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The USS Neverland Chronicles: The After-Effect

KobayashiMaru13

Captain
Captain
THE NEVERLAND CHRONICLES:
THE AFTER-EFFECT
Some would say that meeting a twin brother you never knew you had would be a rather traumatizing thing. If such was the case, then those some have never met a Vulcan. Granted, the idea of it often kept Suroth awake at night, the impossibility of it tickling his brain. It wasn’t really a problem that he could solve, but he couldn’t help treating it as such.

Vulcans were notorious for not being able to lie. Suroth’s father, Shaverak had blown that stereotype to bits. For twenty-nine years, Shaverak had lied to them. Lied to him. And the thought troubled him to no end.

He pushed the disconcerting thought aside, and sat up. “Lights on,” he said, though he didn’t really need them.

His room was rather bare, as he was not one for interior-decorating. Of the four walls, only one held a painting-a new addition that Suroth himself had made one night such as tonight when he had been unable to still himself long enough to sleep. He had a bookcase with many books from around the galaxy: Vulcan history books (though, reading about Vulcan’s bloody past was not one of Suroth’s favorite pastimes), old popular Earth novels such as Tom Sawyer and some series called “Harry Potter”, as well as odds and ends he had collected from the homeworlds of his assortment of crewmates.

Needing something to do in order to ease his mind, he sat down at his desk. “Access schematics, building plans, diagrams, and models of the USS Neverland,” he said softly to the computer, as if his voice could somehow awaken the others who were no doubt sleeping soundly in the neighboring quarters. Perhaps, coming up with progressions to be made upon the ship he served would take his mind away from the events of the past days. Surely, Chief Engineer Cha’k’ree (a manic young man that was somehow a mix of human and the short, bipedal-meerkat-looking Oriki) would be glad of more “improvements” he could make upon the Neverland and its various mechanisms.

The Neverland was a rather small, old-style Miranda-class cruiser. Thus, only one hundred fifty crewmen were sufficient. And, the engines could us some refining…

And then, much to the Vulcan’s embarrassment, he remembered nothing as the glow of the computer screen lulled him into the sleep that had eluded him for a week.


* * *


Suroth was able to avoid the humiliation of being tardy for his shift, however, as he awoke five hours later, a good hour before his shift at 0500.

“Punctual as always, eh, Suroth?”

He was greeted by Captain Nairvet, who was four minutes and thirty nine seconds late. And Suroth was going to remind him of the fact.

Suroth looked up from his work as the Captain exited the turbolift. “You, Captain,” Suroth said with a raised eyebrow, “are exactly four minutes and thirty nine seconds late.”

Nairvet laughed. “I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but four minutes late doesn’t merit probation, and I know how you’re just itching to take my spot in the Captain’s chair.”

Suroth furrowed his brow, looking puzzled. “ ‘Itching’, Captain?”

“Yeah,” Nairvet grinned as he took his seat, “ ‘itching’.”

“Ahh, I will pretend I understand, Captain,” said Suroth as he turned back to his console. Laughs rippled across the bridge. After serving together for two years now, the bridge officers knew full well when the Captain and First Officer where exchanging banter jokingly, or when it was a serious argument (though often it was hard to tell the difference when it came to Suroth). And luckily for them, Suroth took the jibes and teasing good-naturedly.

“I suppose I’ll humor you, Mister Suroth.” Nairvet smiled slyly. “Status report?”

Suroth looked faintly amused. “All systems functioning properly, though I can not say the same for our Communications Officer.”

All eyes turned to the Andorian at the Communications console. Gra’chek was slumped over, clutching his head and moaning something about “never going drinking with Cha’k’ree ever again”. Noticing everyone watching him, he sat up abruptly, and looked like a case of vertigo had suddenly come over him from moving too quickly.

“Why is the room spinning, Captain…?”

Nairvet smiled amiably. “I think you should get some rest, Commander.”

