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ST: Gibraltar - Prophets and Loss

Gibraltar

Rear Admiral
Rear Admiral
Author's Note: The events of this story take place approximately nine months after ST: Insurrection, and two months after Geometries of Chance. Like that story, this will also be a Work-in-Progress. Your commentary and critiques will be very much appreciated.

Chapter 1

Planet Ba’ku
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)
Sector 441


Anij of the Ba’ku stepped from her house into the bright midday sunlight, roused from her afternoon siesta by the inexplicable sound of thunder from cloudless cobalt skies. Around her others exited their homes, staring skyward, muttering questions in hushed tones to one another.

“Has the Federation returned?

“Have more Son’a come home?”

The Ba’ku had eschewed technology in order to live a simpler, agrarian lifestyle on their idyllic world. Anij and her companions had no way to determine the nature of the disturbance, no sensors with which to identify whomever was intruding upon their serenity.

An oasis of peace for centuries, the Ba’ku’s tranquil existence had been disturbed by an attempted revolt two generations earlier. A small cabal of youngsters who had become enamored with the idea of exploring the cosmos had rebelled against their society’s strict prohibitions against technology. They’d gone as far as trying to seize power from their elders, and when their efforts failed, they were exiled from paradise by their friends and families. Thus banished, the called themselves the Son’a, and set out to utilize advanced technology in conquering a corner of the universe to call their own.

Reconciliation of a sort had come from an ill-fated collaboration between a rogue Starfleet admiral and his Son’a allies. They’d attempted to capitalize on the Ba’ku world’s innate healing powers, gifted by the metaphasic radiation emitted from the planet’s rings. When an attempt to physically relocate the Ba’ku aboard a custom designed holoship was thwarted, the Son’a took it upon themselves to abduct their former kin by force. Only the efforts of the captain and command crew of the starship Enterprise, acting against orders, managed to stop the Son’a plan and led to a rapproachment between a minority of the Son’a and their estranged families.

In past weeks however, greater numbers of Son’a had begun to return to their people’s adopted homeworld. They’d been driven back to the Briar Patch nebula by the inexorable advance of some nameless enemy they’d made in their misguided efforts to build an empire for themselves. Their shameful homecoming had been as refugees rather than as the conquering heroes they’d hoped to be.

Many were casualties, their wounds testing the Ba’ku’s healing abilities as well as the planet’s rejuvenating energies. Bodies and spirits broken, the Son’a had come seeking both shelter as well as the succor of their mothers and fathers.

Anij ran back into her house, locating in a dresser drawer the compin given to her by Jean-Luc prior to the Enterprise’s departure nine months earlier. She tapped the device hopefully, yearning to hear the confident timbre of her lover’s voice. Instead she found only ominous silence.

She wandered back outside to find Gallatin hefting a disruptor rifle. The repatriated Son’a general had been reunited with his people throught the efforts of Picard and his crew, but still clung stubbornly to some of his more suspicious and militaristic ways. Anij touched his shoulder, causing him to startle. “I’m sorry, Gallatin, but you know such weapons are prohibited.” At that moment, the irony of her uttering such a statement while clutching a Starfleet communicator was lost on her.

Gallatin grunted, tilting his head upward. “Tell that to the Alshain.”

“The Alshain?” Anij frowned, “Aren’t they the enemy you’d spoken of?”

“Yes,” he hissed from between clenched teeth. The plasticity of the man’s skin had relaxed during the months since he’d returned, but his face still offered a troublingly distorted visage. Now, Anij read both anger and fear in his recovering features.

“Why would they come here?” she asked, dread beginning to clutch her chest like a vise.

Gallatin’s voice was determinedly calm though his hands grasping the rifle trembled slightly. “Because they make no distinction between Son’a and Ba’ku, Anij.” He turned to face her, his countenance haunted by regret. “And they have sworn to cleanse their captured territory of our kind, in order to restore the Greater Alshain of ages past.”

She gaped at him in disbelief, “You’re saying they’ve come to relocate us as Ru’afo meant to do?”

Shouldering his rifle, Gallatin grabbed Anij by the upper arm and pulled her along with him as he headed for higher ground and the dubious cover of the surrounding forest. “No, my friend. They mean to slaughter us all.”

*****

Starbase 12
Executive Lounge
Office of the Admiralty


Vice Admiral Edward Jellico clutched his mug of coffee, staring across the table at his two colleagues as the three flag officers collectively ate breakfast while establishing Starfleet operations protocols that would affect a twelve sector area of Federation space. Jellico had been appointed the new Assistant Chief of Starfleet Security only weeks earlier, after his predecessor had ascended to the top post in Security following the quiet ouster of Admiral Samson Glover from that august assignment.

Jellico had taken the opportunity to familiarize himself with his new position by embarking on a first-hand tour of the Federation’s trouble spots to better assess the UFP’s overall state of security. What he’d found was troubling. Not enough ships, too few people, and far too many critical missions to perform, all of them seemingly vital to national security.

Seated across from him in the Starbase’s executive lounge were Rear Admiral Bryce McCormick and Vice Admiral Thiv’ala, the regional heads of Starfleet Operations and Logistics, respectively.

They’d just tabled the discussion of repealing the Federation Council’s stop loss order that prevented Starfleet personnel from resigning or retiring from service. Jellico was worried McCormick might suffer a stroke due to the emotional spike the conversation seemed to engender in the man. At the moment, Starfleet was still churning out ships at wartime production rates in order to fill the numerous vacancies caused by the war’s attrition. Staffing these craft was another matter, as it took substantially longer to train a Starfleet officer or enlisted person than it did to build a starship. Changing tacks, the vice admiral broached the subject that had really brought him to this place.

“So, what do you think of Picard’s proposal?” Jellico baited the hook as subtly as he could. He’d already decided to green-light the captain’s plan, but he’d rather talk these officers into supporting it rather than shove it down their throats. He would force the issue if he had to, of course, but Jellico would at least give them the appearance of hearing them out.

