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Star Trek: Orion - Connecting The Dots

Bry_Sinclair

Vice Admiral
Admiral
In early 2374, as Starfleet faces the bloodiest war in decades they reactivate and repurpose hundreds of ships to fill their ranks, whilst inexperienced and ill-prepared officers and crew must dig deep to find out what they are truly made of against a relentless enemy from the other side of the galaxy.

* * * * *

“You’re kidding right?” Reihyn scoffed as he looked through the viewport on the ship berthed before him. He turned and looked at the stone-faced Andorian next to him, still not quite able to get a read on him—though quickly coming to believe he wasn’t the jovial sort. “You’re not kidding?”

Lieutenant Commander th’Daashi handed him the PADD. “These are your new assignment orders, signed by Vice Admiral P’Rau. Effective immediately, you are to assume command of the U.S.S. Orion NCC-3013. You are to oversee the rest of her system diagnostics, before launch on stardate 51280.8—that gives you ninety hours to get everything seen to, so you’d best hurry up, Captain.”

Reihyn shot a sharp look at him, though the Andorian was unfazed, after all he did have six years on the Rigellian-Enex (not to mention fifteen centimetres and at least ten kilos of muscle). He grabbed the PADD off the Admiral’s adjunct and looked at the text himself, reading it just as clearly as th’Daashi had. When he looked back up at the older man, he couldn’t help but note a smug look behind his flint-like eyes.

“Thank you, Lieutenant Commander. Dismissed.”

Without gesture or word, the Andorian turned on his heel and walked away, leaving Reihyn alone at the viewport, contemplating how he’d gotten to where he was now. Eighteen months ago he’d been a Lieutenant Commander, two years in the rank, and pumped at being given his first real taste of command, Second Officer of the Sabre-Class U.S.S. Kukri. Due to their small crew complements, Sabre’s were highly sought-after postings, as they gave greater opportunity to gain experience and shine—officers assigned to them typically advanced quicker, whether in rank or onto larger or more prestigious ships. After seven months onboard, in the heat of battle against the Klingons, Commander T’Prenn had been killed in action, and he’d been promoted to fill the vacant position. Eight months later, when the Kukri was involved in the attack on the Torros shipyards, Captain Tagh had been critically wounded and died in Reihyn’s arms—though not before bestowing a field commission onto him. With Starfleet facing all-out war and needing to mobilise every ship and officer it could, the brass decided to leave him with his battlefield promotion intact—even though he had just turned thirty-one. His first Captaincy had lasted six weeks, five days and three hours, before an ambush by three Jem’Hadar ships had seen it come to a swift end.

Fortunately, most of his crew had survived the battle and managed to evacuate, though five onboard had lost their lives. After they’d been rescued and transported to Starbase 360, the survivors had all been checked over at the stations hospital, wounds treated, deaths quickly mourned, before being reassigned across the various fleets. He alone was left without an assignment. He’d been told he faced demotion to Commander, the admiral’s at Headquarters believing he’d been promoted too quickly for the burdens of the fourth pip on his collar. However, Vice Admiral P’Rau had told him there was a way for him to retain his rank and receive a new command. It was an offer he couldn’t refuse, so had swiftly taken it.

Now, he had to live with and make the most of that decision. He looked up from the PADD and out at the ship once again; a thick saucer, bridge dome mounted high on top, the primary hull sweeping back to two vertical pylons, each with two nacelles at the end of them—the unmistakable silhouette of the Constellation-Class.

The Orion was part of what had quickly become known as the “zombie fleet”; old ships, long since mothballed, dragged out of whatever junkyards they’d been left at to rot, to help bolster the fleet in various support roles. They would haul cargo to where it was needed, escort troops to the front, carry the injured to facilities for treatment, jobs Starfleet couldn’t waste newer ships on. This would be his life for the foreseeable future.

Letting out one final sigh, he squared his shoulders, puffed out his chest, then headed for the gangway that would take him onboard.