“Uh, yeah. Th-thank you, Cap’n,” Gra’chek mumbled as he tripped his way over to the turbolift.

Muffled snickers could be heard as the turbolift’s doors hissed shut, though as soon as the captain looked around to find the perpetrators, everyone was suddenly hard at work. An ensign took Gra’chek’s place shortly.

“Patrols aren’t very exciting missions, are they Mister Suroth?”

Suroth cast Nairvet a contemptuous look over his shoulder. “I would not know, Captain. To know it is ‘exciting’ I would have to be subject to emotions, of which I am not. However, they are a vital operation, as you should well know.”

Nairvet raised his eyebrows. “Perhaps I should’ve asked someone else,” he said ruefully.

“But, knowing humans, it is not,” Suroth offered.

Nairvet seemed to accept this. “The Romulan Neutral Zone tends to be rather uneventful.”

Suroth fully turned around. “That would be considered a good thing, would it not?”

Nairvet pretended to muse that over. “Yes,” he said, propping his elbow on the arm of his chair, “I suppose it would.”

The turbolift doors hissed open again, and a shorter, leaner version of Suroth strode in. The seeming-doppelganger, Sora, looked rather restless, though only another Vulcan would have noticed.

“Brother,” Sora said in a commanding tone, “You told me I would be dropped off at Starfleet Headquarters as soon as possible. It has been a week.”

Nairvet turned around and gave Sora an “oh, really?” look. Suroth rose from his seat. “I did not lie, my brother. You will be dropped off at Starfleet Headquarters as soon as possible. However, now is not ‘as soon as possible’. We have an agenda to keep. We will be returning to the Sol System upon the completion of our patrol of the Romulan Neutral Zone. Until that time,” Suroth paused and raised an eyebrow wryly, “please contain yourself.”

“You tell’em, Mister!”

The two Vulcans looked at the captain as if he had lost his mind.

Feeling rather silly and trivial under the gaze of the emotionless duo, Nairvet turned back around. “Mister Suroth, if you would scan the area?”

“Ah, of course, Captain.”

Sora shook his head at his brother and returned to the turbolift.

“Scans indicate no abnormalities- ah, disregard. Two Romulan warbirds are on the other side of the Neutral Zone, running parallel to our course.”

“Any indication of hostilities?”

“Their weapons are-” The report was interrupted by the ensign at the Communications console.

“Incoming subspace transmission from one of the vessels, sir.”

Nairvet looked rather uneasy. “What does it say, Ensign?”

“It… It says prepare to be boarded.”

The captain was out of his chair at once. “What??

Suroth was suddenly at his side, making him jump in surprise, as he had not seen his approach. “Captain, one of the warbirds has activated their cloaking device.”

“Get our shields on-line!”

It was too late, however, as the warbird was de-cloaking directly in front of them and several forms were materializing in an emerald glow on the bridge. Eleven Romulans armed with disruptor rifles and looking callous and grim hustled across the bridge, keeping every bridge officer at bay.

Only Suroth looked untroubled by this sudden interruption, which made Nairvet want to strangle him until he showed some actual emotion.

“Is there a problem, Commander?” Suroth was obviously addressing the twelfth Romulan who stood in the center of the bridge, observing each individual’s reaction to the intrusion. He was tall (six foot one point four inches by Suroth’s measurements), with broad shoulders and an “I’m in charge and I like it that way” expression.

The Romulan Commander blinked in surprise and glared at the impudent Vulcan, his face turning green in anger. “Oh, no problem,” he said in a suave voice, composing himself and sauntering over to Suroth, “I’m just here to pick up a… friend of a friend.”

Suroth didn’t even falter. “And who would that friend be, may I ask?”

