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Tales of the USS Bluefin: "Between the Hammer and the Sword"

That’s some powerful back-story for Inga with regards to her feelings on proselytized religion across cultures. Those tragic events have left a telling mark on her, one that we’re sure to see revisited in the mission ahead.

And Delta’s a cutie, I sure can’t fault Shelton for his taste in women! :drool:
 
Stardate 54655.9 (5 September 2377)

USS Bluefin
System NGC33981


Sickbay

“That’s a nasty burn, Lieutenant. You’re lucky that the nerves were spared or you’d be spending several hours with your hand in a regen-cuff. Fortunately, I can easily mend the tissue damage."

Lt. Shelton winced as Dr. Castille applied the dermal regenerator to his wound. It didn’t hurt exactly, but the ugly wound itched as the CMO slowly worked the instrument over the burn.

Castille sensed Shelton’s discomfiture and decided that conversation might distract him from the repair work. “How did you manage to do this, anyway?”

“Delta . . . that is, Commander Simms and I were reconfiguring some nav-buoys into early warning devices. I guess I got a bit careless and allowed a plasma conduit to short on the casing. Unfortunately, my hand was right there, so . . .”

The CMO paused a moment to gauge his progress. “Sounds like tedious work. Why were you making the modifications?”

“The Captain wants to know if any Klingon vessels arrive in-system after we leave. The buoys can’t do anything to stop an invasion, but at least they’ll provide us warning if they do show up.”

Castille adjusted the beam angle on the regenerator before resuming work on Shelton’s hand. “Seems like a far-fetched idea to me,” he murmured as he concentrated on his work. “The Klingons invading, I mean . . . not your modifications.”

Shelton grinned. “Yeah, I guess so. Still, an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.”

Castille snorted. “Now that’s an old expression. How old are you anyway, 400?”

The Lieutenant chuckled. “Not hardly. I just turned 35 last month.” Shelton paused a moment, considering. “Say Doctor, do you mind if I ask a question?”

“I think you just did.” He adjusted the beam again and glanced up. “Sorry. Sure – go ahead.”

“You know the officers pretty well, don’t you?”

“Yeah, generally speaking. Part of my job is to know how they’re doing physically.”

“How about socially?”

Castille frowned but continued his work. “I’m not following you.”

“Well, do you know if Commander Simms is seeing anyone?”

The CMO paused again, his attention still on his work. “You want to know if she’s in a relationship?”

“Yeah.”

Castille fiddled with the regenerator as his mind worked. Of course she is! She’s my . . . what? Face it Castille, you’ve never even asked her on a formal date. What right do you have to ‘claim’ her? On the other hand, if you don’t, Mr. Dark Curly Hair with brown eyes is liable to snatch her away from you.

The physician cleared his throat. “Lieutenant, that’s something you should probably ask her.” He made a few more passes with the regenerator before straightening.

“Flex your hand. Any pain?”

Shelton complied and grinned. “No – none at all. Thank you, Doctor!”

“Just take it easy with that hand for the next 48 hours. Don’t try to arm wrestle Senior Chief Brin or anything like that. If you experience any pain or numbness, come back and see me.”

Shelton nodded. “I will. And thanks again!” He strode happily from sickbay as Castille slumped against the wall and rubbed his eyes. He dropped his hands to see Corpsman Sanders looking at him from across the room. Sandy was shaking his head sadly.

“Sandy, were you eavesdropping?”

“Me? No sir, that would be rude. Wouldn’t even consider it.”

“Good.”

“So why the hell didn’t you just say you have a thing for Commander Simms?”

Castille sighed and let his head fall back against the cool bulkhead. “I wish I knew, Sandy.”

* * *

Stardate 54655.9 (5 September 2377)

Qo’noS (The Klingon Homeworld)
First City - Quarters of Chancelor Martok

Admiral Sto’Qun, Lord of the Klingon Intelligence Directorate, sidestepped the goblet of blood wine that hurtled toward him. The chalice shattered against the stone wall, leaving a dark crimson stain and shards of heavy glass on the gray wooden floor. He stood stoically, though alert for further missiles.

