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ST: Independence - "Beneath the Raptor's Wings"

^^ Yes Excellent ...

I like the glimpse into karim's mind and how he sees himself that Aurelia is tiring of the cloak and dagger stuff. Who can blame her after being burned so badly. But it bespokes volumes that Karim gets a rush from it and perhaps his drive and motivation could prove dangerous down the line. A fine line between zeal and being fatalistic.
 
Very nicely done--and yes, it does look like Aurelia has reached her breaking point. As for Karim, as mirandafave pointed out, he's walking a mighty fine tight-rope and he's doing it without a net.
 
It will all start coming together now. Thanks for reading!



CHAPTER 14

Supplemental
USS Independence, MainBridge
Holding Station inside the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

The chronometer display changed to 18:34:07…18:34:08…

There was uneasy quiet on the bridge. Most people were wondering what they were doing here, just sitting in the middle of a cloud of gas, dust, and ice. Only Kimula, bin Nadal and Aurelia knew their reasoning.

Finally, Faltyne offered, “Should I run a scan, Captain?”

“No,” responded Karim out of turn.

Sintina let her irritation pass.

The silence continued.

*****

Supplemental
IRW Odaus, MainBridge
Patrolling the Outmarches

Centurion Chruja cursed, “Hnaev!”

Commander Hanora strode up beside him, “I take it you have something to report?”

“I had them, Commander,” he began. “They were traveling at warp seven and then…” The centurion took a breath and straightened up, “I’m sorry, Commander. I have failed you.”

Hanora’s demeanor became one of frustration, not at her tactical officer, but at the situation as a whole. “Commander P’nav has outwitted us at every turn!” She festered for a moment and then inquired, “Are there any onboard that served under P’nav? Anyone that might still be loyal to him?”

He whispered under his breath, “You suspect a saboteur?”

“Just get me that information, Centurion.”

He nodded, “Of course, sir. I’ll compile it immediately.”

“Where is the Independence?” she asked.

“Off our scopes, Commander,” he quickly added, “but their last known course took them to the Beta Pictoris star.”

“Take us there.”

*****

Supplemental
IRW Fothmar, Commander’s Office
Entering the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

Dulas still overwhelmed at the revelations from his commander, said, “I’ve reviewed the report. I can hardly believe it. All those lives lost…all because of a lie.”

“I have an admission,” started P’nav, “There is another reason for us coming to this system.” The elder Romulan got up from his seat, “Soon, I will transport to another ship in the cloud. You are to make no scans. I should be back within an hour.”

“Are you sure you will be alright, sir?”

“Quite sure.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Engineering
Holding Station inside the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

“Tang,” called Windslow, “Come here. What do you make of this?”

They were reviewing scans taken when the Philadelphia was destroyed. The results were displayed on a wall-mounted screen.

“Look at that spike in quantum energy,” continued Windslow.

Zian examined it for a moment, “Are the Romulans using quantum torpedoes?”

“No, the Fothmar was firing their standard photons.”

“Was it a secondary explosion from the Philly?”

The former captain shook his head, “The time index is too early for any secondary explosions.”

Perplexed, the lieutenant asked, “Then where did that energy come from?”

Windslow reveled in solving riddles, “I’m not sure, but I’m going to find out.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, MainBridge
Holding Station inside the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

The Andorian at communications looked forward, “Ma’am, I’m getting that message we’ve been waiting for.”

Sintina shot up, “Finally.” She walked aft. Karim was right behind her. “I’ll take it in my ready room.”

*****

The door slid shut once bin Nadal entered. They both sat. She activated her terminal. The face of an old Romulan appeared on the screen.

He began, “Federation captain, I am Commander P’nav. I’m under the impression you are to assist me.”

Sintina confirmed coldly, “I’ve been…” She was going to say ordered, but there was no order. “…instructed to take you to Qualor II.”

“Very well. Please transmit transporter coordinates and I’ll transfer over with no further delay.”

“Commander,” started Aurelia in an accusing tone, “What was your intent when you attacked the Philadelphia?”

The elder Romulan hung his head for a second, “Forgive me Captain, for that accident. I only wanted to disable her; not destroy her.”

His explanation didn’t serve to put Sintina at ease.

It took bin Nadal a moment later to put the mission back on course, “Commander P’nav, I’m transmitting those coordinates now.”

“Thank you. I’ll be there in a moment.”

The screen reverted to a Starfleet emblem.

She looked at Karim with steel in her eyes, “I want that man under guard at all times, Commander.”

Karim nodded, “I'll do it personally.”

