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Star Trek; All Of God's Creatures THREAD

I will try to post all of the parts in this post you are reading now, space permiting. So far parts 1-3 are posted below...

STAR TREK;
ALL OF GOD'S CREATURES
Written by Robert Scorpio

This story takes place somewhere in the third year of TOS. The story deals with a new life form that may pose a serious threat for the planet it is heading for. But what if the citizens of the endangered planet are willing to let that destrucion happen?


PART ONE

And there, it was…

The crew of the USS Enterprise stared at the images being relayed to them by the four probes they had launched ten minutes earlier. The object was incredibly large, but looked even larger this close up.

Capt James T Kirk looked back to the science station, hoping that his Vuclan science officer, Spock, had answers. Apparently he did.

“What can you tell me?” Capt Kirk asked.

“It definitely is some form of biological life Captain. It is nearly 12 miles in length, and is slowing its rate of speed. The deceleration is very minute, but definite. It will collide with Linova Prime in approximately seven standard days.”

Doctor McCoy, who stood next to the Captain’s chair, chimed in.

“So what do we do now Jim?” McCoy asked. “Do we let it hit the planet?”

Spock stepped down to the Captain’s chair. “Doctor, we have no choice.” Spock stated flatly. “The Linovans are aware of the situation and have decided to let the collision occur.”

Jim Kirk’s expression betrayed that of one with no choice. “Spock’s is right Bones. We were only asked to come and conduct scientific studies, but in no way are we to interfere with the collision.”

Spock picked up where Kirk left off. “At the rate the object is slowing, the collision will be in the most isolated area of the planet’s largest ocean.”

Uhura, from her communications post, interjected “Mr. Spock, do you think ‘it’ is aiming at that point on Linova Prime to avoid loss of life on the planet?”

“What about that Spock?” Kirk added.

Spock arched an eyebrow. “It is a distinct possibility, but there is no way to know.”

McCoy shook his head. “So let me get this straight.” He looked up at the main view screen, and at the image of the object. “This large 12 mile long tree in space is going to hit their planet and the Linovans are just going to let it happen?”

Spock answered before Kirk could. “The Linovans have a very progressive belief that all life forms are equal Doctor. From the smallest insect to the largest mammal; I find this view quite refreshing.”

“I bet you do. All of God's creatures ehh Spock?.” McCoy replied with an air of sarcasm.

“In fact,” Kirk added as he stood up from his command chair, “the laws on their planet contain stiff penalties for the intentional death of plant life. Pick a four leaf clover to find out if someone loves you could land you in prison.”

McCoy joined Kirk as he walked toward the turbo-lift. Kirk looked up at the view screen then back to Spock.

“Go ahead and continue your scans Mr. Spock, you’ve got the con. Doctor, how about giving me that quarterly physical you’ve been hounding me for the last three weeks.”

McCoy and Kirk stepped into the turbolift, and headed off to Sickbay

Spock and the science labs would have plenty of time to conduct their scans and make their final assessments. The Linovans gave Starfleet a set amount of time to conduct the science studies, after which the Enterprise would have to move off and record the collision from a safe distance. Some of the crew were on Linova Prime enjoying shore leave, but they would be ordered up to the Enterprise two full days before the event.

All there was left to do was to wait.

END OF PART ONE

PART TWO

Hours later;

The Linovan Senate listened to the pleas of the planet’s defense minister. The Senate was comprised of nine senators, each elected by democratic rule. There was no President, just the Senate. It decided on policy on a planetary level.

Captain Kirk, Mr. Spock and Doctor McCoy had come to the gathering and sat in the large gallery. The gallery held nearly four hundred civilians from all parts of the planet. They all listened to the defense minister’s pleas.

“We still do not know what harm will come to our planet when this object hits the northern ocean. All we have is the data provided by the Federation. None of it can be taken as certain.” Divan said plainly.

“It does not matter Minister Divan.” The current Senate Majority leader replied. “Our laws stretch back nearly three hundred solar cycles. Once that object enters this planet’s atmosphere it will be protected by our most sacred law.”