“No!” thundered High Chancellor Martok. “A thousand times, no! This is a fool’s errand, Sto’Qun and I refuse to sanction it.” He brought a gauntleted fist down on the table with such force that several other goblets crashed to the floor.

Sto’Qun quietly walked over to the table which the Chancellor had nearly upended with his tirade. He calmly retrieved the decanter of blood wine which sat precariously on the table edge and poured draughts into two of the surviving goblets. He handed one to Martok who still glared angrily with his remaining eye.

“If we do not,” said Sto’Qun with a dispassionate tone that would have made a Vulcan proud, “we not only allow the house of Q’orl to be dishonored and disenfranchised, but the very office of High Chancellor will be compromised. Your authority will be challenged, my friend, and we could face civil war again. I, for one, do not wish to see your head adorning the city gate.”

Martok lifted the second goblet as if to hurl it, but instead he brought it to his mouth, downing the contents in one savage gulp. He then hurled the empty goblet into the roaring firepit before sagging heavily into his chair.

“You are certain of this information?” his voice was low with resignation.

“I wasn’t . . . until we received this.” Sto’Qun placed a small holographic projector on the table.

Martok grunted. “So, did you bring holos of pretty green Orion women to entertain us?” he mocked.

The Admiral ignored the jibe. “Like you, when I was first contacted with this claim I was skeptical. It seemed too bizarre to be true. Even the Tal'Shiar could not come up with such a twisted scheme. But the evidence seems to bear out the truth of the claim.”

Sto’Qun activated the holo projector. The image shimmered and solidified into the form of a young Klingon male, though his manner of dress was decidedly strange. Martok scowl deepened.

“What is this?” his snarl held a dangerous note.

“This is the ju’kHut, that found the artifact after one of their frequent ground quakes. The youngster bragged of his find to one of his friends who happens to work for me. You might be interested to know we have several spies on H’rion.”

Martok’s brow knitted even more deeply. “For what purpose?”

A small smile crept briefly over the Admiral's normally stoic face. “We have spies everywhere, my Lord.” The smile evaporated. “At first, my agent did not believe the story until he saw the artifact with his own eyes. He was able to discreetly scan it without the half-blood's knowledge.”

The holographic image shifted to a view of a small, dark cylinder engraved with glyphs.

“The object is quite old - created several hundred years ago. The small scanners our field-agents use are not sophisticated enough for an exact determination. As you can see, the writing is both in the gH’lot dialect of high Klingonese and a formal dialect of Orion only used by ahmets or higher.”

“Words,” grunted Martok. “It means nothing.”

Sto’Qun made a twisting gesture with his hand. The holographic image rotated. A series of marks and lines twisted down the opposite side of the cylinder. “We analyzed these markings. They represent genetic coding.” He paused, “We took a sample from the ReQ’ti of Chancellor Q’orl and . . .”

“You what?” roared Martok. “How dare . . .”

“It was the only way to know for sure,” interrupted the Admiral, sharply. “The tissue from Q'orl's preserved heart matched the code on the artifact.”

The Chancellor of the Klingon Empire glowered at his Intelligence Chief. Sto’Qun knew that Martok was far more dangerous when he was quiet than when he blustered. The Humans had an expression - “an unsheathed saber makes no noise.”

Finally, Martok spoke. “Then simply take the artifact from the half-blood. Tell your spy to destroy it and shove his qhonDoq into the ju’kHut's neck to end this.

A pained expression crossed Sto’Qun’s face. “The artifact is hidden, my Lord, and made of such common material as to be impossible to locate by scanning. Also, the ju’kHut has already spread his tale to others.” He hesitated. “Lord Martok, if we have spies on that planet, it stands to reason that the Orions do as well.”

“You mean that Trien Sarnys has her spies there, don’t you?”

The Admiral gave a curt nod. “If she were to discover the truth . . .”

Martok snorted. Truth be told, he did not know what the Orion wench would do with such information. Of all the Orion clan leaders, she was an enigma to him. But he had no doubt that she would use such information to hurt the Empire if she could.