END OF CHAPTER 14
 
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CHAPTER 15

Supplemental
USS Independence, Unused Crew Quarters
Holding Station inside the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

A green light grew in intensity. When it was gone, a Romulan remained.

The Persian officer raised his hand, “Welcome to the Independence, Commander P’nav.” The Romulan took his hand. Karim continued, “Due to the nature of our mission, I’m afraid you’ll have to remain in these quarters for the duration of our journey.”

P’nav curtsied, “Of course.”

Bin Nadal continued, “We’ll be meeting Admiral Nechayev in a field of mothballed starships in orbit of Qualor II. After that…”

The Romulan interrupted “Admiral Nechayev. That’s all I needed to know.” Suddenly, P’nav shape-shifted into H’gaws, the Philly’s first officer.

Karim had enough time to say, “A Founder!”

The large Caitian grinned with a row of razor sharp teeth, “Chameloid, actually.” The massive feline back handed the human with devastating effect.

Bin Nadal spun back into a bulkhead with enough force to instantly render him unconscious.

The mock Caitian reverted back into the form of P’nav. He activated a recall transport.

*****

Supplemental
IRW Fothmar, MainBridge
Holding Station inside the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

P’nav walked onto the command deck with a purpose. He barked, “Starfleet has discovered us. Scan for nearby ships.”

“Confirmed,” said Dulas, “there is a Steamrunner class starship holding station at 126 mark 039. Its shields and weapons are inactive. It has navigational deflectors up only.”

The Romulan commander ordered, “Charge disruptors, ready torpedoes. Target their warp core. Prepare to decloak.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, MainBridge
Holding Station inside the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

Again Sintina glanced at the time. P’nav should’ve beamed over by now. “Aurelia to bin Nadal.”

There was no response.

She tried again, “Aurelia to bin Nadal, respond.”

Still nothing.

She looked over to Faltyne, “Lieutenant track down bin Nadal for me.”

“Aye, ma’am.” He said. Before he got too far, however, an alarm sounded at his station. He regarded his captain with wide eyes, “D’deridex decloaking.”

Aurelia seemed more confused than concerned, “Why would he want to…”

“Incoming!” came from tactical.

“Shields!”

The ship thundered. There were two impacts.

Faltyne reported without prompting, “We raised them in time. Dorsal shields down to 43 percent.”

“Return fire, all weapons. Target their forward tubes,” snapped Aurelia.

“Dorsal phasers firing,” said the Andorian, “Direct hit to their forward shields.”

The captain didn’t wait to hear all the report. She ordered, “Helm, full impulse. Get us on their ventral side.”

“Aye, sir,” Weston said. He winced for a moment at his use of the “improper” salutation. Luckily, she was too busy to care.

A call came up from engineering, “Captain, it’s too thick here to go to full impulse.”

Her response was quick, “Our best bet is to out maneuver them, damn it.”

“I’ll give you the best I can,” rejoined Windslow.

“Brace for a disruptor volley,” advised the Andorian at tactical.

A series of rumbles followed.

“Ventral shields down to 76 percent.”

Aurelia put the tactical display on the main viewer. They were now facing the warbird’s bottom side. “Target their core. All forward tubes, fire!”

The results were satisfying. Three of the four torpedoes hit their mark. Though, the Independence was armed only with photon torpedoes, the enemy’s shields were down by over sixty percent.

The Fothmar began to roll to port.

“Keep us on their ventral side!” commanded Aurelia.

Disruptor beams and bursts began raining from the D’deridex. The Indy’s forward shields were being pelted.

“Forward shields are failing,” came from tactical.

“Damn,” cursed Aurelia. “Come about, continuous phaser fire. Line us up to use our aft tubes.”

“Their forward weapons have line of sight.”

“Weston, evasive: beta one.”

“Beta one, aye.”

The whole bridge tipped forward as the barrage of fire hit the aft ventral side of the ship. Klaxon after klaxon went off. Aurelia was barely able to catch herself before she fell into the forward stations.

Over the noise, the captain yelled, “Report.”

Faltyne began the grim news, “Aft shields gone. Aft tube two disabled.”

“I think we lost our port impulse engine,” said Weston as he scrambled over his controls.

Sintina’s hair was a mess. She leaned over Weston, “Try to keep our starboard side facing them.” She looked back to Faltyne, “Fire aft tube one as we maneuver.”

“Yes, ma’am,” he hesitantly added, “Captain, I think a withdraw is in order.”

“Normally, I’d agree,” she was surprised to find herself saying, “but not this time.” She opened a channel from the arm rest of the center seat, “If you’re out there, now would be a good time, Captain.”

A moment later, a rough, heavy voice came over the comm., “Not exactly the battle I was expecting, but I’ll take it.”

