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Tips for writing Alternate Timeline stories

What's the worst AU Fic cliche?

  • Re-writing entire episodes with just a slightly different cast of characters

    Votes: 5 83.3%
  • Forcing unlikely characters/events from the canon timeline into this one

    Votes: 1 16.7%
  • The captain has a teenaged kid tagging along!

    Votes: 2 33.3%
  • Other (describe below)

    Votes: 1 16.7%

  • Total voters
    6

WarpTenLizard

Fleet Captain
Fleet Captain
I'm reworking a couple of "Alternate Timeline" stories, and pondering the many mistakes I made the first time around.

Some of my biggest mistakes:
  • Undermining characters' canon accomplishments, by having them happen on their own anyway. For instance, having Annika Henson randomly get freed from the Borg and rescued by some accident. Having Seven be rescued by other means is one thing, but making it too easy completely undermines what Seven, Janeway and other characters went through on her journey back to humanity.
  • Rewriting episodes with a slightly different cast. I'll never know why I thought this was a good idea. So much energy exhausted researching, planning and writing a story we already know playing out slightly differently, with the same end result. If a canon episode's plot remains mostly unaltered in this timeline, skim over it. Focus your AU on the adventures that are different from the main tineline. Look at the AU cast and situations, and think of what independent stories could happen to them.
  • Making it a "shipping fic" or a "fixer fic." This is what led to the previous two mistakes. Instead of asking, "how can I get Seven onto Voyager and married to whoever I ship her with," I should have asked "whete might Seven be in this timeline?" and focused on the more interesting possibilities.
If anyone has any tips to add, I'd be immensely grateful. But please keep it specific to "AU fics," don't just post generic writing advice.
 
* Focusing on "make 'em suffer": Sure, you can have a story where something bad happens to a character or the universe as a result of alternate happenings, and explore how they deal with it, but don't have the main point of writing your story be to inflict as much pain as possible on your characters.

* "It's a Wonderful Life" style stories: See above. Making your missing character who was never born or died early the crux on which the fate of the entire galaxy and everyone's happiness rests.
 
I have an alternate universe episode planned for my own series. I like the 'what if' nature of alternate realities. What really brings them into my heart is when they play with the events we already know, like making a historical reference to Admiral Kirk or Ambassador Spock. Only, those have been done so regularly as to almost be expected.

The Wrath of Khan, may be a great example. When Chekov read the name of the planet and realized what that meant, the whole audience of avid Trek fans were transported back to the original episode. Even though the movie wasn't about time travel, it kind of was. Khan, in stasis for a hundred years, the Enterprise returns to meet a past that catches up with it; these are the same elements of alternate reality stories.

I would say the one thing that could have improved episode Mirror Mirror, for example, would have been deeper references to an event or events in the main story line, either one that viewers already were familiar with, or one that would soon pop up in the next few episodes. Maybe some plan to assassinate a young officer who witnessed the alternate captain's ruthlessness and was trying to extort the captain for advancement in rank and other favors, could have resulted in the parallel officer in the original universe, having an accident and dying on an away mission. Same event, different cause. Parallel movement of the universes are maintained.

With my own series, I wish to explore an alternate reality where Khan hadn't been forced to flee Earth, and instead, the Singh Dynasty has lasted for a two hundred years. Khan, himself is long gone, but the brutal and empirical dynasty rules, until my crew find themselves in the middle of a war between Earth, ruled by Khan's great great great great... grandson, and Vulcan, Romulus, and Andor, as allies against Earth and Klingon. The UFP springs up as the United Beta Allies (of something like that), against Earth on one front and Klingon on another.

Great material to explore. What about Kirk's Enterprise? What about Spock? What would their roles be in such a universe? Certainly not old friends from their academy years. Two great captain's that meet across battle lines?

I have another time travel episode planned where one of the crew becomes the ancient ancestor of another of the crew. Who is to say that changed a thing, or that had been the case all along. Destiny is either immutable and time travel or parallel realities can be crossed such that their actions were pre-destined, or we play with the mess of unforeseeable mucking-things-up by being where and when we were never meant to go.

in both cases, answers are the results.

what if we didn't know time travel technology until one of our descendents comes back and gives it to us, or we invent time travel and go back into the past to change it such that we didn't invent time travel? Maybe, once the future invention of time travel has been thwarted, our time travelers become stuck in the past with no technology to return to their timerline. Thus, they are forced to develop time travel even sooner than it had been invented before. :ack::crazy::eek::shrug::devil:

Endless possibilities.

-Will
 
I like the concept of "what if", too. Some Trek AU concepts I've played with...
* What if Tuvix was spared?
* What if Seska wound up having to stay on Voyager?
* What if Voyager went generational?
* What if the Year of Hell actually happened?
* What if that blasted comm hadn't gone off right after Harry said he didn't notice a box on his chair?

Also, the occasional HISHE script, taking a canon episode and giving it a better ending.

Played around with "what if" in other fandoms, too. Such as... what if the Dragonborn had heard about that chanting in Windhelm, and just not gotten involved?
 
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