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Star Trek: Their Finest Hour

Episode Four: Sweeps

Wiping the small crumbs of toast from her mouth, Chief Petty Officer Lomi Price stood up, took a last gulp of the watered-down orange juice and made her way out of Abukuma’s forward mess deck. Getting in to the cramped dining area had been far easier, she noted, as she tried to cut through the crewmembers entering for breakfast. Drawn by the scent of frying bacon and fresh coffee, most of them were still groggy, waking up before their watch-keeping shifts began.

Which, she observed with a overwhelming sense of relief as she finally navigated her way through the octagonal hatchway, means that mine is officially ending soon. No sooner had the thought crossed her mind than a small twang of pain shot up the small of her back. She grimaced and massaged the offending muscles as she made the short trek from the now-crowded mess deck back to her mid-watch duty station as Senior Operator in the sensor control center. Arriving there, she stopped outside the hatch, which unlike most other hatches aboard the light cruiser was secured by a retinal scanner. A small sigh escaped her lips as steeled herself at the hatch and straightened her uniform.

“Fifteen hours down,” she muttered as she leaned forward, allowing the scanner to shine a low-power laser into her eyes. The sensor’s display illuminated with a scan of her retina before flashing the words “Access Granted” over the image. “One more to go,” she sighed, taking the cold steel handle in her hand and swinging the heavy hatch aside.

Normally, watches aboard Abukuma, and the rest of the fleet were six hours long, with each day subdivided into four watches. But, cuts to the fleet’s budget had resulted in fewer crewmembers aboard each ship, and cutting the number of qualified Senior Operators from four to three. Regulations stated that a Senior Operator had to be on duty at all times aboard any ship underway, and so the three remaining operators aboard Abukuma divided the day into thirds. The plan worked, until McMillen came down with appendicitis last week. Now they were down to two, and alternating sixteen hour days. Today was Price’s turn, and thank god it was almost over, she thought with a slight grin as she stepped into the
control room and was bathed in faint bluish lights.

Blinking to try and adjust to the dimly lit control room, Price made her way toward her console. The room was set up like an auditorium, with a large display at the front displaying readouts from various sensors from throughout the ship. Beyond the display sat tiered rows of computer consoles, each manned by a crew member at all times. Price’s Senior Operator position was on the top row, next to the Watch Officer, currently Ensign Devereaux. She oversaw the smooth running of the sensor team, and reported to the Sensor Officer up on the cruiser’s bridge. Of course, Price thought as she sat down and adjust her headset, usually the officer’s job was get out of the damn way and try not to push any of the shiny buttons.

“Ok, boys and girls,” Price said into her headset as she scrolled though steams of sensor readouts. “I’m back. Oh, and in case you are curious, breakfast today is coffee or orange juice, some rather stale toast, powdered eggs, and bacon-like substance. I recommend skipping the chow and just getting rack time after your shift is up.” A chorus of groans filled the chamber at the news of what awaited them in the chow lines. “Now, does anyone have something for me to look at? Or, are we just cataloging debris and gaseous anomalies?”

“…If we are recording gaseous anomalies,” one of the sensor technicians queried from below, “we better add Kendricks?” Laughter rang out, filling the room. Out of the corner of her eye, Price even saw Ensign Devereaux double over with laughter. The room was in good spirits, she noted.

That was a good thing for the crew. All of them had been wound tightly as the convoy crossed into this new sector. In the last six months, ten ships had been attacked on this same run to these outer colonies, and everyone aboard the cruiser knew it. Price knew all too well that tension was a corrosive thing to the crew. It made them sloppy, wore them out, and ultimately could mean the difference between life and death. Humor, in moderation, could keep them relaxed and possibly alive. The crackle of someone coming on to the headset channel brought Price’s attention back to her the readouts on her screen.

“Senior,” the young, unconfident male voice of Seaman Brandt said. “I’ve got something weird over here.” Price perked up and input a series of commands into her computer. The reports were replaced by a twin image of what Brandt’s computer was showing several rows ahead. To Price’s left, Ensign Devereaux strode over to peer over the Chief Petty Officer’s shoulder.

“Alright,” Price said into the headset. “What am I looking at here?” Down below, she saw Brandt’s young face turn to face her. He blushed slightly as he became aware of the twenty-nine other faces staring at him.

“The neutrino readings,” he said, slightly embarrassed. “I was checking the particle sensors, you know, for sub-atomic particles and indications of gaseous anomalies when I saw it…” Price rolled her eyes, and ran a hand through her graying hair. Get to the point, she thought.

“I don’t like playing games, sailor.” She said exasperated. “Saw what?”

“It’s a spike. A really weird spike in neutrino density, like there are more particles than there should be.”

“Did you run it through the SPS,” Devereaux asked. The Sensor Processing System was a relatively new addition to the Abukuma. Designed to reduce the manpower requirements to operate a starship’s sensor systems, the program scanned the data, ran it through a series of advanced algorithms and provided a “best guess” estimate of the input, based on statistical evidence. The new generation of starship crews, like Ensign Marie Devereaux, possessed far greater faith in the latest and greatest technological marvels like SPS. However, a veteran sensor operator like Price did not trust any new system that removed the human gut intuition from the equation.

“Yes ma’am,” Brant replied. “SPS says it’s just an abnormal discharge from Abukuma.”

“Then that’s all it is,” Devereaux snipped. “Nothing to worry about.”

Brandt shook his head in disagreement. “I thought so, but since Chief Price says to double-check the SPS, I kept looking into it and ran the data through a time comparison.” Brandt punched a command on his console, and transferred his data to the main display. A waterfall display, the image showed the density of neutrino particles over a five-minute segment of time. To the far left, at plus-zero seconds, the display was solid green, and steadily faded to black at the other end of the time scale. “This is our baseline, from when we took over the watch this morning at 0400,” Bryant explained. “Note that the particles per million fades out over time -- a result of our impulse engines getting further away from this point in space.”

The screen dissolved to a new waterfall display. “This is from five minutes ago,” Brandt explained. Like the previous display, the image was solid green at the far left, fading to black as it shifted to the right. But, unlike the previous sensor record, two-thirds of the way across the time line, it again showed a solid green mass. “See, the density spikes way outside normal parameters, and it’s not dissipating. Even if SPS was right, even if it is some discharge from our engines, it should still dissipate over time,” Brandt pointed out. “Except, whatever that is, is not dissipating at the same rate as the rest of the particles.”

