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Star Trek: Steel-Edged Grace - 1: "Excalibur"

A very creepy setting on the planet. And something about the way you wrote is again very TOS like in its feel. Kirk on the planet, Spock or Scotty in command. All hell about to break loose and heaps of mystery still to be sleuthed. :bolian:

Like Nerys, I kinda liked grace sticking to her guns on the dress issue. But I understood her motivation for wearing it at the time of the launch. I do think however, that she wouldn't stick to wearing the dress all the time. She knows what she had to do, in order to not knock the other female crew members. But she has her beliefs and principles too, to uphold. So at some point will be back in the trouser pants. If they make it back to the ship.

Continues to be a page turner ... ahem ... a screen scroller.
 
Thanks for the kind comments! Yes, I am trying for the "TOS feel" - I'm glad that's coming through. Rest assured, Captain McAfee is wearing pants on the away mission. You may have missed this snippet in Chapter 7:

"Captain McAfee was the epitome of serenity as she sat quietly in her command chair on the bridge – partly because she was wearing her familiar, comfortable uniform with pants, partly because of her exceptional poker face."

Grace does NOT like the minidress, but she will wear it on (rare) occasion simply as a sign to other female officers that she does not disapprove if they choose the dress.

Thanks for reading! :) Chapter Nine is in the works.
 
Grace does NOT like the minidress, but she will wear it on (rare) occasion simply as a sign to other female officers that she does not disapprove if they choose the dress.

That's a wise position for her to take--that way she doesn't make some of the other female crew feel uncomfortable if they do choose the minidress.
 
Very nice new installments. I liked both new chapters, and don't have a lot to add to what others have said in that regard. What I do want to dig in a little more to the wonderful way you have of somehow (in exactly what manner I'm not completely certain yet) very effectively conveying that TOS episode feel. I don't know exactly how to put it into words, but you just seem to have a great way of setting the tone and feel of a TOS episode. I noticed it earlier, but it was especially apparent in the scenes with the landing party for some reason.

And here's a particularly pointed example of what I mean:

Five minutes later, six individuals materialized in a grassy open area surrounded by several domed dura-crete structures. A steady wind droned, blowing dry, brown leaves around in tiny eddies. A child’s swing squeaked discordantly as the breeze moved the chains back and forth.

Lt. Commander Reshraan and Dr. Chang both activated their tri-corders, the oscillating noise adding to the eerie sense of desolation.
You set the scene there beautifully. The "oscillating noise" of the tri-corders was perfect. I'm getting a sort of "Miri"/""Specter of the Gun"/"Empath" feel (don't know why the "Empath" reference, but it just comes to mind for some reason.)

And your last "cliff hanger" was a perfect "cut to commercial" moment from TOS. I could almost hear that iconic music reach its crescendo in my mind. I love it! :bolian: Nicely done, sir!!!
 
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Grace does NOT like the minidress, but she will wear it on (rare) occasion simply as a sign to other female officers that she does not disapprove if they choose the dress.

That's a wise position for her to take--that way she doesn't make some of the other female crew feel uncomfortable if they do choose the minidress.

You gotta love the kinda controversy your dress code can cause ... :lol:
 
Grace does NOT like the minidress, but she will wear it on (rare) occasion simply as a sign to other female officers that she does not disapprove if they choose the dress.
That's a wise position for her to take--that way she doesn't make some of the other female crew feel uncomfortable if they do choose the minidress.

You gotta love the kinda controversy your dress code can cause ... :lol:

Just wait 'til Grace tackles the bee-hive hairdo! ;) (j/k)
 
I'm with TM-very TOS feel. I'd have cited "And the Children Shall Lead" but you get the idea.
 
Chapter Nine

Stardate 4796.7 (6 February 2269)
USS Excalibur
Canaris System

Ship’s Log: Stardate 4796.7- First Officer Raul Espinoza recording. It has been over an hour since we lost contact with Captain McAfee and the landing party. At the same time communications went down, we also lost our ability to gain a transporter lock on our people, though sensors show them to be alive and well. I can only postulate that the culprit for these system failures is the vessel that is now approaching us. Per the Captain’s wishes I have ordered us to break orbit and intercept that ship. It is my intention to dissuade them from entering Canaris IV’s orbit – by whatever means necessary.