Still, there was a chance the Orions were not yet aware of this devastating secret. With so much riding on his decision, Martok could not afford to take half-measures.

“Wipe them out, Admiral,” he rumbled somberly. “Every living thing on that accursed rock. I don’t want anyone left alive who might reveal the truth. But I want it done quickly, before the Federation can react like they did at Fu’Puk II.”

“H’rion is tectonically active," mused Sto'Qun. "A single ship could strike certain fault lines and bring the mountains down on the population. We could send a cloaked battleship into the system to carry out the mission. It would appear to be a natural disaster.”

Martok stood and walked toward the balcony that overlooked the capitol city. It was dark but the towering pyres of the Council Hall shed enough light whereby he could see the ancient, imperial city. Not far away he could hear the sound of Klingon warriors singing a song of glory and conquest.

“And so we’re reduced to skulking around like the petaQ Romulans.” There was no rancor in his voice, only dry irony.

The Admiral walked up beside the Chancellor and gazed out over the city. “We do this to maintain honor for the house of Q'orl, my Lord, not to seek glory in battle.”

Martok snorted. “Honor,” he spat, derisively. He turned to regard the Intelligence Chief. “I am not of a noble blood line, Sto’Qun. Did you know that?”

The Admiral nodded. It was his business to know such things. Martok had risen from humble beginnings in the lowlands of Ketha Province. Though his family had served the empire faithfully for 15 generations, he was denied the chance to serve in the fleet as an officer by the Oversight Council. Yet even as a civilian, fortune smiled on Martok. He helped repel a Romulan attack while serving on a freighter. His demonstration of courage and skill finally earned him a field commission in the KDF and put him on a track of advancement.

“Yes, my Lord. I know of your history. You have nothing to prove to me - or to anyone else in the Empire.”

The Chancellor shook his craggy head and uttered a harsh bark of laughter. “And now we risk all to safeguard the storied ‘honor’ of a long-dead Chancellor.”

“It is necessary, Lord Martok. If the truth gets out . . .”

Martok remained silent as he gazed out over the city. Yes, if the truth were to be revealed it would be a disaster for the Empire and bring down his own reign as Chancellor. That did not bother him so much, but the thought of the resulting chaos made his liver churn.

If the truth that the legendary High Chancellor Q’orl had Orion blood was made known, it would turn the Empire upside-down.

* * *
 
I knew it. Klingon culture is utterly, totally without honor. Individual Klingons, as with individual Cardassians, can be OK. But if even Martok has become this corrupted, then Ezri is right: their empire deserves to die.

(As for Castille...what a painful and yet gentlemanly thing for him to do.)
 
I feel for Martok. Not everyone can 'stand against the wind' as it were. He has been put into a situation which he has little control. The corruption in the Empire was there long before him. I think he's just doing his best in a bad situation. However, I also believe he's not one to rock the boat...unfortunately.
 
Unfortunately, issues of ‘honor’ such as this, while completely baffling to an outsider, make sense from the Klingon cultural point of view. The reputation of a notable family would be tarnished, sewing political and economic chaos among the High Council as a noble house falls to ruin for nothing more than a few foreign chromosomes in a long-dead historical figure.

The only saving grace for the crew of Bluefin is that the KDF only intends to send a single ship to do the job. I’d hate to see the old cutter going up against an entire Klingon task force. Not that Akinola wouldn’t do it… he would… but man, it’d get uuuugly! :devil:
 
Wow, controversial decision right here. I'm perhaps a bit surprised that Martok would so quickly agree with the plan to obliterate an entire colony. I believe I understand the implications here but still, this seems to be an extreme measure for a Martok-led administration.

But of course we can debate this decision endlessly, what matters is that the Orions were partially right and Bluefin will have a battle on its hands. But if the Klingons are really as committed to this as they appear to be, this is going to get ... well, basically what Gibraltar said.
 
