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The Star Eagle Adventures: Star Crossed

CeJay

Rear Admiral
Rear Admiral
STAR CROSSED

A prequel to the upcoming The Star Eagle Adventures IV


Many thanks to TheLoneRedshirt for allowing me to use the Bluefin and its characters.


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Stardate: 50435 (2373 AD)

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Tazla Star didn’t particular like Captain Melvin Schwarzkopf.

He was assertive, arrogant and ambitious. In short he was very much like herself and it was maybe that fact alone that made her dislike him almost immediately. He had a short, staunch build, dark hair that for some sort of failed fashioned sense he insisted on wearing halfway down his neck and was just about a few years older than she was.

He was a career officer just like her.

Except for Schwarzkopf was one of those hero captains, apparently well liked by the enormous crew of his Galaxy-class monstrosity of a starship and decorated on multiple occasions for his heroic actions to save the universe and God knows what else.

She had no such accolades to call her own. She had to fight with arms and legs for her command, he had been handed the USS Heracles on a silver platter. She really didn’t like the man.

To make things worse her own crew seemed to be more impressed by Schwarzkopf than they were by their own captain, judging by the way they were looking at him with wide open eyes.

She couldn’t quite blame them.

It had only been a few months since she had come aboard the Sacajawea and she still didn’t feel she had earned the respect of her crew who virtually knew nothing about her commanding officer for very good reasons.

Evan Mahoney, her first officer, was one handsome bastard she hated to admit. The problem was that he knew it too and was not shy to use it to his full advantage. She had fallen for it from day one and she was still regretting the mistakes that had been made.

Then there was Doctor Alan Newheiser. She wasn’t afraid to admit (to herself) that the guy gave her the creeps. Which was strange considering the company she had used to keep. The ship’s doctor would have fitted right into that crowd would it not be for the fact that he wasn’t quite that transparent. He had a gleam in his eyes that wanted her to turn away every time he glanced in her direction.

Ironically the person she felt the most confidence in was her security chief N’ek’too. He was an Ariolo and if there was one thing she knew about their people it was that they didn’t believe in close relationships of any kind. The man reminded her of the mystical demons that were the regular villains of the fairytales that were once so popular on her own home world. His reptilian features were sharply accentuated by his leathery skin, an overhanging brow and a downward shaped jaw that appeared to give him a permanent frown. The poor guy would have been stoned to death if he’d set foot on Trill some three hundred years ago.

She pushed her long fire red hear behind one ear and focused on the wall screen again were Schwarzkopf was still addressing herself and her crew from his ship.

“We have now confirmed that Shapeer Shuun is to arrive on Eteron within the next 48 hours. As you know Shuun is the suspected mastermind of raiding a number of Federation colonies along the Klingon border, trying to entice another war with the empire. He is also suspected to have direct links to the Elix clan of the Orion syndicate,” Schwarzkopf explained.

Star knew all this and not because she had been briefed by Schwarzkopf before. She knew Shapeer Shuun a whole of a lot better than she would have ever been comfortable to admit.

“We have been trying to nab Shuun for the last six months but have never been able to get solid information on his whereabouts. This might be our best chance. As far as we know he will be meeting with some other high ranking members of other criminal factions. However we’re only interested in Shuun. He possess information that will be extremely valuable to us.”

“Including possible links between Shuun’s organization and Starfleet?” Evan Mahoney asked, his voice doubtful of the possibility.

Star managed to maintain her composure even though she felt a cold shiver running up her spine.

Newheiser shot her a quick glance, a crooked smile on his impossibly thin lips.

Schwarzkopf nodded. “As distasteful as this possibility might sound to you – to all of us – we have good reason to believe that there might be connections between Shuun and certain elements of Starfleet. I want them found and dealt with appropriately.”

The Trill captain wanted to laugh but wisely suppressed the urge. Who did this hotshot captain think he was? Just because he commanded one of the largest starship ever built certainly didn’t make him the ultimate authority on the law around here. She had little choice but follow his lead. Command was on his side on this one.

“What about that border cutter?” Star wanted to know, her question had not only surprised Schwarzkopf but also her own people who had found her rather reserved ever since the meeting had begun. “Their captain –Akinola, was it? – insists that they have been waiting for the opportunity to pick up Shuun themselves. Doesn’t an operation like this technical fall into their jurisdiction?”