* * * * *

Stepping onto the Orion, the first thing Reihyn noticed was the smell; the tang of rust mixed with the thickness of dust, as well as a bitter hint mould. Next was the temperature, at least five degrees colder than it should’ve been, sending a shiver down his canary-yellow spine and goosebumps to bristle up his tattooed arms and neck. Fortunately (or should that be unfortunately) the lights worked perfectly, showing the poor state the ship was in; bare metal grates on the deck through which he could see all manner of pipes and conduits, bulkheads missing panels exposing circuitry, cargo containers haphazardly dotted around the place, and no signs of life.

He tapped his combadge but got back a muted buzz, telling him no channel had been opened. Before he could let out another sigh, he heard heavy footsteps approach. The way they clanged and echoed, he couldn’t tell from which direction they came. It wasn’t until their owner rounded the curve of the corridor that he saw the Rigellian-Chelon approach from aft. Had the reptilian crewman been physically able to scowl, it would’ve done. In Reihyn’s nine years of active service, he had served with hundreds of other those from his home system, all of whom proudly called themselves Rigellian, despite there being eight sentient and intelligent species, but in all that time he hadn’t served with any Chelon before.

“Yes?” the crewman enquired, approaching with a datapad in three-fingered hand.

“Why isn’t there anyone at the docking port?” he asked, seeing as how it was standard procedure for all new arrivals on a ship to be logged in by Security.

“There is,” replied the Chelon.

“Who?” he questioned, looking around.

“Me. Who’re you?”

“Captain Reihyn, newly appointed Commanding Officer of the Orion. Crewman?”

He noticed the widening of the Chelon’s eyes as they suddenly took note of the rank pips on his collar. The Chelon croaked a curse that the universal translator didn’t register, before standing a little straighter—a difficult thing to do with a heavy shell on ones back. “Crewman First Class Hitersik.”

Reihyn made a mental note of the name—which would be easy to remember, as he doubted there were any other Chelon aboard. “I’ll be raising this with your superior, Crewman.”

“Don’t have one, sir.”

“Excuse me?”

“We don’t have a Security Chief onboard yet.”

“I see. Well, until there is, you will remain at this airlock until the end of your shift and report directly to me. Understood.”

“Aye sir.”

He waited for Hitersik to assume his place beside the entrance, before proceeding further into the ship, wondering if the rest of the crew—or rather those who were actually onboard—were all like the crewman. He doubted Starfleet would waste the best and the brightest on a ship such as the Orion, which meant that he would have a tough time ahead of him keeping on top of their conduct and discipline.

* * * * *

From the information he’d been given on the PADD, Reihyn knew that the ship already had most of her engineering crew onboard, whose job it was to get the ship operational in less than two weeks—after two months had been spent stripping her of key components and essential systems when she’d been decommissioned. Everything onboard would be brought up to minimal operating standards and safety requirements, before she’d be booted out of dry-dock to make room for a battle-damaged starship in need of repairs. He could only hope for a no-nonsense veteran of engine rooms, with warp plasma in their veins.

What he got just wasn’t that.

Enan Lanali was another Rigellian, this time a Tomal (commonly referred to as Vulcanoid-Rigellians), but she looked more like a first year cadet than a lieutenant j.g.—though he was the last person who should really be commenting on another’s age. She had big, bright blue eyes, honey-blonde hair pulled back into a ponytail, showing off the tapered point of her ears, whilst the top of her head just reached his collar bones, and her frame was so slim her coveralls were hanging off of her. The smear of grease on her left cheek and wide, beaming smile made her look even more like a child playing pretend.

The rest of her engineering team wasn’t much better, with half of them being crewmen straight out of basic training, whose average age had to be eighteen or nineteen. There were a few older non-coms in the mix, as well as a Berellian ensign (a species widely regarded as the worst engineer’s in the quadrant).

