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ST: Gibraltar - Prophets and Loss

Prophets and Loss - Chapter 9

Chapter 9

USS Gibraltar
Federation Task Force Peacekeeper
Periphery of the Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


With the away mission well underway, there was little to do aboard Gibraltar but sit and wait. Some people found themselves unable to sit for the duration.

The racquetball thudded off the far wall, caroming off the side barrier only to find its path obstructed by Pell Ojana’s racquet. She blasted it back towards the wall, imparting a downward spin that sent it dropping into the corner, thus making Sandhurst’s return nearly impossible. That didn’t stop him from trying, of course.

Sailing across the court, Donald made a valiant attempt to intercept the ricocheting ball, but succeeded only in splaying himself across the floor comically. Rolling over onto his back, he mock glared at Pell who was laughing so hard she had to brace herself against the wall.

Sitting up, Sandhurst joined in the moment of levity, chuckling. “Thanks for mocking my pain.”

Catching her breath, she replied, “You know, your game has actually improved since the days on the Cuffe. You’d never have even attempted that shot back then.” She stepped forward, offering him a hand up.

Clambering back to his feet with Pell’s assistance, Sandhurst noted, “Racquetball was a passion of Captain Ebnal’s. Being able to keep up was a prerequisite for being his XO on the Venture. I haven’t had much opportunity to play recently.”

She smiled, stooping to scoop up the ball. “I’m happy I could remedy that situation for you.” She glanced back, catching Sandhurst admiring her profile.

The young Donald Sandhurst she’d known would have blushed fiercely and tripped over himself apologizing for such a gaffe. This Sandhurst merely smiled approvingly.

She stood, scrutinizing him. “Anyone ever tell you you’re a bag of mixed signals.”

He shrugged, “Aside from my family, my friends, and my crew… no. Why do you ask?”

Shaking her head bemusedly, she served, sending the two of them dashing about the court once again.

The game proceeded for the next twenty minutes, both players elevating their games incrementally to the point where their individual sets were lasting minutes at a time. The two battled fiercely, neither willing to yield as on some level the contest became a microcosm of their failed relationship. Eventually, however, Pell’s greater skill and superior stamina won the day.

Looking tired but happy, Sandhurst wiped the sweat from his head and face as he called a holographic bench seat into being and sat heavily.

Toweling off, Pell observed him for a minute before she spoke unexpectedly. She hadn’t meant to have this talk, not yet, and Pell took herself by surprise with her own forwardness. “Where did we go wrong, Donald?”

He seemed to take a long moment, eyes averted as he fingered the strings of his racquet. Looking up at her, he finally replied, “Things weren’t the same after Tong Beak, for either of us.”

She frowned, her expression caught somewhere between pain and irritation. “Was she so irresistible? You and Terrence both threw yourselves at her.” She took a drink from a water bottle, working to reign in emotions held too long in check. “Him I can understand. He’d found someone who looked just like me, but wasn’t. Terrence wasn’t risking anything. But you? You had the real thing.”

Bracing his elbows on his knees, Donald leaned forward, gazing at the floor. “Don’t ask me to explain to you what I can’t justify to myself, Ojana.”

Her eyes narrowed. “Try,” she said, more harshly than she’d intended.

“Fine.” He stood, walking to the center of the court, folding his arms across his chest as he took a brief self-inventory. “You’d been on the Chevalier for months, and we were growing apart. You knew damn well I wasn’t comfortable abandoning Diaz after Monica stole you away from the Cuffe, but you jumped ship anyway.”

She began to protest, but he cut her off with a rebuking glare. “You said you wanted an explanation.”

Pell held up a mollifying hand, bidding him to continue.

“When we encountered the… other Ojana… your doppelganger was like you in image only. She was wild… unbridled, uninhibited in a way that I found enormously seductive.”

Shaking her head, Pell remarked, “A bad girl in your good girl’s body.”

“Something like that.” He sighed. “As it turned out, she was using the both of us. Not that it makes the deed any less hateful. Glover still despises me for telling you about his part in that whole mess.”

“And later?” she asked. “After you’d joined me on the Chevalier? I’d forgiven you, but you still kept pulling away.”

He turned to face her. “Guilt, Ojana. You may have forgiven me, but I couldn’t absolve myself. I couldn’t touch you without thinking about my betrayal. In the end, being with you was just making me hate myself all the more.”

“And that’s why you left?”

He nodded reluctantly, “The chief engineer’s post on the Venture couldn’t have opened up at a better time as far as I was concerned.”

“What about now?” She stood, approaching him slowly, moving to embrace him. Sandhurst tensed, but did not otherwise resist the gesture. “Is there any chance for us to start over?”

He looked into her eyes, his pain and reticence only too clear. “It’s not that easy, I’m afraid. Not so long ago, someone… hurt me. Badly.”

Staring up at him, she radiated waves of empathy. “I’d gathered as much.”

“Part of that experience was that my memories were altered. Memories of my friends and loved ones were ripped away and someone perverted them terribly. I still… I have faint recollections of hurting you, violating you in the most obscene ways.” His jaw tightened, and he struggled to keep the moisture brimming in his eyes from flowing over. “On Betazed they helped me to recognize which of my memories are real, and which aren’t. Logically, I know those horrible visions are a fraud, but they still feel real, and it’s all wrapped up with my guilt over Tong Beak and my genuine feelings for you.”

She held him tightly, her eyes glistening as well. “I’m sorry, Donald. I’m so sorry.”

Sandhurst made a valiant attempt at a wry smile. “Hey,” he said gently. “That’s supposed to be my line.”

*****

Planet Ba’ku
Dorian Mountains


“The Core Breach?”

“No.”

“Graceland?”

“Nope.”

“Beazy’s Backroom?”

“Um… no. And who the hell is Beazy?”

“The Wild West? We could have swinging doors into the lounge area, dress it all up in 19th century frontier Americana.” Lightner was nothing if not persistent. But as long as his mouth was moving, it seemed his legs were as well, and Ramirez needed him keeping up with the group’s grueling pace.

“I told you, Brett, the lounge doesn’t need a name. Or a theme.” The exec replied patiently, looking ahead at the group as they forged upward in the fading light of day. She’d moved to the back of the party to motivate the lagging ensign into matching the rest of the away team’s tempo.

“I think we just need to jazz it up a bit, Commander. Other ships have novel themes or decorations.”

She resisted the urge to smile, “We’re not other ships, Mr. Lightner. We’re not about flash or image. We’re about getting the job done.”

He grinned self-consciously, “I know that, sir. I’d just like to leave my mark on the sh—“ The thought went uncompleted.

As ambushes go, it was exceptionally well executed. Lar’ragos was in the lead, and the Bajora-Tavan soldier who initiated the attack waited until the lieutenant had moved past him and out of the target area before launching the antipersonnel munitions. This would maximize the effect on the largest number of the intruders.

A rippling wave of brilliant white flashes erupted in close proximity to Shanthi, Taiee, Dunleavy, and two more of the security detail. They were followed almost immediately by the zing of neural disruptors, which did not give off a visible light beam, but simply rendered the target insensate at short range.

Momentarily blinded and struck deaf by the flash grenades, Dunleavy was struggling to bring her phaser rifle up when a neural pulse struck her, sending her toppling off the trail and sliding down the ridge.

One of the munitions landed too close to Shanthi, and the science officer’s supposedly fireproof Starfleet field jacket and tactical vest erupted in flames as he lurched backwards away from the dazzling flare.

Taiee threw her hands up over her eyes, too late to stop the optical flash from washing away her vision. She threw herself onto the ground as the sounds of exchanging weapons fire and explosions roared around her.

Specialist Sharpe, who’d already donned his night-vision glasses in deference to the growing twilight, was spared the visual disruption of the opening assault. He toggled off his rifle’s safety and fired blindly, blanketing the uphill side of the trail in pulse phaser bolts.

Ramirez grabbed Lightner by the back of his vest, pulling him over the lip of the pathway and scrabbling down the ridge-face with the ensign in tow as the sounds of combat raged above them. Breathing heavily, Lightner fumbled for his phaser pistol, hissing, “Who is it, Commander? The Ba’ku?”

“Shut up,” she replied coldly, ramping up her phaser rifle’s power setting as she scanned the downward slope for signs of enemy targets. Tapping her compin, Ramirez was not terribly surprised by the device’s null-function buzz. Disrupting communications was a prerequisite for an effective surprise attack, denying the victims the ability to more readily coordinate a counter-offensive.

Pushing Lightner ahead of her, Ramirez began their clumsy descent down the steep ridge, hoping to avoid any immediate pursuit by the threat forces. She yearned to climb back to the path and engage this unknown enemy, but knew to do so would be both foolish and futile. Escape and evasion were their only options now.