Devereaux’s face twisted in confusion. “I’ve never heard of any phenomena that can just increase neutrino emissions,” she said to Price. “I thought they were solely a man-made occurrence, right?” The ensign’s query went unanswered, causing her to shoot an annoyed glance at the Chief Petty Officer. Price never saw the look, and even had she noticed, she would not have cared, not while her fingers flew across her keyboard. Her hand stabbed out at another control panel. Pulling the boom microphone of her headset closer to her mouth, Price’s grandmotherly voice was suddenly cold and commanding.

“Bridge, Sensor,” she said in a tone that demanded attention. “New contact -- bearing one-eight-zero degrees, mark-plus-one-five. --Range, 1500 -- Designate contact Sierra-One-Nine.”
 
OK what is this? The stone-age?

A whole room with people tasked to monitor sensors? Enlisted personnel smarter than the officers? A computer which doesn't get things right?

Gritty, hands-on kinda stuff. I like it!
 
I love your writing style and your characters! - you made a nice segue from normal ship-board routine to something that pushed the Chief's button. Nice reminder, too, that while the officers may be in charge, the non-coms actually run things. ;)
 
I think using the trailer music for the new Trek movie is a great fit for your story. Love that music - it's epic, inspiring and emotional. All of which are things your story aims for and to achieves for me. :techman: Indeed the spoken lines also dovetail to your story.
Also worth pointing out the written bi-lines Love this:
Mankind's First Trek
Into the Universe
May be its Last
Neat use of different materials/clips that fit the technology you utilise in your story and the characters get to grips with. I like this very much.
But more importantly, when is the next story segment coming? :evil:
 
EPISODE FIVE: The Hunter ...

“All ahead one-third,” Commander Carmichael ordered as he massaged his face in a vain effort to shake the sense of exhaustion that racked his body.

“All ahead one-third, aye,” the helmsman of the watch responded, punching the commands into the helm. A moment later, main engineering responded, and the ship’s annunciatior shifted down from the Ahead Full setting. “Engineering answers,” the helmsman announced. “All ahead one-third.”

“Very well,” Carmichael responded, his attention now focused on the plotting board.

The Abukuma slowed, coming off another high-speed sprint to commence another drift maneuver, and allowing the cruiser’s sensors to sweep for unidentified contacts, like the one that appeared two days before. Carmichael collapsed back down into the command chair, reviewing the latest dispatches; he rubbed his eyes in an attempt to stay awake. Three consecutive days on alert had done their toll and the fatigue was amongst the crew. Like Carmichael, the rest of the bridge crew was doing the same as him: drinking vast amounts of coffee, and straining to stay awake.

“Bridge,” called the anxious voice of Ensign Devereaux. “New contact, off the port bow, close aboard.” Carmichael spun his chair around in time to see the new red circle emerge with a phosphorescing glow on the plotting board.

“Battle stations,” Carmichael ordered. The alarm gong went off a second later, and once again, the weary men and women of the cruiser ran to their posts. Carmichael turned to the plotting board as Captain Nagumo, a study in confidence, strode on to the cramped bridge and joined Carmichael at the plotting board. The captain stood serenely, his arms clasped across his chest, as behind him crewmembers raced to their stations.

If Nagumo reflected a sense of calm confidence, the animated woman behind him reflected the panic that coursed through the veins of Abukuma’s crew. Nagumo, nonplused by the arrival of the anxious red-haired lieutenant, simply turned to face Carmichael, his executive officer, his face remaining as serene as the koi ponds that he had watched as a young boy at the Imperial Palace in Tokyo.

“Mister Ostrowski,” Nagumo said, rubbing his stubbled chin as he spoke. “If you would be so good as to take the Conn, please.” Ostrowski, still a blur of red hair and navy blue uniform, spun around and gave the captain a quick, cursory nod before barking maneuvering orders to the bridge crew and checking the status board that Carmichael thrust impatiently into her hands.

“Sir,” she proclaimed, her voice cracking slightly under the stress of the situation. “Ship is at battle stations; all posts are manned and ready. War shots are loaded in all missile tubes, and main battery is locked and loaded.” For the first time since arriving on the bridge Nagumo looked up from the plotting board, and the newly charted red circle that indicated a hostile contact.

“XO,” he said, still calm and collected. “I believe it’s time for us to head to CIC. Why don’t you head below and coordinate with the rest of the convoy. I’ll be along shortly.” Carmichael nodded, rose smartly from the command chair and strode quickly to the hatch that lead below as Nagumo turned his attention to Ostrowski and gave her instructions for handling the ship.

* * *

The Abukuma’s active sensors let loose a barrage of ranging ‘pings’ towards the contact as Carmichael took his position in the cruiser’s Combat Information Center. Despite the massive amount of electron flung from panels along the ship’s hull, the displays remained blissfully blank.

“Passive sensor contact, evaluate as possible ship-sized contact, bearing zero-one-three, mark one-five,” announced Chief Price over the intercom. “Neutrino readings same as before, sounds like another of our intruders.”

“I’ve got nothing on the active sweeps,” the active sensor operator replied to the disembodied voice, frustration seeping from his terse answer.

Carmichael and Abukuma’s tactical officer examined the conditions display, a constantly updating catalog of the characteristics of the space surrounding the warship. There was a slight increase in hydrogen gases. But, the ship was below the hydrogen pocket, and the passive sensors could be detecting a contact that the active sensors could not acquire. However, Carmichael noted, this new target made the fifth such mystery contact, each coming from different bearings and azimuths.

“Anything, XO?” Nagumo asked as he stepped into the darkened CIC. Carmichael shook his head in a mix of exhaustion and frustration.

“No sir,” he answered. “If it is another ship, he has had plenty of time to analyze our tactics and could anticipate every move we make.” Nagumo nodded.

“Almost every move, Commander, except this one. “ ” the captain replied, his voice still unchanged as he handed Carmichael a PADD. Reading the message, Carmichael stared at the yellow-orange characters shining brilliantly in the blue-tinted darkness of the CIC. Shaking his head in disbelief, he reread the message, his mind still unable to comprehend the meaning.

TO: CMDR, USS ABUKUMA
FRM: 2 ND FLEET CMD
SUBJ: CONTACT REPORTS

GIVEN SITUATION, AND STRATEGIC IMPORTANCE OF CONVOY TO UNITED EARTH GOVERNING BODY. USS ABUKUMA, ACCOMPANYING ESCORTS ORDERED TO FIX POSITION OF UNKNOWN CONTACTS. SAFEGUARDING OF CONVOY PARAMOUNT. REMOVE UNKNOWN THREAT BY ANY MEANS AVAILABLE. USS ABUKUMA AND DESTROYER SQUADRON HEREBY ORDERED TO ELIMINATE CONTACTS. USE OF TACTICAL WEAPON SYSTEMS AUTHORIZED

S/ ADM. V.H. KEYES, CMDR UNITED EARTH 2 ND FLEET

“Are they serious,” Carmichael asked incredulously as he looked into the captains face for a reaction. He found none. Captain Nagumo simply nodded, and took back the PADD from his executive officer’s hands. For the first time since Chief Price made the initial contact, a sense of dread filled Carmichael. He swallowed it back and turned to the tactical officer.

