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ST: Independence 02 "Dark Horses"

Dnoth

Fleet Captain
Fleet Captain
With any luck, this second thread/episode will go more smoothly than the first.

There are, however, more bugs I want to work out.

It has been brought to my attention that the model I've been basing my stories on could use some improvement.

I tend to agree. To that end I've asked people in the Trek Art forum to help me out. So far, I haven't had any takers. So I've scoured BCFiles.com for a replacement vessel.

I've narrowed it down the following options, but I thought I'd ask your collective opinion before I make my final decision.

So, if you would be so kind as to give your opinion:

-Scorpion Class (what I've been using; it's a different color scheme than the link I put in the last thread)
http://bridgecommander.filefront.com/file/Scorpion2;9383

-Eximius Class
http://bridgecommander.filefront.com/file/Eximius_Class;2609

-Courageous Class
http://bridgecommander.filefront.com/file/USS_Courageous;37977


...And I will begin to post "Dark Horses" on this thread in the next few days.

Thank you all for you insight, praise, and advice.
 
Okay, you've won me over. I, too, wasn't crazy about the last pictures you posted of the Scorpion-class, but as it's presented in these shots it's a terrific looking ship.

Of the three you linked to here it's my favorite, thought the Courageous-class is a close second. Just be careful your crew doesn't run over any old Constitution-class ships puttering around out there in the slow lane. ;)
 
I wouldn't worry about that ... I'm sure the navigation and sensor systems on the Independence are better than the Gibraltar's too. :thumbsup: ;)
 
Did I say I was going to start posting the story in a few days? What I meant to say was I'll have a bought of insomnia, stay up all night and post it now. :)
 
CHAPTER 1

Stardate 52997.8 (31 December 2375)

Aurelia smirked as they dropped from warp at the edge of the Bajoran star system. She knew she was rather indulgent to travel at maximum warp to Deep Space Nine, but what was the point to having a new ship with out seeing what she could do? They had traveled 24.8 light years in just over a day and a half. At best, the Midas would have made the trip in 6 days. Besides that, Admiral Ross did seem anxious for the Independence to start this mission.

The com line chirped on the bridge. “Captain Aurelia.”

The captain recognized the voice of her chief engineer. “Go ahead, Jinal.”

“Captain, apparently one of the nozzle heads of the matter reactant injectors failed during the trip. I don’t recommend we go to warp again until I replace it.”

Aurelia bit her bottom lip, feeling responsible. Then she thought better of it, this was a new ship after all. Bugs would show up and it’s better to find out about them now than later. “Did it break because of our speed?”

“No, ma’am, it simply had a micro-fracture.”

Feeling better Aurelia asked, “How long will you need?”

“It requires shutting down the core and it is not easily accessible, approximately 20 hours.”

Now very confident in her decision to go to warp 9.98, “Very well, Lieutenant, proceed.”

*****

Bin Nadal’s possessions, what little he had, were still in crates; in the exact spot they had been transported to two days ago. Though, this morning he had begun to unpack. He placed his Gi, a traditional Asian martial art uniform. He had taught some restraining techniques to Sintina when he came on board the Midas.

He held a black belt in an old form of karate called Isshin-ryu. He had learned it for self defense when he was undercover in SI. Standard hand-to-hand combat training in Starfleet was, despite the impression to the contrary, lacking. It gave you just enough overconfidence to ensure you get pummeled in a bar fight. A fact, Karim had learned from experience.

The captain had worked security for most of her career. So she was no stranger to martial arts. Sintina had taught him some of the finer points of Brazilian Capoeira and a Tellarite form which he still hasn’t quite mastered.

The captain, why hadn’t he told the captain? Why wasn’t he contacting the Federation Council? Why wasn’t he sending messages to media organizations? Why wasn’t he throwing the biggest damn ruckus he could manage?

He had tried to rationalize his silence to himself. He thought back to his Intelligence training. Sometimes it was best to hold onto information. Sometimes it was best to let people think you don’t care. Besides, he was just one person. What could he do against all of Starfleet Security? He knew those were excuses, but those thoughts allowed him to get some sleep.

Luckily, and surprisingly, Kimula had not pressed the issue after they left 375. He put on a happy face soon afterwards, hoping it would be sufficient to put her at ease. It had worked. Now, he didn’t have to tell her the truth; he was afraid.

*****

Sitting at the helm, D’nas wasn’t quite sure what to make of the Federation crew he had been thrown into. He had noticed as soon as he beamed up to the USS Budapest, a Norway class, orbiting Tamar that Starfleet lacked the discipline of the Tamarian Space Forces. It is not that he disapproved, though it did make the vessel less efficient, it simply caught him off guard.

He still didn’t understand what was appropriate and what wasn’t aboard Federation ships. He noticed that the communications officer often addressed the captain informally. Even more surprisingly to D’nas was the fact, the Andorian was three ranks below the Human captain. To show such insubordination on a Tamarian ship would have been cause for removal of the blade.

