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ST: Independence - "Beneath the Raptor's Wings"

How to make a holy-cr** club sandwich Independence style:

Romulans-Indy-Collins-Indy-More Romulans-Indy-More S13-Indy-And Aurelia because she tends to be her own worst enemy at times!

The Indy is the filling because it tends to be in middle of all the trouble!
 
CHAPTER 5

Stardate: 54515.1 (8 July 2377)
USS Independence, Captain’s Quarters
En Route to Rally Coordinates in the Neutral Zone

The passing stars were the only illumination in Sintina’s bedroom. She tossed from her right side to her left. She sighed. A few seconds later, she kicked at the sheets and ended up on her back. Her eyes were wide open. She blamed Section 31 for the loss of her last ship and most of her crew. She couldn’t shake the feeling they were out to finish the job.

A year ago, she wouldn’t have believed such an organization even existed. She remembered dismissing Karim’s concerns about them as paranoia. She even questioned his patriotism.

‘Damn Karim,’ she thought to herself. ‘If it wasn’t for him, I’d be happily ignorant, I’d still have a gunship, and eighty people would still be alive.’ She pushed the blame and guilt out of her thoughts…or rather attempted to.

After several minutes of failing to quiet her mind, the enunciator chimed. She welcomed the distraction. She wasn’t getting any sleep anyway. It sounded again. “Hold on,” she called out as she wrapped a robe around her. She made it to the door and opened it. Light from the corridor flooded the room. Karim, in full uniform, stood outside.

He didn’t wait for a reaction. Bin Nadal informed her, “You’ll want to get dressed for this.”

“For what?” she asked as her eyes adjusted.

He let himself in. The door closed behind him, “I got a personal communiqué a few minutes ago.”

Annoyed, she guessed, “Don’t tell me, from Admiral Nechayev and her little group.”

Still in good humor, he acknowledged, “Someone who works with Nechayev and Uhura wants to meet you.”

“Meet me?” she repeated. “We don’t have time to deviate from our course. If we do…”

“We don’t have to.”

“He’s coming here?”

“He’s already waiting for us a few kilometers off to port.”

She huffed, “Why wasn’t I informed of an approaching vessel?”

Karim’s mild grin held, “No one on the bridge knows he’s there.”

*****

Supplemental
IKS Heh’mup, Captain’s Chamber
Traveling off Independence’s Port Side under Cloak

Now in her grey and red trimmed duty uniform, Captain Aurelia materialized in a humid, dark, smelly place. Karim was beamed over with her. After she orientated herself, her eyes settled on a fat Klingon. His hair and beard were a dirty gray. He smiled wide, exposing dingy teeth.

The Klingon held his arms out, “Captain Aurelia!” He walked in front of his desk, “Finally, I meet you face to face!”

She was in no mood for pleasantries. “Do we know each other?”

He seemed amused that he had to remind her. “Not really. But as I understand it, you first saw me on a…” He searched his mind for an appropriate phrase, “bad day.”

Her brow crunched up as she remembered, “On Cardassia. You killed the Romulan military governor.”

The Klingon casually defended his actions, “He was annoying, wasn’t he?”

“He wasn’t alive long enough for me to know,” she grimly jibed.

The comment prompted a deep belly laugh from the warrior. “Despite your crew’s actions at Cardassia, I like you, Captain.”

She recalled, “You’re name is Wo’toth?”

He nodded, “Once, I was General Wo’toth.”

It all came back to her. Wo’toth was the Klingon military governor of Cardassia immediately after the war. He accused the Romulan governor – Goma – of taking items slated for the Klingons. Goma made some chide remark during a public meeting and the general him stabbed right there in front of everyone. Later, she sent Windsow and Tang in a shuttle to investigate the reports. They discovered the missing equipment on a Federation troop transport.

Aurelia reported it to the Federation governor, Admiral Whatley. He assured her of an investigation. She never heard anything more about it.

About the same time, Wo’toth ordered some birds of prey to attack a Romulan ship, which Wo’toth claimed, had the items.