The Commander smirked. “Always the chivalrous ones, Vulcans are. Well, I suppose I’ll tell you, as it won’t make a difference either way.” He turned his back on Suroth and slunk over to the captain’s chair-pushing Nairvet out of the way as he did so- and settled himself in. He tilted his head back in Suroth’s direction. “We intercepted a very interesting transmission about… oh, a week ago. It seems a friend of ours, a certain Shaverak, has been playing a little game of hide-and-seek with us.” The Romulan leered at Suroth, “And what better way to bring the man out of hiding than to offer in trade to him, his two precious sons, no?”

Suroth’s stood without comment, his face remaining expressionless.

This seemed to annoy the Romulan Commander, but he continued regardless. “If he doesn’t come out, we kill the two of you, and such pain lasts longer than death: and we win. If he does come, we get him: and we win. Either way, it’s our victory.”

“You’re quite the vidshow-villain, aren’t you?”

The Commander looked rather bewildered by the captain’s brass. “Excuse me, human?”

Nairvet allowed himself a brash smile he knew would infuriate the Romulan lounging in his chair. “You heard me. On every vidshow the villain always spells out their evil plot to the hopelessly captured, good guys.” He widened his grin. “And then the good guys escape and win. It seems to me like you should be dressed in something classy and twirling an evil mustache.”

The Romulan sneered at him. “This is no fairy-tale, Captain, I assure you, and I am no ‘vidshow villain’. There is no way for me to lose. Now, if you would kindly call the other brother up to the bridge, I can be on my way with my Vulcan friends.”

“Captain, if I may?”

Nairvet looked faintly surprised and smiled knowingly. “Now would be best, Mister Suroth.”

Faster than any human could have moved, Suroth delivered a rather enthusiastic nerve pinch on the Romulan that stood in front of him. The others, being surprised by Suroth’s lightning reflexes, hesitated for a second too long, and were jumped upon by any bridge officer who had the brains to act. That was, unfortunately, only enough to subdue seven of those twelve Romulans, the five of the remaining with disruptors ready to blast the head off of the next person to move a muscle.

“My, my, what a vicious lot you are!” The Romulan Commander smiled maliciously, “But yet, I still have the upper-hand. After all, the next person to so much as twitch just might find themselves vaporized.”

“Thoughts, Captain?” Suroth glanced at the Captain who had an unconscious Romulan under his knee.

“Aye, Mister Suroth. Damn I could use Gra’chek up here right now.”

Suroth looked faintly amused. “I was looking for an order, Captain.”

Nairvet blinked. “Oh. In that case: I believe we have a friend to call.”


* * *


When Sora arrived, he looked clearly taken aback by the state of the bridge.

“I believe I have missed something,” he said, looking from his brother with his stolen disruptor rifle, to the captain with the pinned Romulan, then finally resting his gaze on the Romulan Commander wearing a gleeful expression who had swiveled around to greet him. The welcoming committee of two Romulans hustled Sora over to Suroth’s side.

“Now that we finally have you two lovely boys together,” the Romulan Commander stood with an air of importance, “I believe we shall take our leave.”

Two Romulans roughly grabbed the brothers by the arm.

“Before you go,” Nairvet said with the anger of someone out for revenge against his friend’s kidnapper (which he certainly was), “what’s your name?”

The Romulan smiled dangerously. “My name, human, is Tarvess, not that it will do you any good.”

And then the Romulans and their Vulcan captives dissolved in a green flare.
 
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As soon as they were clear, Nairvet was barking orders.

“I want our shields on-line! Someone get a lock on Suroth and Sora’s signatures! Get the weapons ready: I want to disable their engines!”

The officers were shouting responses at once.

“Shields on-line!”

“Phasers ready! Attempting to get a lock…!”

“Sir, I can’t get a lock on Suroth and Sora: their signatures are too similar to the Romulans, I can’t tell ‘em apart!”

Nairvet spun on his heels to face his engineer. “You can’t get a lock,” he repeated. The engineer nodded, a little fearfully. “I-I’m sorry, sir. We’ll have to knock out their engines and board the vessel- do a manual rescue.”

“Romulans retreating into the Neutral Zone!”

