The Enterprise Incident Line-By-Line

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  1. Athena28

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    Hello, Welcome!

    We recently completed Twisted thread in the VOY forum!

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    Enterprise Medical Log, stardate 5027.3. Doctor Leonard McCoy recording. I'm concerned about Captain Kirk. He shows indications of increasing tension and emotional stress.

    [Bridge]

    CHEKOV: I have completed the assignment, Captain. A theoretical incursion into...
     
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    KIRK: "Yes, Mister Chekov. I can read, and as usual your theoretical evaluations do not tally with mine. Return to your duty and I'll let you know when your work is satisfactory."

    We'll be wanting this: http://www.chakoteya.net/StarTrek/59.htm
     
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    KIRK: Mister Spock. Full sensor scan of the region, please.
     
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    SPOCK: I did give a full report.
     
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    KIRK: Yes, Mister Spock, that was the past. I'm concerned with the present. Or is it becoming too much for this crew to present me current information?
     
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    SPOCK: "No, sir. Compliance presents no problem."
     
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    KIRK: "Then, Mister Spock, comply."
     
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    SPOCK: "Sensor scan to one half parsec. Negative, Captain."
     
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    Kirk: Very well.
     
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    (the entry in McCoy's medical log continues)

    MCCOY [OC]: I can find no reason for the captain's behavior, except possibly that we've been on patrol too long without relief and diversion. He has resisted all of my attempts to run a psychological profile on him.

    (Great pick, @Kertrats47!)
     
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    SULU: Maintaining course and speed, sir.
     
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    KIRK: Change course. Come about to 185 mark 3.
     
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    SULU: But, sir, that'll lead us directly into the Romulan Neutral Zone. :eek:
     
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    KIRK: Yes, very perceptive, Mister Sulu. I know where the course change takes us. Execute.
     
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    SULU: Aye, sir.
     
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    SPOCK: Increasing sensor scan to one parsec. All scanners report clear. Nothing in our immediate vicinity.
     
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    KIRK: Better and better, Mister Spock.
     
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    SULU: Captain, leaving Neutral Zone. Now entering Romulan space.
     
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    Scott enters the Bridge.)
    KIRK: Very well, Mister Sulu.

    (A/N: one of my favorites)
     
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