McCormick snapped at the prize like a starving grouper. “I think it’s a load of crap, Edward. I’ve already had to divert a dozen starships away from this theater to bolster anti-insurgent operations along the Cardassian border.” The rear admiral’s face reddened with frustration. “I know things over there are rough, and Bill Ross has his hands full, but I’ve got my own priorities to worry about. If Picard wants a public relations coup, tell him to look for it elsewhere.”

Jellico shrugged, “Jean-Luc’s got a point, Bryce. The Alshain are hunting down the remaining Son’a like animals. They’re our allies, and a pogrom against the Son’a, however reviled they are, makes us look bad.”

McCormick threw up his hands, “And I care because…? Damn it, Edward, you know what a proud people the Alshain are. They’ve suffered Son’a plots and intrigues for generations, not to mention outright invasion of their territory during the war when the Son’a signed on with the Dominion. If you ask me, a little payback is in order.”

Jellico quirked an eyebrow and gave McCormick a disbelieving look. “Payback is one thing, Bryce. Ethnic cleansing is something else entirely.” Raising his glass of orange juice, he offered a mock toast, “My friends, to genocide.”

That took some of the wind from McCormick’s sails. He grabbed the linen napkin from his lap and tossed it onto his plate in a gesture of exasperation. Giving man a few moments to recover his composure, Jellico looked to the Andorian admiral to his right. “Opinions, Thiv’ala?”

The cerulean-skinned man appeared thoughtful for a long moment before forming his reply. “McCormick is correct insofar as our available ships and personnel are concerned. At present, this command is supporting three planetary relief operations, coordinating sector patrol assignments along the Klingon and Romulan borders, overseeing the establishment of several refugee settlements for displaced Tarlac and Ellora fleeing the conflict, and combating a significant rise in interstellar piracy brought about by the perceived weakness of Starfleet assets in this region.”

McCormick gestured to the Andorian while looking at Jellico, clearly enjoying that the other admiral appeared to be taking his side. Thiv’ala shot McCormick a self-conscious glance that the human failed to see before turning back to Jellico to finish his assessment. “That being said, Admiral, any opportunity to stem the violence taking place in and around the Briar Patch would prove welcome. We have our hands full as it is without the added burden of tens-of-thousands of refugees from the Alshain encroachment into Son’a territory.”

McCormick’s eyes shot daggers at Thiv’ala who pretended not to notice as he spooned a scoop of yulta fruit into his mouth. The man turned to face Jellico. “I can’t spare any more ships. I just don’t have them. I’ve got runabouts pulling picket duty posts that should be occupied by cruisers. Border defense is practically laughable right now, and Picard’s little mercy mission will only serve to make matters worse.”

“Be that as it may, Bryce, President Santiago is a believer in image dictating reality. He feels this mission is of vital importance in the post-war playing field, gentlemen. If the Federation doesn’t move to bring its allies under control, we’ll only be inviting trouble from the second-tier powers in both quadrants.”

McCormick rolled his eyes. “I know Picard’s got a thing for these people, Edward. But Santiago’s standing in the polls is low enough already. Does he really need another foreign affairs fiasco just before the election?”

“I’m aware of the risk we’re running with this operation, and failure is always an unwelcome possibility. But imagine the media disaster we’d face if we’re seen to be tacitly supporting Alshain atrocities?” Jellico frowned, “And I’d remind you that I’m not Picard’s biggest fan, either. Despite that, his relationship with the Ba’ku and the Son’a make him the best man for this particular job.”

McCormick sat forward, grabbing his coffee mug and taking a draught. “We turned a blind eye to the Klingons’ actions at Lakesh. They butchered the civilian populace trying to dig out the insurgency on a world supposedly under Starfleet supervision.”

Jellico’s eyes narrowed and he leaned forward, his voice taking on a dangerous edge. “That wasn’t our fault. How were we supposed to know the Cardassians in that system were sitting on top of a hidden arsenal? Ceding the Crolsa system to the Klingons was our only recourse.”

McCormick eyed Jellico sullenly, having realized the true nature of this meeting. “This is going to happen, isn’t it? My protests be damned, you’re going to stage from this starbase and bleed me dry.”

Nodding regretfully, Jellico said simply. “Yes, Bryce. I am. This one has presidential authority behind it.” Trying to soften the blow, he added, “Besides the Enterprise, I’m contributing four ships tasked from other commands. Six ships is all I need from you.”

Shaking his head angrily, McCormick finished his coffee in a single quaff and stood abruptly. He collected his padd from the table top and placed it inside a briefcase. Giving Jellico a final heated stare, he inquired, “And which heads roll when this whole operation falls apart and our people start coming home in flag draped coffins?”

Jellico’s smile reminded McCormick of a Terran shark. “If that happens, President Santiago takes another ten-point hit in the polls, and Picard loses credibility and forfeits his chance of ever making admiral. I, on the other hand, walk away smelling like a rose.”

McCormick gave him a saccharine smile. “What about me?”

“You? You get your ships back and win the right to begin each sentence for the next year with ‘I told you so.’”

*****

Planet Ba’ku
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)
Sector 441


Anij had cried herself out by the time the Alshain arrived on foot to examine their handiwork. The shattered remains of the Ba’ku village, home to their people for ten generations, smoldered in the valley below. Unlike the Son’a, who’d at first attempted to forcibly relocate their alienated families, the Alshain had made no such attempts to minimize the loss of life. A brief but effective orbital bombardment had reduced their community to scattered cinders, killing all but the handful of the Ba’ku who had joined Gallatin and Anij in their flight from the village.

Her dear friend Sojef and his young son Artim, who’d both survived the harrowing pursuit and capture at the hands of the Son’a less than a year before were now dead. Anij’s entire world had been crushed in a matter of minutes, her society annihilated with casual ease by an enemy she’d only heard rumors of prior to this dark day.