“No!! Godammit!!” Nairvet threw himself into his chair and slammed his fist on his console. “To follow would mean an act of war,” he muttered angrily, viciously glaring at the floor.

He took a moment to gather up his emotions and suppress his anger before he looked up. “Stand down,” he said, the look on his face clearly showing the pain those words caused.

The bridge officers looked at each other uncertainly, exchanging anxious looks. They took all attack systems offline, almost reluctantly, then looked at the captain expectantly.

Feeling their gazes upon him, he looked each individual in the eye before saying: “Plot a course for Vulcan.”


* * *


Shaverak did not look altogether pleased to see Nairvet again so soon-especially after the news he had had to deliver the first time. He then, however, took upon a rather appalled look-or as close as a Vulcan would get- when Nairvet explained the situation.

“I knew this would happen if my sons were reunited,” Shaverak said, almost bitterly. “That was supposed to be a secure channel, Captain. You assured me.”

Nairvet sighed. “I thought it was, I even encoded and scrambled it myself!” He closed his eyes and took a deep breath- a calming technique Suroth had taught him. “If I had to guess-”

“Guessing is illogical, Captain. There is only saying”

“-if I had to guess, I’d say they might have been monitoring all communications in ShiKahr. A very tedious task, but with the right amount of patience-”

“Something Romulans do not have, Captain.”

“-and a skilled enough hacker, they could very well have overheard the transmission.”

Shaverak raised an eyebrow. “They would have had to have been very persistent. That’s exactly twenty-nine point five one years they would have been monitoring those communications and sifting through thousands upon thousands of transmissions.”

“Tarvess seemed like a man who would bear a grudge.”

Shaverak froze mid-stride, as he had begun pacing unhappily, and turned to face Nairvet. “So it is Tarvess then? Yes, he would ‘bear a grudge’.”

Nairvet nodded. “So-and I don’t mean to pry, but I think I have the right to know- why are these Romulans so angry? Why are they so insistent upon avenging upon you?”

Shaverak looked away. “I am sorry Captain, but I can not tell you. All I can say is… they are a group of radicals, not a group expressing the actual opinions and views of the Romulan Empire.”

“So they aren’t Romulan officers?”

“No, Captain. Any action, any crime they commit, is theirs alone. It is not to reflect upon the Empire as an act of war, you understand this?”

“Of course.”

“And you will press upon this fact to the Federation leaders, should they catch word of it?”

“Yes.”

Shaverak bowed his head. “I thank you, then.” He lifted his hand, fingers parted in the Vulcan farewell. “Long life and prosperity. I… I believe I have a trade to make.”

“But sir-!” Nairvet’s cry fell on an empty screen: Shaverak had ended the transmission. He groaned in frustration. “Maintain standard orbit, and monitor all ships that leave Vulcan’s atmosphere: if Shaverak leaves, I get the feeling he’s going to need an escort.”

“Aye, sir.”


* * *


The captain had been right enough. Shaverak did pilot a shuttle off of Vulcan, destination undeniably the Romulan Neutral Zone. And, no sooner had that one-man shuttle crossed the border, did the two warbirds uncloak, with (according to scans) all weapons armed.

“Get our shields up,” Nairvet said, staring at the two deadly looking ships from which they sat only far enough away from to avoid the Romulan’s short-range scanners, and be out of transporter range, “I don’t want any accidents.”

After a pause: “Shields up, sir.”

“What’s the status on the shuttle?”

“All system’s normal, sir. One Vulcanoid life form on board.”

Nairvet nodded absently, inwardly willing his friend to suddenly and miraculously transport aboard the bridge. But, as Suroth would certainly say: “Hope is illogical.” He was human, though, and as it was every human’s nature, he hoped against hope his plan was going to work.

He had managed to contact Shaverak before he had gotten within a light-year of the Neutral Zone to brief him on his newly-developed plan. In fact, Nairvet’s plan was relatively simple. In order for Shaverak to pilot the shuttle into the warbird’s hangar, the warbird would have to lower it’s shields, leaving it open to a transport.

