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The Little Things in Life

BrotherBenny

Rear Admiral
Rear Admiral
Coming soon...

...After the events of The Pebbled Sea, the crew of the Dauntless are facing the prospect of shore leave on Kursica before taking Rashal back to his people. But someone has other ideas for their peaceful relaxation and they might just find that a dangerous mission is a welcome change...

...The Little Things in Life - a series of shore leave stories
 
Sorry for the delay folks, but RL has been a real pain in the gluteus maximus. I'm back and raring to go. So here is the first of the Dauntless vignettes, featuring one of the youngest members of the team. Eagle-eyed viewers may remember much of the story from the now defunct Triton series, but this should be the last holdover.

Enjoy...




MEMORIES

Kursica City, Kursica, stardate 57303.9

Ensign Daniel Larson walked down the main causeway which ran the length of the capital city. There was a market on and the squat aliens were selling their wares, everything from flowers to livestock, dairy products to dubious cooked meats. Larson looked around to see if he could spot any of his fellow crewmembers but there were none.

Seeing an alleyway, Larson ducked into it to avoid the looks being given by a few of the scarier looking Kursican males, heavyset for their size and probably very dangerous. He tried to double back and for some reason found his usual sense of direction failing him. Larson stepped toward the door and a figure appeared in the next doorway. He turned on instinct and raised his hand which contained a discreetly hidden phaser.

‘I wouldn’t try anything if I were you,’ the Kursican woman said.

‘Who are you?’ he asked.

‘I’m just a woman waiting for a man.’

‘Am I that man?’ Larson asked, getting uncomfortable and aware that this alleyway was not at all deserted.

‘No offence, but I prefer my own species,’ she replied. ‘That isn’t any place a human should go, most of my kind wouldn’t go in there either.’

‘I think I’ll be leaving now.’

Larson turned to dash down the alley but instead found himself looking up at the darkening sky as a metal post swiped his head. Fat droplets of rain began to fall as three Kursican man hauled him off the ground and carried him into the building. He tried to reach for his phaser and combadge but they were quickly taken from him by the woman. She pressed something to his forehead and he slept.

Moving proved unsuccessful when he woke up strapped to a surgical table of some kind and there were voices that seemed to be close and getting closer.

‘Our patient is awake, Doctor,’ a female voice spoke with a lilt. He recognised it as the flirtatious woman who kept him talking some hours earlier.

‘Excellent, please prep him for surgery.’

‘At once, Doctor; which procedure will you be performing?’

‘I think the engram amplification will do nicely, it will be my first opportunity to perform the surgery on someone who has a far wider range of memories than the usual people we deal with.’

‘I’ll prep the patient now,’ the woman said as she approached the table.

Larson tried to struggle but the woman had strong arms and held him in position as she administered a cocktail of drugs. The Dauntless’ chief flight control officer slipped into a semiconscious state where he could see and hear everything, but feel nothing—physically at least.

‘He’s ready, Doctor.’

Larson saw out the corner of his eye, the doctor coming toward him, dressed in the obligatory surgical gown. The doctor began humming as he attached a series of nodes and wires to Larson’s brain. He set up a number of monitors and an interface.

‘Start recording please…ladies and gentlemen, this is Mister Larson, a visitor from the Federation starship in orbit. One aspect of both our culture and his that we both share is that of family. Using my pioneering memory engram amplification equipment, I hope to show you that I can read the neural impulses in the brain and show the images on these monitors. Observe.’

The doctor adjusted the controls on the interface and an image formed on the monitors, fuzzy at first but their clarity increased as the doctor manipulated the interface more. Larson was watching at a remove as his earliest memories of his parents were played before him. Seeing his father laughing and playing like that brought up an uncomfortable memory that the doctor seemed only too willing to watch and manipulate.

‘Watch as more memories surface,’ he said. ‘The patient, still awake, guides us through his own experiences, allowing for a more complete picture of his life. Watch as Mister Larson takes us through his own memories.’

Larson couldn’t help but think of the last time he was with his father. It was a memory that he would rather forget, but now he was watching it in full colour…


The asteroid field in the Sol system had been a favourite testing ground for tactical target practice since mankind had first set out into the stars in the late twenty-first century and Admiral Harry Larson preferred it to some of the others he’d used over the years. The Ayers Rock was the newest Steamrunner-class starship, the first of a new production line and had a few new tactical upgrades which needed testing out. This particular ship was being helmed by Admiral Harry Larson’s only son, one of the most capable young pilots in the fleet, and the tactical systems seemed to be working at Starfleet’s minimum standards—but that wasn’t high enough for him. He wanted them to be working at ninety-seven percent efficiency, a percentage that few ships ever achieved, even with his input and pushing. Ensign Daniel Larson tightened the ship’s turn between two large asteroids—each one several thousand kilometres apart—and Harry Larson found the perfect target for his next test.