The crowd in the gallery cheered.

“And if millions of our fellow citizens die?" Divan interjected as the crowd cheered. Suddenly the crowd booed.

“All precautions are being taken Minister.” Another Senator said with full confidence and supported cheering from the crowd.

“And so no one will die?” Divan asked the Senator.

There was no reply from the Senate. The gallery was silent.
______________________

Spock piloted the shuttle as Kirk and McCoy sat behind him in the compartment. The collision was only a day and a half away. They could even see the approaching large ‘tree in space’ as the shuttle raced toward the orbiting Starship Enterprise.

“The Minister made some good points.” McCoy said quietly.

“He did.” Kirk agreed.

“And yet the Senate, and the citizens who were present, still chose to let the event happen naturally.” Spock spoke from his control

“And you think it was the right way to go?” McCoy said with sarcasm.

“It doesn’t matter what we believe Doctor.” Spock said. “They have chosen this course and the matter is not ours’ to interpret.”

Kirk stared at the object in space. For lack of a better description it did indeed resemble a large tree in space.

Spock’s calculations showed that as the ‘tree’ came into the atmosphere; most of the outer skin would be burned off. Then the large root system that was folded over the rest of the object would unfurl and the roots would dive into the ocean bottom and take hold.

The collision would cause massive Tsunami. Linova Prime had taken great precaution and had evacuated the population that was threatened. The root system would dive nearly one mile into the planetary crust. Studies showed the likelihood of a small planetary shift. Weather patterns would be affected for nearly ten earth years due mantle displacement into the surrounding atmosphere. The planet would face no long term effects due to the speed of the collison, which would be nearly 700 kilometers per hour.

Now all there was to do was…wait…and watch.

END OF PART TWO

START OF PART THREE

Several hours had passed and the time for the collision was practically at hand.

Captain Kirk stood inside the turbolift as it darted towards the bridge. He had just made a brief walk through the ship. He had spoken briefly with Mr. Scott, making sure that all the systems were ready.

He had even stopped by at Sickbay. McCoy assured him that the medical staff was ready for any possible problems that may arrive.

Then he had found himself on the observation deck. From there he could see the instrument of possible destruction as it came closer and closer toward Linova Prime. Should they have violated the wishes of this planet’s population to save them from themselves? Kirk had done it before, violated a planet’s wishes. Should this have been one of those times?

After a brief respite, Captain Kirk entered the bridge, sat in his chair, and took the free time to gage his crew. The bridge crew had gathered for the coming event. Sulu and Chekov were busy with their routine checks. Spock was conversing with Uhura over at her station.

The view-screen was centered on the ‘Tree’. The collision with the planet was with in one hour from happening. Even if the planet government wanted them to, the Enterprise would not longer be able to change the path of the ‘tree’. The collision was now a forgone conclusion.

It was at that moment that the deflector shield light on the helm consol began to flash.

Sulu looked back to Kirk.

“Captain the deflector shields have snapped on.” The helmsmen said quickly.

“Spock?” Kirk called out, almost instinctively, as he turned his chair to face Uhura’s station.

“Analyzing now Captain,” Spock said as he traversed the upper-deck to his science station.

Spock gazed down into his viewer. “The object has omitted a low energy pulse, a wave. It is traveling away from the object, and the planet, and will pass the Enterprise in ten seconds.”

Kirk didn’t like the sound of that at all. “Will the screens hold?”

Spock looked up and over to Kirk.. “The pulse is very faint, but it is gaining speed. It is composed of a substance which is interacting with subspace. Captain, there is no record of its composition in the computer library.”

Kirk was growing impatient. “What does that mean for us Spock?” Kirk asked.

“We will find out…” Spock stopped as the ship was shaken by the passing wave. “Now.”

Through-out the ship, the crew was mildly shaken by the passing of the wave. In sickbay Doctor McCoy, who was conversing with Nurse Chapel, shook his head.

“Why do I always have to be right?” McCoy said in a low voice.