It would be a Slingshot Transport: one of the Neverland’s shuttle’s had been launched, maintaining orbit around a rather large asteroid several kilometers away; just far enough away from the warbird so no Romulans could beam aboard, but close enough so Shaverak could. Nairvet and an away-team were to beam aboard the shuttle, but-if all went well-they would never make it. Shaverak will catch them mid-transport and beam them aboard the Romulan ship- the bridge, to be exact- then beam himself aboard the Neverland’s shuttle so he could be transported aboard the Federation Starship. It was, effectively, a slingshot.

Unfortunately, so many things could go wrong if Shaverak’s timing was off, by even a millisecond. And failure, would mean the loss of their friend and his brother, the captain, and the away-team.

But it was a risk that had to be taken.

“Prepare the transporter room, gather the away-team, and alert Shaverak,” Nairvet ordered, standing. “It’s time.”

“The away-team is ready, sir.”

He nodded, “Good, who’s coming along?”

The senior crew members who were not already on the bridge entered from the turbolift, the others standing up. “We are.”

“But-,” Nairvet protested, but Gra’chek cut him off.

“Captain, with all due respect, we’ve known that pointy-eared goblin just as long as you have, and we wanna save his Vulcan ass just as much as you do, so you’d better suck it up and take us along for the ride!... With all due respect…”

Nairvet took the undermining of his authority with a thankful grin. “There’s no one I’d rather fight and-worst case scenario-die alongside.”

Each of the senior officers returned his grin in his or her own way: Gra’chek looked like his regular, happy-go-lucky self; Chief Doctor Johanna Builfry gave a small, caring smile; short Cha’k’ree fluffed out his fur in agreement and gave a little chitter; the dark and dashing Head of Security Jethro Tannings nodded encouragement; violet-eyed young Tactical officer Vertica Jetta was no doubt “smiling on the inside”, just as her eyes were; and half-human, half-Romulan Navigation Officer Takovel Chek gave a childish, lopsided grin.

But, Nairvet still had his doubts. “There’s still only seven of us,” he said.

Takovel shook his dark brown bangs out of his eyes and said, “You’re famous for shooting with two phasers, Cap’n. Surely we could do it, too, neh?”

Nairvet chuckled softly. “I guess so… Get your second phaser, then, and meet me in the transporter room.”

“Aye, Captain,” they said in unison.


* * *


They were ready, and Nairvet could feel his heart fluttering around his chest like a wounded bird.

Each officer had their two phasers out and ready-set to stun, of course (unless needed otherwise). It was time to see if his “brilliant” plan would work.

“Energize.”

The transporter room dissolved in front of him, to be momentarily replaced by the interior of the shuttle. For a split second, they sat in limbo: the shuttle and the bridge of the Romulan warbird swimming in front of them. But, Shaverak had not failed them, as the shuttle faded away, and they materialized completely in the eerie green glow of the Romulan bridge.

The advantage of surprise would last only a second, though, so they acted fast. Every officer had two Romulans at bay with their phasers before any could react. Tarvess, however, seemed unperturbed by this sudden change of events. “Well, well. It would appear I have some guests.”

Nairvet, who had both of his phasers pointed at Tarvess, growled, “Where are they?”

“Right to the point, then? Well, I’m not going to tell you, and for two reasons. One: you-with your Federation morals and do-good principles- wouldn’t have the heart-or spine, really- to kill me. Two: the second you left this bridge, you’d have a hundred men upon you. You won’t kill me, and going to get your little friends would be suicide.” Tarvess smiled victoriously. “So my only question for you, Captain, is this: what are you going to do about it?”

Tarvess was too crafty for his own good: he was right. It was against everything Nairvet stood for as a Starfleet Officer to kill this man, no matter how twisted he might be. And, no doubt the rest of the Romulan crew would be upon him as soon as he entered the corridor.