“Time to intercept, Helm?” queried Espinoza.

Lt. Daniel Mobutu, the Kenyan helmsman checked his instruments before responding. “At our current speed, we should rendezvous with the target vessel in 49 minutes.”

“Thank you, Lieutenant. Ms. Norquist, any luck contacting the landing party?”

“No sir – I’ve run diagnostics twice. The subspace transceiver is operating properly, but somehow, the signal dissipates once it gets past our shield envelope.”

Espinoza frowned. “How is that possible?”

Norquist gave him an apologetic look. “I don’t know sir.”

“Not good enough, Lieutenant. I need answers and I need an open channel to the landing party – get on it!”

“Aye, sir,” replied the blond communications officer, chastened.

“Ensign T’Nir, what can you tell me about that vessel?”

The young Vulcan woman straightened from peering into the sensor hood. She turned to address the Commander.

“The vessel does not match any ships in our database. It is 1273.28 meters in length with a draft of 341.09 meters. Our sensors are unable to ascertain its mass or composition, nor can we detect any means of propulsion.”

Espinoza sighed. “What about weapons or defensive capabilities?”

“None are apparent. However, considering the limitations of our sensor sweeps, I would not rule out the presence of offensive or defensive weaponry.” T’Nir hesitated momentarily, as if wanting to add more. Espinoza noticed.

“Go on, Ensign – I need all the data you can provide.”

“Sir . . . I was going to add that there are energy readings that defy plausible explanation. Our universe is governed by Skolian-Newtonian physics, at least in normal space, yet these sensor returns are providing data that defy these laws. I can only postulate that our sensors are malfunctioning.”

“Have you run diagnostics?”

“Affirmative. Our sensors are functioning within point 003 percept optimum. Logically, our diagnostics system must likewise be malfunctioning.”

Espinoza gazed intently at the young officer. “Ensign, what are the odds that both our sensors and the diagnostic subroutine would fail, considering the triple redundancy in each system?”

T’Nir did not hesitate. “Twelve to the ninth power against,” she replied calmly.

Espinoza turned back to face the viewscreen and the mollusk-shaped vessel that was approaching. “Then I would suggest you begin to explore the impossible, Ms. T’Nir. We may be up against something that doesn’t play by the rules of our universe.”


* * *

Stardate 4796.8 (6 February 2269)
Salem Colony - Canaris IV


Lt. Commander Heath Forrester and Dr. Chang trotted across the open space that separated the science building from the living quarters as they headed toward the recreational field. The sun was beginning to set and long shadows played across the ground. Pink Stratus clouds crossed the purple sky in corrugated rows. Dr. Chang noticed that the temperature had dropped even as she hurried to keep pace with Forrester.

They began to descend an embankment leading to the open field when Chang’s heel caught on a root and she stumbled forward. With amazingly quick reflexes, Forrester managed to catch the CMO before she took a nasty tumble. She smiled gratefully at him.

“Thanks! These boots weren’t designed for graceful running,” she quipped, while gazing into Forrester’s eyes.

“No problem, Doctor,” Forrester replied, quickly averting his gaze as if embarrassed.

“You can call me Kim. All my friends do.”

Forrester hesitated, then gave a curt nod. “We better get on down there before it gets dark.” He resumed his descent toward the field.

Chang sighed and followed him, being careful not to trip again. You’re a tough nut, Mr. Forrester, she mused.

* * *

“Here’s another one, Mr. Reshraan.” Captain McAfee trained her light on the still form of a woman who appeared to be in her mid-thirties. She had apparently fallen from the chair which also lay on the floor.

“And two others here,” replied the Andorian Science Officer. “I believe this is Dr. Rustumzadeh,” he said as his light played across the bearded features of the late Science Director for Canaris IV.

McAfee straightened. “There’s nothing to do be done for them. See if you can retrieve any data from the computer.”

Reshraan nodded. “I will try. But it’s likely whatever caused the power disruption and . . .” he paused gesturing to the bodies, “the casualties, likely corrupted the data as well.”

“As you said, give it a try, Commander. Maybe we’ll get lucky. Speaking of luck – any ideas on getting power back up?”

“I’m not an engineer Captain,” Reshraan replied curtly.

She could not see the Andorian’s face in the gloom but McAfee did not like his tone.