Gallatin and two similarly armed former Son’a stood guard over their distraught Ba’ku hosts. Drav’in approached the ex-general, kneeling beside him as they observed the lupine Alshain strike team as the enemy soldiers sorted through the embers of the village, looking for any sign of survivors.

“Gallatin, we should go. We can follow the kelbonite deposits into the mountains, just as the Ba’ku did to thwart us. It should mask our life signs as effectively.”

Gallatin lowered his field glasses, pushing back from the lip of the overhang they were using as an observation point. “That will safeguard us from their sensors only. These are Alshain. They’re a race of hunters, and once they have our scent, it will only be a matter of time before they find us.”

“Then what are we to do? Where shall we go?”

The general was considering his reply when they heard the muffled crackle of snapping twigs behind them. The traumatized Ba’ku survivors did not notice the sound, for none of them had ever had to develop the kind of situational awareness that helped one to survive in a combat environment. Before Gallatin and Drav’in could turn and raise their weapons, the enemy was upon them.

*****

Executive Officer’s Quarters, Deck 5, USS Gibraltar
Docked to Federation Starbase Deep Space Nine


Commander Liana Ramirez stepped from the sonic shower, wrapping a towel around herself as she padded quietly through her cabin’s sleeping alcove so as not to wake her sleeping guest. She donned her uniform slowly, burdened by thoughts of their upcoming assignment. It was a troubling mission that she’d discovered only the day before that Captain Sandhurst had volunteered them for.

She’d have to confront him about it, and it wouldn’t be easy. Ramirez had bent over backwards to be accommodating to her commanding officer in the weeks since his return from neural-psychiatric reconstructive counseling on Betazed. On their last, ill-fated assignment, the captain had been held captive and tortured by a madman for weeks, and the resulting psychological scars ran deep. He hadn’t been the same since his return, and she felt naïve for having hoped that he’d come back as his old self.

Suddenly someone grabbed a hold of her hand and pulled her off balance, sending her toppling onto the bed. ‘Great,’ she thought angrily, ‘Six months ago I’d never have let someone surprise me like that. I’m losing my edge.’

“Good morning, Lia—“ Commander Jeffrey Thorpe’s voice caught in his throat as Ramirez reversed his grip on her arm, taking control of his limb as she rolled to a position of advantage and pinned him to the bed with a painful joint-lock. “Ahhhh! Woman, what’s wrong with you?” he hissed.

“Good morning to you, Mister Grabby Hands. And exactly what leads you to believe that you can have your way with me on this fine morning?” Her tone was mostly playful, but contained a hint of genuine irritation.

Thorpe fought to control his breathing, struggling against the pain of a shoulder pushed to the limit of its range of motion. “Just— just playing around, Lia. Please, let go.”

She released her grip, climbing off the bed and leaving Thorpe face down on the rumpled sheets massaging his now aching limb. “I’m yours when the uniforms are off, Jeff. I thought we’d established that rather clearly.” She made a show of smoothing out the tussle-related wrinkles in her jumpsuit. “As you can see, the uniform is most definitely on.”

Thorpe rolled over, eyeing her warily. “We’ve been seeing each other for a month, and I still haven’t even begun to figure you out.” He sat up, placing his feet on the floor. “You’re not big on subtlety, Liana. I’m picking up a very strong vibe that this whole arraignment is merely recreational.”

Ramirez stepped back into the bathroom, running a brush through her long black hair before starting to tie it into a low-maintenance bun in back. “Playful canoodling in the morning smacks of an actual relationship, Jeff. We agreed that this was purely physical.”

He pulled on his shorts and stood, walking over to lean against the doorway to the bathroom alcove. “So you’re eliminating the possibility of it being anything but?”

She spared him a withering look while fiddling with her hair. “I’m nobody’s fallback girl.”

He crossed his arms defensively. “What’s that supposed to mean?”

“The Haliian woman, Jeff. I’m not blind, or stupid. When we ran into her at Quark’s the other night, you acted like you’d been caught with you hand in the cookie jar.” She smirked at his evident discomfort with her observation. “Well, maybe not your hand…”

Wincing, Thorpe moved behind her, his hands up in a gesture of supplication. He looked into her eyes through the reflection he shared with her in the mirror. “I’ll admit that I have feelings for Aquiel, that’s true. But we’ve decided against risking our friendship by taking it to the next level.” He turned on the charm, conjuring up the devilish smile that Ramirez found so oddly irresistible. “The fact that I’m attracted to her doesn’t mean that I wouldn’t be open to a genuine relationship with somebody else.” He raised his eyebrows, “If a certain someone would lower their shields.”

Ramirez met his eyes, taking the implied offer into consideration. She and Thorpe shared a great deal in common, but those commonalities were a shared pain that had brought them together during the Gibraltar’s refit at DS9. Both she and Jeffrey had lost ships under their command in the Crolsa system, ships that by rights had belonged to other men. They’d been the stand-in’s, the acting captains, and ultimately both had been found wanting. Now, Thorpe was acting CO of DS9’s dedicated warship, the Defiant, while Ramirez was nearing the halfway point of her year long obligation to Gibraltar’s XO’s billet.

He slowly lowered his hands to her shoulders, maintaining eye contact as he leaned in to nuzzle her neck. She closed her eyes, her body electrified with the sensation. Liana couldn’t remember the last time she’d let anyone even this close. She firmly believed that relationships were a luxury someone on the fast track to command couldn’t allow themselves. She desperately enjoyed sharing a bed with him, but they were too dissimilar in disposition and ambition for their coupling to be anything other than an enjoyable diversion. She was driven and focused, while Jeffrey was a feather on the wind, an explorer at heart who’d stumbled into the command division purely by accident.

She sighed, then reached up and placed her hands atop his. He paused, sensing she’d raised her defenses once again. “Jeff, I’m truly flattered, but this is as far as it goes.”

Her compin chirped, “Sandhurst to Ramirez.”

Thorpe turned away, his expression one of disappointment as she tapped the pin. “Go ahead, sir.”

