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Tales of the USS Bluefin - 8: "Stand-off!"

I'm just glad the terrorists are acting like terrorists and not the usual trek villains. Of course, I long for the day when Starfleet goes up against some enemy that won't waste any time talking.

Oh, and let me guess: you recently found out the name of the fish is Blue Fin and not Bluefin. Am I right? :D
 
There are few things more dangerous in the galaxy than pissed-off Marines

*whistles innocently while pulling limbs off terrorists*

The arm bone isn't connected to the chest bone...

Poor terrorists, lol, them is messing with the worng folks.
 
Methinks the Neo-Maquis failed to brush up on their "Die Hard" trilogy.:devil:

They took a couple of ex-Marines hostage and failed to identify them as such.

Bad terrorists-no cookie for you!:evil:
I'm just wondering who the cruise liner's chef really is! :lol:

Great stuff, especially with Akinola tearing down D'Angelo, and them building the man back up. It appeared to be something the young captain's needed for quite some time.
 
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Thanks for the comments, everyone! Regarding our eighty year old Marines - remember, Humans live a lot longer in the 24th century. This lovely couple is barely into their retirement years! They enjoy travel, collecting ceramic figurines, their two Corgis, and heavy weaponry.

I attribute my egregious mental lapse of calling the Bluefin the Blue Fin to the heat and humidity. I've gone back and edited it to Bluefin. Looks like I picked a bad day to stop sniffing glue. (With apologies to the late Lloyd Bridges).

We now return you to our feature presentation. :)
 
The unfortunate thing about all this (and forgive me for saying so), is I think the (Neo)-Maquis have legitimate gripes. It's says a lot that they've been driven to take this action.

Of course, for a Starfleet captain, their grievances are irrelevant to the situation at hand (and rightly so).

I don't see anyone 'winning' here.
 
The unfortunate thing about all this (and forgive me for saying so), is I think the (Neo)-Maquis have legitimate gripes. It's says a lot that they've been driven to take this action.

Of course, for a Starfleet captain, their grievances are irrelevant to the situation at hand (and rightly so).

I don't see anyone 'winning' here.
And if you'll recall, the original Maquis tried to be civilized, tried to limit casualties, and tried not to kill/injure Federation citizens. In the end, all their evolved sensibilities got them was butchered by the Cardassians and the Jem'Hadar. The new Maquis are a harder, meaner bunch, and have learned well the lessons of history.
 
The unfortunate thing about all this (and forgive me for saying so), is I think the (Neo)-Maquis have legitimate gripes. It's says a lot that they've been driven to take this action.

This isn't an edorsement for terroism, is it? No matter what their gripes may be, their actions are completley unjustified. You cannot go around and threaten and kill innocent civilians because you feel you've been wronged.

It's probably a discussion better suited for a different place but I never thought the Maquis had legitimate gripes. Yeah, it is sad that there was a need for a DMZ and whole star systems changed hands but so is fighting a war which would have cost countless lives. (Not that a much bigger war did not eventually materialize. Although for entirely different reasons.)
 
This isn't an edorsement for terroism, is it?

You're right this could lead to volumes of discussion, but I will say this real quick.

I simply said they have legitimate complaints. The root cause of their perceived injustice (the Federation 'abandoning' them to the Cardassians) would understandably upset them.

How they go about addressing those complaints (threaten and kill innocent civilians) cannot be justified. However, there will be a reason (at least a reason to them) behind it.

And as Gibraltar pointed out, this course of action wasn't their first choice. Their less drastic actions failed to get the desired results. At this point, their totally understandable concern has become a non-issue because their terrorist actions overshadow it. That to me, is the ironic and sad aspect to it.

You are correct, their tactics are completely unjustified and cannot be excused. So no, it isn't an endorsement for terrorism.
 
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Have missed quite a few installments so want to begin by saying WOW! A great dilema for all parties involved and I liked the description given of the Tzenki (or however it's spelt) they would be a whole heap of trouble but a rich source of stories but war with them is definitely not in the interests of the Federation.

D'Angelo is clawing back some respect but anticipating gralt's ideas is not enough - he will need to follow up with some actions. I hope he does because he stumbled at the fence early on.

The Neo-Maquis have lived up to their potential so far so I hope they continue to be ruthless and proper terrorists as it adds real drama a real threat to the situation.

Fantastic stuff so far - just wonder what complication are you going to throw in - because you always do
 
Finally catching up on all my reading after returning from vacation, and read this last night. Unfortunatley, I don't have anything new to add that hasn't already been said. Just very nicely done. I'm loving this story, every element of it. The whole sub-story with D'Angelo and the Sequoia, and Bouvier's agenda. But, my absolute favorite thing about this whole story so far is -- as mentioned above -- bad guys who are actually acting like true bad guys. As always, I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take us on the rest of this adventure. :techman:
 
Thanks, all! Sorry for the delay in posting the next chapter. Vacation and some Real Life issues have cut into my writing time. I hope to have the next chapter up this week.
 