‘Lieutenant, coordinates 212-mark-57, fire,’ the Admiral yelled.

A quantum torpedo streaked away from the starship’s underbelly and struck the asteroid dead centre, shattering it into a million pieces. Harry watched the fracture pattern and found that it was not as dispersed as it should have been. The relative speed of the fragments was much faster than it should have been and one of the larger fragments ricocheted off a medium-sized asteroid—sending both spinning in different directions. That ricocheted fragment was now headed directly for the ship.

‘All hands, brace for impact,’ the tactical officer yelled suddenly, grasping his own console as the other bridge officers got into position.

Harry Larson got himself back into his seat and activated the restraints just as the fragment hit them, sending the ship spinning out of control, more than a match for his son’s outstanding piloting abilities. He came to, the red lighting throwing shadows across the small bridge of the ship, and released the restraints. His crew were scattered across the deck, most lying unconscious. Daniel Larson was still at the helm and disengaged himself as his father knelt beside the closest officer. There was no pulse and Daniel looked into his father’s eyes as the former pushed his fingers toward the neck of the operations manager. He was dead.

‘Report, Ensign,’ Larson ordered.

The helmsman quickly finished checking the others on the bridge with the medical tricorder from the medkit. ‘Four dead and two critically injured, sir. Comm systems are out, our engines and deflectors are down.’

‘Can we get a signal out?’

‘I’ve already tried, sir. The subspace relay was destroyed when we were hit.’

‘Get down to sickbay and bring someone up here. I’ll try and get the engines back up. Without the deflectors we’re sitting ducks out here.’

He thought about disobeying his father before he realised that his father was an even better pilot that he was. ‘Aye sir.’

As the helmsman tried to force open the turbolift doors, main power came back online and the doors opened themselves.

‘Bridge to transporter room,’ Larson called out, kneeling by the two critically injured officers.

Go ahead, bridge.’

‘Transport three directly to sickbay, lock on to my combadge.’

Acknowledged, standing by.’

‘Energise.’

Daniel Larson dematerialised and he saw his father trying to coax the impulse engines to life, apparently without success. Once he deposited the injured duo in sickbay, he ran for engineering to see what he could do to help but was stopped by the anti-radiation barrier. An engineer sat in front of it, coughing.

‘It’s no use. Whoever’s in there is dead.’

‘We need deflectors and impulse engines back online.’

‘No good,’ the engineer said, coughing again. ‘The fusion generators were badly damaged, the best we’ve got is one-eighth impulse. We’ve got hull breaches on all decks.’

‘Can I get to deflector control?’

‘If you can get to an EVA suit and walk across the outside of the ship, avoiding all the hull breaches.’

‘It’ll be dangerous, but I can do it,’ Larson said and tapped his combadge. ‘Admiral, I think I have a way to get us out of here,’ he added and explained his plan.

Not a chance, Ensign. You’ll never make it with all the rocks out there.’

‘I have to try, sir, otherwise none of us will make it.’

Ensign, how many EVA hours do you have? I have more than four hundred hours. If anyone is going to do it, it’s me. Get yourself back up here and be ready to get us the hell out of here when I tell you to.’

‘Aye sir, I’m on my way.’

He didn’t receive a reply and made his way to the bridge. By the time he reached the bridge and took his place at the helm, he could hear his father’s running commentary as the latter traversed the ship as carefully as possible.

There’s a lot of debris out here, Danny. That photon torpedo should have shattered the asteroid a lot more than it did. Check it out will you.’

‘Will do.’

I’m almost there, and there is a massive breach in the hull in that section. Can you deactivate the forcefield surrounding it?’

‘I’ll try,’ Daniel replied. ‘But I might not be able to reactivate it.’

It’s a risk I’ve got to take, otherwise none of us will leave this ship alive—and we have no way to call for help.’

‘Yes sir, deactivating the forcefield now.’

I’m in,’ he called out. ‘Reactivate it. I’ll need to take my gloves off to make the repairs.’

Daniel Larson breathed a sigh of relief as he saw that the forcefield had indeed reactivated. All he had to do now was wait for his father to complete the repairs to the deflector shield, so they could make themselves a path through the debris. The structural integrity field was losing power and the forcefields were beginning to fail.