“Commander, just a reminder that our briefing in the station’s wardroom is in thirty minutes.”

“Acknowledged, sir. On my way.”

She found him slipping on his civilian clothes in the bedroom. “Tonight will be our last in port before we head out,” she tried to sound upbeat. “If you’re not too busy, I wouldn’t mind seeing you again before I leave.”

He stared at her calmly as he buttoned his shirt. “I thought you made your feelings… or lack thereof perfectly clear, Commander.”

She liked him, she really did. She didn’t want to hurt him, and had made every effort to establish that the only thing this could possibly be was a brief dalliance. “Let’s just let this be what it is, Jeff. It’s not that I don’t want a relationship eventually, but it can’t be right now, not while I’m on this ship. Later, when I have a command of my own, circumstances might be different.” She stepped forward, placing a hand on his chest and looking up into his face. “If we try to force this, someone’s going to get hurt. And right now, odds are that it’d be you.”

He nodded reluctantly then dipped his head to meet her brief kiss. Then she was gone.

*****
 
Yayyyy!!

Time for my tuppence (since I don't recall giving any last time round!):
1) President Santiago was the assasinated president of Earth Force in Babylon 5... did you mean for this character name to be re-used?
2) Since the Federation isn't a single nation, so to speak, it'd probably be better to use the term "Federal" or simply "Federation" security rather than "national security".

Very nice so far, please keep going! :)
 
Blip said:
Yayyyy!!

Time for my tuppence (since I don't recall giving any last time round!):
1) President Santiago was the assasinated president of Earth Force in Babylon 5... did you mean for this character name to be re-used?
2) Since the Federation isn't a single nation, so to speak, it'd probably be better to use the term "Federal" or simply "Federation" security rather than "national security".

Very nice so far, please keep going! :)
I'm sharing a common Trekverse with two other writers here on the fanfic board, DarKush and David Falkayn. DarKush came up with President Santiago as an homage (I believe) to the B5 president of the same name. However, if the polls are to be believed, his political career appears to be nearing an end. :D

As for Federal vs. National security, I'm going to go out on a limb and say that for the purposes of common defense, the term 'national security' will work in a pinch. I tried some of the other variations, and they came across a bit awkward :)

Glad you're enjoying the story so far. :) If you're interested in the backstories of the crew, you can look up the previous stories here on the BBS. The 'premier' Gibraltar story is titled Embers of the Fire and the second tale is Geometries of Chance which is currently posted to the fanfic board.
 
Dang it! Now you and DarKush have posted new stuff! I'm falling behind...

Er...I mean, great start! Can't wait to see more! :thumbsup:
 
Gibraltar said:
Blip said:
Yayyyy!!

Time for my tuppence (since I don't recall giving any last time round!):
1) President Santiago was the assasinated president of Earth Force in Babylon 5... did you mean for this character name to be re-used?
2) Since the Federation isn't a single nation, so to speak, it'd probably be better to use the term "Federal" or simply "Federation" security rather than "national security".

Very nice so far, please keep going! :)
I'm sharing a common Trekverse with two other writers here on the fanfic board, DarKush and David Falkayn. DarKush came up with President Santiago as an homage (I believe) to the B5 president of the same name. However, if the polls are to be believed, his political career appears to be nearing an end. :D

As for Federal vs. National security, I'm going to go out on a limb and say that for the purposes of common defense, the term 'national security' will work in a pinch. I tried some of the other variations, and they came across a bit awkward :)

Glad you're enjoying the story so far. :) If you're interested in the backstories of the crew, you can look up the previous stories here on the BBS. The 'premier' Gibraltar story is titled Embers of the Fire and the second tale is Geometries of Chance which is currently posted to the fanfic board.

I did name Santiago after the B5 president. I loved that whole arc, with Clark taking over and B5's war against Earth. Martin Santiago, the guy I created, bears no other similarity to his B5 inspiration, outside of them both being Presidents who will probably have short times in office.

I also agree that national security is an appropriate term. The Federation could be considered, on one hand, a very large nation-state.
 
First, as always, thank you for giving me something interesting and entertaining to read. I love where you've started and where it seems you may be going. That having been said, I had a couple of thoughts/questions that were sort of bothering me when I read this.

Coincidentally, the first also was about the "national security" term. My rationalization was much like yours and DarKush's, but it did sort of stand out to me.

In relation to the first scene, though, there were a couple of things that seemed a bit difficult for me. One was when Anij asks Gallatin, "Aren't they the enemy you'd spoken of?" It just seemed to me that, if Gallatin had spoken of them to her, and given your description of the scores of Son'a refugees returning, this wouldn't even be a question for her. Wouldn't Anij know who they are just by Gallatin's speaking their name? For similar reasons, I had difficulty understanding Anij's general ignorance of the Alshain, if the refugees have been returning for weeks.

I was also left wondering how Gallatin would know so much about the Alshain and their motives if he's been on the planet with the Ba'ku since Insurrection. That's sort of implied when you mention how his skin has begun to relax "during the months since he'd returned." Unless, of course, the Alshain were battling the Son'a before the Insurrection timeframe.

In general, I guess I was expecting a bit more surprise in that first scene; more "shock and awe" if you will. :o

Sorry, I really don't want to be a downer, and I really love your writing and your subject matter. Those things were just nagging at me and ..., well ..., you asked. ;)

Hope you don't mind my comments. And, as always, my friend, feel free to tell me to shut up anytime. :p
 
Trekkie Monster,

I can't speak for Gibraltar, but I can try to perhaps shed a little light on why Gallatin knows so much about the Alshain.

Basically, Gibraltar and I have sketched that the Son'a and Alshain have something of a history that spans decades. I allude to it in my vignette "Crossing Swords".

I also threw in a mention of the Alshain atrocities in Son'a space in the Dark Territory "Under the Shadows of Swords" and in the unfinished "Rekindled."
 
DarKush said:
Trekkie Monster,

I can't speak for Gibraltar, but I can try to perhaps shed a little light on why Gallatin knows so much about the Alshain.