TLR,

I'm behind, but I just finished Chapter Two. Good start. Liked the backstory and the war games between Bluefin and the Klingon ship. Also, like the focus on the Orions and the Klingons. This is starting out to be a nice follow up to Dnoth's Klingon tale and would doubtlessly give me some ideas for the ongoing Klingon storyline I want to continue.
 
Nerys Ghemor - The Klingons (to me) are a complex lot, giving a verbal nod to honor, yet embracing a cold pragmatism that lifts empire and order above all else. Martok showed character as a general, but I think he's been swallowed up by his role as Chancellor, acting out of political expediency rather than character. Actions such as these certainly supports Ezri's disdain.

Dnoth - Like you, I think Martok is responding in the only way he knows. His actions, though contemptible, make sense to the Klingon mind-set. Sadly, he's missing an opportunity to be a statesman and come clean about the past.

Gibraltar - Yeah, the Klingons definitely view the universe differently than other races. Martok will lose less sleep over killing innocent victims than the fact they're going to sneak in and avoid confrontation with Starfleet. And no, I don't think one old cutter would have much chance against a whole battle fleet. :lol:

CeJay - Yeah, I may be taking a risk here, but I think the events at Fu'Puk already show that Martok isn't just going to sit by and play nice. I contend he was a better general than Chancellor, which is too bad, because he's missing an opportunity to lead the Klingons in a noble manner.

DarKush - Thanks for reading! I really enjoyed Dnoth's story about the Klingon invasion of Fu'Puk II. They're likely still licking their wounds from that. Dnoth left it clear that the High Council would not be in a good mood. This sets the stage whereby Martok feels he must follow a narrow course, lest the empire again fall into civil war. He has yet to consider the consequences if this covert action fails.

More to come soon!
 
In a lot of ways, I think maybe a major shake-up...though hopefully with less death than what the Cardassians got...would be what they would need to truly face their natures and find a more honorable way to be Klingon.

The death of Gorkon looks like even more of a tragedy in retrospect, because I think that he was the statesman you describe.
 
The death of Gorkon looks like even more of a tragedy in retrospect, because I think that he was the statesman you describe.
I agree, but I think Gorkon's idealism was only given voice because the Empire was at such a critical juncture after the destruction of Praxis and the possibility of their having to abandon Qo'noS.

The Empire at present, thought weakened by the Dominion War, is stronger than it has been in generations. The ranks of the military are now brimming with seasoned combat veterans who sharpened their teeth on the Jem'Hadar and Cardassians, men and women whose martial ambition now has no other outlet than further conquest on behalf of their species.

Couple that with a preoccupation with an antiquated honor code... and that spells trouble with a capital T.
 
Martok being expedient is perhaps not the honourable thing. It is however the way of politicians and leaders the world and universe over. The reasoning behind his decision seems arbitrary to us. But we aren't Klingons. I do wonder though at what the Orion motivation in all of this is. Complications arising swiftly and fastly. Likewise, among the crew. OC needs to face up to his feelings or Delta is going to slip away from him. Continued greatness here.
 
Your feel for Martok brought the actor to mind. The honor dilemma and Martok's solution ring true. I think Alexander must have been a Klingon...
 
Chapter Six

Stardate 54656.2 (6 September 2377)
The Planet Hri’on
SerenityValley

Sister Mary Grace, now adorned in traditional habit, paused outside the house of Elder Mezhdan. The building was modest, constructed of native stone and wood. A large Glembuk tree provided shade over much of the house, its large, green leaves hanging heavily from thick branches.

She walked up the stone path and cleared her throat. One did not knock on doors in either Klingon or Orion culture. These hybrid people preferred the more direct approach.

“Elder Mezhdan!” she shouted, “I would speak with you.”

For a moment, there was no response. Custom forbade a second shout – that would constitute a challenge and Sister Mary Grace had no desire to fight the 158 year-old Klinorian, even though she was pretty sure she could take him.

The heavy double-doors of the house opened and Mezhdan’s son, Krelt, appeared. He regarded the nun with a cold stare. The Elder’s son appeared to be a full-blood Klingon, though he was a mix like the rest of the locals. Apparently Krelt’s Klingon genes were dominate.