‘Dad, hurry. The forcefields won’t hold much longer.’

Almost done,’ the admiral said. ‘That’s it, get us out of…

‘Dad?’

When he heard nothing more, he checked on the status of the deflector shield. He had indeed got it working but…

I’m sorry, Danny,’ a voice said.

‘Doc? Is everyone else okay?’

Get us home.’

‘In a minute,’ he said. ‘Bridge to transporter room.’

Go ahead, bridge.’

‘Scan for human lifesigns out there, the admiral might still be alive.’

Aye sir, scanning.’

In what felt like an eternity, Larson prepped the impulse engines and rerouted as much available power as possible to the deflectors.

Transporter room to bridge, I have him…but it’s too late.’

‘This is Doctor West, I’m on my way. Danny, please, get us out of here.’

* * *

The death of his father would haunt him forever; that much Larson knew. Although his father had died saving the rest of the crew, questions were still being asked over a year later. The Ayers Rock was immediately decommissioned and an investigation was begun. The conclusion of the investigation was straightforward; the space-frame of the Ayers Rock was structurally unsound and it led to a catastrophic loss of life when the vessel was undergoing trial runs.

A sharp jolt brought him back to the present. The “nurse” had just injected him with something and he felt his consciousness slipping away. He heard the doctor talking again but couldn’t make out the voices. Gathering every ounce of strength granted him by his familial genes and Starfleet training, Larson willed his body to fight whatever drug had been given to him. It didn’t take long for his full faculties to return and he slowly levered the restraints. Being fabric rather than metal, they eventually gave a little, allowing him to free his hands.

‘He’s free!’ an orderly yelled as Larson freed his legs and reached for his phaser and combadge.

‘Stay where you are!’ the nurse spoke coldly, pointing a projectile weapon toward him. ‘I can probably shoot you before you fire the phaser, Mister Larson.’

‘Perhaps, but I am not planning to fire it,’ the young Ensign replied as his free hand tapped his combadge again. ‘Did you hear all that, Doctor?’

‘Loud and clear, Ensign, the Kursican authorities are approaching your position now.’

‘No!’ the doctor yelled and grabbed the pistol from his nurse.

Larson ducked as they struggled. The pistol’s shot rang out a moment later. He raised his head just as Kursican Planetary Security entered the room.

‘You do not need to remain here, Starfleet. You can return to your vessel.’

‘I’m pressing charges against these people,’ Larson retorted vehemently.

The security officer shook his head. ‘It won’t do any good. His work is sponsored by the Science Council. They’ll make it go away, they always do.’

Larson sighed. ‘This isn’t over, one to beam up
.’

* * *

‘Perhaps next time you will not venture unaccompanied into unfamiliar territory,’ the Vulcan EMH remarked as she used the dermal regenerator.

‘Tell me again why we accepted a Vulcan template for you,’ Larson muttered.

‘The EMH Mark Four was made with a number of templates. The crew decided in the majority for a Vulcan, believing it to be superior to the others.’

‘Uh huh,’ Larson replied. ‘Did they have to make you so…realistic?’ he asked, staring at her chest.

‘I am modelled after a famous Vulcan of the past.’

‘Yes, yes, I know, Admiral T’Pol, the first Vulcan to serve on a Starfleet vessel.’

‘Then why did you ask?’

Larson sighed. The Vulcan template was so realistically like a Vulcan that you didn’t need a real one on board.

‘You are free to return to duty, Ensign.’

‘Yeah, thanks,’ the helmsman muttered as he returned to his quarters, hoping to get a peaceful night’s sleep with images of the Ayers Rock still vivid in his mind.

It wasn’t.
 
FORCE OF NATURE

Starbase 535, stardate 57304.2

The bazaar in the former prison cell blocks was full of different aromas and wares and Shanitalen ch’Maras breathed deeply in the freedom that came from knowing he was off duty for the next three days. One of the few other Andorians on board the Dauntless would be meeting him down here in a few minutes and he planned on beginning a romantic relationship with her, since they had both fulfilled their cultural need to procreate and stave off the extinction of their race. His antennae quivered and he felt her presence nearby. Chalazaniliss zh’Risha smiled as she moved through the crowds. The Kursicans gave her room but the humanoid races seemed to move in slightly. Talen smiled, she had that air about her. Azani passed by a stall where small birds were being kept in cages and one of the birds cheeped at her. She stopped to put her finger to the cage and Talen realised too late that the stallholder had misread her intentions.