D’nas monitored the progress of the ship at impulse. When he felt the ship was close enough to their destination, he turned his head, “We’re approaching Deep Space Nine, ma’am.”

Aurelia stood from her chair, “Slow to one-eighth impulse. Put DS9 on screen.”

The viewscreen wasn’t a screen at all. The main viewer now utilized a hologrid, though it was still two-dimensional. Aurelia couldn’t help but think if the Midas had been equipped with this newer technology, Ensign Nar’vook would be alive right now.

Her state of mind wasn’t helped when the viewer became active. Deep Space Nine resembled a fleet surplus depot; so many damaged ships held station around it. Most of the ships had scorch marks and hull breaches. One New Orleans class ship was missing a nacelle. The saucer section of a Nebula class looked like a crescent moon. Several tug vessels were still maneuvering what were once proud ships of the line.

Bin Nadal broke what Aurelia had just realized was a long silence on the bridge. “I hadn’t realized the extent of our losses until now.”

Aurelia recognized some of the hulks, “The Hood (Excelsior), the Southerland (Nebula), the Gandhi (Ambassador). All of them are barely being held together.”

Only Kimula’s macabre sense of duty would force her to check the sensors and then share it with the bridge crew, “I’m reading over 700 corpses on those ships.”

An involuntary moment of silence was observed.

Aurelia forced herself back to the task at hand. “Independence to DS9, requesting holding position.”

The response came via audio, “This is DS9 Ops, set a heading of 351, mark 39 and hold 2200 meters off our dorsal side.”

“Confirmed, Independence out.” Aurelia stepped down into the ‘pit’ and placed her hand on D’nas’ shoulder. “D’nas, step aside, I’ll bring us in.”

D’nas looked up at her with a mixture of fear and confusion. Had he done something wrong? “I don’t understand.”

Aurelia considered for a moment that he literally didn’t understand what she was saying. Then she decided to give him a bit more credit, “This is a brand new ship and there is a lot of activity around that station. I don’t want to have a collision and dent the fender.”

D’nas was confused on several levels at this point, “Fender?”

Aurelia coldly said, “Just get up.”

With a blank look on his face, D’nas managed an “Aye, ma’am,” and stood up; the chair turning as he rose. Not knowing where else to go, he stood at parade rest about two meters starboard of the helm.

Though Aurelia was too busy piloting to notice, Bin Nadal gave her a disapproving look. He then made a quick glance at Kimula. The expression on his face spoke volumes to the Andorian. She made a slight nod in agreement.

END OF CHAPTER 1
 
I also like the new Scorpion design a lot better. I think my favorite must have been the Courageous Class. But I have to say that I'm not as excited about the many many new ship classes that are constantly being introduced into Trek fan-fiction. I always thought canon Trek already has more ship designs than know what to do with them. I can't imagine Starfleet coming out with a new design every few years ...

Having said that you should pick whatever ship you like the most for your own stories ... anything but that red Scorpion ship ... :lol:


I liked the new chapters here and so far you characters are really what makes this a great read. The security officers moral confusion and the captain's lack of trust in his helmsman are terrific arcs. Just make sure to mix in some strong story elements in there as well.

You've really improved on the grammer here as well. One suggestions I'd like to make: You should use past tense as well when you describe your characters thoughts unless you write the thoughts as dialogue.

Also I know that a lot of fan-fic writers like to make sure that the reader knows what kinda class the various starships mentioned in the story are but you are rather going out of your way here to do that, I don't think that's really necessary.

Good stuff though, keep it up.
 
All good points. Now I see were I messed up on the tenses again; it's been corrected, thanks.
 
I have read Gibraltar's "Embers of Fire" and am almost done with "Geometries of Chance" and I will eventually get to other peoples' work as well. My point is, I have no illusions about my level of skill to write and tell a story.

I just wanted to take an opportunity to thank all of you who have been reading, advising, and tolerating my mistakes.

You have my humble appreciation and gratitude. Thank you.
 
Don't sell yourself short, man. You've got a fine ship, populated by interesting characters. As GI Joe would say, that's half the battle. Now you just have to put those characters in situations that are interesting and challenging.

Keep on writing. We'll be reading. :)
 
CHAPTER 2

Stardate 53000.8 (1 January 2376 -- Deep Space Nine)

“Captain’s log: Stardate 53000.8. We’ve arrived at Deep Space Nine and I’m looking forward to meeting my new 1st officer. Gone are the days that captains can pick and choose their own number ones.”

Ethan Windslow paced in front of a docking port on DS9. He stroked his terracotta colored go-tee which had a spattering of white. His hair was a little darker. The slightly taller than average man seemed rather troubled for someone reuniting with his family.

Windslow didn’t notice the outer airlock door open. Only when the inner portal began to roll did his apprehension reach fever pitch. His heart was racing once his ears received the word he hadn’t heard in over 2 years. “Daddy!”