It turned out, of course, they didn’t. Soon after, Chancellor Martok demoted Wo’toth to captain and all the Klingon Defense Forces were pressured off the planet.

She was missing a piece of the puzzle, “What did we have to with your demotion?”

He puffed out his nostrils, “Directly? Nothing. You were merely the trigger. The fault was my own.”

Both Karim and Sintina waited for more.

“I was a fool,” he sighed. “I now see Admiral Whatley and I were merely pawns in a larger agenda, an agenda that still exists.” He grunted in remembrance, “Whatley approached me about a plan to reduce the Romulan’s share of the spoils of war. I was no friend of the Romulans, so I was more than eager to play my part.”

The Independence captain and first officer listened intently. Neither had heard this part of the story before.

“Your officers, however, allowed the Romulans to catch the scent of our plot and it backfired. I was made…how do you say it? An escape-goat.” He humorlessly guffawed. “But if they hadn’t, I wouldn’t have been contacted by that amazing human woman, Uhura. She took a chance with me and showed me a hidden world.” He grinned devilishly, “I told her everything I knew.” He locked eyes with Aurelia, “and I vowed vengeance against those who used me.”

The significance of Wo’toth’s story began to sink in. Sintina reveled in this missing bit of information. “So that’s why there was no investigation.” She looked up in an afterthought, “You could’ve easily blamed me and my crew for your demotion.”

“I did for a time,” he admitted. Then, he leaned down in a light-hearted menace, “Now, I blame you for opening my eyes, Captain.”

The dark humored part of Sintina wanted to apologize for that as well, but she decided against voicing it.

Silence followed for a moment.

Karim chimed in, “You mentioned an ongoing agenda?”

Wo’toth cleared his throat, making a massive sound, and said, “I’ve been told this Section 31 decided the Romulan Empire would be ripe for…taming…after the war.”

“I’ve heard the same from the doctor at Deep Space Nine,” confirmed bin Nadal. He added, remembering current events, “Interesting how the Star Empire pulled out of its territorial gains during the war,” commented Karim.

“Indeed,” said Wo’toth, “a testament to our foe’s resolve.”

Sintina shook her head. In her opinion, they were giving too much credit to 31.

“Don’t misunderstand me,” the Klingon added, “the Romulans should be brought to their knees, but that is the job of the KDF, not some dishonorable baQa’.”

Sintina wanted answers, “What does all this have to do with us? Why are you here?”

The burly Klingons didn’t keep her in suspense, “I’ve been in contact with the very Romulan commander you’ve been ordered to apprehend.”

Aurelia looked up in frustration, put her hands on her hips, and complained, “Goddamnit, I knew this was going to turn into some damn cloak and dagger crap.”

This roused another laugh from the Klingon before he continued, “P’nav has come across some information about Section 31’s actions inside the Romulan Empire. He won’t give it to us, however, until he is...” He cocked his head, “relatively safe.”

Sintina just shook her head in irritation.

It took Karim to ask the next question, “What do we have to do?”

Wo’toth walked over to a wall display. The red, triangular grids used by Klingons crisscrossed this sector of space. It zoomed in to a particular star. He pointed at it, “I told him to meet you here, in the Beta Pictorus proto-system.”

“That’s not going to be easy with the Philadelphia and another warbird looking over our shoulder,” observed bin Nadal.

The Klingon stood stiffer, “None the less, it must be done.”

Aurelia bluntly pointed out, “I fully expect the Philadelphia to attack us during this mission.”

He nodded, “I know of your experience with that vessel and its captain.” His jagged teeth were exposed once more, “We’ve considered that as well.”

END OF CHAPTER 5
 
I love how all of the pieces are starting to come together, and the surprise appear of Wo'toth. It really feels like this S31 arc, which you've threaded throughout the Indy series, is maybe heading to a satisfying finish, or at least another exciting event.
 
^^ Me thinks another big event - this S13 stuff is going to run and run especially the knots it gets the Indy crew in.
 
I once complaint about a saturation of S31 themed stories but I have to admit you've kept that story arc extremely intriguing.

I'm looking forward to see what's going to happen next.
 
