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ST: Gibraltar - Backup

Re: ST: Gibraltar - Backup - Part 9

DavidFalkayn said:
And I wonder, is Sandhurst's 'friend' who I think he is? If so, then Sandy's in a lot of trouble as he's made a very powerful enemy.

My thinking, exactly. As I mentioned to Gibraltar in a pm, it's like Sandhurst has his own private demon. Though, sort of like Ramirez noted in her "discussion" with Lightner's brother, this "old friend" is going to find a very different Donald Sandhurst than he knew before. :evil:
 
Re: ST: Gibraltar - Backup - Part 9

Great stuff!!! Totally awesome battle sequences. Couldn't help but notice the "Last Man Off Tzenketh" reference. I also like the conceited EMH boasting in the midst of battle. I'm intrigued by the thought of a Vulcan maquis...Eager to read more!
 
Re: ST: Gibraltar - Backup - Part 9

Gibraltar -
Thanks for sending me the reference. I'm reading it now - good stuff!

It does help if I read all the prior stories! :o :)
 
ST: Gibraltar - Backup - Part 10

PART 10

USS Bluefin


“Maintain pursuit. All forward weapons engage as the target presents itself.” Akinola ordered, feeling the kick of Bluefin’s powerful impulse engines as they propelled the Albacore-class cutter after the Bird-of-Prey.

Asteroids tumbled by as Fralk piloted the ship deftly through the lethal obstacle course, somehow managing to keep up with the presumably more maneuverable scout.

From Tactical, Strauss assessed, “Captain, usually the B’rel-class lacks any aft weaponry, but I’m detecting a Class-5 point defense phaser emplacement.”

“Good catch, XO.” Akinola favored Strauss with a bleak smile. “Helm, watch out for that, they’ve got a sharp tail.”

“Yes, sir.”

Strauss let fly a phaser blast as both ships were momentarily within view of one another. The beam flared against the Garth of Izar’s rear screens and seemed to encourage even more desperately dangerous evasive tactics by the Maquis helmsman.

T’Ser marveled from Ops, “At this rate, they’ll kill themselves without any help from us.”

“That’d be fine by me, “ Akinola muttered from behind clenched teeth.

*****

Maquis Bird-of-Prey Garth of Izar

Maxwell was jostled in his seat as another phaser discharge from the pursuing cutter further depleted their aft shielding.

His pilot’s course had become so erratic that Maxwell was occasionally forced to look away from the viewscreen as mountainous shards of rock flashed past.

At the weapons console, McCready whistled appreciatively. “They’re still with us, Ben. Damned if I can explain how that old bucket can keep up with Beston’s spastic maneuvers.”

Albacore-class,” Maxwell groused, his voice tinged with reluctant admiration. “Damned things are just giant impulse engines with running lights and a registry.”

McCready frowned, pressing a comms call switch on his board. “Still no reply from the transporter room.” He flicked the toggle twice more for good measure. “Ganzi, Vraxx, what’s going on back there?” There was no reply.

A loud, metallic thud reverberated through the hull, but wasn’t accompanied by the same shaking as a weapons strike. McCready gawked at his readings, “Ben, we just launched an escape pod!” The man turned towards the bridge exit hatch.

“Mind your post, Weaps!” Maxwell snapped. “If we don’t get out of this, whatever’s happening back there won’t matter. And if those two love birds decided to jump ship, fine. Let them honeymoon in a life pod until Starfleet picks them up.” Gripping the armrests of his battered Klingon command chair tightly, Maxwell ordered, “We’re going offensive. Weaps, drop the mines while Beston slingshots us around one of those big rocks. If we can time it just right, we’ll come into firing range just as those mines detonate.”

“On it…”

*****

USS Bluefin

Lt. Bane spoke up from the Science station, “Sir, looks like they just jettisoned an escape pod. I’m reading one life form… a Human.”

“Mark these coordinates, Mr. Bane. We’ll pick up that lifeboat on our way back.”

“Aye, sir.”

The two ships continued to slalom through the planetary debris, exchanging the occasional pot shot as the opportunity presented itself.

Akinola called back to Senior Chief Brin, “Solly, get a boarding party readied in transporter room one. Once we disable the Maquis ship, we’ll be beaming over to take prisoners.”

Brin stood from his console, nodding curtly. “Aye, Captain.” He headed into the turbolift, the beginnings of an eager smile tugging at his lips.

Strauss glanced up at Akinola from her post at Tactical, “Should I have someone relieve me, Captain?”

