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TMP Line-by-Line

^ Looked it up, the exact line is: Kolinahr:Through which all emotion is renounced and shed.

Female Master : (In Vulcan) You have labored for many seasons Spock... and have proved yourself worthy... to recieve from us this symbol of pure logic.
 
I used an online script for the exact wording. I guess it was an early draft, lol. Does anyone have a link to one more in line with the finished product? (And are we doing the theatrical or extended version?)
 
I used an online script for the exact wording. I guess it was an early draft, lol. Does anyone have a link to one more in line with the finished product? (And are we doing the theatrical or extended version?)

There have been a half dozen errors in this already, if you want to get picky.
Here's the DE dialog up to this point:

  • Stuff cut out from the original release in [brackets]
  • Subtitles altered for the DE is in {curly brackets}
KLINGON: Tactical...
KLINGON: Visual...
KLINGON: Tactical, stand by on torpedoes.
KLINGON: Ready....
KLINGON: Fire!
KLINGON: Evasive!

E9 VOICE 1: This is com station Epsilon Nine calling USS Columbia. Come in, Columbia. Respond, please.
COLUMBIA VOICE: This is scout Columbia. Epsilon Nine. Could you boost your transmission?<can't make out>
E9 VOICE 1: This is Epsilon Nine, Columbia. Am boosting output. How read you this?
COLUMBIA VOICE: Fine, fine. Thank you, Epsilon Nine. Receiving your transmission.
E9 VOICE 1: Scout Columbia. NCC-621 to rendezvous with scout Revere, NCC-595 on stardate 7411.4. Further orders will be relayed at that time. Signed Commodore Probert, Starfleet. End of Transmission.
COLUMBIA VOICE: Received and understood, Epsilon 9. Thank you. U.S.S. Columbia <can't make out>

[KLINGON CAPTAIN (translated): Intruder unidentified. Believe luminescent cloud to be enormous powerfield surrounding alien vessel. Our sensor scans unable to penetrate. Imperial Klingon Cruiser Amar, continuing to attack.]
E9 TECH 1: Our sensor drone is intercepting this on Quad L-14.
BRANCH: That's within Klingon boundaries. Who are they fighting?
E9 TECH 1: Unknown Sir.
E9 TECH 2: I have an exterior visual.
KLINGON: <Untranslated> Ishhhh!
KLINGON: Fire!
E9 TECH 1: We've plotted a course on that cloud, Commander. It will pass into Federation space fairly close to us.
BRANCH: Heading?
E9 TECH 1: Sir, it's on a precise heading for Earth.

{MASTER 1: Our ancestors cast our their animal passions on these very sands, saving our race through the attainment of Kolinahr.}
{MASTER 2: Kolinahr: through which all emotion is renounced and shed.}​
 
Vulcan Master: (in Vulcan) Your thoughts... give them to me... This consiousness calling to you from space... it touches your human half Spock... You have not achieved Kolinahr.
 
(Drops the "total logic" to the ground.)
VULCAN MASTER: He must search elsewhere for his answers. He shall not find them here. Live long and prosper, Spock.
 
Kirk: Commander Sonak, you recieved your appointment as Enterprise Science Officer?
 
SONAK: Captain Decker requested I complete final science briefing HERE before we began our mission...
 
KIRK: Twelve. I'm on my way to a meeting with Admiral Nogura which will not last more than three minutes.
 
KIRK: It is my intention...to be on that ship...following that meeting. Report to me in one hour!
 
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