However, despite how she looked, as soon as she got into the details about the work they’d carried out and what was still left to be done, he found himself surprised at how quickly and easily she rattled off everything from memory. The ship’s computer and warp cores had been their first objective, once they had the capabilities to power and control the ship they could better understand what needed to be done, environmentals were proving to be tricky (hence the chill throughout) but they’d managed to secure a handful of experts from the station to get that sorted tomorrow, impulse, navigation, sensors were all back online (though not up to one hundred percent), they were having to rewire the communications system, which was causing interference with the combadge signals. Forcefields, transporters, turbolifts, lighting, waste management, and emergency batteries were all “purring like Centaurian kittens”; shields were proving to be an issue, so far they could get as high as eight percent, whilst weapons were non-existent. Though highly unlikely they would ever face combat, there were no guarantees in wartime, so they had to be able to defend themselves to some degree.

“What about replicators?” he asked, noting they hadn’t been on her repair list.

“I’m afraid they’re toast, Captain. I don’t know what the decom team did to them, but there is no hope of getting them functioning by the time we leave port. Besides, three-sixty has allocated all their stores of replicator matter to everyone else except us. We’ll have to get by on ration packs—unless you wanted me to send a team to get the galley operational.”

He had to chuckle. “Not yet, Lieutenant. Keep focused on the main systems.”

“You got it, sir.”

“Um, Lieutenant…”

“Yes sir?”

“How many of the senior staff are onboard? I understand there’s no Security Chief at the moment.”

“Not yet, we’re also missing our Ops Manager and CMO. Commander DuMont and Ensign Mecell are both on the bridge, or that's where they said they’d be.”

“Thank you. Carry on, Lieutenant Lanali.”

“Aye-aye sir,” she replied, her grin widening. She turned back to her team, who were all busy at various consoles and conduits throughout the engine room. “Zh’Sheyn, Hobbes, Prr’ke, with me. We have to get the structural integrity field above two percent or the crew will turn to puddles once we go above warp one-point-one.”

Watching her lead the trio out of engineering he couldn’t help but admire her calm under the mammoth job she faced getting the Orion into some resemblance of functionality.

* * * * *

The bridge was something from the 2290s—which was more advanced than he’d expected. Two alcoves opposite one another near the rear, port for the turbolift and starboard lead to the bridge-level airlock and other small compartments located on the deck. Between them were two large banks of display screens, all sporting the blue-and-green LCARS displays and controls that were the norm eight years ago. On either side, three banks of stations surrounded the outer bulkheads leading to the viewscreen at the front. In the middle, right where it was meant to be was the Captain’s Chair, with the old helm and navigation console a couple of steps below it, all three posts encircled by metal railings.

The deck was lightly populated, only four members of the crew, two in standard uniforms with red collars and two in technician coveralls. They were all too busy to notice him enter, so he took a moment to look around.

It was short-lived as one of the uniformed officers, a dark-skinned Bajoran who didn’t look old enough to shave, glanced back at him. His eyes widened when he saw the pips on Reihyn’s collar, and immediately he sprang to his feet.

“Captain on the bridge,” he called out, a little too loudly.

The others (two of who were seated and the third lying on his back under a console) all stood at attention. He winced at the formality, knowing time was against them.

“As you were,” he instructed. Looking at the Bajoran, he told the younger man, “Ensign, I know when I get to the bridge; I don’t need to be told.”

“Yes sir. Sorry sir.”

As the two techs got back to work, the other officer stepped forward. She was human, with a good twenty-five years on him; despite that however, she displayed the rank of a lieutenant commander. She was a handsome woman, with warm, caramel eyes and whose umber hair had no traces of grey, despite the lines on her face.

“Captain Reihyn,” he said by way of introduction, extending his hand.

“Lieutenant Commander Clarissa DuMont, first officer,” she replied, accepting his hand and shaking it briefly. “We were informed that our new CO was being appointed today, we just weren’t informed who it would be or when they’d be arriving.”

“I only just got my new orders through not even an hour ago. I’ve already checked in with Lieutenant Lanali on the state of repairs.”

“Oh,” was DuMont’s reply. “Well if there’s any other information you need, I’ll see what I can do.”

There was something about her tone that made her sound a little indifferent, which only solidified his decision to read up on his new crew as quickly as he could. He decided that would be a good first order for his new ‘Number One’.

“Actually, I’d like an account of our crew status, including personnel files.”