“Krelt, I wish to speak with your father,” said Sister Mary Grace, unperturbed by Krelt’s lack of warmth.

“The Elder is resting. Tell me your message and I will pass it along to him,” he responded curtly.

“My words are for Elder Mezhdan, Krelt. I would be grateful if you would let him know I am here.”

She had known Krelt since he was a young boy chasing glo-bugs in the fields. There was a time not too long ago he would have greeted her with a very Human-like hug. But something had changed in him as he reached young adulthood – he had become aloof, almost hostile in his demeanor. She had first passed it off as a temporary life stage, like adolescence in Humans. But time had not mellowed Krelt. His stare was icy cold.

But the Sisters of Mercy were not shrinking violets. She had faced hardship, loneliness and come close to death more than once in nearly 90 years of existence. She did not fear Krelt, but it saddened her that something had changed in the young Klinorian.

Glowering, Krelt took a step toward the nun in an obvious attempt to intimidate her. “I said . . .” he began in a low growl, but was interrupted by the appearance of Mezhdan in the doorway.

“Krelt!” Though Mezhdan’s jade-green skin was paper thin and festooned with a purple web of capillaries, his voice was still strong and commanding. The younger Klinorian stopped abruptly. Sister Mary Grace thought she caught a brief glimpse of shame on Krelt’s face.

“I informed the Sister you were resting,” Krelt explained in a petulant tone.

Mezhdan’s eyes narrowed. “And you disgraced yourself with your behavior. Leave us.”

Krelt seemed momentarily contrite but the contemptuous expression stole back across his face as he turned back to the nun. He nodded curtly. “Until we next meet, Sister.” His tone made it sound like a threat.

“Peace to you,” she replied calmly. She watched as Krelt skulked away back into the house. Mezhdan also watched his son while shaking his head.

“I apologize for his rudeness, Sister,” he said once the doors had closed. His voice now sounded thin and tired. “Please, won’t you sit with me a while?”

They made their way to a stone bench situated at the base of the Glembuk tree. A small multi-limbed reptile chittered at them before scurrying up the trunk in search of grubs.

The Elder moved slowly, favoring his right leg and leaning heavily on a polished wooden staff. He sat gingerly on the bench, alighting with a grunt and a sigh. Sister Mary Grace sat beside him and looked out over the fields of red grass. Soon the tall plants would be harvested for silage.

“What brings you to my house this day, Sister?”

“Elder Kiveln informed me you would not attend the gathering in honor of the Border Service officers.”

Mezhdan was quiet for a moment. “That is true.”

“Can you tell me why?”

“I had a dream, Sister. More, I will not say.”

“Elder, we have known one another for half a century. You can confide in me.”

He smiled and surprised her by reaching out a gnarled hand and taking one of hers. “I trust you as much as any Klinorion, Sister Mary Grace, probably more. But we see the universe in different ways, you and I. You faithfully follow your deity and I respect that. But you are not connected to this place as I am, Sister. It does not speak to you as it does to me.”

“Can you not tell me what you think you’re hearing?” she asked.

He shook his head. “Such messages are for the recipient alone. I cannot even share them with the other Elders, although truth be told, I believe they think me demented with age.” He tapped his ridged forehead for emphasis.

“But what has that to do with your refusal to meet with Captain Akinola and his officers?”

Mezhdan looked away. “It would be best for them not to come.”

“Elder, surely you don’t fear them?” she asked, gently.

He gazed ahead, out toward the fields of red grass. “No, Sister. I do not fear them. I fear for them.” He turned toward her. “And for you as well.”

* * *

Stardate 54656.2 (6 September 2377)
USS Bluefin
Standard Orbit over Hri’on

Captain’s Log – Supplemental: We have achieved standard orbit over Hri’on without incident. All of our system scans were negative, with no signs of any other vessels within range of our sensors. If the Klingons are planning any move against the Klinorions, it won’t be today.