“Lose the sarcasm, Mister! I will not tolerate it. You are a Starfleet officer, first and foremost. I don’t give a damn if you’re the Science Officer or Morale Officer – I expect you to do your best at any task I assign you – is that clear?”

“Yes sir,” Reshraan replied icily.

“That’s more like it,” she replied, her calm tone belying the anger she felt. “I’m going back outside to see if I can raise the ship. Let me know if you make any progress.”

* * *

Dr. Chang felt a stitch in her side as she continued to run after Forrester. She gasped for oxygen in the thin atmosphere.

Forrester noticed that she had fallen behind and stopped. “Doctor? Are you alright?”

“Just . . . having some . . . trouble . . . catching my breath.” She reached into her med-kit and pulled out a hypo. Inserting an ampule of amber liquid, she pressed the hypo against her forearm. The instrument emitted a slight hiss as the medicine was pressured into her body.

Almost instantly, Chang’s breathing slowed to a more tolerable rate. Forrester gave her a questioning look.

“Tri-ox,” she explained. “I have asthma, and the thin atmosphere was getting to me.” She eyed him curiously. “It certainly doesn’t seem to be bothering you any.”

“I did some mountain climbing in my younger days,” he explained. “The thin air doesn’t bother me so much.”

“Lucky you,” she said, sarcastically. She shivered slightly. “Is it just me, or is it getting colder?”

Commander Forrester looked up at the sky. The purple and pink was gone, replaced by a clear and dark night sky bejeweled with stars.

“Desert areas tend to get cold at night. With no cloud cover, the heat of the day will dissipate quickly. We better hurry and get to the field and fetch Lt. Sharma and Crewman Noles. It could get much colder before sunrise.”

It took Forrester and Dr. Chang only two more minutes to arrive at the recreation field. In the twilight, they saw Sharma and Noles standing over three small bodies. For some reason, Chang thought their tunics looked like the color of blood in the near darkness.

Forrester glanced down at the bodies – two boys and a little girl. They looked to be no more than eight or nine years of age. Near the bodies, its head draped across its paws, was a beautiful Golden Retriever that looked as if it were merely asleep.

“They’re so small,” remarked Lt. Sharma, quietly, the distress evident in his voice. Forrester placed a hand on the young officer’s shoulder.

“Nothing to be done for it,” he said. “Doctor?”

Chang was running her Feinberger scanner over the bodies. She straightened, a sad expression on her face.

“Same as the others we found. Their bodies were completely drained of energy.” She glanced at Sharma. “For what it’s worth, I doubt they felt any pain.”

The security officer nodded morosely.

“We need to get back to the main compound,” said Forrester. “There’s no telling how cold it may get.”

“But what about these children?” protested Lt. Sharma. “We can’t just leave them out here!”

“Yes we can, Lieutenant,” replied Forrester, calmly. “They will still be here in the morning.”

“But what about predators?”

“Lieutenant – there’s nothing left alive within scanner range. I’m more worried about hypothermia than some bloody scavenger. Come along, let’s go.”

* * *

Captain McAfee stared up into the starry night sky, wondering if one of those points of light might be Excalibur. She absently rubbed her arms against the chilly dry air. The continuous low moan of the wind added to the chill and the sense of desolation she felt. Some first mission, Grace! You’ve managed to end up stranded on a dead planet and you don’t know if your ship and crew are still in one piece. What a great way to begin a five-year command!

She knelt and picked up a handful of dry grass. Apparently, whatever had killed the colonists had also killed the plant life – the grass was dry and gray, crumbling easily in her hand as if after a year-long drought.

“Captain.”

Startled, she stood quickly and turned. Reshraan had managed to walk up within mere meters of her without her hearing him. She was shamed that he had so easily approached without her knowledge. Get your head in the game, Gracie! She chided herself.

“Commander,” she replied evenly. “Any luck with the computers?”

Even though it was nearly dark, she could make out the outline of the Andorian and the stiff posture with which he carried himself. Obviously, he still felt stung by McAfee’s recent ass-chewing.

“I managed to download a few of the memory files onto my tri-corder. I could not access the computer core but the data solids were usable. The data itself, however, makes little sense.”

McAfee frowned. “Explain.”

“Are you familiar with the concept of negative energy?”