Schwarzkopf looked annoyed by that question and Star delighted in this. “Apparently they have managed to gather their own intel about the meeting on Eteron and have been in a waiting pattern out here for the last few days,” he said, referring to their current location in the Adelphous system which was located just a few warp minutes from Eteron. The entire region of space was known by the locales as The Triangle, due it’s unique position, wedged in-between Klingon and Romulan territory. Understandingly never a popular place to live it had deservingly gained a somewhat seedy reputation. A no-man’s land right at the back door of the Federation. “Akinola is convinced that Shuun might be expecting a move by us and is preparing a trap for just that eventuality. I doubt they can come up with anything to stop the firepower of a Galaxy though.”

“I take it they had some sort of plan,” asked Star.

“You must have noticed the Corvallen freighter when we arrived.”

Mahoney glanced out of the window. There, in between the massive Heracles and the multiple times smaller border cutter Bluefin, was an even smaller and rather uninviting looking amber colored ship. “What that heap of junk?”

“According to Akinola it has been outfitted with an improved warp drive and shields. It should also draw little attention around Eteron where it’d fit right in,” he said and took a small breath before continuing. “I’ll be blunt, I don’t think this is something the Border Service should be doing, not while we’re here. I have suggested to Captain Akinola that we implement their plan instead and he has agreed.”

This time Star couldn’t suppress a sly grin. She had a pretty good idea just how agreeable Akinola would have been to Schwarzkopf’s so-called suggestion.

“Shuun will be on Eteron in 48 hours. We will assemble an extraction team and take the freighter to Eteron in exactly 42 hours. I will give you more detailed instructions shortly. Schwarzkopf out.”

And with that he vanished from the wall screen in the observation lounge. Not taking questions or asking for recommendations. He knew exactly what he wanted and he would make sure he would get it. It was how Tazla would have done it. And again she was appalled by it.

She could see her Ariolo security chief slightly shake is huge head. “It is a mistake to wait that long,” he said with his deep, raspy sounding voice. “We should leave for Eteron as soon as possible and have Shuun come to us instead of the other way.”

“It’s his call,” Mahoney said. “I’m sure Schwarzkopf knows exactly what he’s doing?”

Star wondered if Mahoney had asked for a transfer onto the Heracles, the way he seemed to be supporting Schwarzkopf. She wouldn’t have minded the request at all. In fact she would have encouraged it.

“He certainly seems quite sure of himself, doesn’t he?” asked Newheiser and for whatever reason decided to focus on Star while he spoke, he appeared to be carefully studying her expression while he spoke. “Wouldn’t you agree, Captain?”

Star stood. Her sign that the meeting was concluded. “He has command of this operation, so we do as he says. That’s all,” she said sharply and headed for the doors. She had a thing about being the first one out of a meeting.

“Always in such a hurry,” the doctor continued. “I wonder what it is that compels her to make such swift withdrawals,” he said to nobody in particular.

Mahoney was the next to stand. “We have our orders. N’ek’too, I want you to prepare a strike team with your best people. We don’t know yet how many resources Schwarzkopf wants us to contribute but its best to be prepared. Run some drills on extraction scenarios until we get more orders.”

The Ariolo nodded sharply and left.

“Sometimes I do wonder, Mister Mahoney,” Newheiser said as he stood,” who really runs this ship.”

He gave the doctor a puzzled look. “I bet your pardon, doctor.”

“I think you heard me,” Newheiser replied and stepped up right next to him. “Don’t fool yourself. The crew knows about your relationship with our dear, pretty captain. Or should I say the lack thereof?”

“You know I really think that this is hardly any of the crews business. Or yours.”

He shrugged. “Maybe not. But I do like to know who I’m supposed to answer to. And something tells me it isn’t Star,” he said and walked towards the doors. “At least not a whole lot longer,” he almost whispered just before he left the puzzled first officer by himself.


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A great start to your new story. You've assembled some intriguing characters here - Star certainly has some issues, personal and professional, that will make for some entertaining scenes, I'm sure. Her first officer and CMO seem to have angendas of their own. And you've set up an interesting story line to boot - I'm looking forward to how you develop this.

