why are they losing their Andorian officer? Did I miss something? If I didn't that is something to watch out for-unexplained threads that confuse the reader. Which isn't to say that a little mystery isn't interesting....
Losing the Andorian is probably because he's going home to reproduce in the shelthreth I'm presuming, and this thing inside is so Alien Resurrection, or am I totally off-base?

Mystery is a good thing, as long as there isn't too much of it. I have a constant headache keeping the characters and plots straight in my Dauntless fic.

Keep going A_C_C, I'm interested to know what happens.
 
While I'm still trying to wrap my mind around the She-Kirk, I am enjoying the story. An interesting plot you have here, with a lot of unknowns, but that's good too.
 
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