“Now sir?”

“If you wouldn’t mind, Commander. I’ll need to get my gear from the station, so it’ll be a good thing to familiarise myself with as I pack.”

“Very well,” she said, turning back to the console she’d been sitting at when he arrived and setting to work.

He left the technicians to their upgrades and stepped down to consoles in the middle of the deck. The ensign had resumed his duties, back painfully stiff as Reihyn looked at the readouts. Straight away, he noticed that the stencilled HELM and NAV markings had been removed, replaced with TAC and CONN respectively. The Bajoran sat at the latter.

“And you are?”

“Mecell Koen, sir. Conn officer, sir.”

“Just graduated.” It wasn’t a question.

“Yes sir. My class was rushed through the last few months of training when the war started, sir.”

He nodded. It made sense, Starfleet would need as many officers as it could get, so cadets would either have more work foisted upon them in a shorter space of time, or aspects would be cut from the curriculum to get them out of the classroom quicker. It would mean that there would be a lot of inexperienced, unpolished young officers filling the ranks, though that greenness wouldn’t last long in a war, one way or the other.

“Where did you come in your class standings?” he asked.

“Um…three hundred forty-seventh out of three hundred fifty, sir,” Mecell admitted, his voice trailing off by the end of his sentence.

“I see,” was all Reihyn could think of to say. A rookie helmsman he could cope with, if they’d at least been in the top half of their class, but one three places from the bottom? This would be another hurdle to overcome.

DuMont stepped down to the Conn/Tactical station, holding out an isolinear chip. “Crew reports, sir.”

“Thank you, Commander. I’ll be heading back to the station for a couple of hours, but when I get back I’ll need all current system status reports on my desk.”

“You don’t have a desk, Captain.”

That stumped him. “What?”

“The Orion wasn’t built with a ready room,” she told him. “An engineering team has welded the bridge airlock shut, so that the prep bay can be used as an office space, but there’s nothing in there yet.”

“Where they are isn’t that important, Commander, but I want them to review once I’m back onboard. Understood?”

“Yes sir.”

* * * * *
 
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As Reihyn had packed up his guest quarters on Starbase 360, he’d loaded the crew files into the computer and ordered an audio review of the personnel jackets, that way he could learn about his crew as he packed up what few belongings he had. Rather than go alphabetically, he’s started with DuMont, wanting to get a better read on the woman.

What he’d heard wasn’t encouraging. Almost every superior she’d had over the last thirty-three years since graduating from the Academy (staunchly in the middle of her class), had the same thing to say about her: competent but lacks any real drive or ambition. She’d made lieutenant commander fifteen years ago and plateaued there, spending the last six as Second Officer on the U.S.S. Willoughby, a rather unremarkable Miranda-Class ship. This would be her first time as an XO, onboard a ship where the crew were either rookies, retirees dragged back into service, or were on report for some kind of misconduct or another.

The sinking feeling he’d gotten when he first saw the Orion only got worse as he listened to all eighty-nine crew files—which was another thing he had to deal with, having only a quarter of the crew Constellation-Class ships once had. There were two notable absences from the duty roster: Operations Manager and Chief of the Boat. He’d enquired with the personnel officer on the station, only to be told it was in hand and they would be onboard shortly. His stomach knotted again.

With a duffle bag over one shoulder and an attaché case in the other he headed back to the docking bay. Waiting for the turbolift, he spotted an elder Bolian approach; the collar of his teal uniform shirt was wide open, whilst an annoyed scowl was etched deeply into his brow. He too was carrying a couple items of luggage and stopped at the turbolift. When it arrived, Reihyn gestured for him to enter first. The Bolian muttered a thank you and Reihyn followed him into the carriage.

“Docking bay, berth thirteen.” The lift chirped and headed to the cavernous facility at the base of the station.

“Thirteen, you’re on the Orion as well?” the Bolian asked.

He looked back at his travelling companion. “I’m her new Commanding Officer, Captain Reihyn. You must be Doctor Sioll Baxx.”

“Senility hasn’t set in yet, so that means I’m bound by that damned reactivation clause.”

