Star Trek: Aurora series
I gave you a shout out
here on the Future of Trek forum about your animation style being how a new Trek TV series could be done on a budget with a team.
Very nice lighting and overall camera work taking full use of the frame and not making it (4:3 TV safe).
I noticed your videos were 480x288pixels that would be a 1.66:1 aspect ratio. On your future episodes you should really work at 1.78:1 as it is the HD standard. Even if you've rendered in standard definition it could be upconverted to HD and the aspect ratio would match on a TV screen.
What frame sizes are you rendering out? 480x288 pixels? 30fps or 24fps?
At least work at 720 wide by 480 high (which is widescreen enhanced standard definition) if you are not going to do 1080/24p HD.
Episode 1
Great sound effects. The dialogue quality is very professional.
Very nice stereo mix on Episode 1 with source panning and ambiences. Nice use of reverb spaces in the space helmets for dialogue.
Really nice lighting when the doors open from the airlock and when she is in the airlock with the blue structure behind her outside. And great reflection on the helmet's glass and subtle lighting right before she wakes up.
The underexposed lighting when she wakes up is really gorgeous!
Episode 3
Very nice touches with the liquid in the tea cups moving around as well as the steam.
Great subtle lighting in the backgrounds too.
criticisms:
Episode 1 had some editing that seemed off. Like not matching up with the action by a few frames. (not lip sync but the actual action cut).
Episode 3 the framings on the closeups during tea around 23 seconds in is where you should try to match the closeups framing better.
On a feature film or traditional film when you shoot 2 closeups the camera uses the same focal length lens and is placed at the same distance to the actor to achive similar framing on the closeups.
Your shot of Tara shows down to her armpit but T'Ling doesn't have that wide of framing.
Also on closeups try to reduce the depth of field more with a wider aperture.