Chapter Eleven

Stardate 54246.3 (2 April 2377)
USS Bluefin
Sector 04340 - Warp 9.0


Lt. Commander Delta Simms entered the ward room, seeking the replicator and a glass of iced tea. She was pleasantly surprised to see Dr. Castille seated at the long table, but she hesitated when she saw the dour look on his face.

“O.C.? Are you okay?” she asked, concern in her soft voice.

Castille looked up. “Hmm? Oh, hi Delta. No . . . nothing’s wrong.”

The auburn-haired second officer walked to the replicator. “Tea – Daddy’s blend, Simms Oh-441.” A tall glass of tea over crushed ice shimmered into existence, a wedge of lemon floating on top.

Delta retrieved the glass of tea and sat across from the CMO. Castille looked distracted.

“Nothing’s wrong, huh?” she said before taking a sip of the cold, sweet beverage.

“No . . . Yes! . . . Damn.” Castille fidgeted in his chair. Finally, he leaned forward and spoke in a conspiratorial tone.

“Did you know that Starfleet is sending the Resolute to destroy the Queen Elizabeth if we can’t stop her?”

Delta took another sip of tea and set the glass down carefully on the table. She regarded him with her lovely hazel eyes. She nodded.

“Yes, I was aware of that.”

“And you’re okay with that?” he asked, incredulous.

She placed a hand over his tightly clasped hands. “With what? Destroying the QE, or having a contingency plan to prevent war with the Tzen-kethi?”

He huffed out a breath in frustration. “For God’s sake, Delta! The people on that star liner aren’t pawns! We have no right to treat them as such.”

“Nobody wants to see those people hurt or killed, O.C. You should know that! But at the same time, we can’t afford war with the Tzen-kethi. Starfleet is still hurting from the Dominion war, and we just lost several more ships and thousands of people in the Talarian incursion. And now there’s news that five more ships have been lost en route to the Velkamis system!”

“That doesn’t justify murdering civilians!” growled Castille, obstinately.

Delta sighed. “Look. Here’s the harsh truth: If that liner crosses into Tzen-kethi space, we’re effectively at war. All the explanations and all the diplomatic overtures in the galaxy won’t prevent it. And in our weakened state, the Tzen-kethi will pose a very real threat to us. It won’t be like the last time we fought when we had superior technological and strategic advantage. This time, the playing field will be just about even. In that case, we could be looking at casualties in the hundreds of thousands, perhaps millions! There’s a very real possibility we might not be able to win such a war.”

Castille grimaced. “Okay, okay, I see your point. But, dammit! I didn’t sign on to kill people, I signed on to help them!”

She reached over and placed her hand against his cheek. Her palm felt cool and soothing on his hot skin. She smiled.

“I guess that’s what I like most about you, Doc – you give a damn.”

“And I thought it was my dashing good looks,” he groused, but a shadow of a smile formed on his lips.

She stood and leaned over, kissing him on top of his balding head. “Well that too, of course." She straightened and favored him with a weary smile. "I’ll see you later – I’ve got to catch a few hours of sleep before all hell breaks loose.”

* * *

Inga Strauss sat in the command chair, effectively alone with her thoughts. The bridge lights were dimmed and the subdued red caste of the combat lighting gave the ship’s control center a somber hue.

She sat with her legs crossed, a now cold cup of coffee in her hands as she gazed at the luxurious star liner they paced, a few thousand kilometers off their port bow. She wondered about the passengers, how they were holding up under the stress. Surely many had seen the bodies of their dead shipmates drifting alongside. What a horrible spectacle that must have been for them.

She also wondered about the circumstances that placed the passengers on the Queen Elizabeth. Probably for many, this trip was a long-time dream, the culmination of years of saving and scrimping. Some might be on their honeymoon. Others, enjoying a retirement cruise. Perhaps some were traveling to visit family and friends.

One thing she knew for certain. The dream had turned into a nightmare.

“Commander?”

Inga blinked, and turned toward Nigel Bane. Their eyes locked, allowing a fleeting moment of intimate communication. She smiled at the handsome Australian lieutenant.

“Yes, Mr. Bane?”

“I’m picking up three contacts on long-range sensors – heading our way.”

“Bearing and speed?”

“190 mark 88, speed – warp 8. On their current course, they should intercept us in about ninety minutes.”

Strauss frowned, her reverie completely forgotten. “Can you determine their origin?”

He shook his head apologetically. “Not with any degree of certainty. However, they are coming from the general direction of Cardassian space.”

A small alarm went off in Inga’s head. “I need you to identify those ships for me, Lieutenant - now.”

“They’re running without ident transponders – that’s how they got so close before we picked them up. I estimate it will take another half hour before I can give you an ID. But they’re running in formation and heading straight for us.”