“I’m sorry that your retirement has been interrupted, Doctor, but we do need every available pair of hands under the current circumstances.”

Baxx let out a single, humourless laugh. “This isn’t my first war.” The undercurrent of sadness in his voice couldn’t help but make Reihyn wonder just who the older man had lost, how many friends, loved ones, or lovers he’d never seen again thanks to one conflict or another.

“Though,” he continued after a long, quiet pause, “I suppose it’ll be nice to see the old girl again.”

“Of course, you served on the Orion before she was retired.”

“The first ship I served as CMO, so it’ll be fitting that she’ll be the last as well.”

“Unfortunately, you won’t have the same medical staff you once did. Just a few corpsmen and medtechs, no nurses I’m afraid. We don’t even have the time to see if an EMH could be installed—”

“Good! Those damned holograms will be the end of medicine as an honoured profession. Why the hell those engineers thought it necessary to introduce forcefields and photons to a sickbay is beyond my comprehension. I’d take a recruit medtech with a battlefield trauma kit over one of those contraptions any day of the week.”

Reihyn held his tongue; Baxx would find out soon enough that two of his medics were fresh from training. He just hoped that the crabby surgeon meant what he said, as those junior medics could well be called upon to treat a sickbay overflowing with officers and crew injured in battle.

The turbolift came to a stop and the doors opened. Baxx exited first and Reihyn followed, falling into step with his new doctor as they headed down the short corridor towards the docking port. As they did, two others approached from the opposite direction.

Reihyn’s attention was drawn to them instantly, for very different reasons. Both were in uniforms with gold collars, tall and in peak physical condition, but that was where the similarities ended. One was a statuesque Orion woman, everything about who, from the curves of her figure, to the dark allure of her eyes, was enticing to anyone who looked at her (even Baxx was a little mystified by her saunter). She bore the pips of a junior lieutenant though looked a few years older than Reihyn, though it was difficult to tell just what age Orion women were just by looking at them. The man beside her was broad shouldered, with naturally tanned skin, jet-black hair, a few days’ worth of stubble on his chin and jaw, and sharp onyx eyes, dark as any Betazoid’s. He wore the insignia of a chief petty officer on his collar and a pair of cuffs around his wrists.

“Captain Reihyn,” the Orion all but purred.

“Yes Lieutenant?”

“D’Kehra, sir, your new Security Chief and Weapons Officer.” He remembered her name from the crew files (realising her picture didn’t do her justice) as well as the fact that she had once been a lieutenant commander since demoted, the reason for which was noticeable absent from her jacket. “This is Chief Diego Ramirez, the newly appointed senior non-com.”

He looked at Ramirez, then to D’Kehra and back again. “Been having a few problems onboard the station, Chief?”

“The jewellery comes off once I report onboard, it’s one of the conditions of my release,” stated Ramirez.

“Your release? Seems a little stringent for station security.”

Ramirez chuckled, as though to some private joke. “Not for Starfleet Security or the Federation Penal and Rehabilitation Service.”

Reihyn’s tattooed brow rose sharply.

“Simply because I went AWOL to teach the bloody Cardies they can’t bully the DMZ colonies.”

“You were in the Maquis?” he asked, not quite believing it. Ramirez nodded. “When were you caught?”

The muscles in the non-coms jaw flexed tightly. “It was just before the Jem’Hadar slaughtered the Maquis—just another reason to want every single, fraking spoon-head dead.”

Reihyn stepped closer to the human. “Stow it, Chief. The last thing this crew needs is its COB getting them all riled up. We’re not here to fight, that’s for others in the fleet. Our job is to help keep supply lines running and pick up the pieces from the dren-storm that the fleet is now in. Understood?”

There was a long pause as the two men summed each other up. Fortunately, the Chief still remembered enough from his days in uniform, to show respect and deference to the chain of command, especially the person at the top. Sullenly, he gave a single nod.

“Aye Captain.”

Reihyn returned the nod. “Report aboard then, Chief.”