Fifteen meters above them, Taiee looked up, blinking, just in time to see the solidifying image of a dark, armor-clad warrior standing over her. He leveled his weapon and she closed her eyes, searching desperately for a prayer she’d once learned from her great grandmother. She recalled the first few words, but the rest escaped her as the neural beam disrupted her cogent thought centers.

The soldier-priest who’d begun the attack turned back to bring down the lead intruder, only to find the man vanished from the trail. He scanned the vicinity with high powered optics and sensors, finding nothing. Odd, he thought. He could have sworn the man had been only a few meters away.

Multiple stunner beams converged on the wildly firing Sharpe, who collapsed like a marionette whose strings had been abruptly severed. The attackers began to advance down the slope towards the trail, their mimetic armor allowing only wavering, dissonant glimpses of their movement in the tree line.

Disoriented and deafened, Shanthi struggled out of his burning vest and jacket, too preoccupied to notice the arrival of their attackers in the away team’s midst. The Bajora-Tava had the courtesy to let the young man extinguish the flames before stunning him.

*****

Unable to locate the missing intruder, the Bajora-Tavan soldier turned back to rejoin his comrades as they moved to eliminate the last vestiges of enemy resistance. Despite the advanced optics in his helmet, he did not foresee the large rock that slammed into the side of his head. Reeling, he staggered backwards, only to have his legs cut out from under him by a phaser rifle wielded like a cudgel. The butt-stock of a rifle descending towards his face was the last thing he perceived before the blackness claimed him.

*****

Prylar-Captain Bral looked on with satisfaction as his soldiers gathered the shell-shocked prisoners and prepared to egress the ambush site. Turning to his lieutenant, he inquired, “All accounted for?”

“No, sir,” was his uncertain reply. “Thavid is missing, Prylar-Captain.”

Bral scowled behind his helmet. “Missing? How is that possible?”

“We estimate three or four of the intruders are unaccounted for, sir. Thavid might have been taken prisoner.”

Bral tried to wrap his mind around that unlikely scenario. “By doctors and nurses? A Soldier of Light?”

The lieutenant knelt to retrieve one of the intruder’s rifles. Rising, he offered the weapon to Bral. “Respectfully, sir, I don’t believe they were all medical personnel. This is an advanced phaser rifle. Combat grade equipment.”

Fuming, Bral returned the weapon to his man. “Perhaps a vigorous interrogation of our prisoners will reveal what their comrades have done with Thavid.” Despite his leadership role, Bral had very little actual practical warfare experience. Thus far, the Army of Light had engaged in only a few skirmishes with the occasional vessel that wandered into their territory within the Prophets’ Veil. Those encounters and their recent clashes with the Alshain formed the sum total of their actual combat experience.

Bral suffered from a nagging sense of his own potential inadequacy. He wondered what they might have done differently here that could have given them a greater edge. Had he been too overconfident in their abilities? The prylar-captain vowed to banish his feelings of insufficiency by recovering his missing soldier, by whatever means necessary.

*****

2nd Scion Thavid of the Bajora-Tavan Army of Light awoke suddenly, feeling himself being carried with difficulty through an area of dense forest. Looking through the cracked visor of his helmet, Thavid saw he was in a fireman’s carry, across the shoulders of a humanoid male whose features were obscured by the darkness. He attempted to access his hands-free comms transmitter, only to find that function and a host of others including his infrared optics were inoperative.

He brought his armored elbow down, feeling a solid impact against the man’s head. Thavid crashed to the ground as the figure released his grip on the Bajoran. Rising to his feet, Thavid drew his sidearm, only to have the weapon kicked from his hand by an expertly placed boot to his forearm. The soldier deployed the scythe-shaped blade housed in his other forearm, driving a strike at the silhouette of his attacker.

His bladed arm carved through air only, and was subsequently grabbed by his opponent. Off balance already, Thavid’s momentum was used against him and he found himself pulled off his feet and launched airborne, flipped over the man’s shoulder. He hit the ground again, the impact driving the air from his lungs and leaving him gasping.

Thavid felt himself being rolled roughly over onto his stomach. Regaining his senses, he attempted to bring his arm-fixed blade into play, only to find that arm pinned to the ground by a foot. Suddenly he felt something cold and sharp bite into the back of his knee. With horror, he realized his attacker was severing the muscles and tendons in his knees; that small section of flesh left vulnerable by the flexible joints in his leg armor.

Repeated violent blows to the back of his helmet not only silenced the suddenly terrified young soldier’s screams, but also succeeded in knocking out the last of his integrated comms systems. Beaten, battered and literally hamstrung, the soldier wheezed in pain as his attacker located the clasp on his battle helmet and ripped the headgear off and away. “Prophets’ mercy!” he pleaded desperately. “Please don’t kill me!”

“The negotiations begin,” growled Pava Lar’ragos, examining the helmet briefly before tossing it aside. “Now I know what it is you want. You want to live.” Lar’ragos rolled the man over onto his back, and was clearly shocked at the sight of the young man’s distinctive nose ridges. “Interesting twist.”

The El Aurian straddled the soldier’s chest, his knees pinning the man’s arms to the ground. In his hand the lieutenant grasped a knife slick with the Bajoran’s blood. The blade tip inscribed a delicate figure-eight in the air just above the soldier’s throat. “Now, friend, let me tell you what it is that I want.”

*****

USS Gibraltar
Federation Task Force Peacekeeper
Periphery of the Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


“Plazzi to Sandhurst.”

The communications prompt activated the ceiling light, shining a harsh spotlight onto the head of the bed that was guaranteed to wake even the deepest sleeper. Blinking against the intrusion, Sandhurst interposed his hand between his eyes and the light. Clearing his throat, the captain croaked, “Go ahead, Elisto.”

“Sensor contact from one of our passive drones, Captain. Looks to be a grouping of vessels entering the system at one-third impulse.”

Climbing out of bed, Sandhurst moved to the closet, feeling various twinges and complaints from his body from the heated racquetball match. “Any news from our away team?”

“No, sir. Ba’ku has been emissions quiet.”

As he struggled into a fresh uniform, Sandhurst sought to clear the cobwebs from his head. He and Ojana had sat up talking into the wee hours, catching up on their years apart now that the emotional dam between them had broken. “On my way, Elisto. Wake Commander Pell if you haven’t done so already.”

“Aye, sir.”

*****

Plazzi had already abandoned the captain’s chair for the Science station by the time Sandhurst stepped off the turbolift. The pale blue lighting scheme that dominated the bridge was a visual reminder of the ship’s reduced-power state, although the captain noted the yellow alert indicators had been activated.

“Report,” Sandhurst instructed as he assumed his seat.

“One of our passive sensors hidden in the Oort cloud detected a squadron of ships entering the Ba’ku system. They appear to be on a direct course for the planet.”

“Type and number?”

“One Son’a Shrike-class battlecruiser,” Plazzi intoned, putting a slowly rotating schematic of one of the enormous horseshoe-shaped vessels on the main viewer. “Escorted by eight smaller ships of unknown origin.” A view of one of the corsair-sized, lozenge-shaped escort ships appeared. Sandhurst couldn’t place the design, but it certainly appeared compact and lethal. It reminded him vaguely of the Federation’s Defiant-class.

Sandhurst had ordered the pre-positioning of six passive sensor probes, disguised as pieces of cometary debris, a trick he’d picked up some months before from Cardassian insurgents. These drones had expanded Gibraltar’s sensor capacity, seeing as the ship could not actively scan the area without betraying her presence.

Looking to Plazzi, Sandhurst asked hopefully, “Life signs?”

The older scientist shook his head, still engrossed in the sensor scope. “Sorry, sir. Insufficient resolution with passive-only scans.”

“Ops, if we were to hail those ships, could we transmit through one of our probes by tightbeam and broadcast from it’s location? I don’t want to give away our position.”

Juneau checked the probe’s capabilities. “Aye, sir. We could.”

“Excellent. Set it up, please.”

Pell Ojana stepped onto the bridge, moving down into the well and taking a seat at the usually unoccupied mission specialist’s station. Rather than ask for a redundant update, she quietly put in an earpiece and accessed the ship’s bridge recorder, replaying the past five minutes of bridge activity to catch her up with their current circumstances.

Sensing the captain’s line of thought, Plazzi offered, “Are we certain we know the Son’a’s intentions here, sir? Or if they’re operating under duress?” He gestured to the schematic of the mystery ship still rotating on its axis on the viewer.

Sandhurst rubbed his chin, toggling the interface and removing the image of the alien craft, and instead displaying a tactical overlay of their relative positions within the system. “We’ve got a team on the planet, Elisto, and these people are heading right for them. I need to determine their objectives.”

Plazzi touched his controls, highlighting the tactical symbol representing the Son’a battlecruiser. “She’s four times our mass, with five times our firepower, Captain.”

Sandhurst nodded slowly, “Precisely why I’d like to remain hidden for as long as possible.”