Shaking his head fractionally, Akinola replied, “Negative, XO. I’ll be leading the boarding action.”

Her eyes focused on Akinola like lasers, and in the flood of anger and disbelief that his announcement generated, she missed the two metallic objects detaching from the Bird-of-Prey ahead of them.

Fortunately, Bane had her back, calling out, “Two more objects just separated from the scout, sir.”

“More escape pods?” Akinola queried suspiciously.

“Standby… no, negative… I’m reading anti-matter charges in ea—“

“Helm,” Akinola roared, “Those are mines, take evasive acti—“

The screen was suddenly awash in light, a fraction of a second before a concussive wave of explosive energy washed over Bluefin, crashing into her forward screens and sending bridge crew tumbling from their workstations as consoles sparked and died.

Akinola knew instantly what the mines presaged. While his crew was trying to pick up the pieces and get their bearings, the Bird-of-Prey was undoubtedly doubling back to finish them off. “Helm, throttle back to one-eighth impulse. Forward weapons fire!”

Pulling herself back to her feet with painful slowness, Strauss called out above the din, “I… don’t have a target.”

“Just fire a blind pattern, as much energy as you can get downrange.” Akinola prayed for a clear view of their enemy but the viewscreen offered only flickering static. “Bane, find me that ship!”

*****

Maquis Bird-of-Prey Garth of Izar

The Bird-of-Prey rounded the asteroid to find the cutter slowing and disgorging an impressive field of fire that alarmed Maxwell for a fraction of a second before he realized the ship was firing blindly. “Status of their shields?”

McCready nodded to himself, “Forward shields at sixteen percent.”

“Fine,” Maxwell hissed, “Chew them up, Weaps.”

“My pleasure,” McCready replied, pressing the torpedo launch stud on his antiquated display. Orange lights flashed on his panel. “Damn it! Ben, I’m getting an automation jam warning from the torpedo tube’s loading mechanism.”

Maxwell grimaced, “Perfect timing. Disruptors then.”

“Firing.”

*****

USS Bluefin

Bane fought his console, desperately trying to route data feeds from the traumatized sensor suite to his board, filtering out the interference and ghost images clouding the display. “Got her—“ Bane clutched the edge of his console as disruptor blasts buffeted the cutter. “Bearing 348-mark-047, range seventeen-hundred kilometers.” His hands flew across the console in a blur, “Uploading target coordinates to Tactical.”

Strauss, a dark bruise forming on one of her high cheekbones, met Bane’s expectant gaze. Her eyes transmitting gratitude and something deeper. “Got them…”

Akinola stood, “Fire a volley of Mark VI’s, followed by Mark 22’s when we’ve penetrated their shields.”

“Aye, sir. One shake n’ bake, coming up.”

Twin crimson suns flashed from Bluefin’s forward tubes, slicing through vacuum to slam into the Bird-of-Prey’s port side, collapsing the scout’s overtaxed shields. The second pair of torpedoes, set to deliver an overwhelming electromagnetic surge, followed right behind. Stringers of electrical current crackled across the vessel’s hull as even the ruggedly hardened and redundant Klingon control systems succumbed to the storm of electrons.

Bane smiled triumphantly, “We got her, sir! Target has lost all primary systems and most of her backups. Life support and gravity functioning at minimal levels.”

His battle lust far from sated, Akinola nodded curtly, refusing to share in the bridge crew’s whoops and shouts of celebration. He stepped up onto the upper deck of the bridge and made for the ‘lift. Just as the doors began to close, Strauss slid into the lift car beside the captain.

“I don’t want to hear it,” he announced tersely.

“Tough,” was Strauss’ unexpected reply. “With all respect, sir, this is my job.”

“Not today, Commander. Captain’s prerogative.” Akinola’s eyes were fixed straight ahead at the lift car’s doors. “Transporter room one,” he instructed the computer.

“Hold lift,” she countered, earning a rebuking glare from Akinola. “Am I to believe you hate the Maquis so much that you just have to lead this team, or is it that you don’t trust me to get the job done?”

“I don’t owe you an explanation, XO. Drop it and resume your post.” He looked at Strauss expectantly, and when she refused to budge he growled, “Resume,” to the computer.

As the lift began its descent, Strauss spoke in a carefully modulated tone, “This is about McBride, isn’t it?”

Rather than the scathing reprimand she’d expected at having brought up her predecessor’s name, Akinola closed his eyes briefly, his face going slack and giving the impression of great weariness.

