The Great "DS9 5-world [sic] Story" Part 2

[Deranged Nasat]

of us, and our petty

 

[Thor Damar]

adherence to the truth. Damar

 

[Deranged Nasat]

could stop him, but there

 

[Thor Damar]

was the inconvenient fact that

 

[JustKate]

Garak maintained extensive files on

 

[Deranged Nasat]

that...unfortunate...kanar-smuggling business

 

[JustKate]

not to mention certain...irregularities

(Dueling ellipses?)

 

[Deranged Nasat]

...in the records relating to

(It may be the only way...)

 

[JustKate]

Damar's mother's cousin's...oatmeal biscuits

(You...may be right.)

(Changed from "cookies" to "biscuits" to make it sound more Britassian.)

 

[Deranged Nasat]

and their...troubling...secret ingredient.

 

[Thor Damar]

However Corat Damar was a

 

[JustKate]

leader who laughed at danger

(Since we're still talking about Britassians - I think - should I have said "biscuits"? "Oatmeal biscuits" just didn't sound...right. But I can change "cookies" to "biscuits" if it would sound more Britassian that way.)

 

[Thor Damar]

and had Chaos over for

(nah, oatmeal biscuits sounds wonderfully Birtassian to me!)

 

[JustKate]

tea. He was very hospitable

(OK, I've edited it. Don't want to lose my fluency in Brit-speak! Or at least Brit-write - I've got the vocabularly but not the right accent.)

 

[Vulcan Princess]

, but Thot Mog objected to

 

[Daneel]

his outfit. "Really, dahling, that

 

[Red Ranger]

armor simply is not slimming!"

 

[Daneel]

Taken aback, Damar replied, "But...

 

[Thor Damar]

I'm the Hero of Cardassia

 

[Red Ranger]

, and this is Cardassian styling!"