Juneau announced, “Signal relay to our furthest probe has been established, sir.”

Sitting forward in his chair, Sandhurst ordered, “Patch me through. Audio only.”

“Channel open, sir.”

“Son’a vessel, please identify yourself and state your intent. I am the captain of a Federation starship, sent to recover Son’a, Ba’ku, Tarlac and Ellora survivors of the Alshain offensive in the Briar Patch. Please reply on this channel.”

“That got their attention,” Plazzi said after a moment, “Their scanning intensity just increased by a factor of seven. They’re trying to find us.”

“I concur, sir,” said Juneau. “Four of the smaller craft have broken formation and are establishing trans-system trajectories. They are now actively probing the vicinity of the broadcasting drone with full sensors.”

“Acknowledged,” Sandhurst replied quietly, awaiting a response to his hail.

“Federation vessel, this is the Son’a warship Ru’afo. We are currently surveying the damage to the Ba’ku settlement on the planet. Show yourselves and state your business within Son’a territory.”

Pell, now up to speed, turned in her chair to address the captain. “I’d advise extraordinary caution here, sir. That ship is named after a notable Son’a patriot who died at the hands of a Starfleet captain less than a year ago.”

“Yeah,” Sandhurst remarked dryly, “I’d picked up on that.”

Opening the channel again from his armrest panel, Sandhurst countered, “Under the circumstances, Ru’afo, I’m sure you can understand my desire to remain incognito for the time being.”

“That is unacceptable. You have violated the territorial integrity of the Son’a Imperium, and we demand that you make yourselves visible and present your vessel for inspection.”

At Ops, Juneau emitted a derisive hiss. “Sure. That’s gonna happen.”

Plazzi squinted at his display screen, looking troubled. “One of the smaller ships is scanning this area of the Oort cloud, sir. Their search pattern will intersect with our position in less than five minutes.”

“Damn,” Sandhurst breathed softly. He tapped his compin. “Sandhurst to Engineering.”

“Ashok here, sir.”

“Lieutenant, we’ve got potential hostiles sniffing around and we’re going to need full power in less than five minutes. Warm up the main reactor and prepare for combat power systems configuration.”

Sounding sullen, Ashok replied in his basso rumble, “Understood, sir.”

“He’s just delighted to be part of this plan, sir.” Plazzi noted wryly.

Sandhurst spared the scientist a smirk. “How can you tell? He always sounds like that.” Looking back at the stout Tellarite at the Tactical station, the captain said, “Master Chief, tactical analysis. If we have to trade fire with these people, what are our options?”

Quirking an eyebrow, the Tellarite replied. “We have three choices if confronted by the Son’a and their friends, Captain. One, we can run. Two, we can retreat. Three, we can flee.”

Glancing at Pell, Sanhurst noted, “I’m sensing a pattern, Commander. Would you concur?”

The acting exec look confused. “As to their cynicism or our being hopelessly outmatched, sir?”

Shaking his head, Sandhurst smiled despite the circumstances. “Helm, I want you to plot multiple evasive courses to the Ba’ku planet. If we have to fight our way through, that’s what we’ll have to do.”

The petty officer manning the Engineering station announced, “Main power restored, sir. Charging shields and tactical systems.”

An alarm warbled at Plazzi’s station. “That tears it,” he exclaimed, “They’ve found us.”

“Red alert,” ordered Pell.

Settling back into his seat, Sandhurst toggled the public address. “All hands, this is the captain. Our away team is stranded on a planet in this system, and a force of threat vessels stands between us and our people. We are going to run that gauntlet. I know I can depend on each of you to do your jobs to the best of your ability, and our collective lives may depend on that.” He took a deep, steadying breath as he felt the ship come to life around him. “All hands to battle stations.”

*****
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 9

Excellent chapter. Things are really starting to heat up now. And Pava is doing his bad-ass thing ... I'm lovin' it.

I'm sure I've said this before but I've got to say it again, what you and Darkush have done here is an extraordinarily well thought out and executed crossover that really tempts me to consider a closer connection to your guy's universe. His story featuring the mirror Pell was probably one of my favorties he has written and I love how you continue this thread here.

So much to admire here, can't wait for more.
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 8

CeJay said:
Actually, I firmly believe Picard is an idiot

You're only saying that because he's French ... :lol:

Just for the record:

It's because he totally wrecked a perfect opportunity for the Federation to get some realistic tactical parity with the Romulans,

It's because he wanted to try to talk with a giant world-killing snowflake,

It's because the time Q threw E-D into the Delta Quadrant and Guinan told him point blank "Leave Now", baldy says, "No, I think we'll press on" and runs into the Borg!

I have no problem with a French captain. It's captains that are f---ing morons that I have a problem with.

We now return you to your regularly scheduled fic.
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 9

Very cool chapter! Nice character work all around, but especially (of course) with Lar'ragos! Just one teeny-tiny little nit to pick, and it has to do with this line:


Specialist Sharpe, who’d already donned his night-vision glasses in deference to the growing twilight, was spared the visual disruption of the opening assault.

The purpose of night-vision goggles is to magnify the ambient light around the wearer, essentially turning night into a (kind of) day. If Sharpe was wearing these when the flash-bangs started going off, far from being protected, he would have suffered the worst effects, because the goggles would have magnified a flash of light already designed to stun people. (Unless the goggles weren't turned on, which would make wearing them in the dark pointless.)
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 9

Admiral2 said:The purpose of night-vision goggles is to magnify the ambient light around the wearer, essentially turning night into a (kind of) day. If Sharpe was wearing these when the flash-bangs started going off, far from being protected, he would have suffered the worst effects, because the goggles would have magnified a flash of light already designed to stun people. (Unless the goggles weren't turned on, which would make wearing them in the dark pointless.)
24th century techology! The goggles block out any light that registers as being at levels harmful to humanoid sight. Thus, he'd only have seen some black flashes as the goggles filtered the flares, but his vision would have been otherwise unaffected. I had all that in my head, but felt that putting it on paper in the middle of the battle sequence would have bogged down the narrative.

And thanks for the continued patronage. :D
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 9

There is nothing 24th century about it. The current night vision goggles do not allow flashes to blind their user. Military night vision filters out the intense light from explotions and other intense sources of light.
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 9

ghiaman74 said:
There is nothing 24th century about it. The current night vision goggles do not allow flashes to blind their user. Military night vision filters out the intense light from explotions and other intense sources of light.

I stand corrected! :D
 
Prophets and Loss - Chapter 10

Chapter 10

USS Gibraltar
Federation Task Force Peacekeeper
Periphery of the Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


As Gibraltar accelerated towards the incoming warships, Sandhurst toggled the comms once again. “Ru’afo, we are on a peaceful mission to stop the Alshain ethnic cleansing against your people. We have no hostile intent.” He paused, considering his quickly dwindling options. “We have a landing party on the Ba’ku planet searching for survivors. If you will allow us to recover our team, we will immediately withdraw from Son’a space.”

He sat back, glancing at Juneau after a moment.

The lieutenant shook her head, “They’re receiving us, but are not responding.”

‘And now I’ve given up our away team.’ Sandhurst fumed internally.

From behind him at Tactical, Tark announced, “Two of the smaller unidentified ships will be within weapons range in five minutes, Captain.”

“Assessment, Master Chief?”

Tark analyzed the incoming vessels, probing their energy transfer systems and defensive generators. “Mid-yield phasers, ion-jacketed plasma canons, photon torpedoes, and Class-5 shields, sir.”

Sandhurst mulled that over. They could take one of them without too much effort. Three would prove difficult, and eight would be impossible. There had to be another way. “Ops, download our logs to the emergency buoy and launch. Make its destination the Norfander system.”

Pell glanced up from her console, her expression dark. Captains traditionally launched log buoys only when faced with almost certain destruction. “Great expectations?”

Cocking his head thoughtfully, Sandhurst replied, “Might as well let Enterprise know what’s happening to us.”

He turned back to the viewer, weighing various courses of action. As he mused, part of Donald’s mind began preparing the ship for what appeared to be an impending engagement. “Come to course 92 mark 04, thirty degree roll to starboard. Ten degree positive pitch on the bow. Twenty percent increase in forward shield strength,” he checked his armrest display. “Take the additional power from the port-aft and starboard-aft grids.”

A litany of affirmatives answered his commands. He stood impulsively, the kernel of an idea fomenting in his skull. Moving to the Science station, he leaned over Plazzi and whispered briefly with the man, whose eyes widened in disbelief.

“You… can’t be serious, sir?”

Sandhurst looked grave, “Serious as taking on nine ships at once.”

Flustered, Plazzi shook his head. “I’d have to run the numbers, Captain, but I can’t imagine—“

Cutting him off with a terse, “Do it. We don’t have much time,” Sandhurst moved to the Engineering console. Checking some figures on the panel, he tapped his compin. “Sandhurst to Ashok. Lieutenant, I’m going to need you topside.”