Azani cried out as the blade pierced her abdomen and Talen was calling for an emergency medical transport before she had even fallen to the ground. Both Andorians vanished in a haze of light. Arlon Maxx rushed out of his office as Azani materialised on the surgical biobed.

‘What happened?’

‘She was stabbed by one of the humans in the bazaar,’ Talen replied.

Maxx looked up, glancing at Talen and his own medical tricorder. ‘The blade penetrated her intestinal tract. I can heal her but I want to make sure that you won’t go and find this man.’

‘Doctor,’ Talen said in a warning tone.

‘I know what Andorians are like, Talen. Promise me you won’t make it personal.’ The tricorder triple bleeped and Azani began convulsing. ‘Damn! It looks like the blade was poison-tipped.’

‘Thank you, doctor,’ Talen replied and exited sickbay.

* * *

‘Shit,’ muttered Maxx as he began to sterilise himself for the surgery. ‘Sickbay to bridge.’

Go ahead, doctor,’ Commander Aaron Wright replied.

‘Commander, there’s been an incident involving Lieutenant Talen and Ensign zh’Risha. I’m trying to stabilise her but she was stabbed with a poison-tipped blade. I’m afraid that Talen has gone after her attacker.’

Thank you, doctor; I’ll have security take care of it. Keep me informed, Wright out.’

* * *

Talen returned to the bazaar after stopping briefly at his quarters. He had avoided the two security patrols sent after him and intended to remain hidden until he had achieved his goal. The Klingons called it the Right of Vengeance and it was something that his mother would have despised with every fibre of her being. His father would have understood and even welcomed the bloodletting that was going to follow the capture of the attacker. Talen’s antennae were so finely attuned to this creature that there was nowhere he could hide, but hiding seemed to be the lowest of his priorities, for he was still at his stall watching over his birds. Talen pulled out a two-centuries-old Andorian phaser, dialled it up to maximum and fired it at the stall. The birds and cages were vaporised instantly and the stall itself burst into flames.

‘Stop him!’ two Starfleet security officers yelled as Talen dropped the phaser. People were fleeing in all directions but the Andorian was focused only on one, Azani’s attacker.

The attacker tried to flee by throwing others in his path but this became more difficult when Talen withdrew his personal Ushaan-tor from a sheath strapped to his lower back. The ice-miners’ tool was sharp and deadly and a number of people, Starfleet, Federation, non-aligned and Kursican fell wounded or dead from slashes of the blade. Realising that the Andorian wasn’t going to give up, the attacker began throwing blades behind him. Each one missed or hit someone else, sending them into convulsions.

Talen knew that his own security people were after him, and a distant part of his own brain realised that his career in Starfleet was probably over, but he remained focused on his target. The human ducked through an archway and disappeared into the ventilation ductwork but Talen’s antennae followed him along the main concourse. The two performed the game of cat and mouse across six levels of the starbase, both avoiding Starfleet and Kursican security patrols, and each other as well. The human was climbing up an access ladder when one of the rusted rungs snapped under his weight and he tumbled down the shaft, just as Talen reached it. Talen missed with his first slash of the weapon and the human rolled to one side, back into the corridor, but the second swing of the Ushaan-tor sliced cleanly through the man’s wrist.

‘I would prefer to kill you,’ Talen whispered as he knelt by the screaming man, ‘but I need to know the poison.’

‘I’d rather die.’

Talen’s eyes grew cold, their blue tint fading to the same white as his hair. ‘As you wish,’ he replied and swung the blade again.

The Andorian slumped to the ground in mid-swing as three security officers ran down the corridor.

‘You’re lucky you’re still alive,’ Master Chief Petty Officer Reshakella zh’Velan said, hauling the man to his feet.

‘I want to press charges.’

Zh’Velan pressed her face against his. ‘You almost killed one of my people and then you complain when her boyfriend tries to kill you? You can press charges if you want, and we’ll deal with both of you accordingly.’

‘I did nothing wrong, she was going to steal one of my birds.’

One of the human officers lifted the man off the ground. ‘I have more faith in a Ferengi’s whining than your lies.’ He tapped his combadge. ‘Five to beam directly to sickbay.’

* * *

Captain Astar entered the security office and walked through to the brig. She saw her helmsman lying on the bunk and then turned to face the other occupant. The human was nursing the stump of his wrist and muttering racial epithets.

‘You don’t have the luxury of calling anybody’s parentage into question, Mister Darlin. You’re facing five counts of murder.’

‘What?!’

‘My engineer is dead and so are four innocent civilians that you killed by throwing your poisoned knives blindly.’

Darlin slumped. ‘They weren’t supposed to be fatal. No one was supposed to die.’