“That’s precisely what this is about, Inga. I won’t see another promising command officer killed needlessly.” He opened his eyes, turning towards Strauss. “Am I reacting emotionally? Hell yes. Is this the best idea I’ve ever had? Certainly not. Do these four pips give me the right to do this my way?” The merest hint of an ironic smirk flickered across his features. “Absolutely.” He reached out a hand, clasping her shoulder. “I do trust you to do this. I just can’t sit idly by up there on the bridge while you do it… not again.”

She nodded reluctantly as the doors slid open. “I understand, sir. I don’t agree… but there’s obviously no changing your mind.”

Holding her gaze for a fraction of a second, Akinola strode out into the corridor, calling back, “You have the Conn.”

*****

Maquis Bird-of-Prey Garth of Izar

Maxwell came around in response to McCready’s persistent shaking. Blinking and trying to clear the cobwebs, he found his weapons specialist within his swimming field of vision. “What… happened?”

“They must have got a weapons lock at the last moment, Ben. We’ve been disabled. They’re probably pulling alongside right now.”

Regaining his feet with McCready’s help, Maxwell groaned at the effort. “They’ll be… boarding us any minute.”

McCready drew his Cardassian phaser from its holster. “Then we’ll go down fighting.”

“Beston?” Maxwell inquired, glimpsing an unmoving form draped across the helm console. McCready shook his head in response. As the other man assisted him through the aft door into the passageway back to the body of the scout, Maxwell reflected, “Losing to Picard and the Enterprise, that I can stomach. The man may be a fool, but he commanded a worthy ship. Being shut down by an obsolete cutter, I have to admit, that stings a little.”

McCready chuckled in response, “They say pride goeth before a fall.”

The hum of a transporter field farther down the corridor spurred both men to take cover behind support struts on either side of the passageway. Maxwell pulled a Klingon disruptor pistol from a thigh holster shakily, still out of sorts. Taking wavering aim, he waited.

The men caught a fleeting glimpse of something moving up the corridor toward them, but were unable to focus sufficiently to open fire. A discus shaped Starfleet tactical drone flashed past the two men, firing transporter beacon tags into each with little puffs of compressed gas. Maxwell felt the sharp jab of the tag biting into flesh, then looked down in surprise. Just as he reached for it, he felt the familiar tingle of a transporter effect infusing him.

*****

"The drone’s tagged two for beaming,” Chief Deryx noted.

“Energize and hold in transit,” Akinola ordered. Two columns of light took partial shape on the transporter dais, their signals cycling through the pattern buffers.

“Registering two energy weapons,” Deryx observed.

“Deactivate them,” the captain instructed, “And beam these two to the brig as soon as Security is ready for them.” Akinola slapped a power cell magazine into his phaser carbine, the weapon’s ready lights activating. “I’m glad we acquired some of those tactical drones.”

Brin gave Akinola a disapproving glance as he tightened the straps on his tactical vest, but the ruddy Orion held his tongue.

Akinola turned to face him, “You disagree, Chief?”

“If I’d wanted to play it safe,” Brin replied laconically, “I’d have joined a slipshod high-g gas mining operation run by the Ferengi.”

“Everyone’s a comedian,” Akinola muttered, closing the combat visor of his helmet. He then stepped up onto the pad after the two Maquis were banished to the brig. The rest of the boarding team joined him, Senior Chief Brin lowering his own visor as the team assumed a tactical beam-in formation, everyone facing outward with weapons raised.

“Energize.”

*****
 
Very tense. Interesting use of Sandhurst's mysterious benefactor, too bad he won't remember.

Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time, just wondering how it would be pulled off, and now it's still not finished. Write, write, write.
 
Very taut action, Maxwell almost had Akinola there. Akinola also still hasn't gotten over McBride's death--this could prove problematic down the line.

Very...very...nicely done!
 
Very nicely done. A nice, tense battle sequence in the midst of an obstacle course of asteroids, no less.

You've certainly done an excellent job in portraying the characters. Strauss and Akinola's encounter in the lift rang true. He's carrying a lot of baggage over the loss of McBride and Baxter. I hope it doesn't cloud his judgment.

Nice tactical sequences. I particularly liked the use of the drone. Wished the Bluefin had those a few months earlier!

Great job! Now let's see how the boarding operation goes.
 
It's a bad day for Maxwell, first his ship is disabled by an "obsolete cutter," and then he didn't even have to opportunity to go down fighting. Embarrassing. :rolleyes:
 
A lot of flawless action and honestly, I'm glad to see Starfleet prevail finally. They've been having a hard time in this story. All of them.