*****

Son’a Battlecruiser Ru’afo
Joint Son’a/Bajora-Tava Ba’ku Mission
Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


“…If you will allow us to recover our team, we will immediately withdraw from Son’a space.”

Vadark Jobrin Adnai looked askance at Adhar Wuuten. “Again, they claim only peaceful intent, Adhar.”

“Lies,” Wuuten spat dismissively. “The interlopers will be destroyed.”

The Bajoran turned to face the Son’a leader. “I am unconvinced. It is but a single vessel, and your scans indicate that it is no threat to your ship.”

Wuuten fought to hold his temper in check. “It does not matter,” he said with slow deliberation. “The Federation betrayed our alliance, and now they enter our space uninvited in a time of war. I will take my revenge upon this ship.”

“The starship is launching a shielded distress buoy, sir.” This from the sensor officer.

Wuuten nodded, “Fine. Let them lure more of their comrades to the slaughter.”

Jobrin moved to the middle of the command center, still flanked by his bodyguards. “The Bajora-Tava will not participate in this egregious act, Adhar. If you wish our continued cooperation, you will cease this action immediately.”

Wuuten stood abruptly, causing Jobrin’s escorts to step in front of him, the emitters of their rifles rising just slightly. This, in turn, called Wuuten’s own security force into play. They advanced from their guard posts throughout the command center, bringing their sidearms to a low ready. The Son’a leader spoke, his voice tremulous with fury. “You do not give orders on my ship, Bajoran!”

Unmoved, Jobrin replied icily, “Then you may consider it the most serious of requests.”

Wuuten became unhinged, “I have had enough of your pious morality and your arrogance! I tell you these people are our enemies! Can you not trust us to know who is and is not a danger?”

Still implacably calm, Jobrin inclined his head. “A danger to you, perhaps. Not to us, Adhar. We agreed to help you in your struggle against the Alshain and their campaign of genocide against your people. We have no desire to entertain a blood feud between yourselves and this apparently benign Federation.”

Pointing wildly, his vat-cloned eyes bulging, Wuuten screamed, “Get off my ship! All of you!”

“As you wish.” Jobrin touched a finger to the control bracelet on his wrist, initiating a transport signal. “It appears the Bajora-Tava will have to re-evaluate our relationship with the Son’a Imperium.” A purple field of energy engulfed the vadark and his subordinates, depositing them back aboard one of their escorting corvettes.

*****

Six decks below the command center, Anij sighed deeply and shook her head as the Ru’afo’s battle alert klaxons began to blare. Looking across the nearly empty guest quarters cabin at Gallatin, she said quietly. “I don’t know about you, but I have had quite enough of war and killing.”

Gallatin raised his head from the computer terminal he was studying atop the otherwise bare work desk. “I agree, but what can we do about it?”

She made a point of looking around the room. “From in here? Not terribly much, I’d imagine.”

Turning off the computer and giving Anij his full attention, Gallatin surmised, “You have a plan.”

“The beginnings of one.”

He smiled, the prospect of interfering in Wuuten’s machinations warming his blood. “Please, Anij. Do tell.”

“As you know, we Ba’ku are not without our own… special talents.”

Gallatin looked at her skeptically. “Anij, those stories are apocryphal. Believe me, the Son’a spent years studying our genome looking for just such abilities, and found nothing.”

She stepped over to him, taking his hands in hers. “This power can’t be found in a laboratory, my friend. It’s a matter of belief, of faith.”

He rolled his eyes and attempted to extricate his hands from hers, but she held firm. “Let me prove it to you, Gallatin. I want to share a moment with you. It will not be a perfect moment, but it will be a prolonged one. And such moments, occurring at the right time, can move worlds.”

He issued a resigned sigh. “Fine. I will try and keep an open mind.”

“That’s all I ask.”

*****

Alshain Heavy Cruiser Venska
Running cloaked within the Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


Sutahr R’Voss watched with rapt attention as the Son’a ship and its escorts repositioned for an attack on the advancing starship. The cloaked Venska had stumbled upon the little Son’a led flotilla after leaving the confines of the Norfander system. Intrigued by the possibility of discovering the identity of the Son’a’s new allies, the Alshain warship had tracked the squadron to the Ba’ku system. Now, they observed the drama playing out on the tactical plot map as the plucky yet apparently suicidal Federation escort bore down on the superior firepower of the Son’a grouping.

Looking to his Klingon counterpart, R’Voss asked, “How would you characterize the Starfleet commander’s actions, Captain? Is he a hero or a fool?”

Captain Yejokk, his hand gripping a mug of raktajino, watched the forthcoming battle from his own terminal on the Venska’s bridge. He glanced up, fixing his gaze on the Alshain. “That is yet to be seen, Sutahr. If he falls in battle taking many of the enemy with him, then he dies a hero. If he is cut down quickly without giving proper account of himself in battle, then he dies a fool.”

R’Voss snuffled with canid laughter, “Well spoken.” Glancing at his weapons officer, he ordered, “Be prepared to activate all weapons systems on a moment’s notice. I may well decide to decloak us and finish off the victor or victors of this engagement.”

****

Planet Ba’ku
Dorian Mountains


Ensign Shanthi was forced to his knees, his arms bound tightly behind his back. The blindfold covering his eyes left him completely unable to guess his whereabouts, though he gathered by the temperature change and echoing footfalls that he’d been moved indoors someplace. His inability to see his surroundings increased the terror of the situation by several orders of magnitude.

His training in counter-interrogation tactics at the academy had been a brief one-week course that hadn’t come close to preparing him for the real thing. He fervently tried to recall the basic precepts of resisting torture, but found that his fear addled mind would not cooperate.

He thought of his mother, and how she would have handled this situation. Before rising to the admiralty, she’d served as the captain of the starship Potemkin. During that tour, Thousana had been taken hostage by the Chalnoth after a disastrous breakdown in negotiations with the burly anarchists on Milika III. They’d held her and a Federation ambassadorial party for a month, attempting to ransom them, until a young Lieutenant Jean-Luc Picard had orchestrated a daring rescue of their party. Shanthi vowed to show at least a fraction of the courage it must have taken his mother to endure such an ordeal.

Shanthi doubted very much that such a rescue would be forthcoming this time. As far as he knew, their entire away team had been captured or killed, and any survivors were being held separately. He tried to steel himself against whatever was to come as he heard a new set of footsteps enter the room.

The blindfold was removed, and Shanthi found himself in a small compartment, presumably within some manner of spacecraft. Seated across from him was a Bajoran male in a dark military uniform adorned with various accoutrements indicating something, but Shanthi didn’t know enough about Bajoran culture to guess who or what he was dealing with. The man had a medium build, widely set brown eyes, sparse dirty blonde hair, and carried himself with an aura of authority.

“I am Prylar-Captain Bral of the Bajora-Tava. You have been captured intruding upon the territory of our Son’a allies. Explain your purpose here.” The man spoke without exaggerated emotion or any apparent hostility, which only made him that much more intimidating to the ensign.

“Kuenre Shanthi, Ensign, Starfleet. Serial number BR-813-751.”

Bral smiled so slightly that Shanthi almost missed it. “You and your companions have been reluctant to cooperate with this process.” He moved to take a small box out from a satchel on his belt. “It is disappointing.”

Without thinking first, Shanthi blurted out, “I don’t understand. Our people are allies.”

Looking perplexed, Bral hesitated opening the box in his hand. “Would you care to elaborate, Ensign?”

Shanthi struggled against his vow of silence, then abandoned it in hopes of talking his way out of this. So much for his stalwart, tight-lipped defiance. “The Federation and the Bajorans have been partners for nearly a decade.”

His curiosity piqued, Bral sat back in his chair. “And how are an oppressed people allowed to make alliances?”

Blinking, Shanthi’s thoughts raced furiously. ‘What’s he getting at? Surely he has to know?’ “Oppressed? Bajor hasn’t been oppressed since the end of the occupation.”

Bral stiffened. “Watch yourself, Ensign. You’re treading into dangerous territory. The subject of the occupation isn’t to be taken lightly. Do not mock the plight of our brothers and sisters still in chains.”

“Who’s taking it lightly?” Shanthi looked at the Bajoran with evident disbelief. “Where the hell have you been? The occupation ended eight years ago, right before they found the wormhole.”

“Wormhole?”

Shanthi closed his eyes, dredging up his exo-historical courses from two years prior. “The… the Temple of the Prophets. I think that’s what your people call it.”

Bral was up and out of his chair in a flash, striking Shanthi so hard that the young man didn’t even have time to cry out as he toppled over onto the deck plating. Bral stood over him, seething, and looking at his hand as if he’d just witnessed the act from outside his own body.