Astar reigned in her growing temper. ‘That is irrelevant. You will be remanded to the Kursican authorities in the morning.’

‘Getting off easy,’ Talen muttered from the other bunk.

Astar walked over to him. ‘Talen, you wounded eleven people with that blade of yours, and killed two.’

‘Is he being “remanded” too?’ Darlin asked.

Astar ignored him. ‘I’ve spoken to Doctor Maxx and he tells me that when security beamed you over, your eyes were white. Do you know what that means?’

Talen nodded. ‘I was suffering from White Rage, a primal Andorian emotion which is unstoppable.’

‘Starfleet have agreed to take the manslaughters off the table, but for disobeying an order from Doctor Maxx, I’m reducing you in rank to Lieutenant junior grade for a period of no more than one year.’

‘Captain, thank you, but whatever punishment you give me is far less than the one I must give myself.’

‘What do you mean?’

‘I am half-Aenar and I have followed my mother’s culture my entire life, even so far as to calling myself by my Aenar-given name. Since I have killed, I can no longer do that and must revert to full form of my name.’

‘I didn’t know any of that, what is the full form?’

‘Do you have a padd?’

‘No; computer, begin recording.’

‘Acknowledged, recording.’

‘I, Talen of Aenar, hereby renounce my claim to that culture and world as of stardate 57304. Under Aenar law, I hereby take the name given to me by my Andorian parent, Shanitalen ch’Maras. I shall be known by this name from this date until my death and forever more. End recording.’

‘I’m sorry, Talen.’

‘That’s Lieutenant ch’Maras, sir. I can no longer use the short form.’

‘I’ll be back later to release you.’

‘Thank you, Captain.’

Darlin sighed and turned away, smiling. His job was done and he knew that he would never see the inside of a Kursican jail, or any other jail for that matter. He would be returning home.
 
I read Force of Nature yesterday and I must say I was quite suprised by Astar's reaction to Talen running beserk. All he gets is a temporary demotion? I dunno but that feels like a slap on the wrist to me. Try telling that to the famillies he killed, even if he was not himself.

Otherwise I liked it and I'm really wondering what exactly this guy's endgame was. I hope you pick up on that in another story.

Also I liked Talen little ritual but again, I feel the consequences (i.e. the price he must pay) should have been a lot more severe.

I'm also still working myself through Pebbled Sea which is not exactly what I would call a quick read. I'm very much enjoying it so far.
 
I have to echo CeJay here in that I'm surprised that Talen got off as lightly as he did--Astar must have called in all of her markers and probably now owes a bunch of favors for that. Also, I'm assuming that you're planning on having him do a lot of internal suffering for his rage--he's cut himself off from an important part of himself by turning away from his Aenar heritage--that's got to have long term ramifications.

A very good story revealing a lot about what makes Talen tick.
 
People, people, rest assured that his temporary demotion and internal suffering are the easiest parts of the punishment. As for Mr Darlin, his thread will be picked up. Capt. Astar did have to call in a few markers, but not too many. Remember that the Dauntless is in a backwater region of space on a highly-classified mission--bringing murder charges against a Starfleet officer would cause unnecessary publicity.

Talen, or should I say ch'Maras, has no idea what is in store for him.
 
REPERCUSSIONS

Infirmary, Starbase 535, stardate 57304.8

Lieutenant Arlon Maxx despised the dregs of the galaxy that would kill in peacetime, for any reason. He knew that killing in war was a necessity but he didn’t like it and made sure that anyone who could survive would. It was the reason he’d joined Starfleet in the first place. This day had started with the death of an Andorian engineer and got steadily worse. After performing Chalazaniliss zh’Risha’s autopsy, Maxx had gone to the starbase looking for some piece of mind. The illusion was shattered when Commander Elias Mackenzie, the starbase’s chief medical officer, called him in for a chat. The infirmary was just as well lit and spacious as his sickbay, but he noted three emergency medical holograms, all from different templates, being put through their paces.

‘Interesting,’ he muttered.

Mackenzie heard and smiled. ‘I get them to interact with each other whenever possible, improves their bedside manner.’

‘TP could have her manner improved,’ Maxx replied. ‘She has such a superior attitude.’

‘TP?’ Mackenzie asked.

‘T’Pol, the Vulcan template EMH,’ the young Bolian answered. ‘Ah yes, I have seen the template. A little too realistic, but it isn’t why I asked to speak with you.’

‘I didn’t think so, sir.’

‘You allowed Captain Astar to make a medical decision, one that cost the lives of three hundred million people.’