What a rollercoster though and something tells me this isn't quite over yet.
 
ST: Gibraltar - Backup - Part 11

PART 11

USS Bluefin


Dr. Castille rechecked his figures as the patient slowly regained consciousness. The man had been suffering from radiation exposure, but had recently undergone radical nano-therapy in addition to a standard deionization series. He also he showed signs of being exposed to high levels of a dangerous stimulant. To make matters more interesting, the man evidenced ligature marks on his neck that suggested someone had tried to strangle him. ‘The expression ‘having a bad day’ just doesn’t seem adequate,’ the young doctor mused as he finished stabilizing the patient.

The man had been beamed off a Klingon escape pod during Bluefin’s return trip to Gibraltar’s coordinates, the captured Bird-of-Prey safely in tow. Two security personnel stood by in case the presumed Maquis attempted anything unfriendly, something Castille believed highly unlikely given the man’s condition.

Strauss entered Sickbay, approaching the exam table and holding up a padd. “I think we can forego the security standby, Doctor. We’ve identified him.”

Castille glanced at the padd, “Sandhurst, Donald M. Captain, Starfleet.” The physician looked curious. “What the hell was he doing in a Maquis escape pod, then?”

Gibraltar confirms Captain Sandhurst was beamed away by the Maquis when they sent a boarding party into the ship’s Sickbay,” Strauss clarified.

“Well, then,” the young doctor said, smiling. “Let’s get the good captain cleaned up, shall we?”

*****

Sandhurst had been aboard many different classes of vessel in his career, but this was the first time he’d set foot on an Albacore-class cutter. The narrow corridors and burnished wall plating reminded him of his own ship more so than did more modern designs. Thanks to Dr. Castille’s ministrations and a fresh uniform, Sandhurst felt very nearly Human once again.

As Commander Strauss escorted him to his meeting with Captain Akinola, Sandhurst paused twice to inspect some manner of engineering irregularity peculiar to this type of vessel. After the second such occasion, he caught Strauss smirking at his boyish enthusiasm for the design. “They obviously built these ships to last,” Sandhurst appraised.

“That they did, sir,” she replied proudly.

Moments later, they arrived in modest ready room off the bridge. Strauss introduced the two men, who shook hands before Akinola offered Sandhurst a seat. Inga slipped out quietly as Akinola assumed his place behind the desk. “It appears you’ve had an exciting few days here in the E’Mdifarr system.”

Akinola carried himself with an easy confidence borne of years of experience. His affability, Sandhurst realized, served to cover a pragmatic interior. It was obvious Akinola had been sitting in the center seat for considerably longer than he.

Sandhurst cocked his head, “Exciting isn’t the first adjective I’d choose, but it’ll do.”

“Can you fill me in on what happened after your away team was captured, Captain?”

Relaying the story of Gibraltar’s desperate gambit to trap the Maquis ships in the system, Sandhurst wove the tale, eventually ending his summary with what little he could remember of his struggle with the Bolian terrorist in the Bird-of-Prey’s transporter room.

Akinola absorbed the information silently, seeking only occasional clarification on some point or offering an encouraging nod of his head. “And the last thing you remember?”

“Being choked by the Bolian,” Sandhurst said, his voice taking on a detached quality. “I seem to recall reaching for his knife… then waking up in your Sickbay.”

“That jibes with our forensic examination of the ship,” Akinola revealed. “The Bolian was found with a knife in his abdomen. Which begs the question, how did you get to the escape capsule? Other than the two Maquis operatives we captured after we neutralized the scout, the only others we found alive were the two you’d incapacitated aboard Gibraltar who were still unconscious on their transporter pad.”

Sandhurst shook his head, “Your guess is as good a mine, Captain. If I managed to crawl to a lifeboat, I don’t remember doing it.” A look of realization darkened Sandhurst’s features, “Ah… I understand. You suspect some Maquis collusion might be involved in my escape.”

Akinola nodded uneasily, uncomfortable with the idea but acknowledging the line of reasoning just the same. “It’s an angle that must be looked at, as I’m sure you understand. Three of the four Maquis prisoners we captured from the Bird-of-Prey were former Federation officers; two Starfleet, and one Marine. Captain Benjamin Maxwell was among them.”

Sandhurst looked genuinely shocked, “Maxwell?” He sighed, “So much for a successful rehabilitation, eh?”

“Looks that way,” Akinola agreed mirthlessly.