His plan of entry had been brilliant. Too bad he didn’t have such a plan of escape. He hadn’t thought that far ahead-he’d only had minutes to come up with the first plan!

“I believe it is, as you humans would say, check and mate.” The Romulan’s smile made Nairvet’s blood boil. He needed something fast. What he really needed was a Vulcan.

But didn’t he have the next best thing?

“Takovel?”

Takovel glanced at Nairvet in acknowledgement. “Yes, Captain,” he asked, it becoming apparent to Nairvet how heavy a Romulan accent Takovel really had. He must have gotten used to it in the past two years.

“How fluent are you in Romulan?”

The ensign grinned. “Very, sir. Romulus is my second home, after all. Why?”

Nairvet could feel the gears in his head at work. “Get on speaker. Tell someone-anyone-to bring the ‘Vulcan prisoners’ to the bridge. Can you do that, Ensign?”

“Sure, Cap’n.” Takovel traded places with the captain and hit the intercom on the Commander’s console. Tarvess reached to turn it off, but Takovel was just as fast as he and caught the commander’s arm and pushed him out of the chair-Tarvess hissing in outrage- before saying in Romulan, “To any personnel in the holding area: the Vulcan prisoners are to be brought to the bridge at once.”

Takovel glanced again at the captain, keeping his phasers steady on Tarvess, in case he tried anything. Unlike Nairvet, Takovel just might shoot if he needed to: perhaps even shoot to kill.

Takovel seemed to have been thinking something quite near the same as Nairvet, as he asked, “Sir, why don’t we just stun them?”

Nairvet shook his head. “We need them awake and well, Ensign. An unconscious hostage doesn’t have the same impact as a conscious one.” Takovel shrugged.

“If you say so, Captain.”

Just then, the doors hissed open, and a pair of Romulans-centurions by the look of them-walked in, herding Suroth and Sora along with them. To be safe, anyone who had one phaser more than needed to keep an eye on someone, pointed their other at the two centurions. “Sir,” the centurions asked uncertainly.

“Shoot them, you fools,” Tarvess snarled. The centurions fired their disruptors, taking the only other ensign that had come along-a Trill who had been much too young to die- before they themselves were stunned.

The appearance of the senior crew of the Neverland didn’t seem to surprise the Vulcan twins in the least, however.

“I see you are ‘armed to the teeth’, as the humans say,” Suroth noted.

Nairvet allowed himself a small smile. “We needed convenience, not numbers.”

Sora raised an eyebrow at the two of them, but didn’t comment. Tarvess however, did.

“This is all very nice and well, but I will not be taken prisoner by a bunch of red-blooded Terrans!” At this, he gave the two Vulcans a pointed look. Much to the surprise of Nairvet, Sora put his hands on his hips and with a malicious smile that every one of the Neverland’s officers knew was fake in the extreme, said, “Who said anything about taking you prisoner?”

Tarvess shrank a little at that.

“K-k-k-k-Captain! Should I contact the Neverland,” Cha’k’ree chattered in his extremely shrill voice.

“Yes.” Nairvet watched Cha’k’ree out of the corner of his eye, not wanting to give Tarvess an opportunity to jump him. “But tell them… Tell them to stand by to receive us.” Cha’k’ree nodded and relayed the message into his communicator.

Suroth looked at Nairvet, seeming a tad alarmed. “Captain, as soon as we beam off this ship they will attack us. I would assign a 93.7392 probability to it.”

Nairvet shot him an “I know that” look. “Takovel.” The ensign grinned when the Captain said his name. “I need you to send a subspace transmission to that other Romulan ship. Tell them to stand down: take weapons and shields off-line. And,” Nairvet gave Tarvess his own victorious smile, “order them that-should a Federation ship approach-not to attack. That should buy us enough time.” Takovel passed his phasers to Suroth- who took his place without complaint- and went to the communications terminal.