Mild relief swept over Faltyne as he reported, “K’vort cruiser decloaking. They’re engaging the Fothmar.”

Aurelia couldn’t stop a smirk, “Fire all starboard phasers.”

“The K’vort is draining their aft shields. Their forward shields are down to fifty percent.”

The Fothmar was fighting on two fronts. Despite being outnumbered, the large Romulan vessel could still hold its own. Aurelia realized playing defensively might not work.

Even though the Indy had minimal forward shielding, Aurelia decided to risk it. “Line up forward tubes and fire!”

The disruptor fire was relentless. Once the Indy turned enough, the impacts began to slam into the hull. One blast demolished the starboard most launcher.

“Torpedoes away,” relayed the Andorian. A moment later, he reported, “The Fothmar’s forward shields are down and several of their weapons are offline.”

She asked, “How’s the Heh,mup doing?”

The Andorian assumed she meant the K’vort. “Their shields are holding.”

“Well don’t stop now,” pressed Aurelia, “Fire at will.”

After only a few more shots, Faltyne informed them, “The Fothmar is moving off. They’re cloaking.”

“Don’t let them get away!” ordered the captain.

The tactical officer did his best, but was disappointed. “I’m sorry, ma’am. It’s hard enough to track a normal ship in this mess; let alone one with a cloak.”

Sintina huffed. She paced for a minute. Adrenaline still pulsed through her veins. Slowly, she calmed down. Finally, she said to no one in particular, “What the hell was that all about?” There was no immediate answer. Then, she said, “Karim.”

END OF CHAPTER 15
 
Another dangerous turn of events for the Indy crew. Bin Nadel has probably given away a vital secret and things remain murky for all the participants.

Things are on an knife edge for Aurelia and co. and it continues to make for great action drama.
 
Here's the last installment. I hope you enjoyed it.

CHAPTER 16

Supplemental
USS Independence, Unused Crew Quarters
Holding Station inside the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

Doctor Zo’Kama rushed to bin Nadal’s side as she entered. Her medical tricorder was out within a blink. He had a severe concussion. She readied a hypo and injected him.

Slowly his eyes opened. He blinked several times. Absently, he said, “Doctor, where am I?”

The reptilian cocked her head, “You’re in a crew’s quarters.”

He repeated with glazed eyes, “Where am I?”

He got hit hard. It would take a moment for him to recover. She simply stated, “Just lay back and relax for a while.”

“Ok.”

The Arkonian activated her compin, “Doctor to bridge.”

“Aurelia here.”

“He’s here,” reported Zo’Kama. “He’ll be fine. I’m going to have him transported to sickbay.”

“Understood.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, Sickbay
Holding Station inside the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

About an hour later, Sintina came to visit him. Karim had been kicking himself for being so foolish for the better part of that time.

She went to his bedside. “Zo’Kama tells me you took one hell of a hit.”

He was too frazzled for small talk, “They know. I gave them her name and now they know.”

“What happened?”

“It was a set up,” he continued, “it was all a set up to get Admiral Nechayev’s name. P’nav was a Chameloid. He…it…was probably working for Section 31.”

Dejected, Sintina sat on a nearby stool. “Goddamn spy shit.”

“We have to warn her,” Karim persisted.

She began to nod unenthusiastically, “All right. I’ll tell Wo’toth before he leaves. He’ll be able to get the message to her.”

He shook his head, “I’m such an idiot.”

She got up and offered, “Look on the bright side. We won the battle.” The observation didn’t have the desired effect. She smirked weakly and headed for the exit.

He said to himself grimly, “No. No, we didn’t.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, Conference Lounge
Just outside of the Beta Pictoris Proto-System

The Odaus rendezvoused with them a few minutes ago. Commander Hanora and her first officer joined the senior staff for a partial debriefing.

“I must say,” began Hanora purposely, “I’m amazed you were able to find the Fothmar in the debris disk at all.”

The best cover story Sintina could come up with was, “I had a hunch.”

“A hunch,” repeated Hanora. She let the comment linger for a moment before moving on, “Well regardless, your ship is in no condition to continue the search.” She and Jaliv stood, “On behalf of the Romulan Star Empire, I thank you for the efforts. Starfleet has sacrificed much on this joint mission. I mourn for your losses.”

Everyone else went to their feet as well.

Aurelia said, “Thank you, Commander. I wish this little…venture was more productive.”

“As do I.”

The Independence captain asked, “What will you do now?”

Hanora considered the question. “He will eventually be tracked down and punished,” she added with menace, “as those who support him will be.”