Basically, Gibraltar and I have sketched that the Son'a and Alshain have something of a history that spans decades. I allude to it in my vignette "Crossing Swords".

I also threw in a mention of the Alshain atrocities in Son'a space in the Dark Territory "Under the Shadows of Swords" and in the unfinished "Rekindled."
DarKush speaks truth. The long and tortured history between the Alshain and Son'a will be explored as the story progresses, but they've been blood enemies for generations.

As for Anij's ignorance of the Alshain, you have to remember that the Ba'ku are an isolationist people who've set up shop in the middle of the most inhospitable nebula they could find. The fact of who specifically beat up on the Son'a is irrelevant to them, only the fact that their estranged children have returned is of any importance.

As for the big bang beginning, I decided doing one of those would be a bit too much like the opener for Geometries. This tale opens with the crew, much like the rest of the Federation, slowly recovering from the traumatic events of the war and its immediate aftermath. That's the mood and pace I was shooting for, anyway. :)

And I'm much obliged for your continued patronage. :D
 
Gibraltar said:
DarKush said:
Trekkie Monster,

I can't speak for Gibraltar, but I can try to perhaps shed a little light on why Gallatin knows so much about the Alshain.

Basically, Gibraltar and I have sketched that the Son'a and Alshain have something of a history that spans decades. I allude to it in my vignette "Crossing Swords".

I also threw in a mention of the Alshain atrocities in Son'a space in the Dark Territory "Under the Shadows of Swords" and in the unfinished "Rekindled."
DarKush speaks truth. The long and tortured history between the Alshain and Son'a will be explored as the story progresses, but they've been blood enemies for generations.

As for Anij's ignorance of the Alshain, you have to remember that the Ba'ku are an isolationist people who've set up shop in the middle of the most inhospitable nebula they could find. The fact of who specifically beat up on the Son'a is irrelevant to them, only the fact that their estranged children have returned is of any importance.

As for the big bang beginning, I decided doing one of those would be a bit too much like the opener for Geometries. This tale opens with the crew, much like the rest of the Federation, slowly recovering from the traumatic events of the war and its immediate aftermath. That's the mood and pace I was shooting for, anyway. :)

And I'm much obliged for your continued patronage. :D

Aaaahhhhhh ..., gotcha. Actually, I had meant to ask if this history was established in DarKush's work. I'm working on it, but haven't gotten that far yet, unfortunately.

And you make a very interesting point that I hadn't considered, in relation to Anij's reaction. You're right, of course: even in Insurrection there was a bit of a sense of willful ignorance to external factors that don't effect the Ba'ku.
 
Sorry about the delay in responding, but I've been fighting a bug and have spent most of last night and today in bed. A most auspicious beginning. Looks like the crew of the Gibraltar are about to step into a hornets' nest--I remember that old saying, "Those who in between quarrels interpose often end up with a bloody nose." I also like what you've done with Ramirez, I'm kind of shuddering at the thought of her, Dax, and Shelby going for a night out on the town... ;)

And poor Thorpe: I think he's our shared universe's version of Shleprock (Remember that old character from Pebbles and Bam Bam?) The poor guy can't seem to buy a break! Unlucky in cards and unlucky in love...
 
^Thanks for the kind words. :) And don't you mean he's unlucky... at Cardies? :guffaw: Oh, geez, I crack myself up! Oh, yeah, and the three of them out carousing would spell definite badness for the male gender. The Widowmakers are on the prowl!
 
Gibraltar said:
Oh, yeah, and the three of them out carousing would spell definite badness for the male gender. The Widowmakers are on the prowl!

*sniff sniff* Is that another cross-over short I smell on the wind ...? :cool:

BTW, love the Shleprock reference. Talk about a blast from the past.
 
Well I don't want to be left out in the "welcome back" and "I can't wait where this is going" chorus. If that sounded a bit ironic ... it wasn't :lol:

No this is a fascinating start. As you might know I'm not a big fan of bringing in 'canon' characters but I also like the idea of brining back the Ba'ku. I'm not so sure about the Enterprise though. I hope she and her crew will play a minor role so that we can focus on your fantastic characters instead.

And what's with Thorpe? Stop torturing the guy already. I want to see him happy and marry with Aquiel :lol: well I guess that's out of your jurisdiction though.
 
Prophets and Loss - Chapter 2

Chapter 2

The Plevlian Squalls
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)
Sector 441


The Alshain heavy cruiser G’Shrora slalomed wildly between the thundering columns of energetic plasma that had been whipped into frenzy by the deep gravitational footprint of a nearby proto-star cluster. The warship was seriously damaged, and its desperate gyrations were a last-ditch attempt to evade its pursuers. A squadron of small, compact attack ships of unknown origin matched the larger ship move for move, darting through the billowing fumaroles with practiced ease and making a mockery of the heroic efforts of the cruiser’s helmsman.

On the bridge of the Alshain vessel, Sutahr Vacquin R’Vor snarled with displeasure as he observed the persistence of his unidentified enemy. The flotilla of attack ships had ambushed them just outside the Ba’ku star system as the [/i]G’Shrora[/i] had departed with its cargo of captured Son’a and Ba’ku prisoners. What had begun as a routine clean-and-sweep of newly annexed territory had quickly deteriorated into a running battle to save their own lives.

Turning to his weapons officer, R’Vor inquired heatedly, “Can we ignite those columns?”

The younger male’s ears flattened in subservience under the withering scrutiny of his captain. “No, sir. You’re thinking of metreon gas. There are pockets of that material throughout the Bri—“ he was flung against his console as the ship rocked from yet another well placed torpedo hit. Gathering his wits, he replied with a hopeful volley of swarm-missiles that fanned out behind the ship as he continued, “…throughout the Briar Patch, but none are found nearby due to the plasmoberic currents—“

R’Vor waved away the rest of the explanation, baring a mouthful of formidable teeth. “Status of weapons?”