“If you’re afraid I’m in league with the Maquis, Captain, I can assure you that’s not the case.” Shifting in his chair as dark thoughts clouded his memories, Sandhurst added, “The trail of bodies I left on my ship and their own should be testament enough to that…” he trailed off, closing his eyes to keep the images at bay.

Observing Sandhurst’s discomfort, Akinola probed, “You saw action in the war?”

Donald responded with a distracted nod, “The Venture participated in most of the major fleet engagements, and led a hit-and-run squadron operating out of Starbase 53 along the Coridan Front.”

“You seem unusually upset about the Maquis for someone who’s seen so much death.”

A far-away cast to his eyes, Sandhurst replied, “Before this mission, I’d never killed someone face-to-face. Ship-to-ship combat, certainly, but never this close, never this personal.” Shaking off his torpor, he directed a biting glare at the senior captain, “I apologize of my reticence offends you.”

“Quite the opposite,” Akinola parried, “I’d be more concerned if it didn’t trouble you, Sandhurst.”

Changing the subject abruptly, Sandhurst queried, “Any updates on Gibraltar’s status?”

“Commander Ramirez reports they’ve completed the initial damage control sweep of the ship, and are affecting temporary repairs to shore up life support systems. You’ll need a tow back to a shipyard, however.”

Sandhurst rubbed the back of his neck tiredly, “That figures. Overall, it’s a better outcome than I’d expected, so I guess I can’t complain.”

“Better outcome?”

Meeting Akinola’s unwavering gaze, Sandhurst elaborated. “I had to concede the possibility of Gibraltar being destroyed when I set off the IFEW and trapped the ship in this system with a swarm of angry Maquis. I’m grateful for the timely rescue.”

Frowning, Akinola inquired, “You didn’t have a plan for getting out of here?”

“Not at that time. The device was originally designed to be delivered in open space, where we’d have had the chance to warp out of the effect radius before it detonated. Here, especially with the damage to our shields, the odds of us getting away were very slim.”

“That’s a bit reckless, isn’t it? Gambling with your people’s lives like that?” It was a blunt assessment, but given recent events aboard the Bluefin, Akinola found himself unable to hold his tongue.

Sandhurst gave Akinola a curious look, “I was assigned a mission. Protect the convoy at all costs. That’s pretty self-explanatory. Literally millions of people on multiple Cardassian colonies were relying on those ships getting through. If we’d failed, a lot more people would have died than the crew of a single starship.”

Akinola inclined his head, conceding the point.

“We get the job done, Captain. That’s what counts.” Sandhurst’s features hardened, “We failed our first mission out of the gates, and I vowed that wouldn’t happen again. So far, it hasn’t.”

“Mission over everything, even the welfare of your crew?” Akinola asked frostily.

“Not always. Each mission is different, and that assessment becomes a judgment call.” Sandhurst’s cheeks began to color, his anger fueled by Akinola’s line of questioning. “Ultimately, we’re all expendable to one degree or another, Captain. You know that. If you don’t, then you weren’t close enough to the war.” Sandhurst crossed his arms defensively, “Being flung against Dominion fleets time and again underscores that point quite effectively.”

Akinola held up a hand, “I’m not questioning your judgment or your people’s bravery, Sandhurst, I’m merely seeking to clarify some of the loose threads dangling from this mission.”

“From where I’m sitting, this feels a lot like an interrogation.” Sandhurst shot back. “Perhaps in the Molari Badlands you have the luxury of 20/20 foresight, but along the Cardassian border we’re not afforded that advantage. If you’re going to be working out here, you should expect to be kicked in the gut on a regular basis.” Sandhurst stared out the viewport over Akinola’s shoulder, vaguely registering the asteroids as they drifted past. “My ship is going to have to be overhauled for the fifth time in nine months. I’ve lost dozens of people since I took command, I’m about to lose my top-notch exec to her own commission, and on a personal level it feels like some days I’m barely hanging on to my sanity by my fingernails. So, before you start judging me, you might want to try pulling a full tour out here in occupied Cardie space.”

Holding up his hands in a gesture of assuagement, Akinola acceded, “You’re right, Captain. I’m a bit out of my element in this region. We’re used to the occasional knife fight with pirates or rogue Klingon or Romulan elements. What you’re describing sounds more like a persistent, low-level war than a police action. I apologize if I came across as disparaging, I’m simply trying to wrap my head around this new assignment.”