A young boy, no more than 6 years of age, made a beeline for the officer and embraced his hips in a death-lock of a hug. Ethan nearly lost his balance from the impact. Soon after, amongst the other disembarking passengers, was a human woman with short blonde hair. She said nothing and smiled widely as she joined the embrace. Finally young man, probably 12 stood near. The group broke up much to Ethan’s relief.

The twelve year old raised his hand and said, “Hey, Dad,” as if Ethan had just walked in the door from a day at work.

Susan Windslow examined her husband. Her own enthusiasm must have shielded her from Ethan’s notable lack of the same. “What’s wrong?”

Ethan realized for the first time the façade he would have to endure. He regained himself, even managing to smile, “Nothing. It’s just been awhile.”

*****

It had been only two weeks since Admiral Ross had given her command the Independence. Sintina had thought in those two weeks, she had seen more Admirals than she had in the previous two years. A trend she hoped would end once all of her new crew was aboard.

In Aurelia’s windowless ready room, she was hosting Ross. After some pleasantries, Ross inquired, “Have you meant your new executive officer, yet?”

Aurelia offered the Admiral a seat, which was taken. She then rounded her desk, sat, and responded, “Not personally, no. He did inform me that his family just arrived on the station. I thought I’d give them awhile before I made him report.”

Ross joined his fingers together and rested his elbows on the edge of the desk, “How much do you know about Commander Windslow?”

She shrugged her shoulders. “What I know of him is from his service jacket: an engineer by trade, worked on the Defiant project, and was one of a handful of survivors when his ship was destroyed a month ago.”

“He was in the last escape pod. The only reason the Dominion didn’t destroy it was because it was so close to the explosion when the Bismarck’s anti-matter storage destabilized, that pod lost power and looked like part of the debris.”

Aurelia looked down, “I didn’t know that.”

Ross continued, “The recovery ship almost didn’t find it. He was nearly dead when he was finally recovered.”

The captain sat back, “Sounds like he’s seen plenty of combat.”

Ross fidgeted, “Space combat anyway.”

She sat forward again, “There is one thing I don’t understand. He was promoted to captain a year ago.”

Ross seemed to know where the conversion was going, but he allowed Aurelia to continue.

“Why has he been temporarily demoted to commander? It wasn’t in his records.”

The Admiral nodded, “A legitimate question.”

For a moment Aurelia thought Ross wouldn’t elaborate, she was mistaken.

“Captain, I need to tell you about an ongoing investigation.”

*****

Susan Windslow unpacked an old, wooden analog clock; a family keepsake. Ethan had advised they not bring much, as this would probably be a temporary assignment. She had noticed one less pip on his collar. When she asked about it, he had said, “It’s standard procedure when a captain looses a ship until the investigation is done.” She had no knowledge of Starfleet protocols. But she took him at his word, it’s always been golden.

Placing the clock on a shelf, she admitted, “I’ll tell you, Ethan, I’m glad to get away from my parents in Wartburg.”

Ethan studied a padd. Without looking up, “They never liked me much.”

Susan smiled and sat next to him, “It’s not you they disliked. It’s Starfleet they didn’t like.”

“Hmm.”

She put her arm around his shoulders, “Ethan, are you ok?”

He finally put down the comfort of his padd and looked at her, “I don’t mean to be cold, Sue. It’s … it’s just that I’ve had a rough few years.”

Susan couldn’t help but feel he was being selfish, “It’s been hard on us too.” Then it occurred to her how selfish that statement was. In an attempt at an apology, she followed up with, “I wish I could have gone with you. I never even saw you in command.”

That didn’t seem to help matters. Ethan’s face became rigid, “No … no you don’t. It was smart of Starfleet to get families off ship during the war.”

The conversion seemed to stall. Moments later, Paul, Windslow’s six year old son enthusiastically entered the living room from his bedroom. The boy wielded two mock weapons, “Daddy, you wanna play hunt the Jem’hadar with me?” The game was something many children played on Earth during the war. Susan, and most other parents, knew they should have discouraged it, but didn’t.

The boy offered the man one of the toys. Ethan lurched back as if the toy was plagued. “No, Paul.”

“Why not? I wanna play with you.” The boy came, closer.

Ethan’s authoritative tone had a bit of panic in it. “I can’t, I’m busy.”

The boy implored him one last time as he attempted to put the toy in Ethan’s hand, “But Dad!”

Ethan smacked the toy out of the boy’s hand with enough force to make the child step back to catch himself before falling. “I said, No!”

Paul’s mouth was agape, unable to process what just happened. Susan had a similar expression on her face. Finally the child remembered to cry. Susan rushed to pick up her son, his tears wetting her shirt. She stared at her husband unable to find any words.

Ethan was the one to take the initiative. He rose and strode right for the door, which closed behind him.