Captain Schwarzkopf is an arrogant son of a gun, isn't he? I bet if he talked that way to Akinola, Joseph's inner Master Chief would unleash a bit of salty language! :censored: :lol:
 
That's the worst kind of person...someone who you hate, because he/she remind you of yourself. I hate that! :klingon: :)
 
A great start with some new and compelling characters. Captain Star appears to have some deep seated issues, and is, perhaps, a bit too familiar with the pirate in question. Schwarzkopf, on the other hand, appears too pompous to ask for input, and a bit too controlling to recognize Akinola’s expertise in these matters.

Well, thank goodness the Bluefin (and likely Eagle, too) will be in the neighborhood to pick up the pieces. :D
 
This has great promise. You've got an interesting character mix: Schwarzkopf appears to be more of a Dumkopf and Star definitely has some serious issues she needs to work out. Added to that, she's got a senior staff that appears to be doing its best to undermine her every step of the way. Ol' Joe Akinola's and probably Michael Owens are going to have their hands full here...
 
Star needs to display a little more of the drive that let her "claw" her way to command. I'm sure the First will come around and as for the Doctor-there's nothing wrong with him that an autopsy can't fix!:devil: Good opening!
 
She hadn’t been able to put Shapeer Shuun out of her mind. Not ever since Captain Melvin – ”but-you-can-call-me Mel” because I want you to feel like an equal even though you most certainly are not – Schwarzkopf had first briefed her on this mission two days earlier.

Schwarzkopf – and Tazla shuddered at the thought of calling him Mel – had made it his personal mission to reveal any possible links between Shuun’s intergalactic criminal organization and elements within the Federation and possibly even Starfleet. The fact that Shuun was also believed to be responsible for numerous attacks on Federation colonies and cultivated close contacts with the Orion Syndicate was merely a side note to Schwarzkopf.

The question that refused to allow her mind a moment’s worth of peace was why Schwarzkopf had chosen her as a partner in this endeavor? Partner of course was not the correct word to describe their current working relationship. After all he gave orders and as the senior captain (not by much), commanding the more formidable vessel, he expected her to follow them. Considering the sway the man had with Command it was in her career’s best interest to do so.

But why her? The most obvious answer to the question was that it had been a matter of availability. Schwarzkopf had simply required another vessel to assist him with his plan and it simply so happened that the Sacajawea was the most available vessel in the sector at the time and it simply so happened that Tazla Star was in command of said vessel.

Had it not been for the particularity of this mission and the person involved she had been more than willing to entertain that notion.

It simply could not be coincidence.

Star was too involved with this puzzle to watch where she was going.

She failed to take notice of the man who had stepped right into her path (or had she stepped into his?) but had turned his head into the opposite direction as if confused which direction was most appropriate to take him to his destination.

The impact was harsh and painful.

The man was still moving forward and Star was in full stride so that the blunt force of the collision threw her backwards. Star was completely ill-prepared for the artificial gravity that quickly took hold of her and unceremoniously crash landed her onto the floor.

The abruptness had caught her by such surprise that she hardly registered the pain in her hindquarters at all. It was the embarrassment that made her head flush crimson red. “What the hell …”

The man had been able to keep his balance thanks to his shoulder which had saved him from the full brunt of the impact but his head bad impossibly turned an even darker shade of red. “Crickey, I didn’t see you there at all. Are you alright?” he said, his words flying out of his mouth as he offered her a helping hand.

“Maybe if you had been looking where you were going,” she mumbled but took the hand nevertheless, still feeling the sting of embarrassment of being knocked onto her backside.

“I know I should have been more careful. This is totally my fault I was –“ he stopped himself in midsentence. The red-headed woman had beautiful brown spots running along the sides of her head and down her neck until they disappeared under the wine red uniform shirt. She looked just a few years older than himself but only now did he realize that she wore the rank insignia of a captain. He stiffened immediately. “I’m so sorry, ma’am, I really am.”

“Sir.”

“I beg your pardon?” he asked, even more uncomfortable and confused.

Star began to dust off her uniform as she stood straighter even though it was highly doubtful that any of it could have gotten on her clothes considering how meticulously clean Starfleet ships were being kept.

“Sir,” she repeated.

“Sir?” he asked.

She nodded. “I prefer sir not ma’am.”

“Oh,” he replied once the other shoe had dropped.

She looked at him expectantly.

