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Star Trek The Doomsday Machine Book Review

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Hello All,
I received my copy of "Star Trek: The Doomsday Machine: A Berserker in our galaxy" today from Amazon Prime. In my previous thread "Star Trek The Doomsday Machine Book" I inquired if anyone owned a copy and promised to do a review. My apologies for not providing a link to the appropriate website, thank you fellow forum members for doing that on my behalf. I spent the day reading the book and will now give a brief summary.
The book starts off with an overview of the U.S.S. Constellation's encounter with the Berserker prior to the Enterprise's arrival. The author shows a star map of the machines journey into our galaxy as well as its passage into Klingon space. The author discusses how the "Preservers" may have been its creator and shows other examples of Preserver technology. He then goes on to discuss possible encounter scenarios with other classes of Federation Starships and how well they might have fared against the machine.
He gives detailed information on L-370, L-374 and the Rigel star system. He gives stats on the machine and shows examples of 21st century equivalents. He then goes on to show images of possible points of origin for the machine. He speculates on the events Starfleet Command undertook following the machines destruction.
The author writes about the General Energy Dampening Field and the Machines Antiproton Beam. This is were things get complicated, as he throws out a lot of math equations. He talks about "Degenerate Matter Neutronium," more math equations. He writes about its "Lattice Construction"-no idea. He touches on its tractor beam, scanners, sensors, maneuvering, emergency venting, control mechanisms, memory banks and hall of records. He writes about its plasma furnace, ramscoops, and total conversion drive-more math. He speculates on how the machine may have been constructed as well as the motives of its builders. He goes on to speculate how other species may have perceived the machine as well as their encounters with it. I don't know how, but he has some cool pictures of its interior as well as a blueprint naming all its internal parts with a brief description of its function. He also writes about "A Doomsday Like Any Other".
Overview- The book reads more like a science textbook than a work of fiction. It seems to be very well written and researched with lots of science to back it up. I am glad I got it, Thank You for reading my review.
 
Thanks for the review. It sounds "in universe." Are there any episode production material -- sketches, art, etc.?
 
I remember in James Blish's Star Trek #3 that Commodore Decker survived the clash with The Berserker! Not sure if I read it before reseeing the episode back in 79 or not though!
JB
 
I remember in James Blish's Star Trek #3 that Commodore Decker survived the clash with The Berserker! Not sure if I read it before reseeing the episode back in 79 or not though!
JB

In this case the aired episode was infinitely better than the early draft script that Blish based his adaptation on.
 
Hello All,
I received my copy of "Star Trek: The Doomsday Machine: A Berserker in our galaxy" today from Amazon Prime. In my previous thread "Star Trek The Doomsday Machine Book" I inquired if anyone owned a copy and promised to do a review. My apologies for not providing a link to the appropriate website, thank you fellow forum members for doing that on my behalf. I spent the day reading the book and will now give a brief summary.
The book starts off with an overview of the U.S.S. Constellation's encounter with the Berserker prior to the Enterprise's arrival. The author shows a star map of the machines journey into our galaxy as well as its passage into Klingon space. The author discusses how the "Preservers" may have been its creator and shows other examples of Preserver technology. He then goes on to discuss possible encounter scenarios with other classes of Federation Starships and how well they might have fared against the machine.
He gives detailed information on L-370, L-374 and the Rigel star system. He gives stats on the machine and shows examples of 21st century equivalents. He then goes on to show images of possible points of origin for the machine. He speculates on the events Starfleet Command undertook following the machines destruction.
The author writes about the General Energy Dampening Field and the Machines Antiproton Beam. This is were things get complicated, as he throws out a lot of math equations. He talks about "Degenerate Matter Neutronium," more math equations. He writes about its "Lattice Construction"-no idea. He touches on its tractor beam, scanners, sensors, maneuvering, emergency venting, control mechanisms, memory banks and hall of records. He writes about its plasma furnace, ramscoops, and total conversion drive-more math. He speculates on how the machine may have been constructed as well as the motives of its builders. He goes on to speculate how other species may have perceived the machine as well as their encounters with it. I don't know how, but he has some cool pictures of its interior as well as a blueprint naming all its internal parts with a brief description of its function. He also writes about "A Doomsday Like Any Other".
Overview- The book reads more like a science textbook than a work of fiction. It seems to be very well written and researched with lots of science to back it up. I am glad I got it, Thank You for reading my review.

For what is clearly a self-published fan work, this seems rather ambitious. It appears to be a combination of in-universe creative writing and essays addressing the science/plausibility/sociology/etc. of the doomsday machine, but still mostly from an in-universe perspective.

However, the book has a number of typos and punctuation errors, and the interior diagram on page 86 looks vaguely obscene.

The frequent lack of possessive apostrophes in phrases such as "the weapons interior", "The machines plasma furnace," and "the machines internal mechanical systems" is an interesting indicator. Why does this seem so oddly familiar? Well, astute observation and deduction might lead one to notice this same tendency in certain other contexts, perhaps even including this very forum. Perish the thought! But as one of my college professors once indicated, writing style can be easily recognized by those on the lookout for certain elements. If there happens to be something that somebody would like to come clean about, now would be a good time.

As for the numerous images that seem to be photographs of a TV screen or pages from other books, or ripped from the web, and say "image courtesy [name]"... Somehow, I doubt that the author obtained clearances and permission from all of the copyright holders, which is what the "courtesy" attribution is supposed to mean. The one that says "courtesy deviantart.com" is especially dubious, since deviantart.com hosts work of individual artists and does not claim to be the copyright holder of the user-submitted content.

Anyway, I'm glad Amazon offers preview pages. I have decided not to purchase this obviously "unofficial" book.

Kor
 
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You said on Sunday [edit -- sorry, it was actually Saturday evening, shortly after joining the BBS] in the initial thread that you were going to order this book, and here you had received it and reviewed it by Monday. So, you either paid A LOT for 1-day shipping, or ... you already had it. Ronald J Wimmer, I presume?

BTW, selling items here is against board rules, and obliquely hawking your own stuff in this way is generally not well-received.

@Kor , thank you for astute observations, too!
 
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