Nurse Chapel was about to reply when she realized that his statement did not imply a need for a response.

Meanwhile, on the bridge, Uhura spoke from her post. “No damages reported Captain.”

Spock returned to his readings. “The pulse is traveling back upon the course the object came from.”

“Do you think it was some kind of…signal?” Kirk pondered.

“Insufficient data Captain, but that would seem to be a logical assumption. It is not expanding in size at all. The wave’s size is roughly the width of the object.” Spock replied.

Chekov spoke from his post. “Sort of like a ripple in a pond, I suppose?.”

Kirk shook his head. “No… I don’t think so Mr. Chekov. Ripples get larger as they expand.”

Uhura cut in. “Captain, Minister Divan is hailing the ship.”

Kirk turned toward the view-screen. “Put him on the screen Lieutenant.” Kirk replied.

Divan ’s upper-torso soon filled the screen. The Senators could be seen in the back ground as well.

“Captain Kirk, three of our outlining space labs have monitored a pulse-wave emanating from the object.” Divan stated with a sense of urgency.

Kirk nodded in agreement. “We have monitored it as well Minister. We have reason to believe it may have been some kind of signal.”

“What kind of signal?” Divan asked quickly.

Kirk stood up from his chair. The legendary Starship Captain already knew where this conversation was headed. “We don’t know.”

Divan didn’t like that answer at all, but jumped to the obvious conclusion. “It was a homing signal.”

Divan turned back to the Senate. “One of those things I could almost accept. But now, for all we know, that thing may be calling out for more of its kind to follow it here.”

Kirk had to remind Divan the simple truth. “Minister Divan. There is no way to stop this thing from colliding with your planet. We could try destroying it but our weapons would only break it into smaller, but still very large parts, and the trajectory of where those parts would land would be impossible to determine. I’m sorry, but it’s past the point of no return.”

Divan, and the Senators, could see Kirk standing on his bridge via their large view-screen.

Divan gave Kirk and understanding smile. “We understand Captain Kirk. Perhaps, if others do come, the Federation can take actions to prevent them from making it to Linova”

The senate majority leader spoke before Kirk could. “The Federation will do no such thing.”

Divan turned to the senator. “What?”

The senator was resolute. “One or one-hundred of these life forms doesn’t change the ruling of this senate. No action will be taken against it, or others that may follow. The law is clear on this matter.”

Divan’s rising anger was noticeable. “Don’t you understand what may happen? What if a hundred of those things respond and come to Linova Prime? They would destroy this planet, and kill us all in the process.”

The senator was steadfast. “Perhaps you are right Minister Divan. But who and what we are as a people, our values, can not be set aside for some out dated notion of survival. If our society faces oblivion, then we must face it un-wavering in our belief that all life is connected. Perhaps your education as a child was not sufficient enough to prepare you for this simple truth.”

Divan shook his head in disbelief. “You will sacrifice every man, woman and child to sustain this belief?”

“The Senate has already ruled on this matter.” Another Senator said.

With nothing more to be said, the communication with the Linovan Defense Minister ended.

Kirk walked over to Spock’s station.

“Where is that wave now?” Kirk asked.

Spock made some calculations. As he did, he spoke to Kirk. “We don’t have all the facts Jim. It would be illogical for this object to be the cause of this planet’s destruction.”

Kirk nodded in agreement. “I agree Spock. Why do you think it is here? What has brought it to this planet?”

Spock arched an eyebrow. “The wave is now traveling at warp 8, however it seems to be slowing its rate of acceleration. It is still traveling back upon the object’s path.” Spock said first. Then he continued. “As for why it has come here?” Spock pondered. He looked at it on the view-screen. So did Kirk. Kirk looked back to Spock for an answer.

“Survival has brought it here Captain.” Spock concluded.

“Suvival.” Kirk repeated.

“I have scanned the near by solar systems. This is the only solar system in this sector that has, with-in it, an M class planet with large amounts of water.”