It took him a moment to understand what she wanted from him. “I’m very sorry, sir,” he said slowly as if he wanted to test out every single word.

It was only then that Tazla Star realized how handsome the man was. He had sandy brown hair, an excellent build, a marvelous tan and his Australian accent made him only more endearing.

When the Trill captain didn’t seem to speak again he continued. “Well you see, sir, I got lost on my way back to the transporter room. I thought I needed to go into that direction,” he said and pointed at the opposite way, “so I didn’t pay enough attention to where I was actually going and well … to make a long story short I ran right into you.”

“Yeah,” she nodded, a smile forming on her lips. “I wasn’t really paying too much attention either, Lieutenant …?”

“Bane, sir. Nigel Bane,” he said and stuck out his hand. It wasn’t until much later that he came to consider that asking a superior officer to shake his hand might have come across slightly inappropriate.

Star didn’t seem to mind. She took his hand without hesitation. “Tazla Star, nice to meet you.”

“You’re the commanding officer of the Sacajawea?”

Tazla’s facial expression turned into a frown. “You don’t know who I am?”

“Well … uhm, “ he began to stutter slightly at her persistent glare. “I’m not really … well … from around here, you see?”

Star noticed the variation in his uniform. “You’re form the Border Dogs … I mean Service. Border Service.” she said, correcting herself quickly. “Sorry,” she added.

He smiled at her slip up. “Don’t worry sir, we don’t mind the term. I think we actually came up with it. But yes. USS Bluefin, at your service. I came aboard to meet an Academy mate who serves on your ship. I hope you don’t mind … sir.”

“No, no of course not. Who am I to stand in the way of an Academy reunion, especially if it helps fostering departmental harmony,” she said. Star was aware that tensions existed between the more high-profile exploratory division and the Border Service which usually remained well out of the limelight. She found the whole matter rather silly really but then on the other hand could not imagine trading in her command for one of those cramped little border cutters either.

She couldn’t help but feel a bit awkward about just standing there in the middle of the corridor, partaking in small talk with a junior lieutenant. But something, and she wasn’t quite sure what it was, compelled her to stay put.

And so did he. Equally awkward. “Well, sir, I guess I should …”

“I’m not your captain, Nigel.”

“Sir?”

“I mean, you don’t really have to call me sir, seeing that I’m not really your captain,” she said and immediately wished she could have called those words back and stuck them down her throat instead. What the hell was she thinking? What if any of her crew were nearby and overhead that comment? How would she have explained that? That it was fine to demand respect from her people but that it was not required by anybody else? Fortunately for her there was nobody else around who could have overheard the thoughtless comment.

Nigel Bane’s deep blue eyes sparkled now and she almost found it well worth it. “Well I suppose that makes a certain kind of sense.”

She smiled. “Tell you what Nigel, I can call you Nigel, right?”

“Of course.”

“Well Nigel, you can call me Taz when nobody is around,” she stopped when a crewmember decided to pass them by at just that moment.

He nodded. “Alright then,” he replied and looked around to make sure the witness was no longer in earshot. He leaned forward conspiratorially. “Taz.”

That brought another smirk onto her lips. She wondered if she was being hypocritical, if she was treating this young officer like Schwarzkopf had been treating her. She quickly dismissed the idea.

“Do you anticipate us to be alone again?”

Star’s cheeks gained some color. She had wanted him to ask her this question. She had absolutely no idea what had come over her, why she was still standing here and implying matters entirely inappropriate for her position.

Maybe it was because this handsome lieutenant had given her the chance to be herself for just a few moments. To forget that she was a captain with a crew that had no confidence in her at all and on a mission that could spell doom to her career. Maybe she needed a form to escape it all and maybe Bane was the ticket.

“McBride to Lieutenant Bane.”

The immaterial voice shook Star out of her thoughts.

The Australian officer needed a few moments to respond himself. “This is Bane, go ahead, Commander.”

“What’s your current location, Lieutenant?”

“I’m still on the Sacajawea, sir,” he said and winked at Star over the word that had sparked their conversation.

“The skipper wants you back here ASAP. Do you think you can tear yourself away from those fancy regular fleet folks?”

Star wanted to laugh out loud but caught herself at the last second.

Bane opened his mouth to respond but the words were stuck in his throat.