D’Kehra led them through the airlock and heading towards the ship. The Captain and Doctor hung back for a moment longer, looking towards them.

“Well it looks like this will be a very different crew to the last one I served with onboard,” Baxx mused.

“It will indeed, Doctor. I just wish we had a Counsellor onboard to help with some of the issues they have.”

* * * * *

A day can make a huge difference. Reihyn had spent the time looking at all the administrative duties that needed seeing to prior to departure, leaving DuMont to stay on top of the technical side of things—partly as a test to see if she could cope (her years spent as an ops officer would surely stand her in good stead, or so he hoped).

He’d also seen to getting his office at the rear of the bridge set up. Unfortunately, he didn’t have a viewport and the décor left a lot to be desired, but on the plus side he had plenty of storage compartments. He’d also been able to source a desk, through a Chief Lorenzo on the station, who’d assured him it’d be onboard by the end of the day. In the meantime, he was making do with a couple of small cargo containers.

Down in engineering, Lanali had gotten their SIF system and stabilisers fully functional once again, meaning they could safely go to warp. Great strides had been made with shields and phasers, though both would still take a little more work, they would be ready by the time they departed the station. They’d even tracked down the problem with the torpedo launchers, a corrupted control board in the fire control mechanism. A replacement was being included with the stock of ten torpedoes the Orion had been issued, which was due to arrive tomorrow. As soon as he’d seen sickbay, Doctor Baxx had begun a tirade of complaints about having engineers underfoot. The ship’s medical complex was one of the few areas to get any sort of major overhaul, expanding the size of it in order to take on triple the number of patients, though the work was by no means finished yet. So far he’d yet to hear of any major incidents or problems from/about the others on his crew, though he was mentally preparing himself for whatever might come his way.

A knock from the doorway drew his attention up from the environmental systems repair report (which had finally seen the temperature rise to a more comfortable level). With no enunciator installed yet and communications patchy at best, he’d been leaving the door to his office open. He looked at the human standing in the doorframe, not one he knew from his crew—and he’d made a point of meeting with each of them over the last twenty-four hours.

“Can I help you,” he glanced at the man’s collar, “Lieutenant?”

“Lieutenant Aleksander Jachim reporting aboard, Captain,” the young officer stated with a Polish accent, tone level and professional.

Reihyn frowned slightly. After being up for twenty, of the last twenty-four, hours the lack of sleep finally starting to catch up with him—making his mind a little fuzzy. It took him longer than he would’ve liked to twig to who he was.

“Right, Lieutenant Jachim, operations. Sorry, it’s been a little manic since I got my orders through yesterday.” He stood and offered his hand. Jachim came further into the office and shook it. “Welcome aboard.”

“Thank you, sir,” he replied stoically. Reihyn noticed his nostrils flare, obviously not used to the unique scent the Orion’s air filters had yet to get rid of. Truth be told, Reihyn wasn’t used to it either, he’d been too busy to really give it much notice.

“I understand you were on the Evanescence at Volnar, my condolences.” The Evanescence had been one of seven ships lost trying to keep the Dominion away from the colony as it was evacuated. Only eighteen people, out of a crew of two hundred, had survived and he was the only one not to be seriously injured. “I understand you’re lucky to be here.”

Jachim looked around the room, and by extension the Orion, with obvious aversion. “If you say so, Captain.”

“Problem Lieutenant?” Reihyn quizzed, sitting back down at his ‘desk’.

“Permission to speak freely, sir.”

“Granted.”

“I wish to formally request immediate reassignment, sir.”

Reihyn scowled. “May I ask why, Lieutenant?”

“I believe this assignment is not suited to my abilities.”

“Don’t sell yourself short, Lieutenant, I’ve read your service records—it’s impressive.”

“I am not selling myself short, Captain. I simply do not believe that this ship is an appropriate one for me.”

As Captain of the Orion, Reihyn kept a very tight lid on his emotions. He too felt hard done by Starfleet for being landed with this ship and her troubled crew, but he didn’t have the luxury of asking to get out of it—not unless he wanted to accept a demotion, which wouldn’t look very good on his service record, regardless of the reasons. So on one hand, he knew exactly where Jachim was coming from, but on the other he knew he should accept the challenge that the Orion presented.