END OF CHAPTER 2
 
Ouch. That's one helluva reunion. :( Sounds like Commander Windslow collected his fair share of psychological scars during the war. I'm curious about his losing his captaincy, as well as the ongoing investigation that appears to center on him.

Nicely done. :) Keep it coming.
 
CHAPTER 3

Supplemental (USS Independence)

Admiral Ross wasn’t too upset about the Independence’s delay to start their first mission. The fact that Aurelia got to DS9 several days ahead of schedule didn’t hurt his disposition, Aurelia thought, as she returned to the bridge after escorting Ross to transporter room 2. The doors parted. As she entered, D’nas called out, “Captain on the bridge!” Instinctively, some of the crew came to attention. Aurelia noticed two exceptions, Bin Nadal and Kimula; whom both looked playfully at Sintina. She was compelled to return the smile as she ordered, “At ease.”

Military traditions such as polishing boots, announcing the captain, and other such “prettiness” was abandoned by the Midas crew with Aurelia’s blessing. They seemed trivial protocols during the war.

Bin Nadal didn’t break the captain’s gaze, indicating to her he had something to say.

Still smiling her security chief said, “I’ve established a new game room in an empty crew’s quarters.”

“Great, where?” came Aurelia.

“Deck 4, room 12.”

Kimula stood from her seat, interjecting, “I assume you both realize we don’t need a game room anymore. This ship does have holodecks, you know.”

Early on in the Dominion War, one of the casualties was the holodecks. The chief engineer recommend improving the shields and weapons systems, but at the cost of drawing power from non-critical areas. Captain Camar agreed; hence, the holodecks went unused. By the time Aurelia was forced to take command, the ship was in such bad shape, no one would even consider doing anything to take power from the defensive systems.

Aurelia crossed her arms, “True, but I’m used to playing D&D the old fashioned way, now.”

Bin Nadal added, “It won’t be the same without the rest of our players.”

Kimula looked at Aurelia and said with purpose, “We’ll just have to introduce the game to new people.”

The allusion was lost on the captain, “Yeah, but Bin Nadal’s right. It won’t be the same.”

Kimula, decided to be less subtle, “That’s the nature of existence, captain; things change.”

Aurelia seemed to get the message this time, “Doesn’t mean I have to like it.” With a sigh, Aurelia rounded the safety railing, heading for the center seat. “At any rate, we have our first mission, now. What crew members haven’t gotten on board yet?”

“Twenty-three crew members haven’t reported, including the CMO and the 1st officer,” volunteered Kimula.

Aurelia stopped short of the command chair, “I know about the XO, but we need to get the doctor so she can start processing people.” She looked up to Bin Nadal, her next order embedded in the statement, “We are going to have to move up our schedule.”

Bin Nadal curtsied, “I’m on it.” He moved to the turbolift aft of the bridge as the door slid open he nearly ran into another form.

Karim took a step back in confusion and quickly assed the situation. Another officer, a commander, stood centimeters away. The Commander didn’t seem nearly as startled as Bin Nadal was. The security chief experienced a quick sense of disappointment in himself because of the fact. He was disappointed because of that? Karim had almost managed to push the events at Starbase 375 out of his mind. A terrible wave of guilt washed over him. … He forced himself back to the present situation. “Oh, welcome on board commander. I’d chat more, but I’m on a mission.”

The Commander stepped aside, allowing the ‘mission’ to continue without comment. Bin Nadal disappeared behind panels joining together.

Aurelia was rather proud of herself as she produced a polite smile. “Ah, Commander Windslow, welcome onboard the Independence.”

Kimula rose and turned aft to see her new superior. Her genuine smile served to make Aurelia’s much more artificial.

The barrel-chested man straightened up, “Commander Ethan Windslow reporting for duty.”

The Captain gestured to her right, “Commander, this is ship’s counselor Kimula.” Her hand then moved to the bow, “There at the helm is our Tamarian exchange officer, D’nas.”

D’nas only minimally moved to make eye contact and nod at the commander.

Aurelia then moved to her original position, her arms again crossed. “And you briefly meant our chief tactical officer, Karim Bin Nadal.”

There we’re others on the bridge, including an ops officer, but Aurelia didn’t remember her name yet. So she left the introductions unsaid.

Kimula moved to up to the higher level where Windslow was still standing with an outstretched hand. “Welcome, Commander.”

Windslow cordially, but not enthusiastically, accepted the invitation.

Aurelia made no indication of following suit. “Well, we have a mission already. Let me brief you in my ready room,” as she motioned in the proper direction.

“Yes sir.” At the indication of Aurelia, he entered first. Aurelia made a quick glance at Kimula after Windslow couldn’t catch it. Kimula wasn’t entirely sure why. Then the captain joined him in the ready room.

*****

Windslow stood ‘at ease,’ not wanting to take a seat until he was offered it. Aurelia made her way to the far side of the desk. “Have a seat, Commander,” as she did the same.