Regaining his composure somewhat, Bral massaged his now aching hand with its counterpart. “Do not speak heresy to me, Ensign. I consider myself moderate in most things, but my faith is not one of them.” He pulled Shanthi back up and into a kneeling position more gently than the ensign had expected. “We should avoid that subject, I think.”

Shanthi coughed, spitting blood onto the floor, presumably from a cut somewhere inside his mouth. “Kuenre Shanthi, Ensign, Starfleet. Serial number BR-813-751.”

Returning to his chair, Bral looked troubled, seemingly startled by the violence of his reaction. Sitting, he retrieved the box from its satchel once again. This time he opened it, exposing a shimmering, rotating miniature version of the Orb of Transcendence. “As the piece is of the whole, as the leaf is of the tree, so too is the shard linked to the will and the body and the word of the Prophets.” He intoned by rote.

Shanthi did not want to look too closely at the artifact, but found he could not tear his eyes away. The scintillating mini-orb rotated slowly, seemingly drawing his consciousness towards it. He felt himself falling, though he couldn’t be sure if that was a physical sensation, or something in his head.

A bright light washed over him, infusing him, opening dark recesses within his consciousness he’d thought long forgotten. He felt intrusive tendrils of thought penetrating his memories, sifting through his recollections. Shanthi reached out, trying to communicate with this new presence, only to find that the connection was purely one way. Too late, he began to resist, to try and close off the sections of his psyche the intruder seemed most interested in. It was too late, however, and oblivion soon engulfed the young ensign.

*****

They crept though the sparse trees near the crest of the ridge that overlooked the shuttle’s landing zone. Ramirez thought she and Lightner had either been enormously lucky to have got this far without being detected by their unknown enemies, or they were being toyed with.

She’d deactivated their combadges, and programmed their tricorders to emit a low-level scattering field that she hoped would mask their lifesigns. They’d maintained a steady pace downward over uneven terrain, and both of them were bruised and scratched from more than one fall or scrabbling descent.

Ramirez edged closer to the crest, pulling a compact set of binoculars from her tactical vest and activating the low-light setting. Visually scanning the shuttle, she saw nothing amiss. Gritting her teeth against the dropping temperature, she whispered to Lightner, who was hugging himself for warmth despite his field jacket. “Nothing. Not sure if that makes me feel better or worse about this.”

Lightner issued a few false starts before forcing a reply past his chattering teeth. “Wh- what do you mean?”

“She means she’d feel better if she could actually see some of the enemy milling about,” Pava said quietly from behind them. Both Ramirez and Lightner started, the XO spinning about to bring her rifle up as the ensign lost his footing, toppled over and slid two meters down the rocky slope.

“Gods, man, how do you do that?” Ramirez hissed, equal parts shaken and annoyed.

Lar’ragos smirked in the darkness, “Years of practice.”

Ramirez lowered her rifle. “I was wondering when you were going to show up.” Shaking her head, she muttered, “That was some ambush.”

“Absolutely,” Lar’ragos agreed. “I was on point, and didn’t see it coming. If anyone’s at fault here, sir, it’s me.”

“It’s no one’s fault, Pava. They made us look like rank amateurs, whoever the hell they are.”

“They’re Bajorans, actually.” The lieutenant jerked a thumb over his shoulder. “Their ship is parked about a klick and a half that way. You feel like dishing out a little payback while we retrieve our people, Commander?”

Looking fearsome, Ramirez matched his feral smile. “Do I ever.” Then his statement sank in. “Bajoran?”

Sliding deftly down the slope to assist Lightner, Lar’ragos answered, “Got some intel on the new threats, sir. Nice young kid I ran across was only too happy to tell me all about them. I’ll fill you in as we go.” Hauling the ensign to his feet by his jacket collar, the El Aurian chided, “C’mon flyboy, time for another walkabout.”

*****

Bajora-Tavan Attack Ship Meressa
On Intercept Course with USS Gibraltar
Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


Vadark Jobrin squeezed into the tiny command deck of the attack ship, unfolding a stowed jumpseat and easing into it. “Status of our ships approaching the Federation vessel?”

The prylar-captain, turned, nodding deferentially to his superior. “Sir, they are about to enter the starship’s weapons range. They are awaiting the order to strike.”

“Tell them to hold their fire.”

The captain looked uncertain. “Do you want them to veer off, Vadark?”

Jobrin closed his eyes, beginning a silent prayer. Softly he intoned, “No, have them maintain course and speed, but they are to hold their fire unless fired upon. How better to truly judge the intent of this Federation captain?”

“It shall be as you say, Vadark.”

*****

USS Gibraltar
Federation Task Force Peacekeeper
Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


“Inbounds entering weapons range in… ten seconds.” Juneau announced evenly.

“Talk to me, Tark.” Sandhurst urged, struggling to keep his mounting anxiety out of his voice. “What will it take to cripple them?”

“Two photons apiece, followed by a quantum should do it, sir. I could employ follow-on phaser fire to disable their engines as we pass.”

“Good, I want them out of commission.” The captain cautioned, “Remember, we’ll let them make the first move. I don’t want us being responsible for starting a shooting war during a potential First Contact.”

To starboard, Plazzi and Ashok sat side by side at their respective stations, working feverishly on a series of computer simulations.

Unable to sit still any longer, Pell rose gracefully from her seat and ascended to the upper deck. Leaning in to whisper to Sandhurst in the command chair, she asked, “Have you really thought this through, Captain?”

He replied in the same low tones. “I’ve a dearth of options here, Ojana. I won’t leave our people at the mercy of the Son’a.”

“You can’t win,” was her succinct retort.

“I’m not that picky,” he said, smiling grimly. “I’ll settle for a draw.”

She persisted, “Don’t let your ego get us all killed.”

Rather than the angry response she’d expected to provoke with that barb, Sandhurst instead looked maudlin for the briefest of moments. He reached up and grasped her upper arm lightly with his hand. “Don’t worry, Commander. This isn’t ego, it’s loyalty. The kind of loyalty you demonstrated when you risked everything to rescue your last captain against standing orders.”

She stared, unable to muster a reply to that. Sandhurst gestured to her chair, and Pell resumed her seat wordlessly.

“Inbounds still closing, Captain,” Juneau updated. “Their shields are up and weapons are running hot, but they haven’t initiated a tactical lock as yet.”

“Intercept in thirty seconds,” Tark added from the back of the bridge.

“Steady,” Sandhurst coaxed as the vessels barreled towards one another.

*****

Bajora-Tavan Attack Ship Meressa
On Intercept Course with USS Gibraltar
Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


“Vadark, one of our ships on approach to the Federation vessel reports detecting a Bajoran lifesign aboard the craft.”

Jobrin’s eyes opened suddenly, the silent chant on his lips evaporating at the news. “Confirm that.”

Seconds ground past as inquiries flitted between ships over subspace. Finally, the officer turned back to address the vadark. “It is confirmed, sir. There is a Bajoran female aboard the Federation starship.”

Sitting forward and now appearing completely alert, Jobrin assessed, “It appears we will not be leaving Ba’ku system as quickly as I’d thought.”

*****

Planet Ba’ku
Dorian Mountains


Thanks to Lar’ragos’ unique talents, the trio had managed to sneak past the Bajorans’ security perimeter surrounding their landed attack ship. They crouched behind a fallen tree fifteen meters from the ship’s access hatch, going over their entry plan a final time before bringing it to fruition.

As Lar’ragos checked the charge on his battered phaser rifle, Ramirez noticed the dried blood caked around the El Aurian’s fingernails. “You injured?” she whispered.

Lar’ragos looked down, frowned, then shook his head fractionally. “Not mine,” he replied in the same subdued tone.

“Oh.” Ramirez knew better than to pry further.

The lieutenant leaned closer to the exec, “If we survive this little op, I’m going to have to put myself on report.”

She looked at him curiously, “What for?”

“The information on the Bajorans… it came at a price.” He handed Ramirez an isochip. “At the coordinates on this chip you’ll find a Bajoran. He’s hurt… I hurt him. I left him sedated, and I expect that after a little work from our medical personnel, he’ll be fine.”

She slid the isonlinear chip into a pouch on her tactical vest. “Not really so very worried about this right now, Pava.”

“Even so, Commander, I felt obligated to report it. These aren’t bad people. They’re just suffering from some serious misapprehensions regarding the outside universe.”

“Fine,” she said brusquely, ending the conversation. Preparing to stand, she shouldered her rifle and flipped up the holographic sight aperture. “Let’s do this.”

“Right.” Lar’ragos motioned Lightner to his feet.

*****

The Bajora-Tavan junior scion finished his sweep of the southwest quadrant, deactivating the thermal sights built into his helmet. As he turned back towards the ship, a volley of phaser pulses cracked into his armored back, hurling him headlong into the unyielding side of the craft with a bone-jarring impact that rendered him insensate.