“Sure – from some of my Academy classes. It’s not supposed to exist in our universe, right?”

“That is correct, based on H’kluraan’s theory. However, one of the scientists – Dr. Howard – found this during one of her sensor sweeps.” He handed her the tri-corder.

McAfee peered at the viewscreen – the blue light giving her features an almost Andorian appearance – and lifted a puzzled eyebrow. One line of data caught her eye:

“The energy value of the designated orbital target is currently at negative three point zero one three ergs and falling at point zero one ergs per hour.”

She glanced back at the Science Officer whose face remained in shadow. “How is that possible?” she murmured.

“It shouldn’t be possible. Yet, according to the logs I down-loaded, the computer and sensors were operating perfectly. And considering what happened to the colonists and power sources here – the data fits, as impossible as that may seem.”

A horrible thought struck McAfee. “And I ordered Excalibur to intercept that ship if it returned!”

Reshraan was quiet for a moment. “Captain – the sensors on Excalibur should provide the same data. It is likely Commander Espinoza will realize the danger in time.”

Part of McAfee was surprised that the acerbic Science Officer would try to offer her hope. “Let’s hope you’re right, Commander. But even if he does, what can they do? How do you counter a phenomenon that shouldn’t exist in our universe?”

This time, Reshraan had no answer.

* * *
 
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That Reshraan bears watching. If he doesn't get over his sexist attitude fast, he could endanger the mission by smarting off or hesitating to obey his captain at the wrong time. He can feel stung all he wants--for that breach of discipline, he had it coming.

And you keep upping the creepiness of this out-of-the-universe foe. Indeed, how do you heal a breach of this nature? I'll be very interested to see your solution.
 
Yeesh, Excalibur's on an intercept course with a life killing energy sponge, and the captain's trapped planetside in a dead colony. Like she said, helluva way to start a tour! :eek:
 
An excellent segment TLR. This shows Grace with some fortitude. Despite the rather dire circumstances she is keeping her head and even with Resharaan she was rather restrained considering his behaviour. Her curt words were precise and cutting and I hope they do the trick.
Lots of little tidbits about our characters can be gleaned. Forrester obviously reluctant to open to many, but especially a female. Our doctor is kind and compassionate, not wanting to leave the dead children alone.
And then there's what awaits the crew of the ship. Great mystery abounds. Excellent.
 
I think one of the things I really like about this series is your focus on McAfee and I love that you give use a close look at her thoughts in situations like this. Not only does this make the character more human but also more interesting.

Not that there isn't enough interesting stuff going on here. Negative energy aliens, Forester's rigidity, Chang's warmth, Espinoza's trial and Reshraan's prejudices all make for a riveting and delightful read.
 
Chapter 10

Stardate 4796.8 (6 February 2269)
USS Excalibur
Canaris System


“Commander? We’re close enough to the object for a visual,” announced Lt. Mobutu from the helm.

“On-screen, Lieutenant,” ordered Espinoza.

The main viewscreen shimmered slightly before regaining focus. The massive vessel hung in space, a dark silhouette against the star field. Espinoza stood and placed his hands on his waist as he gazed at the mysterious interloper. The bridge was silent, save for the chirp of instruments and the faint hum of air handlers. Finally, Mobutu broke the silence.

“Big, isn’t it?” he asked, a note of awe in his voice.

Espinoza nodded, more to himself than in acknowledgement of the young helmsman’s comment. He glanced toward Norquist.

“Any response to our hails, Lieutenant?”

“No sir. I’ve boosted the gain but they still can’t or won’t acknowledge our signal.”

“Ensign T’Nir – analysis, please,” ordered the Commander.

The Vulcan raised up from the sensor hood. “Very limited data, Commander. In some respects, the object acts much like a black hole – yet there are no apparent gravitational anomalies. It is definitely drawing energy from its surroundings, but I have no explanation as to how – other than to postulate that it indeed utilizes anti-energy.”

Espinoza frowned. “You said ‘object’ rather than ship.”

T’Nir inclined her head. “That is correct, sir. We have no firm data to indicate whether this is an artificial construct or a natural phenomenon. And, as it appears to operate contrary to the physical laws of our universe, it could possibly fall into a completely new category – a hybrid, perhaps.”

“Are you saying it could be . . . alive?”