“My men would never be so thick as to stand down, and not attack a Federation starship because a subspace transmission said so-anyone on the ship could have sent it,” Tarvess spluttered.

“Their shields and weapons are off-line, sir.”

Nairvet gave Tarvess a belittling look. “And isn’t that the beauty of it, Tarvess?” He tilted his head towards Takovel. “Please do the same to this lovely warbird as well please, Mister Chek.”

Takovel nodded and moved to another terminal.

“I’m impressed by your half-blood’s knowledge of our vessels, Captain.”

Takovel stiffened angrily, and appeared to be very close to whirling around and throttling Tarvess. “Cool it, Ensign,” Nairvet ordered sternly. After a moments hesitation, Takovel calmed himself.

“I’ll order the Neverland within transporter range, sir,” Jethro Tannings offered, his voice as emotionless as a Vulcan’s.

“Very good, Mister Tannings.”

Tarvess had turned a sickly green, and the other Romulans were only a shade behind.

Nairvet turned to Takovel. “Oh, and Mister Chek,” he said, “you may stun him now.” Takovel looked all too happy to oblige.

When all Romulans were unconscious and accounted for and the Neverland within range, Nairvet touched the communicator in his Starfleet insignia, and opened his mouth to speak, but was beaten by Gra’chek who said, “Nine to transport.”

Vertica Jetta and Johanna Builfry exchanged amused smiles, and the Vulcan twins raised a collective eyebrow. Nairvet chuckled. “Energize,” he said, and the Romulan ship shimmered and dissolve before him, only to be replaced by the transporter room aboard the Neverland. He was off at once though, pressing his communicator, and ordering, “Get us out of here. Set coordinates for Earth: warp factor 4.”

Nairvet’s trick had worked however, as not one disruptor or plasma torpedo touched the ship as it made the jump to hyperspace.

Suroth and Sora quick on the captain’s heels, they led the way to the turbolift, one irritated Gra’chek, one Vertica and one Jethro left to watch the uncomfortable rest take the lift up to the bridge.

Shaverak had been prepared quarters and would be taken back to Vulcan after their stop on Earth. No one said anything at first, as they took their stations, Suroth and Sora standing at Nairvet’s sides like twin guards.

Suroth suddenly got a funny look on his face and turned to Sora. “If I recall correctly, my brother,” he said, “earlier, you were under the impression that we would never make it to the Sol System.”

Sora bore a faint smirk. “Yes, well, I suppose it was impatience bred by too much time spent along with humans. And anyways, I was quite nearly right, brother.”

Nairvet tilted his head back to look at the Vulcan. “I believe, Sora, that almost only counts in horseshoes.”

At the Communications terminal, Gra’chek snorted.
 
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An amusing story. A couple of points-you glossed over the dead ensign and left the body behind. Lots of shuttles have transporters. You emphasize the Engineer's odd speech in the end of the story-but not when they are confronting the Roms originally. Oh, and a Galaxy-class ship is big. 1000 crew. If the ship is small enough to only need 150 then it is another class. There is a writer's reference thread stickied at the top of the forum-lots of handy sites for background info. I am sorry for nit-picking but these points leapt out at me.

That said-I like your Captain a lot-he's irreverant and cocky. I like your Vulcan, too. Some of the others are intriguing and I'd love to see you explore them more. Looking forward to your next foray.:techman:
 
Noted and changed.:bolian:

First, Cha'k'ree did not speak in the first encounter. (or, if you were perhaps reffering to Takovel, he too, did not speak)

Second,when set to kill, Romulan disruptors disintagrate anyone unlucky enough to be shot by one, so there was no Trill body.
 
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Noted and changed.:bolian:

First, Cha'k'ree did not speak in the first encounter. (or, if you were perhaps reffering to Takovel, he too, did not speak)

Second,when set to kill, Romulan disruptors disintagrate anyone unlucky enough to be shot by one, so there was no Trill body.

OK, no body-got it. I'd swear Cha'k'ree said something earlier....:shifty:
 
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