Kirk had come to that same conclusion as well. “And so this ‘Tree’ travels through space, and when its water reserves run low, it finds the nearest planet with large amounts of water to replenish its supply. Then, some how, it pulls up its roots and heads back into space.”

Spock nodded. “That is a logical conclusion, based on what little facts we have.”

Kirk smiled. “And no doubt your conclusion as well.”

Spock arched an eyebrow. “Please Captain.”

Kirk sat back in his chair and ordered Sulu to back the Enterprise off from its current position. The ship was nearly three hundred thousand miles behind the ‘Tree’. Several probes had been launched to study the Tree’s decent through the various layers of the planet atmosphere. The view-screen still was centered on the ‘Tree’, but four smaller sections of the screen showed various data flows from the probes.

The turbolift doors opened and Doctor McCoy stepped onto the bridge. He walked down and stood beside Kirk’s chair.

“Well Jim,” McCoy said, “it’s showtime.”

“And ‘vee have front row seats.” Chekov added from his post.

Sulu chimed in as well. “I’m not sure this is the kind of show I want to see.”

Kirk pressed a switch on the arm of his chair.

“Scott here’a.” A familiar voice responded.

“Scotty,” Kirk said, “just incase something happens, make sure Sulu can get us out of here at a moment’s notice.”

Scotty replied in his usual cheerful manner. “Aye, Captain. Just give the word. Scott out.”

At that moment the front section of the Tree began to glow. It was now starting to enter Linova’s atmosphere.

Spock looked into the viewer at his science station. He thought for a moment then walked quickly to Kirk’s chair.

Kirk could tell that his Vulcan friend was worried. Though, of course, Vulcan’s don’t worry. But Kirk knew Spock better than that.

“What is it Spock?” Kirk asked.

“The pulse-wave has changed direction. It is heading back toward Linova Prime at Warp 5.”

Kirk looked worried. He looked to Sulu.

“Mr. Sulu, bring us hard to port! I don’t want to be anywhere in the path of that wave.” Kirk ordered.

Kirk turned back to Spock.

“Spock; how long until the wave will get here?” Kirk asked.

Spock didn’t miss a beat. “The wave will return in approximately eighty-seven point three seconds.”

Kirk snapped his fingers. The captain didn’t like the invariables that were now in control of what was to happen. “Then it wasn’t a signal after all.”

Spock could sense Kirk’s frustration. “We still don’t have all the facts Captain.”

“I know Mr. Spock.” Kirk responded. “And now, for all we know, we might witness one of the greatest natural disasters of all time. Six billion helpless souls down there could possibly die, and there is nothing we can do to stop it.”

McCoy knew that Kirk felt helpless, and perhaps guilty in some small way. “Jim, don’t go beating your self up over this. These people knew the risks.” McCoy switched his gaze over to Spock. “Didn’t they Spock?”

Spock was silent.

Kirk had a thought though. He whirled back around to face his first officer as well. “Where is the wave headed?”

The Vulcan stared back down into his viewer for confirmation. “It is heading straight for object. The exact course the ‘Tree’ has been on since the USS Kennedy first came upon it three Earth standard months ago.”

Kirk’s sudden speculation appeared to have validity.

Spock knew when his Captain had a theory. “Captain, do you have a theory?”

Captain Kirk did indeed. “You said it yourself Spock. The ‘Tree’ has never changed course from the moment Starfleet began tracking it at warp speeds three months ago. It has been traveling pretty much on a straight line.”

“And?” McCoy asked impatiently.

The Captain looked up at the glowing ‘Tree’ as it began to glow even brighter.

“What if it can’t change its course? What if the planet is simply in the way?”

Spock nodded, almost surprised at his Captain’s deduction. “The wave will strike the object in ten seconds.”

The Enterprise was at a safe distance should the planet begin to be broken up. The bridge crew of the U.S.S. Enterprise all watched helplessly as the wave slammed into the glowing image on the screen.

“Oh my…” It was all that James Kirk could muster to say.