T’Nir straightened, her brow furrowing slightly. “I . . . did not mean to imply that. Yet, considering the totally alien nature of the object, I cannot rule out the possibility.”

The First Officer was about to reply when the ship suddenly shook and the bridge lights went out. For a moment, the bridge was plunged into inky darkness and silence. As suddenly, emergency lighting flickered on and the whirr of systems coming back to life brought the bridge back to a semblance of normality. Espinoza felt a moment of dizziness and grabbed the arm of the command chair for support.

“Status!” he barked.

“Reports of power failure coming in from all over the ship!” announced a harried Lt. Norquist as she struggled to field all of the inter-ship queries. The communicator on the command chair beeped for attention. Only a handful of officers could bypass Norquist for the C.O.’s attention. Espinoza had no doubt as to who was calling. He punched the acknowledgement switch.

“Bridge, Espinoza here.” He said, with greater calm than he felt.

“This is Phillips – what the devil is going on up there? We damn near lost containment of the warp core with that sudden power drain!” bawled the Chief Engineer. Espinoza could hear the shout of voices and the sound of general bedlam from main engineering.

“That’s what we’re trying to determine, Commander,” replied Espinoza with restraint. “Damage report, please.”

“Outside of nearly getting’ our collective arses blown to hell an’ gone, there’s no apparent damage. We’ve gone to secondary systems but there is a definite drain on our energy reserves. Power output from the fusion reactors has dropped 15% and it’s still fallin’ – though I’ll be damned if I know why! I’ve got the mains off-line ‘til I can figure out what happened.”

“Our mystery ship happened, Mr. Phillips. We got too close to its anti-energy field. Keep me posted on your progress – I’ll keep you apprised of the situation as we gather more information.”

“Well that’s bloody decent of you,” muttered Phillips, sarcastically, as he abruptly closed the channel.

Espinoza glanced at the viewscreen. The mysterious object appeared unchanged – still a black ellipse against the sky.

“Mr. Mobutu, what is our range to the object?”

Espinoza noticed that the Kenyan was rubbing his head as if in pain. Mobutu glanced at his controls. “280,000 kilometers, sir.”

“Back us off to 500,000 klicks, Mr. Mobutu, and maintain that separation if the object moves again. Ms. T’Nir – can you tell me if the object caused our sudden power loss?”

She nodded. “Almost assuredly so. There was a sudden surge in negative energy readings just as our own power levels dropped.”

“Our shields sure didn’t help,” muttered Mobutu.

“No, they didn’t,” agreed Espinoza. He glared out at the object, frustrated by their apparent failure to learn anything helpful as well as their close call. He turned back to the communications officer.

“Lieutenant, any headway in contacting the landing party?”

Like Mobutu, Lt. Norquist was rubbing her head. She straightened at the sound of Espinoza’s voice, blinking her eyes as if to regain focus.

“Sorry sir, I got a little dizzy for a moment. I believe I’ve figured out a way to contact the planet. If we use our main deflector dish and direct a focused beam toward the planet, we could piggy-back a sub-space transmission. Resolution would be poor and audio only, but we just might punch through enough to make contact.”

The First Officer smiled for the first time in hours. “That’s thinking outside the box, Lieutenant – Well done! Get on it right away and pull anyone you need to help you.” He sat in the command chair and stabbed the comm. switch.

“Espinoza to Sick Bay.”

SickBay, Dr. Kasharian here.” The Serbian’s thick accent boomed through the speaker.

“Doctor, have you had any reports of vertigo or other ill-effects the past few minutes? I experienced a slight dizzy spell just as the ship suffered the power loss. Some of the other bridge crew members were likewise affected.”

“Yes, we’ve received complaints of dizziness, headaches, sudden fatigue and so-forth. I got light-headed myself, but mine cleared up shortly after the lights came back on. Have you any idea what happened?

“Apparently our mystery ship is the culprit. We’ve increased our distance and seem to be out of range of the anti-energy field.” For the moment, he did not add.

There was a momentary hesitation on the other end of the channel. When Kasharian spoke again, his tone was somber. “Commander, I just ran a quick scan on myself – nothing definitive, you understand – but based on my own energy loss, I would estimate that a five minute exposure to the anti-energy field would cause a person to lapse into a coma. Ten minutes would be lethal.”

