I would keep Chapel as Chief MD,
Did McCoy come aboard as Enterprise Chief Medical Officer or as an adviser to Kirk?
And where was that established?
No he was pretty much the head doctor.
Then why would he need a head nurse? There should already be one assigned to the Enterprise.
Well if Starfleet Medical is run how the politicians want to run the NHS there were cuts to the Enterprise sickbay budget lolI don't know, I do know he also griped about possible changes to sickbay and was pretty much handling most of the medical stuff in the film.
"I'm gonna need a good nurse, Chapels an MD now..."And where was that established?
No he was pretty much the head doctor.
That was from an earlier draft of the script, thankfully excised before filming!
Also, wasn't Bones meant to be a vet now? ;p
I would not change much at all, to be honest.
I would have altered the uniforms slightly. Make them two piece uniforms in "bright" versions of the TOS colors. I have seen almost exactly what I am talking about in other threads here on TBBS. We have good artists here.
I would have left Decker as Captain, with Xon as Science Officer.
I would have had Kirk brought in as "Mission Commander", maybe with the rank of Commodore, maybe as Admiral. He would NOT have relieved Decker as Captain of the ship.
I would have had Spock brought in as "Science Consultant".
The bulk of the film would otherwise have remained largely the same. I think I would have not done the "shakedown" aspect with the film starting at the tail end of the Enterprise refit. I would have started the film with the refit being in the past and Decker already established as Captain and his mission underway.
Of course, if I had my way, this film would have been the backdoor pilot for the Phase II TV series, which would have continue with Decker, Ilia, Xon as the main trio, with Kirk, McCoy, and Spock all having moved on to "higher positions" in Star Fleet and making only semi-infrequent cameos. I like the idea of Kirk having become Commander of the Squadron / Fleet / Task Force that Enterprise belongs to, and thus being Decker's immediate superior.
Maybe Fleet Captain, like I believe Pike was? It definitely would have made more sense then the jump straight to Admiral. Being an Admiral in Wrath of Khan makes sense; the new refit is already obsolete, so I've already assumed another 5YM happened in the meantime. A timeline of: TOS (5ym), TMP, Phase 2 (5ym), followed by the trilogy (2-4) would have been fantastic. Then one final 5YM in the Enterprise A, before retirement. This would effectively turn the 1st and 5th movie into pilot movies for tv shows, with a fantastic movie trilogy in the middle.
I agree pacing the plot would benefit the movie. Does anyone knows if there were other scripts Roddenberry considered before using that awful one? Has anyone read Philip Kaufman's Star Trek he wanted to film titled: Star Trek: Planet of the Titans? If so, what was it about? And what did you think about the script, did it had potential?
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