I will shortly beam down to meet with the Klinorion Elders and Sister Mary Grace and apprise them of the possible dangers they face. However, with such a dearth of evidence, I doubt that they will be persuaded to take any precautions, much less evacuate the planet. I’ve asked Commander Strauss, Lt. Bane, Lt. Sarnek, Ensign Vashtee and Dr. Castille to accompany me. Perhaps we may discover some clue as to why the Klingons would be interested in this out-of-the-way planet. The problem is, I have no idea what that might be.

Akinola saved his log entry and stood, absently yanking at the waist of his dress uniform jacket. It was similar in cut to Starfleet’s dress uniform, with the uncomfortable high collar and excess of gold braid, differing only in its color – dark blue rather than white.

At least we don’t look like glorified waiters, he mused, wryly. He flicked a piece of lint from the jacket’s sleeve and exited the ready room.

On the main viewer, the ravaged surface of Hri’on slowly passed below them. Delta Simms was in the center seat. She turned as Akinola stepped onto the bridge and smiled.

“The Klinorion elders are ready to receive you whenever you’re ready, Captain,” she said.”

“Very well. Begin deploying the early-warning buoys and continue long-range scans. Notify me immediately of any incoming vessels – Klingon or otherwise.”

“Aye, sir, and may I say, you look quite snazzy in your dress duds, sir.”

“Sarcasm doesn’t suit you, Delta.” He turned and faced Ops. “Lt. Rune?”

The green Orion officer turned from her station. “Yes sir?”

“In addition to the system scans, I want you to begin scanning the planet also.”

She lifted a dark green eyebrow in surprise. “The planet? Anything in particular I should be looking for?”

A grimace formed on Akinola’s dark face. “I wish I knew. Be alert for anything out of the ordinary. Log any anomalies you come across”

Rune’s expression remained puzzled, but she replied, “Aye, sir.”

“The ship is yours Commander Simms. We should be ready to beam back in about four hours.”

“Yes sir. Good luck.”

Akinola stepped into the turbo-lift. “Deck six,” he barked as he absently reached behind his back to pat the small Type-I phaser hidden under his jacket.

* * *

“Stop squirming!” said Inga Strauss as she tried to fasten Nigel Bane’s uniform collar. She finally succeeded at connecting the fastener and stepped back, inspecting her handiwork.

Bane tugged at the collar. “I thought torture devices were banned in the Federation,” he groused.

“It will be more comfortable when you quit tugging at it,” she observed. “Honestly, Nigel, you’re not ten years old.”

“Too bad we’re not orbiting Betazed,” he replied with a roguish smirk. “I hear clothing’s optional when they host visiting dignitaries.” He winked for emphasis.

Inga felt her face redden. “Did you sleep through the diplomacy class at the Academy, Mr. Bane?” she asked, trying to restore some decorum to the conversation.

“Nah, I couldn’t sleep. The chairs in the lecture hall were too bloody hard. I worked on trigonometry problems instead.”

The doors to the transporter room slid open. Chief Deryx entered and took his customary place behind the control console.

“Good morning, sirs,” he said.

Bane and Strauss returned the greeting. “Hey Chief, you ever been to Betazed?” queried Bane.

“Lieutenant,” Strauss hissed icily. “Drop. It. Now.”

“What did I do?” he asked, with feigned innocence.

The Denobulan CPO merely smiled and shook his head as he activated the transporter’s targeting scanner. The doors slid open again, revealing Captain Akinola who was accompanied by Lt. Sarnek and Ensign Vashtee. The Captain moved directly to the transporter dais as did the other officers. He glanced around, annoyed.

“Where’s Castille?”

The doors slid open again to reveal a harried Chief Medical Officer. He was still attempting to fasten his collar.

“Glad you could join us, Doctor,” Akinola said coolly.

“I would have been here on time if I didn’t have to wear this damn strait-jacket. Whose idea was this, anyway?”

“Mine, actually,” replied the Captain. “The Klinorions are honoring us with one of their special gathering feasts. The least we could do is dress appropriately.”

“Appropriately? How the hell am I supposed to swallow in this thing?” complained Castille.

Akinola sighed. “You’ll figure it out, Doctor. Chief Deryx, beam us down please.”