“And that’s no coincidence,” replied Strauss. She tapped her com-badge. “Captain to the bridge!”

Momentarily, she heard a sleepy reply. “Akinola here. What’s up, Commander?”

“We have three unidentified in-bound vessels on an intercept course. Estimated time of arrival is ninety minutes.”

“I’m on my way, Akinola – out.”

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Stardate 54246.3 (2 April 2377)
SS Queen Elizabeth VII
Sector 04340 - Warp 9.0


Kenda Byress looked at the chronometer adjacent to the helm console and smiled. He turned to regard the haggard face of Captain Lumford.

“Do you enjoy the theatre, Captain Lumford?”

The white-haired captain frowned in puzzlement. “What? What the bloody hell does that have to do with anything?”

“Just making conversation. Of course, we didn’t have much time for entertainment on Bajor when I was growing up. And what drama we had was unbearably heavy with religious overtones. But when I spent time on Earth, I had the chance to attend several plays, including one on Broadway in New York.” He smiled at the memory. “I have to admit, you Humans are rich in the performing arts.”

Lumford remained quiet, glaring at the Bajoran terrorist.

Kenda was unfazed by the Captain’s stubborn silence. “I particularly enjoyed the symmetry of theatre – how the various scenes and acts came together to make up a whole. I found a certain . . .” he gestured in the air, seeking the right word, “elegance to the progression of those plays. The plot moved along until it reached its denouement – the final resolution. The story hinged on that point, you see.”

He stood, suddenly, and walked over to the operations console. He scrolled through various readouts, finally stopping and gazing intently at one particular screen. A feral smile crept across his face.

“It would seem, my dear Captain, that our own little play is nearing its final resolution. Only one or two scenes remain to be played out.” He turned, beaming at Lumford. “Perhaps you’ll win an award for your supporting role!”

“Go frak yourself, you preening gint!” shouted Lumford, his face bright red with rage.

Kenda threw back his head and laughed. “Oh my, Captain! How thin is the veil of your civility!” He suddenly sobered, his expression growing hard and menacing. “Just like the thin veil of civility that our precious Federation and Starfleet has hidden behind for so long.”

He walked quickly toward the old Captain, thrusting his face in close enough for Lumford to smell the Raktajino on the Bajoran’s breath.

“The veil is about to be ripped away, my dear Captain Lumford. Ripped away and shredded. Soon, the entire quadrant will know how uncivilized our Federation can really be!”

* * *
 
Looks like the Maquis have a few more aces up their sleeves. Some good character work here with Castillo seeming to symbolize the idealistic Federation. Very nice.
 
So our terrrorist's endgame seems to be embarrass the Federation. Phew, that's much better than killing thousands of innocents or dragging the entire quadrant into war. Unless of course THAT's how they are trying to embarrass the Federation.

I don't like Kenda, he's way too confident in his plan. One can only hope it's over-confidence.
 
So our terrrorist's endgame seems to be embarrass the Federation. Phew, that's much better than killing thousands of innocents or dragging the entire quadrant into war. Unless of course THAT's how they are trying to embarrass the Federation.

I don't like Kenda, he's way too confident in his plan. One can only hope it's over-confidence.
I'm not sure it is overconfidence. If those ships are Cardassian, and they are running in formation, then it is entirely possible that the neo-Maquis have them, will blow up the QEVII and show the galaxy that the Federation couldn't do its own dirty work, or couldn't face war and killed almost 3000 people.

Whatever happens, I think the Federation will end up looking bad, which will Satie more supporters.
 
So far for the Neo-Maquis they appear to have a win-win situation going for them. If the QE gets to Tzenki space it will cause a war and weaken/destroy the Federation - which appears to be part of their desire. Failing that the Federation's hand is forced and they have to destroy the liner and prove to the Neo-Maquis supporters of the cold hearted nature of the Federation.

The question is whether or not these mystery ships are part of the plan. I can't see how but for sure i don't think we are anywhere near the denouement Kenda thinks.

Terrific stuff and it is going to be interesting to see if the Bluefin and D'Angelo's crew too can step up to the challenge presented.
 
It would be interesting if those were Cardassian commandos come to help out the Federation as a gesture of goodwill. So why do I doubt it? My guess is that they are going to engage the Bluefin long enough for the terrorists to lock the engines and steering into place, then evacuate the bad guys. The Federation will be forced to destroy the liner-and they won't even be able to say they killed the people responsible...
 
Honestly, I don't see how this could have a good ending...at least not for the Federation or Starfleet.
 
Plans within plans. Perhaps the isn't the Maquis suicide mission that it first appeared to be. Nonetheless, they're clearly willing to sacrifice the cruise liners passengers and crew to make their point. I think we've only had a taste of the ugliness to come.

I think we're talking Joker-level mayhem and tragedy... with a Solly Brin response. :klingon:
 
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