“I’m sorry Lieutenant, I think I didn’t make myself sufficiently clear. This was not actually a question. There is no need for you to consider an answer as there is only one possible response,” the voice continued without malice or impatience but in a noticeable relaxed Texas drawl.

“I’m on my way and will be back on Bluefin momentarily, Commander.”

“Thank you, Lieutenant, that was the correct response. Bane out.”

“I take it your captain doesn’t like to be kept waiting, does he?” asked Star with a smirk.

“Do any?”

She shook her head. “I suppose not. Well then, I don’t want to get you into any more trouble, Lieutenant,” she said, using his rank after spotting other crewmembers close by. “The transporter room is that door over there,” she said and pointed.

“I was pretty close.”

Star nodded. “And should you ever be in the same sector again …” she said but didn’t finish the sentence.

“I will make sure to let you know?”

She shrugged. “I suppose you could do worse.”

“G’day, Taz,” he said and then added more formally, “Sir,” before he walked away and disappeared into the transporter room.

Tazla Star couldn’t manage to get her own smile off her face as she watched him disappear. The peculiar encounter had felt good. She wanted to feel it again but she knew she couldn’t allow herself. At least not this blatantly. Not that she cared much for her current reputation. The crew hardly took notice of her anyway. But decorum had to be maintained if she cherished her career, she understood that. She couldn’t deny that she longed for somebody like Nigel Bane, somebody refreshingly different from the men she’d had the misfortune to get involved with.

And just like that Shapeer Shuun was back on her mind and with him all the endless complications that her new mission had created.

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Hopefully you'll be clueing us in to this Shapeer dude and the reason for all of the foreshadowing? Soon? Hopefully? Good sequence-you caught the awkwardness of their encounter just right.
 
Interesting interlude with the Bluefin fellow. So far, the internal conflict is being played out nicely. I like the depth with which you're portraying Star, particular within the context of the other captain and the differences in their careers. I think I would've liked to hear more detail about the other captain, though, to justify the resentment other than his career being handed to him on a silver platter. I think it would add to the dynamic you've created so far.

I'm curious to read more :)

-- ZC
 
Poor Nigel! :lol: Ma'am? Sir? Taz?? He never knew what hit him.

I hope Captain Star isn't too distracted by the young Aussie. Sounds like she has much bigger worries to occupy her mind than a tryst with a junior officer. She is definitely an interesting character, though.

And, as a side note - well done with the Bluefin characters! I thought you captured Bane and McBride perfectly here.

Keep it coming, CeJay! :techman:
 
Taz is definitely an interesting character with some major problems, but it looks like a certain Aussie jg has caught her eye and her his--as to whether that's a good thing for both of them or not--well, we'll see...

An excellent beginning!
 
When one spoke of a veteran captain it was not easy to imagine a man to which the term applied to more than Joseph Barabbas Akinola. A man who had worked himself up from the very bottom rung of the ladder to become one of the Border Services’ most experienced and respected commanding officers he was not known to the members of his crew as somebody who could easily lose his temper.

It was so much more astonishing then to hear his deep baritone voice cursing and shouting with such force that it startled the bridge crew even through the closed doors of his private office.

Dale McBride, first officer, stood at once from the captain’s chair and like everyone else on the bridge his eyes turned towards the closed doors leading to source of the commotion.

Their was one final brunt, something along the lines of getting the goddamn status report showing the correct damn figures and the doors swished open, the last colorful sentence of the captain slipping out of the ready room along with a very distressed young officer, clinging to his padd as if his life depended on it.

Ensign Lennox Okonedo had only been on the Bluefin for all but one week but already looked as if he was ready to call it quits. The dark African man possessed the imposing body of an Olympic athlete and yet he looked very close to tearing up right then and there.

T’Ser, the Vulcan operations officer felt immediate sympathy for the recent Academy graduate and stepped over to console him. “What happen, Len?”

He was so shaken it took him a moment to realize that he could let his guard down again. “I … really don’t know,” he stammered. “I tried to show the captain the status report he requested and he … I guess there was something there he didn’t like,” he added trying to look over the padd himself but unsuccessful in locating the problem.

“Let me have a look,” she said and gently took the device off him. She too could found no fault with it. She gave him an encouraging smile which only helped to irritate the poor ensign even more as he had not ever seen a Vulcan smiling before. “It’s alright, Len, I’ll have a word the captain, okay?”