As he pulled the chair out, “Thank you, sir.”

Aurelia crossed her legs and rested an arm of the edge of the desk. “Oh don’t do that. I prefer ‘ma’am.’”

Windslow nodded, “To be honest, I never thought it was necessary to call female officers, ‘sir.’”

The stray thought entered Aurelia’s mind. What about addressing species with more than two sexes? She was about to vocalize it, but decided not to look for problems just yet. In a tone of fake optimism she said instead, “We’ve made our first agreement. That bodes well for our relationship.”

Sensing the comment was synthetic, Windslow moved on, “And our mission?”

Aurelia shifted position, now fully facing the man, “We are to track down a rogue Cardassian vessel. It hasn’t surrendered to Federation forces. It was last seen in the Badlands.”

Windslow stood, “We should get moving, impulse signatures don’t last long in the plasma storms.”

Aurelia looked up from under her eyebrows, “We will. The doctor still needs to get on board.”

“I’ll go get her,” as he starts for the door.

“I already have someone on it.”

Windslow turns on his heel. Frustration brewing in his eyes, “Other than her, do you have all hands yet?”

Aurelia leaned back in her chair and her defenses went up, “No, we have several crew members that are either on the station or nearby ships.”

In quick succession, the commander stepped forward, leaned down and placed his hands on the desk. “What have you been waiting for? I’ll issue an immediate recall order and we can get underway.”

Aurelia immediately meant the challenge. Even though she was a head shorter and full 30 kilograms lighter, she had faced down more imposing figures than the man that now stood before her. By god, she would not be intimidated by, what she considered, a sub-standard officer.

“As you were commander. First off, this is a new ship. We’ve detected a defect in the warp core and my engineer needs several hours to repair it. We can’t go anywhere until then. Second, don’t take that tone with me. And third, I know you have more experience as a captain than I do. But whether you like it or not, you’re not in command here; I am!”

Aurelia used amazing restraint by not mentioning the investigation. She didn’t quite want to tip her hand on that yet. Besides, “Commander, we have to work together for now. So let’s just do what needs to get done.”

Fire burned behind Windslow’s eyes. It extinguished somewhat as he recognized she had valid points. He gathered what composure he could as he raised himself to a more respectful posture. He took a deep breath, “So, how can I help get things done?”

It took a minute for Aurelia to feel comfortable enough to return to her seat. She remained standing as if to confirm with the commander that she won the argument. “We weren’t supposed to leave DS9 for several days until this assignment came up. The crew will be taken off guard.” She paused to consider the fact that Windslow thought of something she hadn’t yet. “Go ahead and issue that recall order. Get everyone onboard so they can get familiar with the ship.”

Windslow acknowledged and began for the exit. Then as if Aurelia simply couldn’t end the encounter on a conciliatory note, “Then I suggest you talk to our department heads to get a feel for our situation.”

He made the slightest ‘humph’, then turned, “Aye, ma’am.”

“Dismissed.”
The commander was more than ready to abide to that order.

END OF CHAPTER 3
 
I can see already that Aurelia and Windslow are going to have a tumultuous relationship. Granted, it must be humiliating to have lost that fourth pip, and be subject to the orders of someone who’d have been a junior officer to you, but Windslow’s so screwed up right now he can’t seem to exude anything but hostility. If he doesn’t throttle back, and soon, things are going to get very interesting for him… and almost assuredly not in a good way.

D&D, eh? I’d imagine that could be quite fun on a holodeck, but Aurelia wants to play with paper and dice? Well, she’s the captain, I suppose. ;)

Good chapter. Keep ‘em coming.
 
CHAPTER 4

Supplemental (Deep Space Nine)

Two weeks after the grand celebrations of victory over the Dominion, the promenade on DS9 had settled down quite a bit. Bin Nadal wasn’t sure if it was his own mood, the drastic change since he was here last, or the survivors of those ships outside which were roaming around like zombies that gave the place a feel of a morgue.

His destination surely wouldn’t help his disposition. The computer indicated that the new doctor, an Arkonian, was in the infirmary. The scene he encountered once the doors split open was not the one he expected.

A human doctor, the CMO of the station presumably, just got done saying something and both he and the reptilian Arkonian started chucking at whatever the punch line had been.

Karim began wondering if the Arkonian was male or female. In mammals, the females of course had some type of nutrient producing glands. The Arkonian had no breasts per say. So he wasn’t sure how to distinguish the sex. The voice seemed feminine, but that didn’t mean anything.

After the two regained their composure, they turned to acknowledge Bin Nadal.

“Dr. Do’matar?” presumed the security chief.

The reptilian answered, “Dr. Zo’Kama, actually. Family names are only used in very formal ceremonies in Arkonian society.”

“Ah, ok; Dr. Zo’Kama. I’m here to tell you that the Independence has moved up its schedule. The captain needs you onboard so we can head out.”