“Disruptors and exciser cannons are still offline, sir. Their aim with their opening salvo was impeccable.”

Grunting with grudging admiration for his enemy’s prowess, R’Vor scanned the navigational display at his station for any other anomalies in the vicinity which might serve to either hide them or slow their pursuers. He found nothing.

The helmsman announced, “Clearing the columns, Sutahr. Shall we swing around for another run?” The man’s voice was tight with fear, and despite R’Vor’s hatred of that particular emotion, the sutahr found that he could not judge him too harshly under the circumstances.

“Status of the enemy craft?”

“Eleven of the original twelve threat craft are still intact, sir. One of them appears to have collided with a plasma column attempting to avoid our last volley.”

R’Vor’s hands clenched the forelimb rests of his command chair. There were no other alternatives. His ship was crippled, so prolonged flight was not an option. His shields were failing, his most potent weapons disabled. They would have to turn back and brave the raging tendrils once again. ‘Better a quick death by plasma storm than capture at the hands of an unknown foe,’ R’Vor thought soberly as he recited a quick prayer to his ancestral lineage. “Helmsman, bring us about!”

The pilot’s response was drown out by thunderous weapons impacts as their opponents who had themselves just passed out of the squalls executed a concentrated attack on the cruiser. Primary lighting died and the sole illumination on the bridge came from the strobing death throes of flickering consoles and the guttering sparks from shattered display screens.

From within the darkness a voice shouted, “Shields have failed! Sensors detecting transporter signatures.”

R’Vor rose from his seat, drawing a bulky distruptor pistol from its holster on his leg. “Battle stations, prepare to repel boarders!” Despite his best efforts, his enemies had pressed their attack and now a battle that had begun as ship-to-ship skirmish would end in close-quarters combat. He generated a feral smile as he anticipated what would likely be his final struggle. Let them come for him. They would enter his lair, defended by his people, where the darkness and confined spaces were his allies. ‘Yes,’ he thought, ‘Let them come.’

*****

Federation Starbase Deep Space Nine
Ward Room


“…and in conclusion an eleven ship task force should suffice to underscore the Federation’s resolve to see this conflict ended peaceably while not proving overtly threatening to the Alshain. All parties involved in this unfortunate quarrel are justly aggrieved, but we must make them see that peace is the preferable path.” With that, Captain Jean-Luc Picard completed his brief on the mission that had consumed him these last months.

He resumed his seat next to Commander Will Riker, scanning the faces of the assembled captains and their first officers, the men and women who had elected or had been assigned to follow him on this vital errand of mercy. A few appeared genuinely enthusiastic, but the majority had mustered their best poker faces for the occasion. A handful, Commander Liana Ramirez among them, looked openly dubious.

Although Deep Space Nine was some fifty lightyears from the Federation border with Alshain space, the core of the task force had assembled here largely due to the presence of two individuals. The senior Starfleet officer posted to DS9 was Rear Admiral Monica Covey, the Federation’s foremost expert on the Alshain, and the woman responsible for forging the UFP’s alliance with them during the bleak days that marked the beginning of the war. Seated with her at the head of the table was Lt. Commander Seb N’Saba, Starfleet’s only Alshain member, formerly of the late USS Cuffe.

The rest of the meeting went by the numbers, consisting of brief exchanges of tactical, logistical, and navigational data as the command staffs from the Lexington, Gibraltar, Zhukov, and Bellerophon made preparations for operating within the unpredictable Briar Patch.

Covey had provided the task force with everything she knew about the Alshain as a species, consciously keeping her reservations with this mission to herself following Picard’s impassioned speech to his fellow officers. Her objections had already been shared in private, and she had reiterated them to Will Riker, with whom Covey was previously acquainted. She’d even gone as far as reassigning N’Saba to the Enterprise for the duration of the assignment, praying his insights into his people’s psychology and traditions might help prevent any unfortunate incidents.

The admiral called the meeting to a close with Picard’s sanction, and the personnel filtered toward the exit, chatting among themselves as they collected padds and beverage mugs. Picard paused near the exit to the wardroom, waiting for Sandhurst and Ramirez to approach. He inclined his head towards his fellow captain, a man who’d volunteered himself and his ship for the duration of this diplomatic intervention. “Captain Sandhurst, you’re looking much improved since our paths crossed last.”

Sandhurst smiled wanly, “Thank you, Captain.” Donald’s recovery from his recent abduction had begun aboard the Enterprise with Counselor Troi, before the ship had transported him to Betazed for more intensive therapies.

Picard turned to Ramirez, “You appeared skeptical of my plan, Commander. I opened the floor to questions and concerns, but you didn’t take the opportunity to voice any.”

Casting a quick glance at Sandhurst, Ramirez replied evenly, “It’s not my place to question the necessity or the underlying assumptions surrounding this mission, sir.”

Riker stepped up behind the Gibraltar officers, his mouth drawing into a frown as he picked up on the topic of conversation.

“If you have reservations, Commander, you should feel free to air them.” Picard pressed the point, “I certainly wouldn’t want anyone feeling they’re held hostage by the circumstances of this assignment.”

Sandhurst bit the inside of his lip, looking mortified as Ramirez smiled pleasantly at Picard. “Respectfully, Captain, I’m a Starfleet officer. I go where I’m told. But since you’ve asked for my thoughts, I’m more than happy to share them. In my professional opinion, we’re biting off more than we can chew with this mission at a time when we can least afford such gestures. As for my personal opinion,” her eyes clouded as she conjured dark memories, “I’ve danced to this tune before. It didn’t end well.”

Picard smiled tolerantly, “Healthy cynicism is a positive characteristic in a leader, Commander. I hope that by the time we’ve completed our assignment, you’ll be able to see the value in such gestures, most especially when we can least afford them.”

Ramirez allowed, “I sincerely hope that’s the case, Captain. I’ll have to trust you’re not allowing your personal feelings to needlessly endanger these crews.” She offered perfunctory nods all around, “Sirs, if you’ll excuse me.”