END OF PART TRHEE
 
Re: Star Trek; All Of God's Creatures, Big and Small

An interesting premise, with some good dialogue between the characters. :) Will there be more to this story, or is that it?
 
Re: Star Trek; All Of God's Creatures, Big and Small

Yeah, what Gibraltar said. It was very smooth and a nice vignette. I'd like to see more as well.
 
Re: Star Trek; All Of God's Creatures PART 3

You're still doing a good job capturing the essences of the canon characters and you've developed an interesting premise here with the Tree. A very good first effort.
 
Re: Star Trek; All Of God's Creatures PART 3

Keep it coming.

We're all liking and that is actually quite an unusual thing here. You've got us hooked, now reel us in.
 
Wow, that ended up being a little more worst-case-scenario than I'd anticipated. :eek: Good crew interaction during the event, you've obviously got a good feel for these characters.
 
TOS; God PART 4

STAR TREK;
ALL OF GOD'S CREATURES
Written by Robert Scorpio

PART FOUR

The Enterprise bridge crew watched in silence as the wave slammed into the ‘Tree’. Slammed was not the precise description. The wave was glowing, no doubt the effect of subspace. And like a ring of fire, the wave passed back over the ‘Tree’. As soon as it was past the ‘Tree’ a shock wave burst in the wave’s wake. The probes that had been trailing the ‘Tree’ were destroyed instantly.

Captain Kirk, and the rest of the crew, shielded their eyes as best they could. Sulu shielded his eyes enough to keep constant focus on his readings. He was prepared to go into warp at any second.

The intense bright outburst began to fade.

McCoy was the first to respond to what they saw next. “What happened?”

They all stood in silent shock. The planet Linova Prime was gone; destroyed. Six billion Linovans had died in little less than fifteen seconds.

Kirk turned to face Spock. The Vulcan, too, seemed unpleasantly surprised. Finally, the science officer turned to his station and gazed into his viewer.

“The planet is gone.” Spock finally said.

“I don’t believe it.” McCoy said, mirroring all their thoughts.

As the glow of the shockwave totally faded, one thing did remain. The ‘Tree’, now no longer aglow, continued as if nothing had happened at all.

Kirk turned his attention to Chekov. “Mr. Chekov, plot the ‘Tree’s’ course.”

“Aye sir.” Chekov replied.

The data from Chekov’s station was transferred to Spock’s science station. Kirk and McCoy walked over to the Vulcan, who was busy reading the data in his viewer.

“Where is this thing going next Spock?” McCoy asked.

Spock stood up from his viewer. “According to ship readings, it will continue on its current course into the heart of Federation space, and then out of the galaxy into deep inter-galactic space. There are no planets in its current direct path.”

Kirk shook his head in disappointment. “That would make sense. The vastness of space makes it highly improbable that something this size would hit a planet, or moon, or anything else.” Kirk continued. “Linova was destroyed for simply being in the wrong place at the wrong time.” Kirk thought of his options. “So what do we do? Just let it go on its way?”

McCoy answered him. “You can’t take that risk Jim.”

Kirk looked back to McCoy. “You think we should destroy it?”

The ship’s surgeon nodded. “Yes, I do. This situation is no different than that robot planet killer that cost Commodore Decker his life, almost cost you yours, and the Rigel system as well.”

Spock looked at McCoy. “Interesting how humans can rationalize the death of a life that is in no way a direct threat to their own.”

McCoy understood Spock’s meaning. “I know it sounds cruel Spock. But I chose life over death. And the simple fact is we don’t know if this constant course it is on won’t change. And I don’t mean to state the obvious, but six billion Linovans were just killed by that thing. Where is your Vulcan compassion for them?”

The captain took in both sides of their argument. Both argued from strong positions. The mission of the crew of the Enterprise was space exploration, and finding new life forms. The mission wasn’t to destroy the new life forms they came across. But they also had the responsibility or protecting the Federation from attack, or any kind of destruction, if at all possible.

“Keptain”, Chekov asked from this post, “this is very strange. According to our readings the ‘Tree’ is still decelerating.”