The Arkonian didn’t seem to be bothered, “Very well.” Then the doctor turned to her DS9 counterpart, “Thank you Dr. Bashir, for your medical notes.”

Bashir seemed to turn uncomfortable. “Please doctor, wait a moment.”

Zo’Kama hesitated.

Bashir then turned and quickly grabbed a laser scalpel. Before anyone could react, he made a superficial incision on his forearm.

Bin Nadal gave a confused look. Zo’Kama seemed mildly amused.

Bashir stepped up to Zo’Kama. He cleared his throat, and attempted to be humble, “I hope this doesn’t embarrass you, but … could you spit on my wound?”

Zo’Kama summed up some mock annoyance. “I usually use a dermal regenerator, but I suppose…” The reptilian opened its mouth and a stream of liquid ejected from it, landing squarely on the inch long cut. In a flurry of bubbles, which if one didn’t know any better seemed like acid, Dr. Bashir’s injury disappeared.

Bin Nadal had never seen, or heard, of anything like it.

Bashir seemed more educated, but no more impressed. “Remarkable! I knew Arkonian saliva had healing properties, but I have never seen it first hand!”

The Arkonian would have been genuinely annoyed, but few people knew about the ability. So the reptilian wasn’t asked to show it off often. Zo’Kama then jested, “I just wish my spit could do surgery for me too.”

The comment prompted another round of chucking.

As the Arkonian made her way for the exit, it said, “Excuse me, I have to round up my daughter.”

Bashir was obviously pleased, “It’s been a pleasure, doctor.”

Bin Nadal began to follow the Arkonian out, but paused; allowing the door to close behind the reptilian. He then turned to Bashir before he could return to his work, “Doctor Bashir?”

Deep Space Nine’s CMO turned, he must have assumed Bin Nadal left with Zo’Kama as he seemed surprised to see Bin Nadal still there. “Yes, can I help you?”

Karim sheepishly asked, “How do can you tell the difference between a male and female Arkonian?”

Julian couldn’t restrain a smirk, “Male Arkonians have several small spikes on their head. Females lack those spikes. Commander Zo’Kama is female.”

Glad to have his ignorance evaporate, “Thanks, Doctor Bashir.”

“Any time,” the residual smile still on his face.

Again the two began to part ways when a connection was made in Bin Nadal’s mind. He said to himself, but unintentionally loud enough for the doctor to hear, “Bashir.”

“Something else?” came from Julian.

Trying his best trying not to be confrontational, but knowing the statement itself would be, “You’re the one who cured the Founders, right?”

Karim still made it a point to read up on intelligence reports. Within the SI and Starfleet Security communities, two factions had become apparent in the last few weeks. The first defended Bashir with the argument that the cure was really the only thing that convinced the Founder to end the war. A view Bin Nadal tended to share. The counter argument was Bashir, via Odo, made the most important bargaining chip for future Dominion-Federation negotiations useless.

Bashir’s mood instantly became somber, “That’s right. What of it?”

“I suspect you made quite a few enemies when you did that.”

The doctor’s retort came immediately, “I doubt the officers who would’ve died at Cardassia Prime, to say nothing of the Cardassians themselves, are among them.”

Realizing he gave the wrong impression, Bin Nadal raised his hands in an apologetic gesture, “Oh don’t worry doctor, I was one of those officers you saved. I don’t have anything against you.” After an uncomfortable silence, he altered the conversation slightly, “I still can’t believe the Romulans nearly committed genocide.”

Bashir’s look of distrust became one of confusion, “Romulans?”

“Sure. The security reports I’ve read conclude the Tal Shiar originally infected Odo just prior to the Battle of the Omarion Nebula and allowed it to spread from there.”

Julian paced for a moment without saying a word, allowing his anger to ferment with each step. He flung his arms in frustration as he spoke, “I guess I shouldn’t be surprised that they’d try to rewrite history!”

“Who?”

Bashir leaned back against a console as he crossed his arms. He managed to calm down. He looked up from the floor, “Section 31.”

Before Karim could ask the obvious follow-up, the pair noticed a Bajoran nurse waiting with a padd in hand. She took advantage of the nervous moment to accomplish her task. She presented the padd to Bashir, “Doctor, I need you to sign off on these prescriptions.”

Julian took a breath, shifted his weight back on his feet and took the padd, “Of course.” Once he had signed off, the nurse retreated again.

Once she was out of sight, Bin Nadal resumed, “Section 31?”

Bashir shook his head, “You probably wouldn’t believe me if I told you.”

Bin Nadal never liked being out of the loop. It was one of the reasons he went into Starfleet Intelligence in the first place. On the other hand, Karim thought, what good was the burden of knowledge if I refused to act on it? He attempted to alleviate the guilt he felt. He assured the doctor and himself, “I prefer not to be kept in ignorance, doctor.”