Stepping out into the corridor, Ramirez had only made it a dozen meters before she sensed the fast approach of someone behind her. She turned to come face to face with an obviously irritated Will Riker. “Wait just a minute, Ramirez.”

He outweighed her by over fifty kilograms and stood considerably taller, but Ramirez appeared unfazed, looking up into Riker’s face with iron resolve. “Something I can help you with, Commander?”

“You’ve got a lot of nerve questioning the motivations of that man,” Riker said heatedly, pointing down the corridor towards the wardroom. “He’s made sacrifices you could hardly imagine in the defense of the Federation, and I think you owe him the benefit of the doubt.”

Ramirez cocked her head, giving Riker an appraising look. “Picard’s a very accomplished officer and diplomat, but he’s not infallible. Sometimes even the most well intentioned plans are built on foundations of sand.”

Glowering, Riker snorted, “What the hell is that supposed to mean?”

“It means that I’m skeptical of this mission because Picard’s too close to the players. His relationship with the Ba’ku is driving this, and no matter how genuine his humanitarian ambitions are, he’s been blinded to the realities of the situation. Mark my words, we’ll be at war with the Alshain before this is done.”

Riker countered, “To be perfectly candid, your opinion really doesn’t count here. Your captain’s already onboard with this. All anyone’s asking you to do here is your job.” He shook his head in disbelief, “I can’t understand why you’d object to taking part in a humanitarian mission, or why you’d disrespect Captain Picard like that.”

Ramirez’s forced smile turned frosty. “My job? Oh, that’s right, I remember now. That’s what I was doing on the bridge of the Tempest during the war. I was standing knee deep in bodies, surrounded by burning starships on the Bolian Front while Enterprise was playing diplomatic courier and flitting about on archeological surveys.” She made a point of looking down at Riker’s knees. “I hope your uniform didn’t get too dirty hauling shovels around the dig sites for your captain.”

Will’s eyes widened, his face reddening as his outrage mounted. However, his anger was fueled by a kernel of shame he’d carried since the end of the conflict. Enterprise had been considered too important by command to risk in direct combat. Instead, the flagship had been dispatched on vital diplomatic assignments, recruiting allies against the Dominion and engaging in routine good will missions, helping to preserve the image that the Federation was still functioning normally during the protracted struggle. He’d yearned to be on the front lines, sharing the enormous burden with his comrades, but it was not to be.

Riker fought to control his rage at her impertinence, pointing an accusatory finger at her. “The crew of that ship has—“

Ramirez cut him off mid-sentence. “Stow it, Will. I know you saved the earth from the Borg, but what have you done for us lately?

Riker practically recoiled at her attack, his expression conveying such shock and incredulity that it brought Ramirez up short. She immediately downshifted, holding up her hands in a placating gesture. “I’m sorry, Commander. That was completely out of line.”

“You’re goddamn right about that,” Riker muttered, working heroically to reign in his emotions.

“I’m well aware of the contributions of your ship and crew to the safety of the Federation.” Her face was pinched, her expression pained. “I apologize. This isn’t about you, or Picard. This is about my captain and his choices.”

Calming, Riker examined Ramirez more closely. He’d never met the woman before today, but he counted himself an excellent judge of human nature. Behind the young woman’s bluster, he saw a deep reservoir of pain and fear. The whole idea of this mission had set something off inside her. Lowering his voice, Riker offered, “This won’t be like last time, Commander. Captain Picard won’t allow it. I won’t allow it.”

“You can’t make that promise.” She turned abruptly, walking away down the corridor, leaving a confused and frustrated Will Riker behind her.

*****

Alshain Heavy Cruiser G’Shrora
Detention Block, Deck 7


The prisoners were flung to and fro in their detention cells as the cruiser shuddered from repeated impacts. Anij clung to Gallatin for support, “What’s happening? Has Starfleet come to rescue us?”

Gallatin grunted as they were thrown against the wall, he shielding Anij from the impact with his body. “More likely a Son’a cruiser,” he said, thinking, ‘I’m surprised we have any left.’

The wailing of internal alarms drowned out the shouting from their Alshain captors as the weapons fire ceased suddenly. Gallatin whispered to Anij, “They are being boarded. We must be prepared to confront the guards should they come to execute us before we can be rescued.”

Anij’s features tightened with fear, but her eyes were clear and focused. She was Ba’ku, one of the last thanks to the efforts of the Alshain. Her people and their culture must be preserved.

Moments passed, then the sounds of fighting erupted from somewhere nearby. The whine of disruptors competed with the basso growl of pulse blasts. In the corridor at the end of the detention block, figures silhouetted in smoke dashed about amidst the flash of weapons fire.

A tall, red-furred Alshain soldier sprinted into the block, whirling about and taking a kneeling position with his rifle held at the ready. Two hazy figures leaned out into the corridor from opposite sides of the doorway simultaneously, sending a flurry of white energy bolts towards the soldier. He replied in kind, vaporizing one of the enemies as he himself was cut down by their fusillade.

The surviving figure moved cautiously down the corridor. Gallatin noticed that the indistinct form of the humanoid was not due to the surrounding smoke, but was instead the result of mimetic holomesh armor that simulated the wearer’s immediate surroundings. As a former soldier, Gallatin admired the smooth, steady advance of the armor clad figure, constantly scanning his surroundings and sweeping the path of his advance with his rifle.

Arriving at the occupied cells, the figure spoke in accented Federation standard, no doubt the result of a translator matrix. “You are Son’a?”

Gallatin stepped forward, stopping just before the energy field. “Yes.”

The figure reached out, toggling off the security screens and releasing the prisoners. “Stay close together and remain with me.”

Gallatin stooped to retrieve the fallen Alshain soldier’s rifle, hefting the bulky weapon with difficulty. “Understood.”