‘It was the right decision. The virus had spread too far. There was no way to control it and I had nothing to work with. The Resoto would most likely have been dead before I found a cure anyway.’

Mackenzie frowned. ‘That’s irrelevant and I think your familiarity with her clouded your judgement. When it comes to medical matters on the Dauntless and in situations where the Dauntless is the senior vessel, you are the highest authority, not the Captain. Is that understood?’

‘Yes sir.’

‘Good, now, I’m putting a mark in your file – but it will be classified, such is the nature of our mission here.’

‘Permission to speak freely?’

Mackenzie nodded. ‘Granted, Lieutenant.’

‘You and all of Starfleet Medical may think that Captain Astar’s decision was the wrong one, but that doesn’t matter. She made a judgement call and it was the right one. We could have wasted precious hours on Resoto Prime instead of tracking the Cha’lav. The Cha’lav are to blame for the genocide of the Resoto and they will be made to pay for that. Of far greater import is the information we gleaned from the Cha’lav bodies. I assume you have them here?’

Mackenzie shook his head. ‘Starfleet Intelligence has them stashed somewhere. Do you agree with the Captain or are you just towing the party line?’

‘I agree with her decision. I voiced my concerns and they were noted.’

‘I’m not satisfied with your work as the Dauntless’ CMO but it isn’t my place to make that call. I have spoken with Commander Logan and he has asked that every report you send be forwarded to him immediately. You’re going to be under the microscope for a while, Arlon, I hope to hell you don’t mess up.’

Maxx scowled, his blue skin growing several shades darker. ‘I don’t care for your opinion on my skills, Commander. I’m affronted that you felt the need to appeal to a higher authority—and not even a medical one—before you came to me, and I will be lodging a formal protest with the head of Starfleet Medical. Your actions are unbecoming, Doctor!’

‘Be careful with your tone, Lieutenant, you’re skirting with insubordination.’

‘What are you going to do, put another mark in my file? Go ahead, it’s my medical opinion that you’ve been sitting in this backwater for so long that you can’t remember what it’s like to be sawbones on a starship, and for that I pity you. Good day!’

Maxx was shaking when he left, shocked that he could have attacked another doctor like that, and a little awed that he didn’t feel the slightest bit of guilt over it. He would no doubt get a stern message from his godmother concerning the exchange but he really didn’t care. He was a doctor, not a politician, and it seemed like Mackenzie was turning into the latter at the expense of the former.

‘Lieutenant?’ a voice said beside him.

‘Yes?’ he turned and saw a beautiful young woman walking in step. ‘What can I do for you?’

‘My father can be a little awkward at times, don’t you think?’

Maxx snapped his head back toward the infirmary. ‘He’s your father? I think you must be most like your mother.’

‘Kind of you to say, but it isn’t often that junior officers, or even senior ones, bark back.’

‘I’m sure my career will be short lived, but I don’t like being blindsided.’

‘He won’t do anything, his bark is worse than his bite.’

Maxx smiled and a peculiar notion entered his head. ‘Can I take you out to dinner?’

The young woman smirked. ‘Because you like me or to get back at him.’

Maxx shrugged. ‘To be honest, a little of both. But I would much rather have dinner in the company of a beautiful woman than eat in my quarters alone.’

‘Then dinner it is,’ she said. ‘My name’s Ally, by the way, I’ll see you outside Jull’s at twenty hundred hours.’

‘I can’t wait,’ Maxx replied.

* * *

Jull’s was a general restaurant that served local food and a small selection of dishes from across the galaxy. Maxx and Ally shared a bottle of wine over local pasta dishes and talked the evening away. They discussed their lives, both personal and professional, and found that they had plenty in common. It was over dessert that the trouble started.

‘What are you doing with him?’ Elias Mackenzie yelled as he spotted them.

‘I’m having dinner with a friend,’ Ally shot back.

‘Not again you’re not,’ he replied, making a grab for her arm.

She twisted out of his grip as Maxx stood up, pushing her behind him. ‘Doctor, leave now.’

‘I will not have my daughter cavorting with a coward.’

‘He stood up to you, Elias,’ Ally retorted.

‘How many times have I told you not to call me that? I am your father.’

‘Stepfather,’ she corrected absently.

‘You’re still coming with me,’ he said, grabbing her.

‘She said no, Doctor Mackenzie. Leave her alone,’ Maxx replied, still calm.

Mackenzie pulled out an old twenty-third century phaser. ‘She’s my daughter and I’m not taking any more lip from a cowardly upstart like you.’