Slowly, he leaned forward. “I’m reminded of a saying from Earth: when life gives you lemons, make lemonade.

“This may not be the posting you were hoping for, Lieutenant,” he continued, his tone taking on a new edge as his eyes narrowed, “but there aren’t any other openings available for you, unless you want to go from being ops manager to computer core officer. So like it or not, you’re stuck with us for the time being.

“I will log your request. But in the meantime, I want level one diagnostics carried out on all communications, computer and sensor systems. Dismissed.”

Jachim snapped to attention, his face struggling to keep his disappointment and annoyance from his defined features. “Aye sir,” was all he said, then turned and headed back towards the bridge.

Reihyn let out a heavy sigh, the first since he’d received his orders at the viewport overlooking the Orion. This was going to be a very trying assignment, if not the ship that was barely holding together, then the crew that was in the same situation. This was definitely going to test him in ways he couldn’t even imagine.

He just hoped that he was ready for it.

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The End?? I thought it was getting started!!

But have you been into my hard drive? It reminds me a lot of a story I started about twelve years ago. I think I'll dig that out and polish it up to post.
 
I liked this story and when I saw 'The End', I was wondering... there's not more? Because you've painted a very interesting crew here and I'd like to see what you do with them. I really liked Dr. Baxx. I was seeing Ian McKellan as him. LOL!
 
Enjoying the story so far....I'm assuming there will be more adventures to come. like that we aren't seeing a pristine starship....
 
The End?? I thought it was getting started!!
I liked this story and when I saw 'The End', I was wondering... there's not more?
Enjoying the story so far....I'm assuming there will be more adventures to come.
I've whet your appetite, my job here is done, hehe. In truth, this was just intended as a sampler, a little taste of one potential ship and crew to possibly be worked on in the future--though if folks like it this much then I may revisit them again soon.

But have you been into my hard drive? It reminds me a lot of a story I started about twelve years ago. I think I'll dig that out and polish it up to post.
Go for it, more fanfic is never a bad thing :bolian:

Because you've painted a very interesting crew here and I'd like to see what you do with them. I really liked Dr. Baxx. I was seeing Ian McKellan as him. LOL!
Cheers. When casting my characters (a habit I always do for any writing piece), Sir Ian never actually entered my mind--though he would definitely do the role justice. I had Ben Kingsley in my head for my crotchety doc.

like that we aren't seeing a pristine starship....
I find missions of the biggest and/or best ships in the fleet can get a little repetitive, and I've always fancied writing something with a lot of light-years on the clock.
 
Started to write up a review and then my iPad crashed! Anyway I'm liking this a lot, the little details particularly, like converting an airlock as there isn't a ready room to go with the outdated ship design.
This crew is going to be a lot fun, I.e. Trouble. Looking forward to more.
 
Thank you CeJay, it's proving to be a lot of fun to write for.

I've got ideas in mind for a short series of nine stories that will span the length of the war.
 
I've whet your appetite, my job here is done, hehe. In truth, this was just intended as a sampler, a little taste of one potential ship and crew to possibly be worked on in the future--though if folks like it this much then I may revisit them again soon.


Go for it, more fanfic is never a bad thing :bolian:


Cheers. When casting my characters (a habit I always do for any writing piece), Sir Ian never actually entered my mind--though he would definitely do the role justice. I had Ben Kingsley in my head for my crotchety doc.


I find missions of the biggest and/or best ships in the fleet can get a little repetitive, and I've always fancied writing something with a lot of light-years on the clock.
They did not have the biggest/best in Voyager. Galaxy's were the best and biggest. At the time, Intrepid was smaller and not as good (tactically) as the Enterprise-D.

@PhaserLightShow
 
They did not have the biggest/best in Voyager. Galaxy's were the best and biggest. At the time, Intrepid was smaller and not as good (tactically) as the Enterprise-D.
They were however the newest and most-advanced class in the fleet when she was launched in 2371.
 
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