Espinoza’s jaw tightened. “Understood, Doctor. Thanks for the warning – please advise me if anyone begins to exhibit similar symptoms.”

“You can count on it!. Kasharian, out.”


* * *

Stardate 4796.9 (6 February 2269)
Salem Colony
Canaris IV


Captain’s Log – supplemental. The temperature has dropped rapidly as night has fallen on the Salem Colony. Fortunately, the dura-crete structures are well insulated and should provide ample shelter despite the lack of power.

Our landing party has completed its search of the colony. As we feared – there are no survivors. Every man, woman and child has succumbed to the effects of anti-energy.

Still no contact with Excalibur. We can only hope they are safe and trying to determine the intentions of the mystery vessel. I must admit it is frustrating to be stuck on this planet, quite literally in the dark.

In the mean-time, Commander Reshraan is attempting to restart one of the fusion reactors while Mr. Forrester is checking out the colony’s shuttle craft. One way or the other, we must find a way off this planet or at the very least, restore a means of communication. Until we succeed, we will explore every available option.

McAfee flipped the communicator shut and stared up at the stars. The night sky was crystal clear, offering a spectacular view of the cosmos. A low wind howled as if to mourn the victims of Salem Colony. Somewhere up there was her ship. She longed to be there – on the bridge of her starship, not stuck in this place of death.

“If wishes were horses we all would ride.” Her father’s voice gently chided her. It was a favorite expression he had often used when she was a little girl. The thought of her father warmed her spirit and a small smile formed on her face. She heard footfalls behind her and turned to see Dr. Chang approaching. The CMO was briskly rubbing her arms to ward off the cold.

“As your physician, I must point out that you’re in danger of freezing your ass off out here.”

Grace smiled. “It’s good to know all of those years of medical school are paying off.”

Chang paused and stood by her friend and gazed heavenward. “Think they’re still up there?” she asked, quietly.

Grace followed the CMO’s gaze into the night sky. “Yes, they’re up there alright.”

The beautiful Asian woman directed her gaze toward the Captain, starlight playing across her features. “You sound so certain, Grace. How do you know for sure?”

“I just know,” McAfee said quietly.

The two women stood together silently for a few minutes, staring at the stars, each lost in the solitude of their private thoughts.

“Grace – assuming we get off this rock, how do we stop something that shouldn’t even exist?”

“I’m working on it,” replied Grace. “And I’m sure Commander Espinoza is on top of it as well. We’ve got good people, Kim – I would say the best in Starfleet. It’s our job to handle situations like this.”

“Funny, I don’t remember the recruiting officer saying, ‘See the Universe! Encounter mile-long, energy-sucking ships! Die on a dried-up rock on the wrong side of the galaxy!’”

“You left out, ‘Freeze your ass off.’”

Chang stuck out her tongue. McAfee raised an eyebrow.

“Why, I believe that’s insubordination, Doctor.”

“Guilty as charged! Throw me in a warm cell somewhere. You can even let Mr. Forrester have at me with a whip.”

McAfee laughed. “You, Doctor, are a twisted woman. Let’s get back inside – the cold has obviously affected your mind.”

The two officers made their way back across the quad and past the darkened residence buildings. McAfee tried not to think about the dead that now inhabited those silent spaces. Moving briskly, they quickly arrived at the main research building where they found Lt. Commander Reshraan at work with the recalcitrant reactor.

“Report, Commander,” ordered McAfee.

The Andorian Science Officer glanced toward McAfee then back towards his tri-corder. He shook his head in apparent frustration.

“I’ve had no success in reactivating the reactor, Captain. It seems that the phenomenon that drained the energy from the surrounding area also degraded the Deuterium fuel. The reactor itself is fine, but without fuel . . .”

“ . . . No fusion reaction,” finished McAfee. She placed her hands on her hips and exhaled sharply. “Very well.” She frowned in thought momentarily, then her face brightened.

“What about the fuel storage bunkers for the shuttle craft? Aren’t those usually buried deep underground?”

Reshraan nodded, a small smile forming on his face. “Yes . . . Yes, I believe you are correct, Captain. It is quite possible that underground bunkers may have been spared from the effects of the anti-energy.”

“Check with Commander Forrester,” directed McAfee. “He . . .”

They were interrupted by the sudden chirping of the Captain’s communicator. She grabbed it and flipped open the grid.