“Good luck with your pursuit,” Aurelia said genuinely.

The Romulans were escorted out a moment later, leaving the Indy’s senior staff behind.

Aurelia opened up with, “Where do we stand?”

“I recommend we make a course for Starbase 23,” said Windslow. “Our port impulse engine is shot, along with dozens of secondary systems. It’ll take months to repair without help.”

“Two torpedo launchers are out,” added Faltyne, “and three phaser arrays.”

“I have a bit of good news,” commented the doctor, “There were only moderate injuries to seven crewmembers.”

Aurelia resigned herself, “Alright, Starbase 23 it is. Set a course and engage at warp five. If there isn’t anything else, dismissed.”

Most people began to file out. Windslow and Tang stood fast. The chief engineer piped up, “Captain, we’d like to have a word with you and Commander bin Nadal.”

The two stopped.

Sintina was tired, but she sighed and said, “Sure, what is it.”

Ethan went up to the display and brought up some scan results. He explained, “When we were working on the report concerning the Philadelphia’s destruction, we came across some odd readings.”

He had their attention. So he continued, “There was an unexplained change in the quantum signature of the nearby space.”

He waited for a reaction. There was none.

The science officer elaborated, “You see, everything in the universe has a specific quantum signature. There is no known way to change it.”

“So how’d it change?” asked Karim.

“We searched for anything that might explain it,” said Windslow. “In theory, the only thing that could do it is a molecular phase inverter.”

He got blank stares again.

Tang explained, “In theory, a molecular phase inverter can change the quantum signature of matter and energy in this universe and shift it out of phase. The result is anything out of phase with the rest of universe is invisible.”

“Not only that,” added Windslow, “but if it’s out of phase, matter and energy from our universe wouldn’t have any affect on it.”

“Soo,” began Aurelia, “What are you saying?”

“We think the Philadelphia has some type of interphasic cloaking device,” said Windslow.

“It wasn’t destroyed at all,” inserted Tang. “It just phased slightly out of our universe.”

Karim commented, “I remember hearing something about that around five years ago.” He searched his mind, “Um, some admiral was accused of developing it on an Oberth class ship.”

“Wouldn’t that violate the Treaty of Algeron?” asked Tang.

The Persian mused darkly, “I don’t think these people really care.”

“What people?” he rejoined.

“Nevermind that, Lieutenant,” said Aurelia. “Thank you for bringing this to our attention. Dismissed.”

Reluctantly, Tang left. Windslow went up to Aurelia, “Captain, it’s a well known secret there is something…odd about some of the things we do on this ship. Most ignore it, but I have a…personal interest in what is going on this time. Remember how Admiral Ross promised me a special assignment if I kept my mouth shut about…about what I did?”

She nodded, “I remember. Maybe we can talk about it later. For now…good work.”

The compliment took him back. “Thank you, Captain.” He decided not to press the issue and exited.

Karim shared an ominous look with Sintina.

She said, “I knew that son of a bitch wouldn’t go away that easy.”

*****

Stardate: 54521.3 (10 July 2377)
USS Independence, Captain’s Ready Room
En Route to Starbase 23

“Captain,” said Kimula’s voice, “you have an incoming message on a coded channel.”

She put down the maintenance report, “Fine.” She activated the computer. A blonde-haired human stared back at her. Her face was calmer than Sintina would expect her to be. “Admiral Nechayev,” she said by way of greeting.

“Captain Aurelia,” she began, “I’ve been informed of a problem with our last mission.”

More than a bit perturbed, she responded spitefully, “Yes sir, it turns out your informant was a spy for Section 31. At least, that’s what we suspect.”

“The real P’nav is obviously dead.” The admiral went on, “The fact that 31 has my name is to be expected. It was only a matter of time.” She added, almost motherly, “Don’t blame Karim too much. He had no way of knowing.”

“We found out something else,” offered Sintina, “We think the Philadelphia has an interphasic cloak.”


Nechayev’s reaction was neutral, “That doesn’t surprise me. I’m sure she’s now part of their shadow fleet.”

“Shadow fleet?”

“A fleet of ships with no Starfleet or Federation markings. Ships that don’t officially exist.”

Sintina shook her head as the ramifications hit her, “So Collins is more dangerous than ever.”

“Absolutely,” she agreed.

The captain took a moment, “So why did you call, Admiral?”

The middle-aged woman took a breath, “I wanted to thank you personally for all you’ve done. All you’ve tried to do. I know you don’t have as much faith in us as your first officer, but you’ve helped us more than you’ll ever know.”

Aurelia leaned in, “This is starting to sound like a good-bye, sir.”