This situation continues to get deeper and deeper with the involvement of Wo'toth, who most definitely has more than one ax to grind here--Sintina better make sure that she's not one of the heads that receives an ax blade.
 
Thanks again, everybody!

CHAPTER 6

Supplemental
USS Independence, Deck One
En Route to Rally Coordinates in the Neutral Zone

After spending nearly an hour on the Heh’mup, both Aurelia and bin Nadal gave up on the idea of getting anymore sleep. They decided to discuss their predicament in the ready room. The chronometer on the bridge read 03:47 as they exited the lift.

Lieutenant Junior Grade Tang Zian looked back with a mixture of anxiety and relief. He was in charge of gamma shift that night. “Captain, Commander, there you are! We detected an unauthorized use of the transporter and I think their might be a cloaked ship nearby!” He added without a breath, “I tried to contact you and the XO, but you weren’t responding and the computer said you weren’t detected on the ship. I woke Commander Windslow up and he’s conducting a sensor sweep from engineering to search for...you.”

Sharing a smirk, Sintina and Karim looked at each other. It was obvious, they wanted to chuckle. Sintina was more effective restraining herself than the Persian.

She addressed the science officer with an approving nod. “Carry on,” without further regard to the dumbfounded lieutenant, the two walked toward the ready room. Before the door closed behind them, she added, “Tell me when Windslow finds us.”

*****

The Latina captain didn’t sit right away. Instead she approached the replicator in the aft wall. “Mocha with mint.” She silently inquired what Karim wanted.

He sat in the visitor’s chair, “I could go for Mango juice, thanks.”

Once the drinks materialized, she gave her first officer his and sat down. Her expression visibly changed as her mind refocused on the task at hand. She took sip, set it down, and started somberly, “I don’t like doing this, Karim.”

“Covert ops can be…” he started.

She cut him off, “I don’t think you appreciate my situation. I now have two totally conflicting orders. One from my legitimate authority…” She leaned back and flung her arms out, “and another supposedly from a former Fleet Admiral. But I can’t check that. I can’t confirm that. And even if I did, it’s probably an illegal order.” She leaned in and added with an evil sarcasm, “And to top it off, Nechayev’s order came via a Klingon with a …questionable history.”

Bin Nadal didn’t have an immediate response.

She stood and paced to the window, “I want one chain of command, not two.”

After a moment, Karim offered, “That would certainly be easier.”

Aurelia cocked her head in agreement.

“That way,” he continued, “the hard decisions would be made by someone else. All you’d have to do is carry it out.”

She looked over her shoulder ominously, “Tread carefully, Karim.” She went on, “I’m in no mood for one of your little lessons.” She stepped closer, “You’ve been drawn into this whole covert war of Nechayev’s far too much.”

“She didn’t start this…war, Sintina. She’s trying to…”

“To what?” interrupted Aurelia. “To save the Federation? From what?”

He had an answer, “From the worst part of itself.”

Sintina crossed her arms and puffed. She stood there for a moment. A few seconds later, she started up again, “You’re getting yourself too wrapped up in these people.”

“I’m passionate about their cause.”

She nodded, “You instantly trust anyone who claims to talk on behalf of Uhura or Nechayev. Do you realize you just exposed one of your contacts to Wo’toth?”

The accusation genuinely concerned the Persian officer, “What?”

Aurelia remembered, “The doctor from DS9, you referred to him.”

Bin Nadal leaned back in disappointment. He sighed deeply. It was a cardinal sin in the intelligence agency to expose contacts, regardless of the company you’re in. He was getting too trusting. He was getting sloppy.

The captain pressed the point, “How do you know we can trust Wo’toth?”

Recovering somewhat, he defended himself with, “A known Nechayev representative told me to expect Wo’toth.”

“Not the Admiral herself?”

He shook his head, “No.” He added, “But that person has spoken for her before.”

Aurelia sat back down and contemplated. She thought hard about her options at this point. She could ignore anything coming from the counter 31 group and play by the rules. Or, she could go along with them. One thing she knew she couldn’t do was sit on the fence. Somewhere in her mind, she knew it was too late for the first option. She was becoming more than just a Starfleet officer and she didn’t know if she liked it.