Kirk watched as Spock, who was no doubt distracted by the turn of events as well, studied the readings.

“Maybe it was damaged by the explosion.” McCoy suggested.

“I think not Doctor.” Spock replied. “However, sensor scans are reading some sort of power build up coming from with-in the root system.”

“I thought scans were inconclusive.” Kirk said to Spock. “Even the USS Kennedy crew, which followed it for nearly a month, was unable to make any determination as to what was inside the outer root section.”

Spock looked to Kirk and nodded in agreement. “Very correct Captain, however the short time it spent in Linova Prime’s atmosphere seems to have burned off enough of that outer layer to permit more conclusive scans.”

McCoy followed Spock’s line of thought. “And now, after destroying Linova Prime, it is going to blow its self apart?”

“That is a distinct possibility.” Spock concluded.

The Captain didn’t seem convinced. “Something isn’t quite right, Mr. Spock.” Kirk stated. “Can you determine how old this thing is?”

Spock considered his answer, and then he spoke. “Based on preliminary readings I would say it could be on the scale of a billion years old, if not older.”

“A billion years old?” McCoy scoffed back. “Is that even possible?”

Captain Kirk could understand McCoy’s disbelief. “Who knows Bones? But if is that old, certainly it must have collided with another planet or other space body by this time. And yet, here it is.”

“Fascinating,” Spock said, “we are dealing with a life form that has defied the one true constant that all life in the universe must face; death.” Spock continued his scans. “But in any event Captain, there is some sort of power build up.”

Kirk sat back down in his command chair. It was time to act. “Mr. Sulu, let’s give this thing some room. Back us off to a distance of one million kilometers.”

“Aye Captain,” Sulu replied.

Moments later, the ship was at a safer distance.

Another probe had been launched to send back sensor readings, and to provide a better view of the 12 mile long object. The images coming back showed the unmistakable proof that parts of the leading edge of the ‘Tree’ had indeed been burned off.

“How long until this build up will lead to an explosion Spock?” Kirk asked.

“I can not give you an exact time Captain.” Spock began, “However, the probe is detecting some interesting gravitational anomalies along with the power build up.”

Suddenly, the deflector shields detected the approach of another energy wave, expelled by the 'Tree'. This time the Enterprise was not in the path. The wave would pass harmlessly, several hundred thousand kilometers off the port side of the ship.

“Spock, anything you have would be very helpful right now.” Kirk stated, in a matter of fact tone.

“Understood,” Spock replied. The science officer studied the wave through his viewer. Once again there seemed to be some interaction between the wave and subspace. “It is the same as before Captain.”

McCoy asked the next obvious question. “Is this wave going to come back as well?”

Spock did not answer. Not at first. Then, finally, “As before, Captain, it is traveling away at warp 8.”

A few more moments passed. “New data; the second wave has reversed course and is heading back toward the object.”

“This is just maddening.” McCoy stated, as if reading all of their minds.

“I agree Dr. McCoy.” Uhura offered from her post, “this is one of the most bizarre things I have ever seen.”

“How long this time Spock?” Kirk asked.

“The wave traveled the same amount of distance as the previous one. I believe this is some sort of natural occurrence Captain. It is part of this life form’s being. Perhaps the wave must attain some pre-determined velocity for it to have some as of yet unknown effect upon subspace.”

“What kind of living life form can expel subspace waves?” Chekov wondered allowed.

“This one,” Sulu replied, almost dead pan.

The crew could only listen to Spock’s occasional count down. In mere moments the second wave returned. And just as before, it encompassed the ‘Tree’ and again, as before, a bright shock wave emanated from the blast. The probe was instantly destroyed. But being as far off as the ship was, the crew didn’t need to shield their eyes as long.

Spock had returned to his viewer. His next word spoke volumes; “Amazing.”

“What’s amazing Spock?” Kirk asked, nearly on the edge of his seat.