“Weaps,” Carmichael said, hoping his voice sounded more confident than he truly felt. “Ready port-side missile tubes, salvo fire. Set target for Master two-five, and double check the safeties. I don’t want those damned things coming back at us. Stand-by to commence firing at my command. Sensors, range to target?” Focused still on the red blip on the tactical display, Carmichael’s eyes narrowed.

“Hard to determine, range is less than 15,000 kilometers,” the sensor tech called out, his eyes locked on his computer display. “But he is more than 5,000 out. If that’s another ship out there, he’s damned good--” The technician stopped abruptly, adjust his set and sat up right.

“Wait a minute, we got him. Bearing zero-one-five,” his voice raised an octave as he announced the new sensor data. "This is definitely a ship. Designate Master two-five as definite contact.” With a grin, the tech turned to face Nagumo and Carmichael. “He just increased power; we picked up a huge radiation surge from it.”

“Sensors,” Nagumo said into Abukuma’s intercom system. “This is the captain. What have you got for me, Chief?” Price’s naturally raspy voice filled the cramped confines of the CIC.

“We got him dead to rights. Target just kicked his engines up, and we picked up the radiation spike. Probably a single-impulse engine contact, bearing is changing rapidly from port to starboard. It’s a hard contact, but still no metallurgical contact, no visuals.”

Nagumo wanted to maneuver, but fought the urge. A radical turn could blind the Abukuma’s sensors to the elusive contact, losing the contact for what could be several critical minutes.

“Bearing to contact now zero-one-five and holding steady,” the technician announced. “Emission level has dropped somewhat.” The operator pointed to the screen, highlighting the new change for Nagumo and Carmichael as they peered over his shoulder. The two officers exchanged a silent conversation in a glance, concluding with a simple terse nod from Commander Carmichael.

“On the 1MC,” Nagumo said quietly, as Carmichael patched the intercom to every compartment aboard the cruiser. “All hands,” the captain said, his calmness audibly reflecting in his voice. “This is the Captain. For the last few days, this ship and the convoy we have been charged with protecting have encountered numerous unidentified contacts. We have encountered another one today, and currently have a solid fix on its position.

“I do not need to emphasize to you the importance of this convoy to the colonists along the edge of United Earth space, nor should I need to remind you of the acts of piracy that have resulted in the loss of numerous ships in this sector over the past few months. I will instead remind you that, as a result of those actions, nearly 10,000 settlers were killed aboard their transport ships, and many thousands more have been dying of starvation, a direct result of these attacks.

“It is clear to me that these acts of piracy represent a clear and present danger to people of the United Earth and her affiliated colonies. Less than an hour ago, we received word that the Admiralty agrees with this assessment and has ordered this ship to eliminate the pirate threat by any and all means necessary. It is my intention to carry out those orders by destroying the unidentified ship that appears to have been trailing us for the last few days.

“All hands,” Nagumo said, making eye contact with every crew member in the CIC. “See to your duties, your nation can expect no more of you, and you should not desire to do any less.” With a swift jab, Nagumo switched off the intercom, and turned to face his tactical officer.

“Weapons Control,” he barked, his voice transitioning from calmness to steely determination. “Train out the port-side launcher, update your targeting data, and fire at my signal.“
 
Most excellent! I hope the next installment comes soon. The Captain is a cool one, isn't he? Like that-setting the tone for the others is important.
 
I'm still enjoying this story.

At the same time I feel a bit anxious as we already know the fate of the Abukuma. To be perfectly honest at this point I'm really curious to find out what happens after her destruction.

Of course you might be on your way here to establish important elemets of this mysterious threat and the surviving characters.
 
That's a good point there, CeJay. And I promise this next part will be the last that focuses on Abukuma, although the impact of her loss is a major factor in what occurs from here on out.
 
EPISODE SIX: ...And The Hunted

“Holy shit!” The sudden cry from the sensor technician in front of Nagumo demanded the attention of everyone in CIC. The captain wheeled to face the source of the expression as the technician, regaining his composure, expounded on his initial observation. “New contact, starboard bow!”

Carmichael shook his head in confusion and leaned in to see the display. “Visual contact,” the operator exclaimed as metallurgical data on their elusive contact began scrolling across his computer display. “Putting it on screen.”

“That’s the wrong place,” Carmichael exclaimed. As he checked the screen, the executive officer’s eyes widened and he looked up at Nagumo. “Unless we’ve been tracking a decoy…”

Nagumo’s mask of calmness shattered in an instant, and the serene pool that had been his face boiled red as he stared at the image on the CIC’s main display. It was a ship, that much was evident in its overall structure. The craft was small with a broad, thin hull. The angular bridge appeared to have been mounted atop the contoured hull as an afterthought. From either side of the hull, narrow wing-like structures angled gently upwards before ending in a pair of cylindrical warp engines.

“What the hell sort of ship is that,” Carmichael asked rhetorically, as he forced himself to no longer be transfixed by the first glimpse of their elusive prey. Quickly, he ran the image against the Abukuma’s database of known ship profiles. “No matches,” Carmichael said aloud. “Whatever that thing is, it must be some new –“

“CIC, Sensors,” Price’s voice, filled with alarm, broke through the eerie silence of the CIC. “We’re detecting an unusual energy surge from the bow of that ship. It’s nothing we’ve ever seen before; it’s literally off-the-charts. I think it’s a weapon system of some kind. Captain, I … they’re firing… it’s some kind of energy … plasma.” As if on cue, the bow of the mysterious ship glowed with red plasma.

“Bridge, all ahead flank,” Nagumo barked into the intercom. “Return fire.” Somehow the contact had evaded the sensors, popped up one side of the cruiser, deployed a decoy drone, and emerged on the other side catching the Abukuma in a perfect broadside. “Launch emergency countermeasures.”

Instantly, the weapons officer ordered the launch of a salvo of missiles at the contact. The missiles flew down the opposite bearing of the red ball of plasma energy in hopes of inflicting some measure of revenge upon Abukuma’s attacker.