Sandhurst sighed, “Forgive my outburst, Captain. I understand you’re only doing your duty, and you’re asking the same questions Starfleet Command will be when I submit my after-action reports.” He dipped his head, rubbing his eyes tiredly with one hand, “Our recent excursion to Alshain space proved just as lively as our tour in the old DMZ has been. The few occasions my crew has had for down time hasn’t recharged our collective batteries sufficiently.”

“That I can understand completely,” Akinola offered. “And no apology is necessary. To be perfectly honest, if I’d had the device you employed against the Maquis I’d have used it myself under the same circumstances. I just needed to get a look inside your head to convince me I was dealing with a straight shooter. This Maquis business is reopening a lot of old wounds in the Fleet.” Akinola stood, moving around the desk to a shelving unit containing an assortment of glasses situated above a shelf of wooden, hand-carved starships.

Returning with two glasses, Akinola reached into a desk drawer, pulling out a bottle of Tennessee whiskey. “Can I offer you a drink, Captain?”

“Gods yes,” Sandhurst breathed, “That sounds fantastic.” Akinola poured two glasses, handing one to the younger officer. Sandhurst accepted the glass gratefully.

Akinola raised his in a toast, “To both our ‘old girls.’ They may no longer be ships of the line, but they’ll always get the job done and bring us home.”

Touching his glass to Akinola’s, Sandhurst offered his first smile of the day. “I’ll drink to that, Captain.”

Akinola resumed his seat, “Aside from a tow back to the nearest starbase, is there anything else I can do for you?”

Sandhurst mulled that over for a moment, savoring the bite of the whisky as he did so. “There is one favor I would ask of you, Captain.”

“Name it.”

“The nearest repair yard is at DS9, but I’m going to need to take Gibraltar a bit farther afield…”

*****
 
Yup, as always, I love your action/battle sequences, adn your way with battle tactics.

And, while not the author, as a reader of LonleyRedShirt's work, as well, it definitely feels like you're being entirely true to their characters. And I'm impressed with the way you've been able to incorporate their backstories into your current story.

Love Maxwell. Just love your portrayal of him.

And I agree, I absolutely love the drone bit. As I think I've mentioned before, I really appreciate how you bring a "logical" (if I may use that word) approach to the Trek universe; something that I've sometimes found lacking, especially in the "visual" depictions (i.e., TV and movies.) I've always suspected the omit such things in order to bring more human drama to the screen, but I think you've amply demonstrated that it's not the human face-time (on the screen or in the written story) that adds the drama; it's good writing! :thumbsup:

EDIT

Oops. I was clearly posting my comments on Chapter 10 while you were posting Chapter 11. Which, I couldn't help reading immediately (for a change.) ;)

Rather than go on for too long, I'd just like to say that I thought you handled the scene between Akinola and Sandhurst masterfully! It was an absolutely excellent insight into each of their characters. Bravo! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

I can't wait to see how far afield they'll be going. :evil:
 
I almost missed the next chapter on this browse.

I've said before, when you write the Bluefin characters it doesn't seem like someone other than the author is writing them.

The exchange between Akinola and Sandhurst had me bouncing around from thinking Akinola was your character and you were crossing-over Sandhurst into your story, to the reality.

I did get to the point where I almost wanted to punch Akinola though. When I want to punch fiction characters...that's good fiction.
 
^ Ditto to what they said. (I kinda wanted to punch Akinola, too!) ;)

I appreciate how you have portrayed the crew of the Bluefin, particularly Akinola. You have a marvelous feel for him, particularly his own personal demons that make him loathe to put his crew at undue risk. I enjoyed the tense meeting of the two captains. Sandhurst and Akinola have different experiences and different kinds of personal losses that put them somewhat at odds. Nice to see them call a truce, even if it's temporary.

Now I'm curious to see where Sandhurst wants Akinola to tow the Gibraltar. And what will Maxwell have to say to his captors?

Great writing, sir. Well done! :thumbsup:
 
Very, very nicely done Gibraltar. Like the others, I enjoyed the confrontation between Akinola and Sandhurst--each of them have their own demons and shadows. And Akinola is going to have to make some mental adjustments as he and his crew are now entering a what amounts to a minefield--Cardassian insurgents, the new and more ruthless Maquis, Klingon and Romulan intriguing, and a growing Alshain threat while at the same time still dealing with Orion pirates, smuggling, SAR, and all of their other duties. But, I think that crusty old former chief and his ship and crew will be up to the challenge.
 
I agree on the Akinola/Sandhurst meeting.