Spock pressed buttons on his panel. The view screen magnified to show a closer image of where the ‘Tree’ was. Suddenly, the space around the ‘Tree’ began to be distorted. Waves of subspace disturbance rippled out from the immediate area of the ‘Tree’.. The ship began to shake as the waves reached out to the surrounding space.

And suddenly, with out warning, it was as if a super-nova had gone off. The brightness of what ever had happened blinded the crew of the bridge. And just as before, the brightness ebbed. And then, there it was; Linova Prime.

The crew all stood up from their posts. They had all witnessed the unbelievable. Uhura was the first to speak.

“Captain,” she said excitedly, “I am receiving a hailing signal from the planet.”

Kirk could only point at the screen. The image of the planet was replaced by that of Minister Divan and the Senate.

“Minister Divan,” Kirk said with a smile, “you’re looking well for someone who was just eliminated from existence.”

Divan nodded in understanding. “We have experienced something of a profound nature Captain Kirk. We experienced a short term of our lives outside anything we could possibly describe.” Divan looked back at the Senate, then back to Kirk. “You might even say that I have seen the light.”

The crew of the Enterprise could only wonder for themselves what Divan meant by that.


TWO DAYS LATER.

Captains Log Stardate 4789.4

We have received new orders from Starbase 12, and the crew is in good spirits. We are still at a loss of words for what happened here at Linova Prime. Doctor McCoy conducted routine medical check ups on Minister Divan and a few other Linovans. All seems well. The Minister or Defense, and the others we spoke to were still vague as to what they experienced, when they had been pushed out of the universe for a brief time. Perhaps they saw an aspect of life beyond anything anyone from this universe is supposed to see.

We still do not know the fate of the ‘Tree’. The last readings we received from the probe we launched put the ‘Tree’s’ last location at a point directly in the center of the planet. The planet has a very dense iron core that prevents any conclusive readings. A Federation science team is in route for further studies.

Captain Kirk had been walking through the corridor of deck five. He had spent most of the day recording reports and signing the usual redundant reports required at the end of a mission. He passed Mr. Scott, and stopped.

“Mr. Scott, have you seen Dr. McCoy or Mr. Spock?” Kirk asked.

Scotty smiled. “Yes sir. They’re both down at the arboretum. But if you ask me sir, this sudden craze on the ship’s crew to plant a tree at the arboretum or grow a plant in ye quarters is a bit daft.”

Kirk smiled back to his engineer. “I hadn’t notice.”

Moments later James T Kirk entered the arboretum. And sure enough, just as Scott had said, there was a suprising amount of crew members visiting today. Kirk spotted Mcoy and Spock on the top level, looking through the observation deck, back at Linova Prime as it slowly grew smaller in the distance of space. Several minutes later Kirk joined his two friends.

“Are you two going to plant a tree?” Kirk asked them both.

McCoy smiled back at Kirk. “We already did.” McCoy replied. As he pointed to an area on the lower level.

Kirk turned his attention to Spock. “You have been quiet these past couple days Spock. Why?”

Spock, with his hands clasped behind his back, looked to Kirk. “There is an Earth saying that seems quite appropiate Captain; loose ends.”

Kirk nodded in agreement. “I understand Mr. Spock. There was no satisfying answer as to what happened to Linova Prime; where did it go? Where happened to the ‘Tree’?”

Spock continued. “Yet at the core of the situation, an entire civilzation was willing to have their world destroyed, and their lives, all for a principle.”

Doctor McCoy took up where Spock left off. “It isn’t the first time that has happened Spock, nor will it be the last time. Belief systems can be quite powerful.”

“If you mean to compare this to the belief in a God,” Spock said, “or other metaphysical belief, I don’t see the connection Doctor. Their’s was a stand on an ideal.”

McCoy pressed the issue. “You heard the Senator that day Spock. They believed that all life in the universe was connected in some entangible way. Sounds like a belief system to me.”

Kirk pondered what they were saying. “So where did Linova go to Spock? What does logic suggest here?”

Spock thought for a moment. “Nothing has changed Captain. We don’t have enough information to determin, logically, where the planet was moved to.”