He nodded all too eagerly. “Yes. Thank you,” he added and darted off, quite happy to put as much distance between himself and the ready room.

McBride had witnessed the exchange and watched as T’Ser was bracing herself to face the captain. “Lieutenant.”

She stopped and turned to look at him.

Dale wanted to swallow when he spotted those powerful eyes focused onto his. T’Ser was a stunning young woman and the fact that she was a Vulcan who did not adhere to her people’s uncompromising dedication to logic made her attainable. He would have been lying if he didn’t admit that he would not have minded in the least to get to know the alluring Vulcan much better. Once again he mentally cursed himself for losing his resolve every time she faced him.

T’Ser for her part had the tiniest smile on her lips, almost knowingly, almost as if she liked teasing him with it.

It felt like minutes but McBride had relocated his voice within a few seconds. He stepped towards her. “I’ll take care of this.”

She handed him the padd. “Yes, sir,” she said with a smirk and then returned to her station.

Moments later McBride stood in Akinola’s ready room after the captain had allowed him to enter in a voice so soft he had nearly missed it.

The room appeared darker than usual. On the captain’s desk the first officer discovered a bowl of melted cherry vanilla ice cream which Cookie, the ship’s cook, had brought the captain about an hour earlier. An unfinished wood carving of an old earth sailing ship stood nearby. Unfortunately the main mast had been accidently separated and now hung loose from the main deck.

Akinola himself was sitting in his chair but facing away, his gaze firmly fixed into the infinity of space.

“I hope you haven’t come here to defend Mister Okonedo’s less than stellar work attitude,” the captain said without facing his first officer.

“Well,” he began, not quite sure how to reply at first. “I’ve taken the liberty of looking over his report and -”

“And you honestly believe that it is an adequate document which adheres to standard Starfleet regulations?”

McBride scratched his head and glanced down at the padd again at the off chance that he had missed something. “Some of the figures may not reflect maximum efficiency ratings but they’re not outside acceptable levels. Besides Ensign Okonedo merely collated the information and is not really responsible for the content. The general structure of the report itself does appear to be satisfactory.”

Now the skipper did turn. “So your saying, ‘don’t shoot the messenger?’”

The Texan shrugged his shoulder laconically . “I don’t think there is a need to shoot anybody over this.”

An uncharacteristically vicious grin came over the captain’s lips. “Is the young chap alright? Not too rattled I hope?”

“Rattled is putting it mildly.”

“Good,” said Akinola. “It’s good to know I can still put the fear of God into folks. I used to be quite good at it in my younger days,” he added, looked at his failed sailing boat with disgust before dumping it unceremoniously into a nearby bin.

“You could always get pointers from Gralt.”

The captain looked at him. There hadn’t been the slightest hint of amusement in the first officers’ voice. His face was an unmoving mask. “You think I’ve been to hard on the young man?”

“You have singled him out ever since he’s come aboard sir, and quite honestly I don’t understand why. And today …” he didn’t add that he thought that today the captain had gone too far.

“You know he is my nephew, don’t you?”

McBride’s eyes opened wide at this revelation. “I had no idea.”

The captain nodded. “Yes, my sister’s oldest. Got married last year, took on the name of his wife if you can believe it.”

“Why not?” McBride replied.

“He’s a good kid,” Akinola said with sudden compassion. “Very bright. Did you know he was third of his Academy class? Of course at first I was disappointed that he didn’t choose to sign up as a noncom and get some experience under his belt first,” he said and when he spoke he sounded like he was talking about a son instead of a nephew. “But then I guess I can’t expect everyone to do as I did.”

McBride simply nodded, not wanting to interrupt the captain.

“Melody – my sister – is so proud of him and I promised her that I look out for him. It’s difficult to make a promise like that, Dale. Out here you can never know what to expect. While my own heart is filled with pride by seeing this promising young man wearing the uniform I can’t help but wish he hadn’t come out here.”

“Is that what you’re trying to do, sir? Getting him so spooked you that he will ask to be reassigned to a safer place instead?”

“Of course not. But I want him to toughen up a bit. If he can’t deal with me than how’s he going to deal with boarding an Orion raider jam-packed with men wanting nothing more than using his head as a springball. How is he going to represent the Service in light of young ignorant Starfleet officers with half his wit giving orders that will make his life a whole hell of a lot more dangerous for no reason at all.”