“Of sorts,” she confirmed. She concluded, “I’m afraid I’m rather busy at the moment, Captain. So, I’ll simply say, Godspeed.”

“Thank you, sir.”

“Nechayev out.”

She leaned back. The odd conversation got her thinking.

*****

Supplemental
Location Unknown

A narrow faced Romulan spoke to the agent with a silver tongue, “It was an unfortunate situation with P’nav. I should have told you about my plan to use him to expose the resistance cell before you had him killed.”

A dark-skinned human male responded evenly, “Yes, it would have been helpful, Koval.” He leaned back, “We were able to salvage the situation quite nicely, however.”

“I am pleased then.”

Morgan decided to bring up something else, if for no other reason than to gauge the Romulan’s reaction. “My infiltrator read a very interesting letter from P’nav to his first officer.”

Without missing a beat, Koval said, “Ah, yes. The story about the how the Federation was aiding a Reman revolt. Well, I had to tell P’nav something to properly motivate him. Why do you bring it up? There isn’t any truth to it is there?”

Slyly the 31 agent responded, “Of course not. You’re our man on Romulas. Anything we do in the Empire, we do through you.”

“And I would be equally foolish,” added Koval, “to subvert your efforts. I would have nothing to gain and everything to lose by going against your Directorate.”

Morgan stated, “I’m glad we’re in agreement, then.” He concluded with, “We’ll be in touch. Morgan out.” He closed the channel.

The agent got out of his seat and approached a large window overlooking the refit station. Held in the scaffolding was a Sovereign class ship. A machine was slowly passing over top of the saucer section. It was spraying the hull with a black pigment. It passed over the word “Philadelphia.”

END OF CHAPTER 16

END OF “BENEATH THE RAPTOR’S WINGS”
 
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Ok ... wow :eek: ... :wtf:

I thought the Phily wasn't destroyed but still to learn of its ultimate fate that's scary.

And Aurelia's conversation with the Admiral is rather ominous too.

And ... why is it the end of your stories are never straightforward endings. Always ambigious.

Heck who am I kidding? I like them that way. No I love them that way!

:hugegrin:Well done a terrific story.
 
Man, you really kept me going with that--all the way from thinking this was a Red October-type scenario to...this craziness.

Well done! :)
 
Hauntingly ominous. :eek: Indy keeps bumping along the periphery of these machinations and intrigues, catching bits and pieces of larger plots within plots. It’s only a matter of time until Karim or Sintina herself pulls the ship and crew fully into the fray.

And that will be a dark day, indeed.
 
A very dark tone to end this part of the overall tale on. I have a feeling the price both Sintina and Karim will end up paying before this is all over and done with will be a high one indeed.
 
Just finished this. I loooove the idea of a shadow fleet. Great job, with a nice curveball there in the middle.
 
A very dark tone to end this part of the overall tale on. I have a feeling the price both Sintina and Karim will end up paying before this is all over and done with will be a high one indeed.

I've said this since the very first Independence story, one needs to loose one's soul to successfully take on Section 31.
 
Wicked and twisted-about what I'm coming to expect from you. This was a terrific story and I think the end was perfect-the imagery was very vivid, as well as feeling "right". Well done!
 
Hey, congratulations on another, amazing Indy tale.

You've really started to churn these things out real quickly and most surprisingly of all without ever sacrificing quality.

And every time I think I might be getting saturated with S31, you pull a little stunt which renews my interest.

A lot of surprises here. One that I didn't quite understand is why Collins and his lackey didn't take their little game of deception to the natural conclusion. Why were they just satisfied with finding out Nechayev's name? Why not try and take out Aurelia, Indy or even the admiral herself?

Maybe S31 is less ruthless than I give them credit for, or more likely, they have other, more sinister plans for the future. In any case, very excited to find out where Indy takes us next.

Good job.
 
Hey, congratulations on another, amazing Indy tale.

You've really started to churn these things out real quickly and most surprisingly of all without ever sacrificing quality.

And every time I think I might be getting saturated with S31, you pull a little stunt which renews my interest.

A lot of surprises here. One that I didn't quite understand is why Collins and his lackey didn't take their little game of deception to the natural conclusion. Why were they just satisfied with finding out Nechayev's name? Why not try and take out Aurelia, Indy or even the admiral herself?

Maybe S31 is less ruthless than I give them credit for, or more likely, they have other, more sinister plans for the future. In any case, very excited to find out where Indy takes us next.

Good job.

First off, thank you very much!

The Indy and her crew are small potatoes at this point. Sure 31 was annoyed at them for keeping Satie alive, but 31 is moving on to bigger and better things. :evil:
 
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