Then, memories of the mass funeral on the Gibraltar flooded her mind. She read all eighty names aloud. She’d lost people before, but it was different. Those eighty people didn’t die in battle. They died because some small group of powerful people identified her as a nuisance.

She never forgot what Nicole Chase, a 31 ‘sleeper’ operative, told her before she knocked out most of the crew…

“…I want you to know the respect I hold for you. The Midas was responsible for 26 enemy kills during the war. That’s rather impressive for an Ambassador-class.” She shook her head, “It’s a shame, really. You were chosen for this assignment because of your skills in battle. But then, Karim put a seed of doubt in your mind, and he dragged you down with him. He was your undoing.”

Sintina looked at Karim, her friend, from under her brow. A very small demon spoke, ‘You’re responsible for the deaths of 80 people. You’re responsible for taking my ship away…for putting me in this situation.’ She closed her eyes and pushed the demon away. She knew it wasn’t true – at least, he’s not the one she wanted to blame.

The decision was made. In fact, it was made some time ago. She just needed to solidify it. She said to Karim with a new resolve, “If we’re going to play this game, I don’t intend to get burnt.”

Bin Nadal nodded soberly, “Understood.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, MainBridge
At Rally Coordinates in the Neutral Zone

Captain Aurelia stood next to Lieutenant Faltyne at the freestanding tactical station directly aft of the command chair. Both watched the warp signature of the Philadelphia approach, represented by a Starfleet icon. Another ship, the Odaus, neared from another vector. Both would be on them in a few minutes. Sintina couldn’t help feeling like she was being surrounded.

“Faltyne,” she began, “I want you to watch those ships like a hawk.”

The Andorian assumed, “Hawks have good eyesight, I take it.”

She grinned slightly, “That’s right, Lieutenant.”

“The Odaus won’t be able to activate an RCS thruster without me knowing about it,” he offered.

“Watch the Philly too,” she corrected.

Jonin’s antennae flickered, “Ma’am?”

With deadpan features, she elaborated, “Treat both the Odaus and the Philadelphia as potential hostiles.”

He knew about the captain’s previous battle with the Sovereign class vessel – half the fleet knew – but he didn’t know the whole story, or her concern now. “But Captain, what threat would the Philadelphia pose now that her former captain is no longer in command? Didn’t he commit suicide during your battle?”

“It’s not her former captain that I’m worried about,” she rejoined. “Do it.”

Faltyne knew better than to argue the point. In his three months of being on board, he saw nothing to discourage confidence in his captain. She didn’t necessarily want to explain herself, but that was the captain’s prerogative. In fact, in the day to day operations of the ship, she was rather efficient. Her relationship with the crew revolved around that efficiency. If she didn’t want to get to personally know her crew that was fine with him. ‘Now, if I could only get Counselor Soma to leave me alone,’ he joshed to himself. He stated with a professional pride, “I’ll keep a close eye on them, Captain.”

Satisfied, she returned to the center seat.

It didn’t take long for Jonin to report, “The Philadelphia has dropped out of warp, bearing 139 mark 162, range: 132 thousand kilometers and closing in on impulse.”

The captain stood from her chair and glanced at Karim, who sat at mission ops. There was caution in his eyes. “On screen,” she said.

The large, forward display came to life. Without order, Jonin magnified the image. Aurelia chuckled internally a bit when she noticed two, intact nacelle pylons. The Sovereign class glided silently toward them. She resisted the impulse to go to yellow alert.

Kimula reported from communications, “They’re hailing.”

Sintina didn’t take her eyes off the image, as though if she did, they would attack. After a moment’s hesitation, she responded coldly, “On screen.”

END OF CHAPTER 6
 
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The large, forward display came to life. Without order, Jonin magnified the image. Aurelia chuckled internally a bit when she noticed two, intact nacelle pylons. The Sovereign class glided silently toward them. She resisted the impulse to go to yellow alert.

Kimula reported from communications, “They’re hailing.”