‘Elias, no!’ a voice yelled as the crowd thinned rapidly.

The doctor turned and fired, burning a hole through a security officer’s chest. Maxx’s eyes widened and he ran to the fallen officer.

‘He’s dead,’ Maxx said, standing up. ‘Give me the phaser, Doctor.’

‘As you say,’ Mackenzie smiled with a feral glint in his and aimed the phaser at the Bolian.

He fired.

‘NO!!’ Ally ran for Maxx and took the full force of the phaser. She was dead before she collapsed onto the Bolian.

Maxx held Ally in his arms and then laid her gently on the deck. He stood up and strode over to Mackenzie, who stood wide-eyed in shock. Maxx grabbed the phaser from him and ejected the power-pack, tossing both away. A dozen security officers arrived at a brisk trot and took them both into custody.

‘The Bolian didn’t do anything,’ the restaurateur said. ‘Your damned doctor killed his daughter and Lieutenant Stone.’

‘Thanks, Jull, we’ll take it from here.’

* * *

Maxx was released and headed for the infirmary where Ally’s body lay in stasis. He sat beside her and cried.

‘I’m sorry, Arlon,’ Captain Astar said. ‘Doctor Mackenzie is being charged with two counts of murder. I don’t suppose that matters to you, does it?’

‘Give me five minutes with him. I’ll make sure he gets the punishment he deserves.’

‘Your mother would turn in her grave if she heard you talking like that.’

‘I know, but she never lost anyone in a meaningless fight.’

‘I’ve seen the security recordings, Arlon. She died to protect you and you feel some responsibility for that, it is understandable.’

‘I’d like to arrange her funeral, Captain, if you don’t mind.’

‘Do you know what she wished?’

‘She’s a space boomer. She wanted to go out like one of us, drifting through space for eternity.’

‘I think we can arrange that,’ Astar said, resting a hand on his shoulder. ‘Come on; let’s see about getting a casing for her.’
 
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Redeye Penal Colony, Sol system, stardate 57307.1

It was the best kept secret in the galaxy. Starfleet had less than ten maximum security prisons in its eight thousand cubic-light-year sphere of influence and only three “supermax” prisons. Much to the surprise of Lieutenant Ryan McNamara, he wasn’t sent to the Sundancer penal colony as everyone expected—and probably still did—but to the one and only super prison in the Sol system. Named Redeye because of its geosynchronous orbit over Jupiter’s massive storm, the penal colony was a harsh chunk of rock that few knew about and fewer still would talk about. Apparently, according to McNamara’s talkative guard, Starfleet wanted to keep an eye on him and Sundancer had too many difficult inmates as it was. So he’d been sent to Redeye, even though he was still officially at Sundancer.

He woke to find himself in the infirmary again. His trial having been concluded rather speedily at Starbase 535—found guilty of multiple counts of murder—he’d been shipped back to the home system. In less than twenty-fours he had been stabbed, beaten, raped and beaten again. There was no way he was going to survive ten years if this was day one. There was a woman standing over him, dressed not in the standard blue of Starfleet sciences and medical, but in a matte black uniform that looked eerily familiar yet out of place. She waved an odd-looking scanner over him, and, apparently satisfied, placed it back into a sheath on her waist.

‘Who are you?’ he croaked.

‘Someone who thinks you were better off here than at Sundancer.’

‘Would I have been brutalised like this there?’

‘Worse probably,’ the woman replied. ‘Don’t you want to know why we decided you were better off here?’

‘So you could keep an eye on me?’

‘Starfleet Security wants to keep an eye on you. We want you to work for us.’

‘And you are?’

‘Let’s just say that we represent a group of people who feel that doing what needs to be done far outweighs the consequences, whatever they may be.’

McNamara smiled. ‘I’m in, what do I have to do?’

‘We’ll make the others back off, just wait and we’ll have your first assignment shortly.’ She turned as she heard footfalls approaching and vanished in a pillar of light.

‘I must say, you’re looking awfully well considering what you’ve been through. I trust that you’ve been approached by our resident intelligence operative already?’

McNamara nodded weakly at this small man who looked like he could blend in to the crowd.

‘Good, but let me tell you a story. She doesn’t work for a shadowy group any more than I do. Commander Butler just likes being dramatic. Her boss thinks that those who have demonstrated an apparent lack for the rules and regulations can be put to good use.’

‘Captain,’ McNamara replied, ‘you don’t need to play these pathetic games. I might be human but I am one of those rare few who have some psionic ability and you’re broadcasting loud enough for a full Betazoid to pick it up. Admiral Nechayev is welcome to use my abilities as she sees fit, but I want Captain Astar to pay for her betrayal.’