And then McBride finally understood what all this was really about. Certainly Akinola felt immense responsibility towards his nephew but the captain was not a man to worry about the perpetual dangers of being a Border Dog. What he had a problem with was to follow the orders of man who didn’t know what he was doing.

What he had problem with was Starfleet swooping in on his well conceived mission to get one of the most notorious crime figures in the sector behind bars only to have the entire operation pulled out from under him by a Starfleet captain chasing his admiral pins.

“This is about Captain Schwarzkopf,” McBride said. “That’s what made you lose your appetite.”

Akinola shot him an angry glance but quickly realized that it was misplaced and his features softened. “We’ve been trying to catch Shuun for months. We’ve prepared a brig just for him and the other big fish he would eventually lead us to. Oh what would I give for the chance to show Lortho and his thugs some of our hospitality. But now that Starfleet has shown an interest we can forget about all of that.”

“How do you figure, sir?”

“Didn’t you hear Schwarzkopf? Oh yeah, he claims he wants Shuun for the raids and his Syndicate contacts but what he’s really after is to expose some phantom connection between Shuun and who knows whom. It’s all this damn cloak-and-dagger stuff and I guarantee you the moment they get Shunn in custody nobody will see him ever again.”

“Maybe that’s not such a bad thing.”

“Don’t be so naïve, Dale,” said Akinola and stood. “He’s not going to get what he deserves. He’ll never even spent one day in a cozy rehabilitation colony. They’ll make some sort of deal with him that will allow him to disappear and with him our best chances to shut down the Syndicate for good. We’ll be back to square one, fighting the Elix clan in the trenches and putting good people like Lennox in the crossfire.”

Akinola stepped away from his desk and headed for the doors. “Tell the good ensign that I’m satisfied with his report, might as well take it a bit easier on him considering the difficult times ahead,” he said. “And do me a favor, Dale, dispose of that ice cream before it starts to mold, will ya?”

And with that Akinola was gone to brood over the general senselessness of the galaxy within the privacy of his quarters.

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An interesting side of Akinola--it has to be difficult having a close relative under his command. Having the rug cut out from under him by some regular fleet stuffed shirt only makes things worse.
 
Captain Akinola is not happy! It must gall him to have a pompous jerk like Schwarzkoph steal the show. Too bad his frustration is trickling down to his nephew. 'Course, Joseph hasn't been known for handling family situations particularly well! :lol:

Nice writing, here. You've certainly got a good handle on the Bluefin characters. I'm really enjoying the story - it's showing great promise!
 
Akinola certainly was pissed. I really felt for his nephew. I was really...unsettled to see Akinola like that. A tribute to your writing, I guess.;)
 
Akinola certainly was pissed. I really felt for his nephew. I was really...unsettled to see Akinola like that. A tribute to your writing, I guess.;)

It's of course always quite risky to write for somebody else's characters. I was quite concerned myself about showing this side of Akinola. But I do think we've see him with a flaring temper before.

Thanks again to TheLoneRedshirt for letting me play with his characters. I hope I won't do them too much of an injustice.
 
I think you're doing fine by TLR, CeJay. And the Old Man had to have a crusty side to him-I like how you brought it out. Good Job!
 
It's of course always quite risky to write for somebody else's characters. I was quite concerned myself about showing this side of Akinola. But I do think we've see him with a flaring temper before.

Thanks again to TheLoneRedshirt for letting me play with his characters. I hope I won't do them too much of an injustice.

Oh don't get me wrong. I liked it. I think it just hit me harder because you don't see that side of him much.
 
I'm echoing the other reviews here, no doubt, but deservedly so. Great work with the various players here. Star and Bane's run-in in the corridor was some fantastic character work, giving us a glimpse of the woman who lies beneath the angst and turmoil we've seen Star exhibit so far.

Akinola's temper tantrums are thankfully rare, given what we've just witnessed. :eek: His poor nephew must be wondering why the hell he took a post on his uncle's ship right about now. McBride handled the situation well, though, providing just enough of a backboard for the captain's thoughts that Akinola managed to talk himself through what was bothering him. That show's great maturity on McBride's part, as well as solid instincts.

Looking forward to more...
 
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