Sintina didn’t take her eyes off the image, as though if she did, they would attack. After a moment’s hesitation, she responded coldly, “On screen.”

Why do I get the idea that there is going to be a nasty surprise on the other end of the line. Even if not you succintly created a lasting tension from the last run in. A great edge being created to the tone of the story. Something bad is surely going to happen.

Must commend you on how Aurelai for all her show of being decisive is querying her thoughts and her support for the anti-S31 faction. She is not too keen to see things in black or white or perhaps she is just less trusting than others. Also liked how she hauled Karim over his mistake.

Now one ponders is the Indy being played for a fool or what???
 
Great work all the way around. Not only is Sintina appropriately wary of bin Nadal's (and her) status as a pawn in the game of chess surrounding S31, she's becoming increasingly disciplined in both action and thought. The only thing some of her enemies had going for them in the past was Aurelia's impetuous nature... now they may be denied even that.

Can. Not. Wait. for the conversation between her and Captain Collins. Set phasers to... hatred! :evil:
 
I never thought I'd say this but I'm so with Sintina on this one. Having to decide which orders to follow is the first step to a completely dysfunctional fleet.

This 'cloak and dagger' stuff got Indy and Sintina burnt once before. They simply cannot afford for this to happen again.
 
Again the tension builds, some decisions are made and the orders given cause confusion in a junior officer. Possibly the worst damage down by hidden conflicts, such as Section 31 vs everyone else, is increased confusion and suspicion sapping the energy of everyone.

This "final" battle will be messy. In the end it will be simply one more skirmish in a dirty civil war.

Or maybe I'm just tired and grumpy.

NTP
 
Sintina's right here--when you've reached the point where you don't who to trust and you're receiving conflicting orders and everyone has their own agenda, the only thing that can come of it is disaster. And now seeds of doubt have been sown between her and Karim...a bad situation.

Now, with the Philly and the Roms on the scene, the stage has been set, the players introduced, and the quadrille is about to begin...
 
CHAPTER 7

Supplemental
USS Independence, MainBridge
At Rally Coordinates in the Neutral Zone

The screen afforded each crews a wide shot of their respective bridges.

Karim’s eyes fell upon the homicidal captain. He underestimated his ability to control his reaction. Upon seeing Zackary Collins, he unconsciously stood from his station. He shot daggers at the man. Bin Nadal didn’t know his name at the time, but the Philadelphia captain was able to best him in mortal combat. Karim held his own, but he neglected to account for Collins’ underhanded tactics. The only thing that prevented Collins from ending him was an ingenious delaying tactic by Retired Admiral Uhura and Commander Cherenkov showing up.

Captain Collins returned his gaze. He’s cold eyes mocked him. Collins grinned…he actually grinned.

His voice was synthetically warm and taunting, “Commander bin Nadal, you look better than the last time I saw you.”

The comment boiled Karim’s blood. He was referring to the damage inflicted during the fight. Collins cut one of his forearms and smashed a glass table into his face. He could barely contain his rage. It occurred to him, ‘The bastard is actually enjoying this.’

Aurelia stepped forward, “Let’s cut the shit, Collins. You know who we work for and we know who you work for.”

If anything, he seemed pleased with Aurelia’s outburst. He chuckled dryly, “Alright, Captain. Let’s drop the pretence then. Despite our past, we have to work together in some fashion.”

Sintina looked at the bridge crew of the Philadelphia. Collins didn’t seem to hold back in front of them. None of them reacted too much to their conversation. She didn’t look, but assumed the same couldn’t be true of her crew. She concluded his people knew full well the type of ship they were on. The fact that Section 31 could find enough Starfleet officers to willingly man such a ship sent a chill down her spine. She replied with more restraint than she expected, “Our mission is to find the Fothmar. The only ‘working together’ we have to do is coordinate our search. Beyond that, I see no reason to talk to cold-blooded, murdering, son of a bitch, such as yourself.”

“Now, now, Captain,” he rejoined smoothly, “such words thrown about haphazardly might cause me to get the wrong impression about your feelings towards me.”