* * *

The away team materialized in an open area near a tall, narrow building with a steeply pitched roof. A few Klinorions stood by in colorful robes and regarded the landing party with interest.

Akinola turned to the officers. “Smile, mingle and enjoy the food,” he directed. “After the official Gathering concludes, I’ll speak to the Elders. You’ll have time to explore afterwards – the locals are proud of this valley and will be happy to show you around. Sarnek, Maya, you have your tri-corders?”

They both answered in the affirmative.

The Captain nodded in approval. “Good. Take sensor readings, but be discreet. I’m interested in anything that might interest the Klingons, so let me know if you discover anything out of the ordinary.”

“Captain, those parameters are rather vague,” observed Sarnek.

“Yes," conceded Akinola, "they are. I’m sorry, Lieutenant, but this may all be a wild-goose chase.”

The Vulcan frowned. “I was not aware that feral Terran water fowl were present on this planet.”

Maya Vashtee patted his arm. “I’ll explain later, Sarnek. We’ll give the place a thorough check, Captain.”

Akinola chucked. “Thank you, Maya. Here come our hosts; remember to keep your elbows off the table, Mr. Bane.”

Nigel grinned. “Me? No worries, Skipper. If they throw in a few pints of Fosters, I can choke down anything they set on m’ plate.”

Inga sighed.

* * *

Stardate 54656.3 (6 September 2377)
Hui’kHun Shipyard
KlingonTerritory

The Hui’kHun Shipyard was listed by Starfleet Intelligence as “a minor repair and refit facility, primarily used by civilian and transport ships.” This was generally a correct assessment and the very reason that the Klingon High Command used it for development of experimental, highly-classified projects.

Nearly two dozen angular space-dock frames orbited a small, airless planetoid. On Stardate 54656, Starfleet long-range scanners would note that eleven of the docks were occupied with ships ranging from bulk freighters to a massive deuterium tanker. The operations appeared routine and quite ordinary.

For anyone observing up-close, say in a work bee, the activity would still appear quite mundane. Moving closer to the dock housing the deuterium tanker, one would see workers replacing one of the forward deflector arrays. The tanker itself was old, scarred and utterly unremarkable – merely one of a type vessel used by all the major powers that numbered in the thousands.

What the Federation’s long range scanners could not reveal, nor a flyby in a work bee uncover, was the fact that the deuterium tanker itself was a mere shell, serving as a cover for the work being done on the ship secreted inside its massive green hull.

Admiral Sto’Qun stood on a pressurized catwalk, taking in the sight of the up-rated K’tinga-class battleship that hung before him. The vessel had the classic shape common to Klingon dreadnoughts – crank wings connected to slab-shaped nacelles, a trapezoidal engineering hull linked to the bulbous command section by a tapering boom – but there, the similarities ended.

Instead of the standard Imperial green livery, the ship was covered in a matte black finish. The hull plates were unusual, both in their texture and purpose. Rather than providing physical protection for the crew, these plates served to confuse and defeat enemy sensors. In conjunction with the prototype next-generation cloaking device on board, the ship was virtually undetectable – even by other Imperial ships. The ship was capable of absorbing its own tachyon and ion emissions – the trails that allowed the Federation to pierce the older cloaking technology. Even more significant, this ship could fire its weapons while still cloaked.

There were trade-offs, of course. The new plating was not as robust as that of standard ships and the cloak did not work at warp speed – something to do with warp harmonics - a concept the Admiral did not pretend to understand. Most troubling was the massive power consumption required for the new cloaking device which meant the ship was slower at sub-light speeds and its weaponry carried less of a punch.

Still, for the Admiral’s purposes, the ship would do nicely.

“Admiral Sto’Qun!”

The Intelligence Chief turned to see the ship’s commanding officer approach. Captain Vuhj stopped and brought his fist to his chestplate. Sto’Qun straightened and returned the salute.

“You have read your orders?” asked the Admiral.

Vuhj nodded curtly. “Yes, my Lord.”