On the bridge, Lieutenant Ostrowski rose out of the command chair, her red hair spilling down into her face. Somehow, the enemy ship had managed to break contact with the Abukuma, and maneuvered into a perfect firing position. The recent Academy graduate could not help but admire the brilliance of her opponent’s maneuver, even as she attempted to change the cruiser’s course and speed in a desperate attempt to ruin the hostile contact’s targeting solution.

“I see it,” the helmsman said, gesturing at the main viewscreen. The enemy projectile left a visible red plasma trail behind it as he streaked toward the cruiser’s hull. Ostrowski made note of this unexpected piece of information as the cruiser’s inertial dampeners struggled to keep up with the Abukuma’s evasive maneuvers.

The cruiser was now traveling at nearly a quarter of the speed of light, and pirouetting in an effort to turn her stern toward the oncoming projectile. Over the whine of the ship’s massive impulse engines, Ostrowski could hear the reports from the Combat Information Center deep in the bowels of the ship over the ship speakers.

“… Skipper, I show a single inbound, bearing still constant at three-five-zero mark one-three … “

“… Notify convoy: ‘We are taking fire. Recommend all ships scatter.’…”

“… Countermeasures are operating and at full power…”

“… Send to Admiralty … Urgent … Fired upon by unidentified contact, note our position …”

“Five seconds to impact…”

“We’re going to take a hit, sir,” Carmichael said matter of factly as he looked up from the sensor display in CIC. The executive officer’s voice became serenely calm as he accepted the inevitability of the onrushing ball of energy’s impact. He gestured at the streak left by the plasma trail as it crossed the sensor display, less than 200 kilometers away.

Four…

The proximity alarm went off as the writhing mass of plasma hurdled towards the cruiser’s armored hull. Over the wailing klaxon, Nagumo could hear one of the technicians counting the seconds to impact.

Three…

There was nothing Nagumo could do as the plasma weapon approached the Abukuma’s starboard bow. If he turned to the left, it would only give the ball of energy a larger target. Far above the Combat Information Center, the box-shaped missile launcher pointed ominously toward the cruiser’s attacker, but without an order to fire, all the missile battery’s crew could do was keep it trained toward the target and curse at the aggressor.

Two…

For the first time, fear gripped Isoruku Nagumo as he stared transfixed at the visual display. The glowing sphere of red energy engulfed the viewscreen, as it swallowed the blackness of space between itself and the Abukuma. His feet felt encased in concrete as the tactical officer, leaning over the shoulders of his enlisted crewmembers, turned to face him.

One…

“Captain,” the officer exclaimed, his voice panic-stricken. “Permission to return fire, sir?” Nagumo watched the officer’s lips moved. He could hear him, but the captain could not comprehend the words. Desperate for an answer, Carmichael now turned to face his friend and commanding officer, as the tactical officer tried in vain to pull Nagumo’s attention from the viewscreen.

“Captain,” the young lieutenant cried out a fraction of a second before the view screen exploded in a shower of sparks and glass.

“Captain… Captain Nagumo… ”

* * *

“Captain,” the voice said. The lieutenant’s voice had gotten remarkable husky all of the sudden, Nagumo thought to himself as he heard his name called again. “Captain Nagumo… Do you have anything you wish to add?”

A jolt coursed through the Captain’s body as if he had touched an EPS conduit. The Abukuma’s smoke-filled CIC faded away from Nagumo’s eyes like a curtain being pulled back. The crowded, cold and blue-lit room was replaced by soft wooden paneling, and dancing shafts of light arcing through the windows of the tribunal chambers.

The Captain blinked, clearing away the wetness in his eyes, and slowly unclenched his balled fists. The thick acrid scent of burning electronics still filled his nostrils. Instinctively, Nagumo shook his head before he could even focus on the faces in front of him, the three admirals of the tribunal board.

“It is the finding of this tribunal that in light of the circumstances facing them, the crew of the United Earth light cruiser Abukuma acted in the best traditions of the service,” the voice droned on in its heavy baritone.

Recovering his bearings, Nagumo placed it as not the voice of the former tactical officer aboard his destroyed command, but from the grizzled face of Admiral Alvarez as he read the tribunal’s findings.

“It is an important distinction that the charge of losing the Abukuma does not attribute the loss of Abukuma to Captain Nagumo's actions. While the loss of a ship undeniably brings the harsh spotlight of accountability on her the commanding officer's actions, this tribunal did not find that those actions caused the loss of the ship.

“Captain Nagumo's decision to investigate the unknown contact was within his authority and discretion as commanding officer. The charge of hazarding a vessel does not presuppose that investigating a sensor contact would have resulted in the sinking of Abukuma by unknown forces on October 30th, 2142. While this is a topic upon which Naval officers can disagree, the weight of opinion as developed in fleet doctrine is that the tactics undertaken would have yielded a successful targeting solution.

“Upon close examination by this tribunal of senior officers with command experience, Captain Nagumo was commanding officer of Abukuma at the time of her loss. For that and that alone, he was held accountable. The decision of the tribunal does not impugn the valor of Captain Nagumo, an officer decorated for exemplary service. This tribunal took that valor into account by unanimously recommending the sentence imposed:

“Captain Isoruku Nagumo is hereby given an administrative loss of seniority within the Captain’s current rank. Similarly, Fleet Admiral King has endorsed the court's recommendation that Captain Nagumo and the surviving members of his command staff be reassigned to shore duty.

“On behalf of this tribunal,” Alvarez said, rapping his gavel and rising from his seat at the head of the chamber. “I hereby declare these proceedings closed.” The three admirals, sunlight glinting off the long rows of ribbons on their uniforms, stood and marched single-file to the door leading to their ante-chamber.

As he strode across the threshold, Alvarez stopped and whispered a terse message to the bailiff guarding the door. The Admiral glanced back, briefly making eye contact with the still-seated Captain Nagumo before the door of the ante-chamber slid shut behind him.
 
Tremendous segments! There was an almost surreal feel to them - I knew what was coming, yet I hoped that somehow disaster could be averted. The countdown was very effective, by the way.

Nagumo got off with a wrist slap from the admirals. I think he will be much harder on himself as old ghosts and his own memories of freezing up will haunt him. I'm looking forward to how Nagumo deals with this as the story unfolds.
 
Maybe the worst part is that Nagumo will never know if he could have saved his ship or more of his crew if he had not frozen up at that moment.

And regardless of the court martial verdict it's difficult to argue that he, in fact, did all he could've done to prevent the loss of his ship.

Nagumo will remain a character to watch closely.

Great stuff.
 