His shrugging off of her insult only caused Aurelia to become more annoyed.

That eternally, mocking grin of Collins’ grew once more. He crossed his legs as he sat in his chair, “Might I recommend a face-to-face conference here on the Philadelphia once the Odaus arrives.”

The sentence wasn’t finished when Aurelia scoffed at the idea. “I wouldn’t transport my fish to your ship. We can have a conference from the comfort of our ready rooms.”

“What about naval tradition?” weakly persuaded Collins.

“Tradition be damned…just like you.”

Collins snickered, “You really must let go of all this aggression, Sintina.”

She was about to lash out about his use of her first name when he continued.

“For the sake of our Romulan counterpart, we really should keep up appearances,” he said. “How would it look if Commander Hanora reported infighting among Starfleet to her superiors?”

She hated that he had a legitimate point. “Fine,” she relented, “but we meet here.”

He shrugged, “If you insist.” He looked over to a chronometer, “The Odaus will be here in 8 minutes. See you then.”

The screen reverted to an exterior view of the Philadelphia.

Karim, Soma, and Aurelia all shared glances. All thought the same thing: ‘Did we just get set up?’

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, Transporter Room One
At Rally Coordinates in the Neutral Zone

Kimula pulled back her long, white hair into a tail as she entered the transport room. She acknowledged the operator, made a final review of her uniform and said, “Energize.”

Two pillars of light formed. Seconds later, two Romulans, a female and a male materialized. Both wore the newly issued Star Navy uniform. Soma didn’t know until recently it was actually a re-issue of a uniform wore by Romulans several centuries ago. Kim had a fleeting thought of how prettier the female, Commander Hanora, would be if she grew her hair out. Then, the Andorian set about to business.

Lieutenant Soma dipped her head slightly, and greeted her, “Jolan tru, Riov Hanora.”

The Romulan commander seemed pleasantly surprised at the use of Rihannsu. It was her impression that very few outsiders bothered to learn it, even if it was just a sentence. It was a gesture she appreciated. She stepped down off the dais, “I’m afraid I don’t know how to return the courtesy in Andorian.”

Kimula smiled, “That’s quite alright. Welcome to the Independence.”

“Thank you,” she gestured to the man beside her, “This is my second in command, Jaliv.”

Jaliv didn’t seem nearly as sociable as his superior. He curtsied respectively, but without warmth.

“Well then,” prompted Soma, “if you’ll follow me, I’ll take you to our conference lounge. Captain Aurelia is there.”

“Very well.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, Transporter Room Two
At Rally Coordinates in the Neutral Zone

When Captain Collins formed on the transporter pad, he was greeted by the sight of Commander bin Nadal and two armed security officers, Faltyne and Runningfox.

Abreast of the Philadelphia captain was a Caitian male. He scanned the room with amusement. He asked in mock ignorance, “Permission to come aboard?”

Karim was having none of it, “Stow the nice guy act. It doesn’t suit you.” He turned to the transporter operator, “Double check the scan, hidden weapons, bio-explosives, nano-technology, anything.”

Collins reached out slowly with his finger to test an assumption. It was confirmed when his finger made contact with a forcefield surrounding the pad. He nodded in approval, “I’m mildly impressed.”

“They’re clear, sir,” the young enlisted woman reported.

The 31 associate waited patiently for bin Nadal to release them. He could see the disappointment in the Persian’s face. Finally, he asked, “Well?”

Reluctantly, Karim ordered, “Disengage the field.” Nearly instantly, a wall of blue light shimmered and then it ended.

The Philly captain looked at, presumably his first officer, “Not very hospitable on this ship, huh H’gaws?”

The menacing-looking, brown furred Caitian growled. It might have been a chuckle.

“Come with us,” stated bin Nadal. “We’ll escort you to the meeting.” He gestured them forward.

H’gaws began to follow, but Collins stopped him. “You still haven’t granted us permission to come aboard,” he coldly observed.

Karim huffed out his nostrils and crossed his arms. It was his turn to be amused. “You really like this mind game crap, don’t you?”