The three Starfleeters advanced by bounds, one of them rushing forward as the others provided cover. Lightner sent another of the perimeter guards crashing to the ground with a prolonged discharge from his phaser pistol after the man rounded the nose of the ship on his patrol route.

Ramirez reached the hatch first, slapping a flat rectangular shaped entry charge onto the outer airlock door. Setting a five-second delay, she sprinted three meters down the flank of the ship, flattening herself against the hull. The charge detonated with an almost inaudible popping sound, the majority of its charge translating into molecular entropy which disintegrated the tritanium hatch.

Lar’ragos was first through, dashing into the craft and butt-stroking the first Bajoran he came across with stock of his rifle. Hot on his heels, Ramirez stunned another uniformed scion as the man stumbled unwittingly into the midst of their assault in the corridor.

Bringing up the rear, Lightner set a portable shield generator on the floor just inside the now open hatchway. He activated the device; the field would prevent the Bajora-Tava on guard duty outside from reinforcing their comrades within the ship. Lightner turned to see a dark blur rushing towards him down an adjoining hallway.

Prylar-Captain Bral delivered a vicious elbow strike to Lightner’s face as he slammed into the younger man, sending the ensign bouncing off a par-steel plated wall, his hand phaser clattering to the deck.

Hearing the struggle behind him, Lar’ragos turned to engage the Bajoran officer, unaware of the soldier-priest behind him who pivoted around the corner at a low crouch, weapon at the ready. Lar’ragos was bringing his own rifle to bear when a stream of plasma blasts tore into his side, knocking him off his feet and sending a spray of his blood splashing across the nearest wall.

Ramirez replied in kind, her phaser rifle spitting bolts that tore through Pava’s assailant, sending the man’s body toppling into the corridor. Spinning around to engage Bral, Ramirez found the man almost on top of her. She tried to bring her rifle up like a pole-arm, but the stronger Bajoran gripped the weapon at either end and drove her backwards while wrenching it from her grasp.

She brought her knee up just as she began to fall backwards, connecting solidly with Bral’s groin. As the prylar-captain collapsed on top of her, Ramirez leveraged her knees up and used Bral’s momentum to send him up and over her, crashing down on the deck on his back. The rifle skittered noisily down the hall, just out of reach.

Coming to her feet, Ramirez drew her combat knife. Rising more slowly due to his opponent’s well placed knee, Bral drew his ceremonial dagger. Crouched and each taking measure of the other, the two combatants locked eyes. Ramirez could hear the thunder of approaching footfalls.

Bral smiled cruelly at her, “What will it be, Starfleet? Will you taste my blade, or your own? Death or capture?”

*****
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 10

This is first-class tension building. Kudos.

However I wonder why you chose to deflate some of the pivotal tension during the potential space battle when you made it obvious that neither side wanted to fire first. I was biting my nails until that very moment. I love the idea of jumping back and forth between ships and characters but I felt as if you revealed a little too much information and motivation that way. Then again, I don't know what's going to happen next. I can't wait to find out ...
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 10

Nice cliffhanger you're leaving us on. It's looking like these Bajorans are about to find out that Son'a have been making chumps of them--I have a feeling the Son'a are about to buy 10,000 tons of trouble here.

Looking forward to the next chapter
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 10

I echo the above sentiments: once again, just a fantastic chapter. You’ve moved the story and the and the character development along quite nicely. And I have to respectfully disagree with Cejay. Though we know Gibraltar won’t be the first to fire, you’ve left us with an unstable Son’a commander in command of a formidable ship, a cloaked Klingon and – in my mind – a question as to what the Bajora-Tava will do. Detecting Pell may lead them to a more peaceful approach to things, but it may also lead them to take aggressive action to “retrieve” the Bajoran they’ve detected. Who knows? And I love Sandhurst’s little secret, and that you haven’t let us in on it as of yet.

Oh, and the scene between Wuuten and Jobrin was masterful! I have to add that I appreciated the tip o’ the hat to the Dune universe (vat-cloned eyes).

I also want to add that, while I’ve been reluctant to embrace Anij, I really enjoyed that scene with Gallatin, and I loved her comment, “It will not be a perfect moment, but it will be a prolonged one. And such moments, occurring at the right time, can move worlds.” Poetic and ponderous.

I thought you did a really wonderful job with Shanthi’s interrogation. Again, not only did you advance the story nicely, you gave us beautiful insights into both his psyche and that of the Bajora-Tava.

I’m loving Lar’ragos, of course. You just keep giving us more and more little tidbits with him. I’m loving his dialogue, especially (oddly, it’s calling to mind Logan/Wolverine from back in the day.) The little bit about the blood around his fingernails was wonderful, as was that entire scene.

I wanted to add my appreciation for a couple of things you do particularly well. First, you have a great way of thinking through – and describing – uses of Trek Tech, without it becoming cumbersome or overshadowing the story. Examples are Sandhurst positioning the ship for the fight; Ramirez deactivating the combadges and using the tricorders to mask their lifesigns; and the idea of setting up the portable shield generator once they were in the Bajora-Tava ship. Likewise, I really appreciate your choices of when to describe a journey in detail and when to be brief. I was struck by your choice to simply say that Ramirez, et al, found their way to the Bajorans’ ship “thanks to Lar’ragos’ unique talents,” rather than describing a journey that could easily have lost a reader’s interest.

And finally, I love how you left us hanging at the very end. Who’s footfalls were those? I am literally on the edge of my seat in anticipation of the next installment!

Bravo, once again!
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 4

Ok, I've been playing catch up, trying to absorb other peoples' work. I finished chapter 4.

Gibraltar is, of course, a great writer. But I like the descriptions of tactics both in the 'escape pods filled with explosives trick (I didn't see that coming)' and the details of Parrises Squares. You have an inspired mind!
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 4

...What? I assumed "Prophets and Loss" was complete...

Damn, now I know what it feels like to wait for a new chapter! :)

I do have one question, I don't know if it was established in canon or you took creative liberties; but, how big is the Briar Patch?

I was under the impression it wasn't large enough to accommodate multiple star systems.

Not a critique, just a question.

...and if you didn't figure it out; I can't wait to see how the Federation/Son'a/Bajora Tava/Alshain dynamic will play out!
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 4

In my Trekverse, the Briar Patch is large enough to contain dozens of star sytems. Whether or not that's canon... meh. ;)

I'll hopefully have Chapter 11 out sometime this weekend. Glad you're enjoying the tale.
 
Re: Prophets and Loss - Chapter 8

Unfortunately I wasn't able to read Ch. 8 as thoroughly as I would've liked. That being said, another good chapter. I liked the glimpses into Lightner's character. They were done very skillfully. I also liked Pava's cryptic warning about the dangers in the DQ. Hopefully we'll get to see the Gibraltar dealing with some of them in future installments. I also liked the N'Saba/Picard exchange. It was very in keeping with N'Saba's attitude and behavior. You captured his voice very well.
 
Prophets and Loss - Chapter 11

Sorry about the switch around, folks. I had some people point out some improvements that I thought it important to implement sooner than later. Here's Chapter 11, Redux.

Chapter 11

so be it
threaten no more
to secure peace is to prepare for war
so be it
settle the score
touch me again for the words that you'll hear evermore...

-Metallica, ‘Don’t Tread on Me’



“Given the choice,” Ramirez replied calmly, “I’ll pass on both.” With that she flicked her knife up, grasping it by the blade, and hurled it towards Bral.

The prylar-captain threw himself to the side, colliding with the wall but avoiding all but a grazing slice across his upper arm from the spinning knife. The distraction, however, gave Ramirez time enough to grasp her phaser pistol. Firing a brief stun beam that caught the Bajoran in the center of his chest, she rushed forward, moving behind the now tottering man and grasping him from behind. She pulled them both into the corner of an L-shaped corridor intersection.

Lightner was struggling to rise when the Bajora-Tava arrived in force, one of the soldiers delivering a swift blow across the back of Lightner’s head with the business end of a plasma rifle. The ensign collapsed to the deck, clinging valiantly to consciousness but unable to offer further resistance.

Ramirez jammed her phaser’s emitter into Bral’s neck as she shielded herself from the responding Bajorans with his body. “Nobody moves, or he dies!” Near as she could tell, she was violating a half-dozen Starfleet regulations and Federation laws by taking a hostage. The act went against all her training and every instinct she possessed, save for the impulse to survive and rescue her comrades.

Sparing a brief glance at the motionless form of Lar’ragos who lay splayed in the corridor in a pool of his own blood, her resolve firmed. She tightened her arm around Bral’s throat, causing the semi-conscious man to wheeze and sputter. She’d hoped to gain a few seconds hesitation from the Bajorans, and was surprised to find them looking cautious and uncertain.

One of them inquired, “Prylar-Captain, are you unharmed?” before being silenced by his comrade who cuffed the other man alongside the head.