CHAPTER SEVEN: "WITH YOUR SHIELD, OR ON IT..."


It was almost 0900 when the maglev train streaked across the Golden Gate Bridge and slid to a halt at the Space Forces headquarters station. Gingerly, Captain Nagumo rose from his seat and joined the civilian and military personnel exiting and followed the thin crowd along the platform. Rush hour for the 30,000 people who worked in the sprawling complex was long over, and the small handful that Nagumo accompanied seemed to consist of stragglers and visiting civilians.

Just ahead of Nagumo, a man and woman in casual civilian attire led two small children toward the long escalator. The children squealed joyfully and started to run up the moving stair, despite the efforts of their parents to restrain them. The sloping staircase was poorly lit, and as he studied the dim lights, Nagumo noticed the plaster on the ceiling was peeling away in spots. It was a visible justification for the new, gleaming skyscraper next door that would replace the aging command center next year.

At the head of the escalator, two corridors led in, one from either side and more people joined the procession of visitors and stragglers as the trudged up a long wide staircase and into a large hall. At this point, the stream of people dispersed, some heading for the main entrance while others moved cautiously toward the visitors’ tour area. The couple that Nagumo had followed led their progeny in that direction with a stern admonishment to behave.

Making his way to the main entrance, the rapping of Captain Nagumo’s cane on the cold marble floor echoed through the hall. To Nagumo the sound was a constant reminder, an auditory scarlet letter of his failure. He focused on the grey floor, studying the delicate wisps of black to avoid the eyes of passing employees as he approached the two sentries scrutinizing passes at the security booth.

“I have an appointment,” Nagumo said to the guards, “with Rear Admiral Alvarez.”

The guard looked up, and studied the limping officer. “Do you have a pass, sir?”

“No.”

“Use the comm system right over there,” the guard instructed, gesturing to a bank of computer screens along the wall. “Someone will come down to escort you.”

“Thank you.” Nagumo replied. At the comm system, he called the Admiral’s office, and a yeoman answered. Five minutes, the yeoman said.

Nagumo stood, using his cane to take weight off his shattered left leg, and watched the people. Men and women wearing uniforms for all three services: the Space Forces, Space Probe Agency, and M.A.C.O.s, came and went.

Most strode purposefully, carrying briefcases, folders, gym bags, and the occasional lunch cooler. People leaving the interior of the command center walked by the security desk without a glance from the two stern, and heavily armed, sentries.

“Captain Nagumo?”

A small black woman in a white enlisted dress uniform stood at his shoulder. A single chevron was sewed on the shoulder of her uniform blouse. “Yes,” he said.

“I’m your escort, Specialist Clark, sir.” She smiled, flashed her badge at the guards and motioned Nagumo through the security checkpoint. Beyond the checkpoint was a pair of open oversized doors that led to another huge hallway, this one lined with small stores selling assorted sundry items.

“I was expecting a yeoman,” Nagumo said as they navigated through the crowd.

“The phone started ringing and he sent me down, sir.”

As she led him along the corridor, he asked, “How long did it take you to learn your way around here?”

Clark chuckled slightly. “I’m still learning, sir. I’ve only been here three years though. It’s confusing at times.” The pair strode up a long ramp that opened onto the central corridor that Clark explained was euphemistically called ‘Main Street.’ As they proceeded down the bustling window-lined corridor, Nagumo looked out at the grass and trees of the courtyard.

“Have you ever been here before, sir?”

“No,” Nagumo answered. “I have always managed to avoid it.”

After she had gone what seemed like a hundred yards or so, Clark turned right and ascended a staircase with a ninety-degree bend in it, and at the top turned right. After another fifty feet, she veered left down a corridor and then right again onto another corridor.

This corridor had little to commend itself with, and was probably not part of the visitors’ tour, Nagumo noted wryly. It was lit by banks of flickering lights, and over half of the lights were dark. The walls were bare, marred by neither pictures of posters. Dusty, tied-down furniture was stacked along the walls. It looked to Nagumo as if it had been stacked there since that historic day of First Contact. Clark caught Nagumo’s glance and explained the furniture.

“It’s been there for months, sir. Some of the offices got new interiors, and the old stuff had to go somewhere … so here it is.”

At the end of the corridor, illuminated by a row of spotlights, stood a magnificent large painting of Zefram Cochrane’s legendary Phoenix, sweeping past Jupiter’s rings. The guide turned right, and Nagumo followed, underneath an overhead blue mantel that proclaimed: “Fleet Ship Operations Command.” Here, the hallway was well lit, painted in a light eggshell pastel and decorated with pictures of past and present starships. Specialist Clark turned left into an immaculate waiting room. On the frosted glass door, a Space Forces insignia was etched along with the words: “Commander, Cruiser and Destroyer Squadron Two.”

The room was large and contained numerous windows facing out into the courtyard that Nagumo had admired earlier. Wooden desks, blue drapes, and an austere, uncomfortable-looking couch finished out the room’s interior. At one of the desks, a commander stood and greeted Captain Nagumo.

“I’m a little early,” Nagumo said, glancing at his wrist chronometer.

“I’ll see if the admiral is free,” the commander replied before talking into his ear microphone. With a few quick “yes sirs,” the commander rose, spun on one heel and escorted Captain Nagumo into the inner sanctum of Rear Admiral Emilio Alvarez’s office.

* * *

“You wanted to see me, Admiral,” Nagumo said as he limped through the door held open by the commander. Alvarez’s desk chair gave an anguished groan as the flag officer lifted his sizeable bulk off the cushion, and shaking hands with the battered Captain.

“Yeah, I did.” Alvarez replied with informality borne from years of friendship. His Texas drawl flowed thick in his words. He turned his attention to the Commander, still holding the door open. “That’s all Commander, thank you.” The aide nodded, and shut the heavy oak door as he stepped back into the waiting area. Alone, Alvarez returned his attention to the former captain of the Abukuma.

“Damn glad to see you, Ruku. Grab a seat would ya,” he said, gesturing toward the leather couch along the wall. “You’re making me nervous standing around like some cadet.” Obediently, Nagumo made his way to the couch and sat, bracing his injured leg as he did so. Alvarez removed a small bottle of whiskey and a pair of glasses from a drawer in his desk, and eased into the chair adjacent the Captain.

“How’s the leg,” he asked as he poured the brown liquid into the tumblers and handed one to Nagumo.

“Better,” Nagumo lied. “But, the docs say it will be months, maybe a year, before it’s completely healed. One of the drawbacks of growing old, I guess.” Alvarez harrumphed, and patted his rotund stomach.