“McAfee here,” she said, with barely concealed hope.

“Excalibur to . . . tain McAfee . . . in please.” Though the signal was weak and filled with static, the sound of Lt. Norquist’s voice was the sweetest sound that McAfee could recall hearing in a very long time. Dr. Chang was smiling broadly and even the acerbic Reshraan looked pleased. The Captain adjusted the gain control on her communicator before replying.

“McAfee here, we read you Lieutenant. Ship’s status?” she queried.

“We’re okay, sir. Please stand by for Commander Espinoza.” There was a moment’s delay before the voice of the First Officer came over the channel.

“Captain – are you alright?” The note of concern was apparent in Espinoza’s voice.

“The landing party is fine, Commander. Unfortunately I can’t say the same for the Salem Colony. There are no survivors. Have you located the alien vessel?”

A burst of static drowned out the beginning of his reply. “ . . . about an hour ago. We suffered a temporary power loss when we closed within 280,000 kilometers. The effects disappeared when we backed off. No casualties or serious damage to the ship, but Dr. Kasharian believes that exposure to the anti-energy would be lethal in about ten minutes.”

McAfee glanced at Dr. Chang who frowned as she absorbed this information. Reshraan pursed his lips in consternation.

Espinoza continued. “We can be in orbit around Canaris IV in about two hours, Captain. We’re keeping the mains off-line as a precaution, but we have full impulse capability.”

Grace shook her head. “Negative, Commander. I don’t want to risk losing contact with that vessel. Send a shuttle to pick us up – it won’t take any longer than Excalibur could at impulse. If that alien ship moves, you stay with it – understood?”

“Understood, Captain. The vessel has been holding station for more than two hours. No response to our hails – it’s just sitting there.”

“And as long as it stays put, it can’t do any damage,” thought McAfee. “We’ll sit tight until the shuttle arrives. You sit on that vessel – don’t lose it, but don’t take any unnecessary risks until we learn more.”

“Acknowledged. We’ll have a shuttle headed your way shortly. Do you need any supplies or equipment?”

McAfee thought about the bodies that lay around the colony. They would need to be identified and properly bagged and stored in stasis. But that would have to come later. She sighed. “Not at this time, Commander. Have the shuttle pilot land in the quad area. We will be waiting in the research building. McAfee, out.”

“Yes sir, Excalibur, out.”

She flipped the communicator closed, the initial euphoria over hearing from Excalibur tempered by the knowledge that a massive and deadly alien vessel still lurked in the Canaris system.

Chang appeared thoughtful. “Captain, we may not have to worry about the . . . victims, at least not right away.”

McAfee frowned. “What do you mean, Doctor?”

“The bacteria that enable decomposition – well, they were wiped out along with the rest of the life forms in the vicinity. Our presence has re-introduced some of those bacteria into the atmosphere but it will take some time for them to multiply to the point where they can do much. In short, this compound will act much like a stasis chamber, at least for a while.”

The Captain nodded. The knowledge brought a degree of comfort, knowing they would not have to face an even more terrible situation when they returned to the planet. She was about to reply when her communicator chirped again. She flipped open the grid.

“McAfee – go ahead.”

“It’s Forrester sir, we need Dr. Chang urgently in the shuttle hangar.”

McAfee turned her head sharply toward the CMO who was listening intently. “What’s wrong, Commander? Who’s injured?”

“Lt. Sharma and I are fine, Captain . . . we’ve discovered a survivor.”

The Captain blinked in surprise. Chang was already shouldering her medical kit and hurrying for the door. McAfee strode briskly to catch up as did Reshraan.

“We’re on the way, Commander. McAfee, out.”

* * *
 
Wow. Just wow. More Steel-Edged Grace and a terrific instalment to boot that keeps up the mystery and danger and throws a survivor into the mix. Add to that, some great dialogue between McAfee and the Doc. Hee hee. Great stuff.
 
Yay, I've been hoping for a continuation of this fantastic story! You've picked up right where you left off with the mysterious death ship/phenomenon, the extinguished colony, and a stranded landing party.

Oh, and way to leave us with one heck of a cliffhanger at the end there. :eek:
 
SO awesome...I can't wait to find out more about this energy-draining phenomenon and HOW such a thing could even be possible!
 
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