Julian seemed to be considering whether or not to involve the security officer. Karim saw the very second the doctor decided to tell him. Bashir leaned in, “What if I were to tell you that the Federation has an organization more devious and covert than the Obsidian Order or the Tal Shiar?”

END OF CHAPTER 4
 
Don't you just hate it when you realize somebody used the same plot element you did? Oh well that just happends ...

In any case I continue to enjoy the characters here. I love the conflict that will arise between the captain and the first officer. A lot of potential there.

I also liked Nedal's continuing concern for the Founder and the mention of Bashir's involvement with S31. I guess he's about to wake up and smell the coffee.
 
^I'm with CeJay on this, nicely done. :) The use of canon characters is problematic for many fanfic writers, but your presentation of Bashir is done well, he acts and sounds as he should.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next part.
 
CeJay said:
Don't you just hate it when you realize somebody used the same plot element you did? Oh well that just happends ...

Oops, how did I step on your shoes?

I wish I had time to read everybody's fan-fic so I can avoid that, but I realize that's not possible. I kinda like the challenge of working around other peoples' stories. It forces me to be more original.

As you know, totally unintentional; sorry, CeJay!
 
Oh no, don't even sweat it. You couldn't have known in any case as I haven't posted that story yet. And I'm months away from doing so.

Of course that will put me in a precarious situation as it might look as if I'd gotten the idea from you. So should you ever read my stuff and that one story in particular just remember that I didn't steal it from you :lol:

There are so many writers and ideas floating around it is impossible not to 'step on somebody else's shoes' from time to time.
 
CHAPTER 5

Supplemental (USS Independence)

The only thing Tang Zian knew of Starfleet was the war. He graduated on 50401 just a few months before the joint Cardassian/Dominion forces captured the station he now orbited. During said war, Zian served as a member of the science team on the USS Galaxy. He was thrilled at the posting of the Galaxy; it was quite a privilege for a raw cadet. He imagined discovering new worlds and running into all kinds of new aliens. All that was put on hold at the Second Battle of Deep Space Nine; the opening conflict of the Dominion War. It was not the career he had intended when he entered the academy.

None the less, Lt. Tang was hopeful of this new posting. He didn’t know much about his new assignment other than it was a new class of vessel. And new, Zian thought, meant it would be on the outskirts of known space. Finally, he would be an explorer.

Butterflies began moving as Tang made his way to his new captain’s ready room. It was always a surreal moment when you meant your new CO. The person behind this door would be responsible for his life and safety for the indefinite future.

He stopped just short of the entrance, took a deep breath, and tapped the panel on the bulkhead which would announce his presence. A tense moment later a female voice said, “Enter.” Here’s to first impressions, Zian thought as he passed through the doorway.

*****

Not again, Aurelia thought, as a young Asian science officer approached her desk. There had been a steady flow of officers and crew who felt it necessary to introduce themselves ever since they left Starbase 375. It was an expected kiss-ass ritual, of course, but Aurelia tired of it quickly.

The young officer said as he snapped to attention, “Lt. Tang Zian reporting, ma’am.”

The captain decided not to get up. “Hello, Lieutenant.” Sintina skimmed over a padd, “Seems you’re my new Chief Science Officer.”

Tang responded with a healthy amount of pride, “Yes, ma’am.”

“Have you had a chance to look at our science lab?”

Zian still stood at attention and began to wonder if the captain intentionally left him there, “No not yet, ma’am.”

“Well, I’m going to be honest with you …” Aurelia then noticed how rigid he was. She then remembered, “At ease.” The science officer complied. “The science lab is not up to par to a Galaxy-class'.”

Tang’s shoulders slumped for a second, but he then recovered, “I guess that’s to be expected, ma’am. This is a smaller ship after all.”

The captain leaned back, an evil yet sympathetic smile on her lips, “I don’t think you understand.”

Tang cocked his head.

Aurelia elaborated, “The science lab on this ship was literally an after thought.”

Zian pouted nearly as if he was a child and Aurelia had just grabbed a cookie out of his hand. “It was?”

Sintina’s smile became more sympathetic, “This was designed to be a ship of war. We are lucky to even have a science lab.”

Tang began to contemplate in his mind as to what forces in the universe he had so thoroughly enraged to engender such a fate. He recalled where he was and decided it wasn’t the place to wallow in self pity. There would be time for that later. He then grasped for a sliver lining, “Do you think we’ll be on the outskirts much, ma’am?”

“I have a feeling we’ll be on patrol duty for awhile.”

Tang blankly nodded, not looking at anything in particular.

Aurelia truly did feel for you young man. She was never in the science division, but she understood the desire to do what you’ve been trained for. She had seen several officers in the last few years that missed the exploration aspects of Starfleet. Not intending to be ironic, she offered, “I hope your tour on the Independence proofs to be interesting.”

Tang exhaled through his nostrils, a grin appearing on his face. “That’s a Chinese curse, you know?”

“What’s that?”