“Speculation then?” Kirk asked again.

Spock was not known to offer speculation with out facts. But there were times he came pretty close to it.

“They left the Universe. That much I will offer speculation on.” Spock concluded.

McCoy patted Spock on the back. “Jim, that’s about as close as he’s going to come to going out on a limb. Me? I think it proves there is somewhere, some place, beyond the universe. And our Vulcan friend here can’t bring him self to admit it.”

“And the ‘Tree’?” Kirk added. “Was it meant to come here, on a straight line from outside the galaxy. Was it destined to end it’s journey in the center of that planet after a billion, and perhaps more, years of travel?”

Even McCoy didn’t have an answer for that one.

The three close friends watched as Linova Prime became just another lighted spec in the sky. The Enterprise soon streaked away into the tapestry of stars before it.

LINOVA PRIME

Minister Divan held his four year old son, Divor, in his arms. He stood on the balcony of his home and stared out at the northern sea. There was a slight breeze that brought the smell of the ocean. It was the first time in three months he felt at ease.

For the first time in his life he understood what it was to be a Linovan. All life, from the smallest insect to the largest tree, seemed connected, weaved together by some fabric that no word could truly grasp. That is what he and his people believed. Perhaps they seemed archaic but it didn’t matter. Their recent experience only enforced their beliefs.

“Papa?” four year old Divor asked asked.

“Yes my son, what is it?” Divan replied.

His son pointed off to the horizon, just where the sea met the sky. “What is that?”

And sure enough, there was something out on the horizon. Something that had not been there before. Divan went into his home and brought out a vision enhancement visor. He put it over his eyes to get a better look the object on the horizon.

It was the top of a tree. The ocean depth that far out was at least four to five hundred feet. Divan smiled.

“What is it daddy?” his son asked again.

Divan could only stare down at his son, and then back out at the tree. “A friend my son. A friend.”

The father and son watched as the Linovan sun soon kissed the horizon, and soon disappeared behind it.

EPILOGUE

102 years later.

The USS DEFIANT was a battered ship. It was limping through space, and with warp drive nearly giving out, Capatin Sisko knew that home, DS9, was still quite a bit away away. They had managed to destroy the three Jem’Hedar ships in battle, but the cost was heavy. Six crew members had been severly injured, and there had been one death.

Jadzia Dax looked back to him, her voice strained against the sparking consols and sounds of a damaged laidened ship. “Benjamin, you were right. Linova Prime does have an orbiting space dock that could be used to make repairs.”

Sisko, his right arm bandaged earlier by Doctor Bashir, felt the spasms of pain, but held them at bay. “Best speed Jadzia. Hurry!”

The USS DEFIANT entered the Linovan star system. Unaware that their destination, Linova Prime, was the home of a century old mystery. And that where they were ultimately going, this unsuspecting crew of the Defiant, was a place beyond the limits of the universe.

End.
 
Re: TOS; God PART 4

Nicely done! You’ve left the crew with a standing mystery, but one of the best kind. I’d thought you’d done a good job with the characters in the first three chapters, but you really nailed them in part four. You’ve made an excellent first entry on the fanfic board. Welcome! :D
 
Re: TOS; God PART 4

Great job! A very well-done TOS story with believable dialog and character work in the midst of an entertaining plot. :)
 
Re: TOS; God PART 4

Thanks for the kind words...

Now, I am having a mind-fart. Where does your quote come from. I have heard it recently but I can't exactly place it!
 
Re: TOS; God PART 4

Nicely done! You’ve left the crew with a standing mystery, but one of the best kind. I’d thought you’d done a good job with the characters in the first three chapters, but you really nailed them in part four. You’ve made an excellent first entry on the fanfic board. Welcome! :D

I had actually sent this, in an altered form, to STAR TREK DS9 while it was in production. I got some nice comments back and they said it was just beyond the scope of DS9. I have altered it here because I had actually written it for TOS, then adapted it to DS9, so now I have adapted it back...whew..I am dizzy

Rob
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