‘Prylar-Captain? Oh, Liana, you’ve hit the jackpot’ she thought with grim amusement. ‘If you’re going to end your career with a bang, best to go big.’ To the Bajorans she said, “Drop your weapons and get my man a doctor, or your captain follows him to the afterlife.”

*****

USS Enterprise
Federation Task Force Peacekeeper
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


He had hoped it would not come to this. A matter settled by force of arms was rarely a long-term victory. Grudges would be held, the deaths resulting from the battle would be the fuel for righteous anger and the thirst for revenge for generations.

They had tried. That was the best that could be said of their noble efforts to stop the bloodshed here. But the Alshain were flush with victory, seeing their advance into Son’a space as a renewal of their long-lost empire of ages past. The lupanoids could not be made to see reason, could not be forced to exhibit empathy or mercy, and would not be convinced to take their ill-gotten gains and call it a day.

Diplomacy had failed. Their attempts at peace-keeping had only resulted in needless casualties. The aggressors had no interest in negotiation.

So be it.

The Sovereign-class starship was the most formidable vessel in the Federation Starfleet. He would remove all constraints, and against his better nature he would teach the Alshain that the Federation, when justly provoked, did indeed have teeth. Jean-Luc Picard was determined that when he finally lay down his stick, the Alshain would beg for the carrot they’d once disdainfully refused.

So sick was he with the idea of what was to come, Picard had even briefly contemplated retiring to his ready room and letting Riker conduct the strike on the Alshain. However, he and he alone was responsible for this mission, and despite Riker’s tactical acumen, it was the captain’s responsibility to initiate the coming engagement.

“Status?” Picard inquired as he watched the viewscreen intently. The image on display was that of the stricken starship Bellerophon fleeing her pursuers through swirling clouds of orange and burgundy.

Data replied crisply, “Their structural integrity is at thirty-two percent and falling, Captain. Shields are failing, and their tactical systems are largely inoperative.”

“And their attackers?” the captain asked.

“Two Alshain heavy cruisers, two destroyers, and a frigate are continuing their pursuit of the Bellerophon, sir. They have initiated what appears to be a Globular-C envelopment formation, a standard Starforce attack pattern.”

On the screen, the wounded starship ducked into a gaseous eddy, launching her last two photon torpedoes at her pursuers, whose detonation barely qualified as harassment fire.

“Distance to the minefield?”

“Five million kilometers, sir.”

Seb N’Saba stepped forward, remaining at a respectful distance until Picard had noticed him and gestured for his approach to the command chair. Quietly, N’Saba spoke to the human, his voice free of irony as he offered, “I know this cannot be easy for you, sir. Rest assured, this is one gesture the Exarchate will understand.” Looking toward the viewer and the Alshain flotilla slashing through the nebula, he added, “As for the soldiers who die here today, their Septs will accrue much notoriety and many accolades for their sacrifice. Any Alshain would be proud to give their lives to bolster their families’ standings upon the Great Terrace.”

That was cold comfort to Picard. “Thank you, Commander,” he said stiffly. “You’ll forgive me if I don’t share your pragmatic stance on killing.” N’Saba gave the Alshain variant of a shrug and returned to his duty station.

“Switch to tactical view, Mr. Data.”

The hazy view on the screen was replaced by a top-down grid whose contour lines mimicked the local nebular density and striations. The icon representing the Bellerophon was quickly approaching the minefield Riker and LaForge had laid hours earlier with multiple shuttle sorties.

“Standing by to activate mines, Captain.” Riker stood manning an auxiliary console that had been reconfigured for Tactical control.

Picard nodded distractedly, “Wait until Bellerophon has cleared the field, Number One.” Glancing back at Captain T’Agdi, whose empty ship now served as bait, Picard spoke, his voice tinged with regret. “Captain, she’s your ship. Would you care to do the honors?”

Rising from where she’d sate mutely at an ancillary workstation, the Caitian officer moved to stand next to Riker. “Thank you, Captain.” Her finger hovered over the toggle that would initiate the final sequence of the starship’s destruct code. At his station, Riker brought the mines to life with a brief, encrypted subspace burst.

The lead Alshain warship blundered into the minefield at flank speed, the charges igniting the dense pockets of metreon gas that littered this region of the Briar Patch. Within seconds, the diaphanous veil around them was illuminated with a flurry of brilliant blossoming explosions that shredded the Alshain shields and rent the cruiser asunder.

Moving in from the opposite direction, the other cruiser veered sharply to avoid the blazing maelstrom, and instead came face-to-face with the quickly approaching Bellerophon. With a final silent farewell to her command of the last four years, T’Agdi sent the coded sequence, adding her ship’s antimatter stores to the firestorm.

The blistering tempest of destructive energies consumed all but two of the Alshain vessels, leaving a destroyer and frigate both drifting without power.

“Transporter rooms, standby to beam surviv—“ Picard silenced his first officer with a raised hand and a hard look.

“Give them five minutes to launch escape pods, then destroy the two remaining ships.”

Riker looked at Picard with evident disbelief, “But Captain, there will undoubtedly be—“

“Just do it!” Picard snapped as he stood abruptly, his frame rigid with anger and shame. Turning for his ready room, he paused briefly. “This is a lesson I would rather teach only once, Number One. If this is all they understand, I wish to convey my full meaning with crystal clarity.” He stalked to his office, stopping just inside the doors as they swooshed closed behind him.

‘This isn’t you, Jean-Luc,’ he castigated himself. ‘Resolve is one thing, sadistic callousness is another matter entirely.’ Tapping his compin, he amended his standing order. “Commander Riker, have the Bethesda beam aboard the remaining survivors on those ships and render medical aid to them where appropriate. Leave the undamaged life pods for the Alshain to find.”

Back on the bridge, Riker acknowledged the order with a rush of relief. “Understood, sir.” As they set about their tasks, the bridge crew was left to ponder the sight of the burning ships as they ejected but a handful of fragile escape vehicles.

*****

USS Gibraltar
Federation Task Force Peacekeeper
Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


Sandhurst allowed himself to breath again only after the two attack ships had passed the Gibraltar without opening fire.

“Elisto, who’s piloting those things?”

There was a moment’s silence from the befuddled Science officer, who then announced with careful precision, “Bajorans,” as if trying to convince himself of the scan’s validity.

This, naturally, caught Pell’s attention, and she quickly slaved her workstation to the Science board to examine the readings for herself. “Confirmed, Captain. Approximately forty Bajorans crewing each of those ships.”

From Tactical, Tark announced, “They’re coming about and taking trailing positions behind us, Captain. They still haven’t armed their weapons.”

Sandhurst sat quietly, relieved that they weren’t locked in combat, yet anxious to have been bracketed by the corsairs and the oncoming battlecruiser. “ETA to intercept with the Son’a ship?”

“Twelve minutes, sir.”

He stood from the command chair, moving to stand beside Ashok as the engineer’s viewer displayed an undulating tubule of energy in a computer-generated simulation. Ashok looked up, his expression one of foreboding. Quietly, he addressed the captain. “This won’t work, sir. This is a rare phenomenon, only generated by accident on a handful of occasions. At best we’ll depolarize the nacelles, at worst we’ll end up hopelessly lost or destroying the ship.”

Plazzi stepped over from the Science station, “I concur with the lieutenant’s assessment, Captain.”

Both men shared Sandhurst’s sharp look in response to this unwelcome judgment. Sandhurst reached out, touching a series of controls that altered the mathematical assumptions behind the computer model. “You didn’t account for the local particle density, gentlemen. The same nebular gasses that prevent us from going to warp in normal space will help to contain and stabilize the conduit.”

Looking appalled, Plazzi forgot they were having a whispered conversation, blurting, “Based on exactly what, Captain?” Giving Sandhurst a stare of utter incredulity, he motioned towards the simulation. “Where are you getting these figures from, sir? Don’t you think if this was even a remotely plausible tactic it’d have been used before now?”

Sandhurst’s gaze hardened, and he subconsciously moved a step closer to his subordinate. “I think you need to reconsider your tone, Commander.”

Sensing the mounting tension, Pell stepped into the fray. “Captain, Commander, perhaps we should take this to the ready room?”

“No,” Sandhurst replied icily, “I think Mr. Plazzi needs to follow his orders and demonstrate a little faith in his captain.”

Plazzi pointed at the display, his rising anger a palpable force. “This isn’t going to work. We still have time to turn tail and run. If we try and fight that ship, we die. If we attempted this ridiculous stunt, we die. I’m completely unable to wrap my head around how sacrificing the entire ship and crew for the away team makes the slightest bit of sense, sir.”

“I’m not leaving our people behind,” Sandhurst said slowly for emphasis. “Perhaps you’ve forgotten your obligations to your fellow crew on the cusp of your retirement?”

“I’m a Starfleet officer,” Plazzi shot back, “Not a lemming.”

Jerking a thumb towards the turbolift, Sandhurst growled, “That’s it. Get off my bridge. You’re restricted to quarters, Commander.”

