Just finished it up...
The Good...
The Phase II Enterprise looks amazing.
Carl Sheldon looked great as Captain Scott...
Overall a good story. It was paced well, and pretty much kept me engaged
The Neutral
While it was nice to see post Relics Scotty, I don't see how his presence really furthers the story, on the front or backend
The Opportunities....
The lighting, ESPECIALLY in Kirks Quarters was harsh, and washed out the actors a couple times.
The Sound, Some of the dialogue sounded hollow, and as though the mic gains were maxed out
The Music, A couple of the musical queues didn't really match the tone of the scene.
No Chemistry, There wasn't any chemistry between Brian Gross and Jacy King. The romance scenes between them seemed forced.
Overall a decent episode. I don't "FEEL" like i am watching an Episode of TOS like I do when I watch ST:C, but that isn't the end all/be all of fan films.