*****

Sandhurst looked sheepishly at Picard as Riker slid past him and began his pursuit of Ramirez down the corridor. The captain of the Enterprise looked less than thrilled with the actions of his own exec, and directed a wry smile at Sandhurst.

“Well, that was… awkward,“ Donald offered. He began to apologize for Ramirez’s statements but the older captain casually waved away the effort.

“No need, Captain. She’s entitled to her opinion, and after all you and your crew have been through in past months, I believe I can understand the source of her discomfort.” He patted Sandhurst on the shoulder. “Don’t give it any more thought. We’ve a lot to accomplish in very little time. Let’s not allow ourselves such distractions.” With that, Picard stepped into the hallway, leaving Sandhurst standing in an empty room save for Rear Admiral Covey.

Years earlier, Covey had been the first officer aboard the Cuffe where Sandhurst had served as an engineer. Later, as a captain she’d stolen him away from that ship and made him her Chief Engineer on the Chevalier. Five months ago Covey had approached Sandhurst, then the first officer on the Venture, and convinced him to accept a captaincy.

Covey recognized Sandhurst’s frustration and grinned at him. “Look out for Liana when she gets a full head of steam. I’ll bet she and Will are toe-to-toe out there.”

Sandhurst rolled his eyes, “No doubt.”

The admiral stepped forward hesitantly. “How are you, Donald?” She couldn’t quite hide her discomfort with his new appearance. A mere two months earlier, Sandhurst had been noticeably overweight and had possessed a thick mane of dark black hair that had just begun to gray at the temples. Now that hair was nearly completely white, and had been shaved close to his head, leaving what amounted to a crown of stark white stubble. He was leaner now than when she’d known him as a junior engineer years before, but he seemed gaunt and brittle.

Sandhurst attempted a smile of his own, but wasn’t able to follow through. “I’m… better.”

“Really?” She placed a hand on his arm. “I’d heard rumors that something… very unpleasant had happened to you. Despite my rank, I couldn’t get any official confirmation. Everything was ultra-classified.”

He pursed his lips regretfully. “Unfortunately, yes. I can’t talk about it. Under the circumstances, that’s more a blessing than a curse.”

She inclined her head, having no choice but to accept that explanation. “I’ll see your ‘no comment’ and raise you a ‘are you sure about this mission?’”

The reference to their weekly poker games aboard the Chevalier ignited the smile Sandhurst had been unable to light on his own. “I think it’s the right thing to do, both for the Federation, and the Son’a.”

She nodded reluctantly, “You know how I feel about this.”

“I do, and I want you to know your opinion carries considerable weight with me.”

She laughed, “But Jean-Luc is just so damn compelling, right?”

He chuckled, “Something like that.”

“Fair enough. Just promise me you’ll be careful, okay? I didn’t pin that fourth pip on your collar so that you could go and get yourself mauled by an interstellar wolf pack.”

He mock winced, “Nice imagery, thanks.”

She stepped through the door into the passageway. “C’mon, Captain, I’ve been waiting for a tour of that old ship I pawned off on you.”

He fell in step with her, shaking his head ruefully and just for a moment feeling once again like his old self.

*****

Alshain Heavy Cruiser G’Shrora

Sutahr R’Vor roared in concert with the scream of his disruptor rifle, pouring concentrated fire down the corridor towards the shadowy, advancing enemy. These creatures were wraiths, darting from cover to slay his men with well placed weapons fire before vanishing again into the chaos. Their inexorable advance towards the detention center was proof enough that they were here to rescue the Alshain’s prisoners, but the sutahr had never known the Son’a or their servitor species to fight so hard or so effectively. For a moment he wondered if these were Jem’Hadar holdouts, perhaps some vanguard of a second invasion of the Alpha Quadrant, hiding out in the Briar Patch.

Crouching back behind the corner as the enemy’s answering fire flashed past; R’Vor accessed the computer command link affixed to his gauntlet. He reprogrammed the ship’s onboard security forcefields, tapping delicately at the interface with a clawed finger. Smiling coldly, R’Vor congratulated himself on his own bloody creativity as he motioned for his men to retreat from near the mouth of the passageway.

Activating the defense screen emitters in the corridor, he sent a horizontal field of energy scything down the corridor at waist level. Like a blade cutting stalks of grass, a half dozen of the darting figures were cleaved in two instantaneously. Those of the enemy fortunate enough to have been in adjoining corridors or lying prone began an immediate tactical withdrawal, sensing the sudden shift in the fortunes of war.

R’Vor led an advance down the hallway, retaking the corridor and dispatching pursuit teams to harass their retreating foes. He paused at a bisected enemy body, his eyes struggling to focus the image of the man as the soldier’s holomesh armor flickered randomly. Kneeling beside the body, R’Vor unfastened the figure’s combat helmet and faceplate, peeling them away and staring uncomprehendingly at the naked visage of his enemy.

He looked up to see one of his men doing likewise with another of the enemy, the crewman’s features also clouded with confusion. The man looked to R’Vor, “I don’t understand, Sutahr. They are Bajorans.”

*****
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 2

I don't know what I can say that won't just sound like sycophantic fawning ..., but well, it's just so damn good! As always, I'm wowed by your command of the characters and their personalities. Picard and Riker were perfect. I could clearly see and hear them both in those situations and speaking lines. I agree with DarKush, the Riker-Ramirez scene was wonderful. I also thought you handled that last scene between Covey and Sandhurst expertly. I love how you're dealing with all he went through and how it's still affecting him ... and how it's affecting those around him.

Oh yeah, and I already love the Alshain.

I have one question about them, just out of curiosity: are they bipedal? Quadrapedal? A combination? I ask because, in my mind's eye, I somehow imagined them as being quadrapedal in Chapter 1, but here they clearly seem more bipedal. LOL!!! I just realized that I sort of see them as walking like the werewolf in "American Werewolf in London" (with apologies if that's insulting in any way.) ;)

Can't wait for chapter 3! :thumbsup:
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 2

Much obliged. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And yes, the Alshain are bipedal.
 
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