Sto’Qun regarded his subordinate carefully. “Do you have misgivings about the assignment?”

Vuhj’s eyes flashed. He brought himself up even straighter. “I live and die for the Empire!”

The Admiral nodded. “As do we all, Captain. I also know that such an assignment may seem unworthy for such a valiant warrior as yourself. You acquitted yourself well in the war, Captain Vuhj. And you have shown a remarkable ability to think clearly even when battle fever consumes you. Not all warriors have that ability.”

Vuhj gave a respectful nod. “SoH batlh jI”

“It is you who honor the Empire with your service, Captain. Believe me when I tell you – this mission is of the utmost importance. Your new ship and your crew will be standing for all of the Empire. Because of the need for secrecy, I regret that no songs will be sung, no blades forged to honor your success, but you will not be forgotten – neither by Chancellor Martok nor by me.”

Vuhj looked out over his ship. His face an impassive mask.

“Admiral . . . this new technology is untested. If something happens and we are discovered by Starfleet . . .”

“The planet must be obliterated, Captain – at all costs. Is that clear?”

Jlyaj! Perfectly, sir.”

Sto’Qun inclined his head slightly, accepting the Captain’s word. He had hand-picked Vuhj to command this ship, not knowing it would be needed so soon. He had chosen well.

He clapped the Captain on the shoulder with enough force to break the collarbone of a Human. “Qapla’, Captain, and to your crew. May fortune smile upon you.”

“Qapla’!” thundered Captain Vuhj in reply. He saluted and spun on his heel to prepare the IKS Kortar for her mission.

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Well, here's the good news. That new Klingon super stealth ship is not designed for combat and Bluefin may just be evenly matched with her. The bad news. They may never even see it coming.

I really liked those sequences on the Bluefin. Always my favorite simply because I enjoy you characters so much.

I like how your building the tension here. If this was a book, I sure wouldn't want to put it down now.

One other thing, I'm not an Aussie but I was always under the impression that they don't actually care for Fosters. That it's really just an export thing. But hey, a lot can change in 300 years.
 
Not only am I really enjoying the plot here, but I am very impressed with the little details your using. The lizard on the tree, for example. Very nice! :techman:
 
TLR I can just see it now, as the planet falls apart Sister Mary Grace and Mezhdan in an almost Obi-Wan vs Anakin duel! :guffaw:

As always, loving your work. Especially like the interaction between Inga and Nigel, good to see the couple-like bickering coming out.

I wait with baited breath for the next installment.

-Brydon
 
Catching up, yet again...

Great work as usual, Redshirt! To put in my 2 slips of latinum here: I think what me might be seeing with Martok is a classic theme--power corrupting. While starting out with the purest of motives, he's finding out that he's having to compromise here...give in a little to temptation there...let this thing over here slip...much like how Lex Luthor was portrayed in the early seasons of Smallville. All the while, Martok justifies and rationalizes his actions as being for the greater good or for the good of the Empire, or what have you. The line between hero and villain can be a thin one.
 
I love the interaction from Mezhdan and Sister Grace. The two are almost on opposite sides but have a respect for one another. No doubt formed by the harsh conditions both have had to endure on the planet and the efforts to make a go of things. But Mezhdan gets more enigmatic by the reading and the Sister more imposing by her gentle stature and resolute standing up against the Klingorion youth! She is brave. Then we have the riddle of the following:
Mezhdan looked away. “It would be best for them not to come.”

“Elder, surely you don’t fear them?” she asked, gently.

He gazed ahead, out toward the fields of red grass. “No, Sister. I do not fear them. I fear for them.” He turned toward her. “And for you as well.”
That is a scary development. It obviously screams OMINOUS! And given the revelation of the Klingon stealth ship there is good reason to fear what the outcome may be. Good reason.

And continued good reason to keep reading an enthralling story, with lots of great character moments [Inga and Nigel are priceless] and details about the Bluefin crew.
 
Great bit, TLR. Once again, you bring your people to life.

A stealth Klingon warship sounds like Starfleet's worst nightmare. I hope it doesn't become Bluefin's as well.
 
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