When bin Nadal refused to take the bait, Collins’ demeanor turned sour.

Enjoying the fact that he had finally chipped at his façade, Karim continued, “Legend has it, a demon can’t enter one’s home without permission. Let’s see if it’s true.” He addressed Faltyne, “When Captain Collins is ready to go to the conference lounge, take him and his XO there.” Without looking back, Commander bin Nadal exited the transporter room.

*****

In the corridor, seconds later, Collins and H’gaws emerged from the room. Faltyne and Runningfox came out behind them, but not too close behind them.

The Indy first officer looked back, “I guess not.”

Collins caught up with bin Nadal. He had regained a bit of his cool, controlled behavior. “Well played. It’s a shame Uhura and her band of merry men got to you before our group.”

Unfazed, Karim kept walking, ensuring the man was directly abreast of him. He rejoined, “I’m afraid my soul isn’t for sale.”

The Philly captain guffawed, “Suit yourself.”

The five walked in silence for a few moments.

Collins decided to play one of his cards. He started, “I heard what happened with your girlfriend, Nicole Chase. I bet that stung when…”

Bin Nadal violently slammed the captain into the bulkhead and began choking him with his forearm. “Give me one good reason why I shouldn’t kill you right now,” growled the XO.

Once again, Collins’ smirk returned. He said, “I’ll give you two. Look at your security officers.”

Karim chanced a glance. Faltyne had his hand on his phaser. Runningfox already pulled his. The junior officer looked shocked. The Andorian was more professional. He seemed to be willing to let the situation play out a bit before acting.

Collins continued in a whisper, “They are witnessing you assault a captain. See how they are looking at you? They see the rage in your eyes, the anger. There is no anger in my eyes. Who will they side with? Who will they see as the aggressor?”

Beginning to restrain his breathing, Karim eased up.

Zack leaned in, “Do you really think you caught me off guard just now?”

Bin Nadal pushed off the man, “You’re a manipulator, Collins. That’s all. I’m not impressed.”

The wicked grin remained. He gestured ahead, “Shall we continue?”

END OF CHAPTER 7
 
Wow, Collins just needs to die. Slowly. Lava perhaps, or a giant paper shredder, starting with the feet. :evil:

Damn, like I said, you just have to love to hate the guy. And the fact that Collins doesn't even bother to hide who he is or what he's about just makes it worse.

Aurelia and bin Nadal need to play it cooler, though. Collins is playing them expertly, goading them into displays of their anger which only serve to strengthen his position. He's evil and cagy, and those two need to start giving him the respect he deserves before Collins can put whatever plan is lodged in his sociopathic head into play.
 
Wow.

Collins, meet Dukat. Dukat, meet Collins.

Those two are two evil peas in a pod, from the way this guy is being characterized. He's just SLIMY. It's quite shocking how someone is able to get away with that kind of naked evil in Starfleet--even more so that so many people signed on to be on that ship and just sit there and watch him act like that and do nothing.
 
I'm still impressed nobody was gruesomely killed in this chapter. Collins came pretty close but of course he's got more than a few aces up his sleeve and he won't be hesitating to use them all against Indy and her crew.

The way Aurelia and Nadal are acting however, Collins' crew might have no trouble believing that their captain is the good guy here. Aurelia & co have to be careful as not to overplay their already weak hand.
 
Isn't every officer of the Philly's crew S31?? And probably most of the enlisted too.

Collins is slimy but good always wins out, even if there is a high price to be paid for it.
 
Collins is shaping up to be Indy's uber villian, with the right mix of toughs, smarts, and ruthlessness. I loved how Aurelia cut to the chase. At first I thought that scene might've worked better in Sintina's ready room, but then I realized, no it's in keeping with her character that she would let it out right then, no matter who was around to hear it. Good work.
 
Thanks guys. With any luck I'll work on the next part tomorrow.

Isn't every officer of the Philly's crew S31?? And probably most of the enlisted too.

I think it's a mix of: ruthless people (who know what's going on), weak willed people (who are being blackmailed/intimidated), and ignorant people(you know, the people that are usually out of the loop).
 
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