“May you live in interesting times.”

Aurelia considered the phrase for a moment and thoughtfully said, “I can see how that might be a bad thing.”

Zian had nothing to add but his continuing grin.

Aurelia then prompted him, “Well Lieutenant, I’ll let you get acquainted with…what you’ve got. Dismissed.”

Tang bobbed his head, “Ma’am,” and allowed the captain a respite, at least until the next officer decided to show up.

*****

Deck 4 housed Sick Bay, Transporter Rooms 3 & 4, and an unassigned crew quarters that Bin Nadal had confiscated.

“The Game Room” was first established on the Midas. It proved to be invaluable for maintaining the crew’s moral. When ever someone came across a new game it would be added to the room so anyone could come in and play it. The ‘old’ game room had everything from 3-D Chess to Strategema. Someone had even acquired the Cardassian game of Kotra, though no one asked where the crew member got it.

The new game room was sparse by comparison. Exaggerated by the fact the room was larger than it had been on the Midas. Kimula was now putting the final touches on a miniature landscape atop a table in the room. The doors distracted her. She broke a small tree as they slid open. She looked over to see Aurelia, a dart board in tow.

“Ever heard of a door chime?” mockingly barked Kimula.

Aurelia moved her head to the side, seeing the cause of her frustration. She responded with a wicked smile, “Eh, you would’ve broken it with the chime any way.”

Aurelia turned slowly, as she took in her surroundings. “We might even find room for a Dom-jot table in here.”

“We’re going to have to spread the word. This crew doesn’t know about our tradition,” offered Kimula.

“True.”

Kimula decided now was as good a moment as any, “Speaking of new crew members…”

Aurelia began to mount the dart board. She had heard too many of Kimula’s speeches to not know where the conversation was going. Sintina drew out her answer, “Yes.”

Kimula had two people she wanted to talk about. She decided the best strategy was to bring up the Tamarian first. “I think you’re being too hard on D’nas.”

“Oh?” not turning to face the Andorian.

“I’ve talked with Bin Nadal. He say’s he’s good. Better than you think.”

Aurelia finally faced Kimula. “It’s bad enough I’m going to have Command down my neck because of this guy; I don’t need you to do it to.” She stepped forward, “Look you, Karim, Jinal; we’ve been through a lot. You guys have earned my trust and respect; this new crew hasn’t yet.”

Kimula had already decided to defend the Tamarian, “He’s earned the right to be here. So has everyone else. Besides, if you’re mad a Command for sending him here, fine; don’t take it out on him.”

Sintina examined the carpet and sighed. She looked back up, “Karim says he’s good?”

Kimula nodded. At this point she knew Sintina would concede, but the real challenge lay ahead.

Aurelia waved her hands up, “Alright, I’ll give the kid a second chance.”

Kimula was never known for beating around the bush, “Good. Now what’s the deal with Commander Windslow?”

Aurelia snickered, “Let’s just say, I’m going to do down kicking and screaming until he’s off the ship.”

Kimula saw no sarcasm in her eyes, “Why?”

“Ongoing investigation; I’ve been told not to talk about it.”

With that, Kimula hit a brick wall. All she knew was she had to reach out to Windslow.

*****

Jinal arrived on the bridge. He felt all eyes on him as the crew waited for his report. He meant Aurelia’s gaze; her question was the same as everyone else’s. He saw no reason to continue the suspense, “The nozzle has been replaced. We can go to warp at anytime, Captain.”

Aurelia felt herself getting giddy. It subsided as she turned to her 1st officer, “Commander, what’s the final head count?”

Windslow consulted the display built in to the armrest. “One-hundred and seven officers and crew with 11 civilians. A total of 118 personnel.”

“One-eighteen, ok.” The captain rose and made for the helm. Stopped, and took a glace at Kimula in the communication’s chair. Kimula returned the look. The captain retired to her seat. “D’nas, take us away from the station.”

Luckily, the Tamarian didn’t notice her trepidation, “Aye, ma’am.”

The local traffic had slowed down somewhat since their arrival. D’nas coordinated with DS9 operations and soon the ship had left the station behind.

The Captain’s excitement did not go unnoticed by the crew. Even though the repairs took a full hour less than the estimate, it seemed like forever to have her orders in hand, a new ship, and unable to proceed. She was literally on the edge of her seat. “Set a course for the Badlands, warp 9.”

“Course set,” came D’nas from the helm.

“Let’s go.”

END OF CHAPTER 5
 
Ok, I've decided (mostly because I've been using it non-stop in Bridge Commander :) ) what ship I'm going to go with.

I attempted to get the blessing of the designer, but haven't got a response. It's not like I'm altering it; just linking to a picture of it, right? ;)


... and the winner is...

- The Courageous Class, it can be found at the following site:

http://bridgecommander.filefront.com/file/USS_Courageous;37977

Thank you again whom continue to read and comment! Thanks!
 
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