“Another one of them ravages,” the Admiral said, with a wry grin. “Or the result of this damn desk job. I don’t know which one to blame.” He raised his tumbler of whiskey. “Ah hell, here’s to our youth, damn I miss it so.” Nagumo returned the toast, and slammed down the fiery liquor. His glass had barely returned to the table, Alvarez was in motion refilling it.

“Look, Ruku,” the Admiral said, tugging self-consciously at his dress tunic. “The reason I asked you to come down today was pretty simple. I wanted to apologize.” Nagumo’s eyes narrowed over the rim of his glass. In a quarter-century of friendship, Nagumo had rarely heard Alvarez apologize. In fact, he noted, this was only the second time the words ever escaped his lips. The previous time had been when Kohana had left him, taking the children with her.

“Apologize for what, old friend,” Nagumo asked. He already knew the answer, that this whole exercise was a way to assuage Alvarez’ own feelings of remorse for being part of his friend’s court-martial tribunal.

“That damned railroading job the other day. That was a crap tribunal, and you know it,” he grumbled in his scratchy bass voice. “It was solely to placate the media hounds and the bleeding heart public who are apparently shocked and dismayed that space might be a dangerous place.”

As a polite courtesy, Nagumo nodded in acceptance of the apology, but it was only an empty gesture. The nuance was lost on Alvarez, as the first vapors of alcohol permeated his brain. “I mean of course it’s dangerous,” he vented. “No oxygen. No gravity. Thousands of degree difference between sunlight and darkness. All the while, we’re traveling around at speeds that we ain’t made for in a government-built beer can. No shit, it’s dangerous.”

Feeling himself getting too agitated, Alvarez took a deep breath. “Of course,” he continued as he set the now-empty tumbler of whiskey on the coffee table. “The public and their elected representatives hold the purse strings, and right now, they’ve got those strings drawn pretty tight. So, if they call out for an investigation into the loss of a ship … well, they get one. I’m just sorry you had to be the one left without a chair when the music stopped.”

“Me too,” Nagumo replied, slowly swirling an ice cube around the bottom of his glass. “But who knows, after a decade in space, maybe I will enjoy winding up my career shuffling personnel and cargo manifests around.” He looked up, meeting Alvarez’s gaze and tried to smile. “I may find it therapeutic.”

Alvarez gave a deep harrumph of disbelief as he reached for the whiskey bottle and refilled his glass. “Bullshit, ‘Ruku. You aren’t some damned bureaucrat, you would hate it. Hell, you would probably hate it more than I do. Not to mention the guilty conscience I would suffer from. Fortunately for both us, you aren’t being shuffled to the quartermaster corps.”

“Where am I being shuffled off to then?” Nagumo queried as Alvarez refilled the captain’s glass as well. “A shuttlecraft repair facility? Janitorial Supply Depot?”

Alvarez chuckled as walked back to his oak desk, and brought over a PADD. “I pulled a few strings,” he admitted as he dropped the PADD on to the couch next to Nagumo. The captain picked it up and stared at the screen as Alvarez cheerfully read the orders from memory.

“Effective upon conclusion of medical leave, Captain Isoruku Nagumo hereby ordered to report to Fleet Base San Francisco. Upon arrival, the Captain is to relieve Captain Jacob Patterson of duties as Pre-Commissioning Officer-in-Charge and Commandant, Starfleet Academy.”

“Why me?” Nagumo asked crossly. Alvarez, crest-fallen as his friend questioned what he had hoped would be a greatly-appreciated gift, was taken aback by the question. “I’m sorry,” Nagumo went on, trying to ease the awkwardness that had enveloped them. “It’s not that I don’t appreciate it … It’s just, well, I don’t understand why you would want me for this assignment.”

“Because,” Alvarez explained, turning to study the tattered Texas flag that hung on the wall. “Next year, we will merge with the Space Probe Agency and become a whole new entity, with a whole new purpose: to expand humanity’s knowledge of the universe. No longer will exploration be the purview of one fleet and defense the responsibility of another, we will be required to shoulder both loads.” Alvarez spun on his heel to face Nagumo again.

“Starfleet,” Nagumo said, filling in the blanks. “I’ve been keeping up with the process.”

“But, while the politicians emphasize our new scientific mission and all this peaceful exploration crap, they keep forgetting that we still have to be able to perform our duty as a military service, should the need arise. They,” he spat out the pronoun like an insult, “forget that although every first contact we have had so far has be peaceful, it won’t always be the case. We’ve been lucky so far, the Vulcans; the Andorians; hell, even the Tellarites have been friendly – in their own way. But, what about what we find in next star system, or the one after that.”

“But why me,” Nagumo prompted, diverting Alvarez’s rant.

“Because, I need someone who can make sure these new officers know how, and when, to fight,” Alvarez stated, his agitation growing at the thought of the new Starfleet. “The last thing I want is a fleet of scientists that have spent so much time staring down a microscope, that they don’t know when they should be staring down a gun sight instead. We need a soldier and a scholar, a diplomat and a fighter, and I need it all in one person. We need someone who has been in out there, and seen combat.”

“There’s a lot of ship captains out there who have seen combat before,” Nagumo observed bitterly. “Most of them managed to not lose their ship. Most of them didn’t freeze up and get their crew killed.”

Exasperated, Alvarez sat down, and took a long hard look at his old friend. “Christ, ‘Ruku,” he blurted out. “Is that what you think happened out there? You lost your ship because you froze up for a few seconds?”

“It is what happened,” Nagumo responded icily. “If I had given the order to return fire faster, we would not have lost the ship. I’m hesitated, and my crew paid the price for my mistake.”

“Oh balls,” Alvarez thundered back. “I’ve read all the reports, seen all the damned logs, and it wouldn’t have made one red-cent of difference if you had fired earlier or not. Hell, it wouldn’t have mattered if you had fired first. You were up against a superior enemy, Abukuma never had a chance, but it wasn’t because of you.”

Nagumo’s eyes narrowed as he locked his gaze on the admiral’s face. “What do you mean by ‘a superior enemy,’” he said, interrogating his old friend. “The report said my ship was attacked by a pirate raider.” Alvarez blanched slightly and shifted uncomfortably in his chair. “It was not a pirate ship, was it?” It was more of a statement than a question.

“I can’t tell you that,” Alvarez replied coolly. “That information is classified.”

“Bullshit, Emilio,” Nagumo seethed, his voice dropping an octave. “I don’t give a damn about whether it is classified or not. You know what killed my crew out there, than tell me. I’ve given the service 25 long years of my live. I’ve saved your life at least twice. The fleet and you, in particular, owe me the truth.”