The remaining bridge crew were either staring unabashedly at the exchange, or were hyper-concentrating on their consoles and pretending not to eavesdrop.

Plazzi, shaking his head in disbelief, moved for the turbolift. Sandhurst watched him go, his spike of anger now dissolving with the realization that he had just cast out one of his most experienced and knowledgeable advisors. The captain’s pride warred with his pragmatism and won, though only just.

As the turbolift doors closed behind Plazzi, Juneau announced from Ops. “Ten minutes until intercept with the Son’a. Bajoran ships are holding their relative positions aft.”

*****

Planet Ba’ku
Dorian Mountains


The Bajoran medic knelt over Lar’ragos, attempting to staunch the severe bleeding from the El Aurian’s wounds. The consternation on his face was proof enough that he was in over his head, which prompted Ramirez make further demands. “Release my people immediately; he needs our medical officer. Get Lt. Taiee her equipment and bring her here.” Two of the soldiers moved out of her line of sight, though she was unsure if they were actually complying with her instructions.

The Bajorans had refused her earlier command to surrender their weapons, retreating instead to firing positions at the corners of nearby corridor intersections where they awaited a clear shot at Ramirez from behind their captain.

Bral had recovered sufficiently from the stun discharge to speak. “What now, Starfleet?”

“Good question,” Ramirez hissed in his ear from behind. “I’m making this up on the fly. Any suggestions?”

“Surrender,” he prompted.

“I’d be delighted to accept your surrender, Prylar-Captain.”

The man made an abrupt sound that Ramirez guessed was either a cough or a laugh. “Our people are supposedly allies, if what your Ensign Shanthi told me is true. Is this how the Federation treats its friends?”

She dug the phaser’s emitter into his neck, eliciting a pained grunt for her trouble. “You started this with an unprovoked attack on my team.”

“Perhaps so, but there is no escape for you here, Starfleet. They will wait you out, or you’ll have to kill me. Either way, you lose. Your doctor is not coming; my men will not release their prisoners, even with my life hanging in the balance.” Sounding as conciliatory as he was able with Ramirez’s arm hooked around his throat, he added, “If you surrender now, I promise I will have your medical officer attend to your friend there.”

“I’ve got a better idea,” Ramirez snarled. She adjusted her gun hand slightly, flicking open the phaser’s casing with one finger. Using her other hand, she adjusted something within the weapon’s housing. A low whine started, building in pitch with each passing second. “If I lose, we all lose, Prylar-Captain. Let’s go and see your god-damned Prophets together!”

*****

Bajora-Tavan Attack Ship Meressa
On Intercept Course with USS Gibraltar
Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


“The Federation vessel will be within weapons range of the Son’a in nine minutes, Vadark.”

Jobrin studied the tactical readout as if he were deciphering an ancient religious text. “Tell our people trailing the starship that when the Son’a open fire, I want that Bajoran rescued from the ship.”

“That… may prove difficult, sir.”

“Difficulty does not concern me,” Jobrin said coldly, “Results do. When the Federation ship’s shields fail, we’d better have that woman in our hands, or—“ The vadark’s eyes rolled back into his head, and his entire body stiffened as if he were experiencing a seizure.

The ship’s flight engineer hastily unclipped from his safety harness and moved towards the vadark, but stopped in his tracks as the older man’s body appeared to relax. Jobrin’s head tilted forward, his eyes opened wide, now glowing a deep crimson. The flight engineer immediately sank to his knees, making a religious gesture of supplication, “Emissary, your presence honors us.”

“As it should,” Jobrin replied, his voice no longer wholly his own. “Continue to see to the vadark’s instructions. The Bajoran onboard that ship is our primary concern.”

*****

USS Gibraltar
Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


The Son’a warship grew large on the viewscreen, and its tactical profile accessible on Sandhurst’s armrest display showed that it was exactly as fearsome an opponent as it appeared to the naked eye.

Ashok turned to face the captain from the Engineering station. “The modifications are in place, sir.” The Bolian sounded defeated, as if he’d already made peace with his people’s deities regarding the outcome of Sandhurst’s plan.

The captain looked to Ops. “Still no response to our hails, Lieutenant?”

Juneau shook her head without bothering to look back. “Negative, sir. The Bajoran ships are receiving our transmissions, but won’t reply.”

“Tactical, I want a spread of photons for our first volley at the Son’a, followed by four quantums. Target their weapons emitters and propulsion systems.” Sandhurst was suddenly aware of Pell’s hard stare cutting into him from her post down in the well.

A text message scrolled across the captain’s display from his acting exec. <Plazzi’s right. This won’t work. I’m begging, Donald, don’t do this.>

He stared down at the floor for a long moment, using a meditation technique taught to him by his Betazoid counselors. He searched within himself, conducting an emotional self-check, plumbing the depths of his ego to determine where his sudden affinity for this wild scheme had come from. ‘Is this just hubris?’ he wondered to himself, ‘Am I endangering everyone because I can’t admit the situation is beyond our capabilities… beyond my capabilities?’

He looked over at Ashok, the large man’s shoulders hunched with coiled tension. On the lieutenant’s viewer was the sum total of Sandhurst’s genius. An artificial wormhole, born of an intentional imbalance in the ship’s warp engines. This phenomenon had once been a very real threat to the newly reconfigured Constitution-class starships. Four ships of that class were known to have experienced such phenomenon during service in the late 23rd century. Only one, the Enterprise, had survived the incident intact. Donald had hoped to use it as a short-range evasive maneuver, tunneling through subspace to do an end run around their Son’a opponents.

Sandhurst sat back in his chair, pushing the button that engaged the seat’s safety restrain harness. Toggling the pubic address, he announced, “All hands, this is the captain. After taking into consideration the advice of the senior staff, I have come to the conclusion that my original plan is unworkable. I still have every intention of rescuing our away team, but we’re going to have to come back at this scenario from a different angle. Everyone, brace for evasive maneuvers.”

“Helm, reverse thrust on the impulse engines, I want those Bajoran ships to overshoot us. Then come to 180 mark 22 and give me every ounce of thrust you can without overloading the impulse manifolds.” Tapping his compin, he called, “Sandhurst to Plazzi.”

Sounding groggy, the Science officer replied, “Go ahead, sir.”

“Elisto, I stand corrected. Get back up here, I’m going to need everyone’s input to get us out of this in one piece.”

*****

Son’a Battlecruiser Ru’afo
Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


Anij looked deeply into Gallatin’s eyes, her concentration focused with such intensity that the air around them actually seemed to shift, to slow. Gallatin had heard stories, fables really, of such things in his youth. Being one of the Ba’ku’s errant ‘far-sighter’ children, he’d given such tall tales no serious consideration. It appeared that had been an oversight on his part.

“Stay with me, Gallatin,” Anij whispered. “Hold this moment, right here, right now. Think only of this place and time, be this moment.”

And so he was…

Gradually, ever so slowly, the effect began to spread outwards from the cabin. Data systems were the first to fall prey, then power relays, all succumbing to the unique time dilation phenomena.

*****

Gibraltar’s abrupt and unexpected change of course set into motion a chain of events her captain and crew would have found difficult to fathom.

The Bajoran corvettes came hard about, scrambling to reacquire the older starship as she braked and evaded, thrusting away at half-impulse. The Ru’afo altered course to pursue, silently shadowed herself by the cloaked Alshain battlecruiser. The remaining Bajoran ships moved to regroup, determined to extract the Bajoran lifesign from the Federation vessel even if it meant coming to blows with the Son’a that, until just minutes earlier, had been their sole allies in all the galaxy.

*****

Son’a Battlecruiser Ru’afo
Ba’ku System
The Briar Patch (Klach D'Kel Brakt)


Now in rabid pursuit of the starship, Adhar Wuuten leaned forward in his chair expectantly. “Run, little ship, run.”

“Not quickly enough, sir,” noted the weapons officer. “They sacrificed too much momentum in their deceleration and evasion maneuver. We will overtake them in three minutes. They’ll be within weapons range in twenty seconds.”

Wuuten nodded approvingly. “You may open fire when we come in range.”

Adhar, forgive the intrusion, but the Bajora-Tavan vessels are moving into a tactical wedge formation. We appear to be the focal point of their maneuver.”

Looking to the tactical plot, Wuuten frowned at this development. “Fools. I knew they could not be trusted.” He shook his head in derision, “Never trust a spiritual people, they will always value ideology over alliance.”

From the Engineering station came a troubled voice, “Sir, we’re experiencing a power disruption in the habitat modules, sections fourteen through nineteen.”

Wuuten’s ghoulish features darkened with anger, “Betrayal from all quarters seems to be the order of the day.” He gestured to his security head, “Dispatch a team to the guest accommodations, I want that Ba’ku and the traitor Gallatin killed immediately!”

*****
 
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