And I did not feel like punching Akinola. In fact I thought he had some good points. Sandhurst does not have Akinola's experience and wisdom, after all he hasn't been doing this all that long, has he? I think a lot that he does is mostly improvised and he perhaps lacks some of the foresight of his more experienced colleagues. But I believe his shortcomings and the fact that he always manages to land on his feet is what makes this guy so damn likable.

I liked the tension mostly because I thought it was believable. But I do feel for the guy. Is there a captain he hasn't gotten into it with yet? Glover, Picard now Akinola, the guy doesn't have too many fans, does he?

Great stuff!
 
I find myself agreeing with CeJay (...and I'm not ashamed of it :) ). I think Akinola was too apologetic than he needed to be. Those questions had to be asked. If Sandhurst was offended by them, too bad. But as you mentioned, Donald realized that as well.

At any rate, people are picking sides between two characters...the writing must be damn good! ;)
 
ST: Gibraltar - Backup - Part 12

PART 12

Starbase 371


The two stood in the viewing gallery of the repair gantry, looking out upon the sight of the starship Gibraltar swarmed by work pods, space-suited engineers, and robotic repair drones.

Commander Leslie Nowark, a tall, willowy red head wearing the mustard collar of an SCE senior engineer shook her billowing scarlet curls as she reviewed the results of her engineering team’s initial inspection. “You took a big gamble bringing her here, Donald.”

Sandhurst stood with his arms folded across his chest, idly watching the teams strip the battered hull plating from the aft third of the engineering hull. Without looking at his old friend, he replied, “As opposed to where, Les? Point Station Delta? DS9? The Fantoma Yards?” He sighed tiredly, “I almost asked to be towed to 375. With everyone busy rebuilding the starbase, I figured nobody would notice.”

Nowark turned to face him, “You and I both know that in the past nine months you’ve put more stress on Gibraltar’s spaceframe and incurred more structural fatigue than in her first ninety years of service. By all rights, she should be retired from duty permanently—“

“Fine,” he replied heatedly, his face darkening, “Yes, that’s precisely why I had her towed here, Les. I knew that you’d at least hear me out.”

She rolled her eyes, “You mean you thought I’d let you talk me into authorizing a structural refit that violates half a dozen logistics and safety protocols. Gibraltar is a full twenty percent over the redline acceptable standards for spaceworthy operations.”

“We’ve had an eventful tour,” Sandhurst offered, his voice subdued.

Giving him a skeptical look, Nowark sighed, “Please don’t tell me you’re emotionally attached to this ship. You’re an engineer for heaven’s sake… of all the people who’d ought to know better…”

“She’s my ship, I’m her captain,” Sandhurst said with such quiet conviction that it brought Nowark up short. “Until you’ve sat in the center seat, you can’t understand.”

Scanning the contents of her padd, Nowark shook her head again, taking stock of the ship’s recent entanglements. “Orbital combat at Lakesh, gravitational shearing and two ejected nacelles in what’s listed as a classified mission two months later. More combat and serious structural damage during Picard’s War in the Briar Patch… not to mention the pounding you so recently survived at Yashk’lin IV. And now you’ve taken more damage while simultaneously burning out every isoliner circuit in the ship and scorching five-hundred kilometers worth of optic data cable.”

“Thanks for the run-down,” he said acidly, “I was there.”

Nowark reached out a hand, grabbing Sandhurst’s shoulder lightly. “Donald, there are other ships, newer ships. SCE’s still on wartime production footing; we’re churning out dozens of starships a month all over the Federation. Finding people to crew them, that’s where we’re coming up short. And with Starfleet Command repealing the stop-loss orders next month, we’ll be even more desperate to find good crews for the new ships.”

“I’m not interested in another ship, Leslie.”

She studied the padd in silence for a few moments, contemplating pushing the key that would cease repair operations on the Gibraltar and initiate a decommissioning cycle. Glancing up at Sandhurst, she reflected on all he’d done for her over the years. “You know,” she said, her voice suddenly heavy with emotion, “You’re the finest engineer and supervisor I’ve ever worked for. You were always cheerful, supportive, and endlessly patient with all of us who served under you. You taught me everything you knew, and pushed me to strive for even greater achievements as an officer and an engineer. I owe a large part of my position as yard master here to your guidance.”

Touching her other hand to the padd, she registered her thumbprint and subsequently signed off on a Level-2 structural overhaul for NCC-1859, USS Gibraltar. “I consider us even, Donald.”

He nodded fractionally in reply, his gaze still fixed on the starship. “Thank you, Les. This means more to me than you can know.”

“Did I hear right?” Nowark asked, steering the conversation away from the questionable repair order. “You and Pell are back together?”