“If I told you, it could end both of our careers,” he protested. “No, strike that it, it would.”

“My career already is over,” Nagumo pointed out, his tone still dark and menacing. Emilio Alvarez stared for a long moment at his friend before rising silently and retrieving another PADD from his desk. He entered in a series of commands and set it on the coffee table in front of Nagumo.

“According to information from the Vulcan High Command,” he said as Nagumo began scrolling through the information on the PADD. “They are called Romulans.”
 
I'm very much enjoying this story! You're doing a great job of developing Nagumo as a tragic figure on the road to redemption. Even as the segment ends with a mixture of hope and foreboding, I sense a great deal of loneliness and guilt in the man. This paragraph really caught me:

Making his way to the main entrance, the rapping of Captain Nagumo’s cane on the cold marble floor echoed through the hall. To Nagumo the sound was a constant reminder, an auditory scarlet letter of his failure. He focused on the grey floor, studying the delicate wisps of black to avoid the eyes of passing employees as he approached the two sentries scrutinizing passes at the security booth.

Great imagery and wonderful use of words. Well done!
 
I like the pacing-no rushing forward, information revealed in a logical manner, etc. And you descriptions are vivid and important to the atmosphere of the story. Too many times a writer embellishes his descriptions because he's enamored of his own words. This is a lot of fun so far.
 
What a fascinating era. The beginnings of Starfleet, the emergence of Earth's first major enemey and the dawn of it's first intergalactic war.

And a Starfleet Academy story to boot?

What's not to like here?
 
CHAPTER EIGHT: OBJECTS IN MOTION

June 6, 2151.


The violent slam of the door sent birds into flight as it echoed down the tree-lined drive and out into the street. Without a second look, six feet of pure teenage angst and bitterness shoved his ear buds back in place underneath a mop of dirty-blonde hair. The wailing of an electric guitar and the pounding of drums drowned out the shouting and he strode with a cocksure look of quiet defiance as fast as his unlaced canvas sneakers could carry him.


It also drowned out the sound of rapid footsteps coming up from behind; leaving the rebellious teenager completely surprised when a hand gripped his shoulder, spun him around, and ripped the headphones from his ears in one rapid movement. The headphones hit the ground with a fragile clatter, breaking at the impact. The teenager looked down in silence, inspecting the damage to his property, before slowly raising his eyes to the face of his assailant.


Fire burned in Jonathan James Carmichael’s flint-colored eyes as he unflinchingly met the harsh glare of his step-father. His dark pupils radiated a single emotion, hate, and the beginnings of a spiteful snarl on his face only served to underscore the readily-apparent message. “You are going to pay for those,” Carmichael snapped at the authority figure. “You know that right?”


His step-father shoved an outstretched finger into the teenager’s face, as he ignored the question and took the offensive. “Don’t you ever just walk away from me, or your mother, like that. Do you understand me? Never.” Carmichael’s mercurial expression transformed to one of bemusement at the attempted orders.


“Whatever, Kevin,” he said, filling his step-father’s name with as much disdain as he could muster. “You can be Mister Assistant District Attorney. You can even be my mother’s husband. But, you cannot tell me what to do.” He leaned in close, just inches from Kevin’s face. “You know why,” he snarled, “because you are not my father. Never have been, never will be.”


Kevin shrugged off the attempted emotional shot, and his voice rose to a yell as he returned the youngster’s volley. ““Now, you are not leaving this house. I have an important press conference in an hour, and both you and your mother are going to be standing beside me, happy and supportive of my re-election bid. Is that clear?” Carmichael cocked an eyebrow as a smirk crossed his face.


“You want me to be here? In front of the cameras, telling them just how proud I am that you are running again? ” he asked soothingly. Kevin nodded, and for a second though the teenager would cave to his demands. “I’ve got a better plan,” Carmichael continued, his voice becoming soft and menacing. “How about I go out there and tell them about all the ‘extra’ money you seem to be making as D.A.”


Kevin visibly flinched at the accusation. Carmichael saw this, and pressed his attack.


“Or maybe I can tell them about all those weeknights you spend in the city, with those prostitutes? That would be great television. Maybe that will explain all the extra cash, paying for your little hooker habit while your wife and step-son sleep at home.” Pretending to be deep in thought, Carmichael pressed a finger to his lips for dramatic effect. “Oh, an even better idea, we can explain how each night you give my mother so many pills, and so much wine, she doesn’t even know you are gone. I’m sure your adoring public would love that.”


“You bastard,” was all his step-father could manage as he staggered under the teenager’s brutally accurate assault.


“Hmm,” Carmichael replied patronizingly. “Oddly, that’s something I’m not.” He spun smartly on his heel and walked undeterred towards the sleek black sports coupe parked in the driveway. Pressing the key in his pocket, the car began to purr as he opened the door to climb inside. “Oh, and Kevin,” he said as he slid into the driver’s seat. “One other thing I’m not is going to be here. Might as well plan for it.”


Kevin MacDougal, the assistant district attorney for the Atlanta sector, exploded. “Goddamn it,” he exclaimed. “If you leave this house, don’t you ever expect to set foot in it again! Do you understand that?”

Kevin’s response pierced the quiet of the suburban street, causing several neighbors to turn and investigate the commotion. His admonishment fell on deaf ears; Carmichael had already pulled out of the driveway. The only reply he received to his threat was the squealing of tires as J.J. Carmichael slammed the car into drive. The teenager stuck his arm out the car’s side window and slowly extended his middle finger at his step-father as his roadster roared down the idyllic street.


* * *

J.J. Carmichael’s roadster streaked down the reflective surface of the road. A blur of red, the thunder from the engine, and a sudden blast of music marked its passage though the city. It was a top-of-the-line model, sleek intimidating lines, and a super-charged jet engine. To Carmichael, the roadster was his baby, the exhilarating reward to the three years of working each and every day. And, for successfully putting up with his incredibly dull co-workers.


A laugh, the sharp liberated giggle of a girl who was no longer just a girl, but in her own mind, a woman, sounded from the passenger seat. She lowered the side window, and stuck her shoeless feet on the windowsill. The air buffeted her air, sending her red curls bouncing across her face. With a glance at the driver, she grabbed her high-heeled sandals, and casually flung them out the window. The pair of black-strapped sandals bounced along the glossy road, tumbled, bounced, and came to rest against the curb.


“Oh my god, Kelly,” shrieked a second girl from the cramped backseat. She leaned forward. Kelly looked down as an overly-made-up face, framed by long brown hair, appeared between her and the driver, admonishing her for just throwing her shoes away like that. Kelly reached into her purse and let loose an exasperated sigh.