The small man suddenly drew himself to a greater height. ‘She betrayed no one. You on the other hand betrayed her trust and that of the entire crew. Even after you killed those aliens and a number of your fellow Starfleet officers she tried pulling in some markers that she had barely made to try and minimise your sentence. The JAG was planning on a lifetime incarceration, but someone pulled some strings to get you ten years—you should be lucky.’

McNamara scowled. ‘She will still get her just desserts.’

‘That maybe so, but if Nechayev catches you, you’ll wish you were sent to Sundancer.’

* * *

It was another week of almost hellish torture before he was moved to what was referred to as the “Zero Wing” amongst the inmates. Solitary confinement. Except when the doors slid shut, it was anything but solitary. Almost a dozen people stood at attention.

‘Lieutenant, I’m glad you could join us,’ Admiral Alynna Nechayev said with a smile. As McNamara took his place with the others, she continued. ‘You have all been diverted here for a single purpose. Starfleet Intelligence believes that there is a new threat on the horizon but they do not have dedicated resources to deal with it. I, on the other hand, have all the resources in the galaxy to deal with this new threat. A small group of Cardassians are unhappy with the new democratic government and have decided that Obsidian Order should be resurrected. The Tal Shiar is assisting their resurrection and Klingon Imperial Intelligence already has operatives on point.’

‘We should let the Cardassians do whatever the hell they want,’ one of the other prisoners retorted, a Bajoran.

‘That bigotry ends here or you’ll be returned to your cell block, understood?’

The Bajoran nodded.

‘You will all undergo extensive training regimens and then some of you will be surgically altered to appear as Cardassian even under the most intensive scan. Once you have been safely ensconced on Cardassian soil, you will quietly infiltrate the Obsidian Order and destroy it from the inside. The rest of you will become Romulans and find out who is supplying the Cardassians with their ships and weapons. Any questions?’

‘Do we report their identities and take them out, or wait for extraction?’ McNamara asked.

‘Once you have identified those responsible, you can eliminate them, but only if you are one hundred and ten percent sure. The new Cardassian democracy is still young and too many of their politicians disappearing may send them back into their old ways. As for the Romulans, they will take care of their own. If you are caught you will be on your own.’

‘Story of my life,’ McNamara muttered.

‘Lieutenant, since you are the most senior officer here, you will be responsible for their training. I expect them to be ready in three months.’

McNamara looked stunned for the sum total of two seconds. ‘Yes ma’am.’

‘Your training will begin tomorrow at 0500, dismissed.’

* * *

McNamara hit his new bunk in Zero Wing with far more enthusiasm than he had any right to expect. Not only was he now part of an elite Intelligence unit under the aegis of the notorious Admiral Nechayev, but he was the leader of the team and would no doubt be sent to Cardassia. All that remained was his payback against Astar and the crew of the Dauntless, but the Cardassians or Romulans could be persuaded to assist with that. Payback was a transaction best planned to the nth degree, and he had plenty of time.
 
Just finished the first two vignettes. They were well written and provided good insight into the characters. I agree with CeJay and David that Talen got off a bit too lightly. However, I've got faith in your assertion that this is only the start and not the beginning for Talen and Darlin.

Also, love your Andorian names. I do a terrible job with them, the DS9 relaunch kind, and Jem'Hadar names. Dnoth also does good with Andorian names. How do you guys do it?
 
Finished the last two vignettes. You certainly deal with dark subject matter. I look forward to seeing how both Maxx's and McNamara's stories play out.

We might have to talk about the Cardassian backdrop. I have some ideas.
 
DarKush said:
Also, love your Andorian names. I do a terrible job with them, the DS9 relaunch kind, and Jem'Hadar names. Dnoth also does good with Andorian names. How do you guys do it?
The trick with Andorian names is look at the ones from the relaunch, Memory Beta should help with that list, and then play around with the vowels and consonents a little. If you feel you need a lot of help, I can come up with a few Andorian names for you.

Yes indeed, the dark matter will be dealt with in time. I'm not sure what I'm doing with McNamara yet, but you know Nechayev.
 
Never heard of that before, I assure you.

I chose the term "Zero Wing" because solitary doesn't officially exist at Redeye. First Wing, Second Wing, etc, so Zero Wing is solitary.
 
Very interesting vignettes! I must say, the emotions are running high among these characters - a lot of rage spilling out. I'm interested to see how these stories tie together.

Nice work!
 
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