“Shut up, Marissa and drink,” she instructed, handing a flask to the dark-haired girl. Appeased with the gift of more liquor, Marissa returned to the backseat and took a long pull on the flask. She giggled drunkenly and pouted, as her boyfriend yanked it away from her for his own purposes.


“Ahh, young love,” Kelly jeered as she watched Marissa’s attempt to slug her boyfriend in the shoulder. The boy deflected the jab with relative ease and caught Marissa’s balled fist with his hand. Then, seizing the opportunity, he pulled her over to him. Kelly pretended to gag from the front seat as the backseat couple kissed.


“Why don’t we ever do that anymore,” Kelly asked, turning to face Carmichael. He looked at her, grey eyes peering out from a sun-tanned face, and glanced back as the couple in the backseat wrapped themselves in a tightening embrace. For a moment, Kelly worried about what he would say next. But, like the sun breaking though cloudy skies, his mouth twitched upwards slightly, before breaking into a full grin.


“What are you talking about,” Carmichael replied, an evil expression crossing his face. “We still do that, remember the other night? Your parents’ place? The basement? Any of this ringing a bell?” Kelly’s freckled cheeks reddened at the reminder.


A male voice rose from the backseat: “What’s this I hear about a basement?” Vainly, Marissa tried to smother the voice of her boyfriend by kissing him lest he embarrass Kelly. But, he broke free of her lips again as the car skidded into a sharp turn that slinging the occupants to the side. Carmichael laughed at the scene unfolding in the backseat while continuing to follow the road’s serpentine path. Houses and skimmers, parked on the side of the road, flew past as the engine revved further.


“Oh wait, was this when you two got caught by her dad, and he called the cops?” Marissa's boyfriend asked. Marissa again endeavored to silence him, but despite her feeble attempts, he continued, taking a perverse pleasure in watching Kelly’s face turn a brighter shade of red behind her hands. Leaning forward, he tapped Carmichael on the shoulder. “Is this the time where you had to climb out the basement window, and hop the fence?” In his inebriated state he was uncharacteristically basking in the spotlight. “And you had to call me to come pick you up, and told me never to …oh…. sorry, J.J.” His voice trailed off as he remembered the last words.


“Yeah, Mark,” Carmichael answered flatly. “The one where I told you never to tell anyone, and never tell Kelly you know about. That’s the one.”


Kelly glared at Carmichael, a pouty look on her face. “You told me you wouldn’t tell anyone,” she proclaimed in mock disgust. Carmichael looked over at her and shrugged innocently.


“I didn’t tell anyone, just Mark… and he don’t count,” he replied. Unconvinced, Kelly kept her eyes locked on Carmichael as Marissa poked her head between the couple.


“J.J., is this the one where her dad got your shoe,” Marissa asked innocently. Carmichael turned and glared at Mark.


“What man,” Mark stammered, “I can’t help it… I talk in my sleep.” Marissa gasped at the confession, as Kelly’s laughter filled the cabin. Sensing the opportunity to shake her embarrassment, Kelly threw Marissa into the spotlight.


“Why Marissa,” she said condescendingly, “I thought you were a virgin."


“Yeah right,” Carmichael scoffed, grateful that Kelly’s wrathful scorn had abated, yet again. “Marissa hasn’t been one of those since freshman year.” Marissa scowled and crashed back into the backseat, arms crossed. Carmichael looked back at her to continue the ridicule. He watched as her arms uncrossed and grabbed the headrests of the front seats, she took a depth breath, and her eyes opened wide. Her mouth hung open.


“J.J. . . .” She shrieked. He wheeled back around, facing forward, slammed on the brakes and yanked the skimmer to the left. The nose of the sleek vehicle swung away past the rear of the stopped school transport, clearing it by mere inches. Gravity took hold, causing the skimmer to tilt wildly on its side. Ignoring the roadway rushing past his open window, Carmichael’s hands tightened as the controls shook violently.


Caution lights illuminated the display panel, flashing in a desperate bid for attention. Kelly, eyes wide, held her breath as the car continued to tilt, heading closer and closer to vertical. A shriek came from the backseat, as gravity tried to pull Marissa into her boyfriend’s lap. She gripped tighter to the headrest. Under the craft’s belly, magnetic grips struggled to keep a hold of the roadway. It was a losing battle between technology and the immutable law of physics.


They failed.


The skimmer rolled past the vertical, and robbed of its ability to remain upright, and above the road’s surface, slammed to the ground. A shower of sparks sprayed across the windshield, flying in a crazed dance of calamity. They leapt up through Carmichael’s open window, pinpricks of fire burning his arm. J.J.’s hands flew off the controls and shielded his face, as the wreckage of skimmer left the roadway, struck the curb, and launched into the air.


The next few seconds were like pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, thrown against a wall. Splashes of color punctuated by a series of sounds, that no matter how hard he tried, he couldn’t fully understand.

A spinning kaleidoscope of green and blue.
The sky? The ground?
The car cartwheeling, tumbling, spinning.

A scream. It came from behind him.
Marissa? Or was it her boyfriend?

A flash of brown.
The police said the skimmer came to a stop after slamming into a tree.

A glimmer of red.
Blood.
No.
Kelly?
Her red hair.
It always made me laugh, he remembered. Her Colombian father married to her blonde-haired, blue-eyed mother. And their red-haired, mocha-complexioned daughter.

The impact of something hitting his shoulder.
Knocked it clean out of socked the doctors had said.
Amazing amount of force in that impact.
The pain or shock caused him to close his eyes.
The blackness.

Marissa.
Later on, the police and the doctors figured out what had hit him, or more who.

The tumbling of the car sent her flying.
Her head struck J.J. in the shoulder.
An arm had hit Kelly in the head.
She went out the front windshield.
Ahead of the careening vehicle.
They promise she was dead or unconscious when the car went over her.
They promised…

He never saw the last seconds, the looming tree.
But he heard the scream.
The awkward shrill terrified scream.

Kelly.

It was a deep, full-bodied scream.
The kind that resonated in his ears, and in his mind.
But it was the sudden abrupt stop that resonated in his mind.

And then…
Cicadas.
Birds.
The sound of wind chimes as small shards of glass fell to the ground.

A warble in the distance.
A siren.

A sole voice.
So quiet, so weak.
A gurgling noise flowing like a current underneath the plaintive question.

Why?


Kelly’s voice.
And the blackness engulfed him.
And nothing more.
 
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