Pulling his eyes away from his ship, Sandhurst turned towards Nowark. “Yes, actually.”

She smiled warmly, “Good. The two of you were always a good fit for each other. And you look as though you could use a little happiness in your life.”

He managed a smile, now tinged with relief. “I couldn’t agree more.”

Looking past him at the old Constitution-class, her interior exposed amidst the frenzied activity of men, pods, and drones, Nowark spoke with conviction. “If you want to keep Gibraltar any longer, you’d best be gentle with her. This is a temporary fix, not a cure by any stretch of the imagination. You go and get beat up on again, and I guarantee you that SCE will scrap her so fast you’ll think she’d been beamed out from under you. Am I clear?”

“As crystal, Commander.”

Nowark embraced him in a brief hug, “Good luck, Captain.” Then she was gone, heading off to oversee repairs to the less badly damaged Bluefin.

Sandhurst was left in silent communion with his first command.

*****

USS Bluefin

Akinola entered the brig, making his way to the invisible energy barrier that barred the escape of former Starfleet captain Benjamin Maxwell.

Maxwell was sitting on the built-in bunk, reading a data padd, and glanced up as Akinola approached. “Joseph Akinola,” the cutter CO said by way of introduction. Maxwell said nothing in response.

“You know,” Akinola began, “I used to read about your exploits during the Cardassian Wars, and even prior to that. Your first contact with the Kobheerians, your handling of the Capellan dynastic crisis… practically the stuff of legend.”

“Your point?” Maxwell asked tiredly.

“My point is that given what happened to your family, I can understand and even forgive what you perpetrated against the Cardassians a decade ago. I think it was a sad and ignoble way to end a stellar career, but you made your choice and accepted the consequences.” Akinola paused to inspect the man, so much smaller and more unremarkable than the infamous living legend he’d expected. “What I can’t figure out is why, after having payed your debt to society for your crimes, you’d turn around and take up arms against the Federation.”

Tossing the padd onto his bunk, Maxwell grimaced, “The Federation turned its back on me, just like it turned its back on the original settlers in the DMZ.”

“And what do my crew and Captain Sandhurst’s have to do with that?”

Maxwell looked puzzled, “What do you mean?”

“One of my men, Petty Officer Jahlwen, is burned over sixty percent of his body, and is now blind in one eye because of you, Maxwell. Ensign Albert Diamato from the Gibraltar was murdered by one of your crew when they beamed over to steal medical supplies. Diamato survived a half-dozen engagements since he graduated the academy less than a year ago. He was the middle child in a family of three, and according to his records, Albert dreamed of becoming a Starfleet officer since he was a child.”

The color drained from Maxwell’s face. “That… that’s not my concern. You just don’t see the big picture.”

“Oh, I see the big picture just fine, Mr. Maxwell. The Cardassians hurt you, so you hurt them back. I understand vengeance quite well. But you failed to realize that when you butchered the Cardassians with the Phoenix that you not only disgraced yourself and your uniform, you also stained the memory of your wife and children.”

Maxwell stood suddenly, advancing on the energy barrier. “You leave them the hell out of this!”

“Do you think this is how they wanted to see you, Benjamin?” Akinola’s expression was one of disdain, tinged with pity. “Reduced from an exalted starship captain to a caged animal? Wherever they are, I have to believe they’re terribly disappointed in you.”

“Shut up! Shut up, damn you!” Maxwell howled as he charged the screen, reeling backwards from the powerful contact discharge. Collapsing to the deck, he lay gasping, looking at his captor with pure hatred.

“Benjamin Maxwell, you are a small, pathetic man and you will rightfully spend the rest of your life in confinement. I’d blow you out the nearest airlock for the pure enjoyment of it, but I’d be bringing myself down to your level.” Despite his own better judgment, Akinola reached out, deactivating the security field. The specialist manning the monitoring desk stood, drawing his phaser. Akinola waved him off, “Dismissed, crewman.” The man turned smartly and walked out without hesitation.

Stepping into the cell, Akinola snarled, “C’mon, Maxwell. Let’s see what you’ve got. Show me some of that righteous indignation, you cowardly shit.”

Maxwell clambered slowly to his feet, taking measure of the officer facing him. Akinola held himself in a casual seeming posture, a dead giveaway that he knew how to handle himself. The Maquis predicted a high probability that if he charged Akinola, the man would wipe the floor with him, cherishing every second of the experience. Gathering what little pride he could, Maxwell turned and returned to the bunk.

“Yeah,” Akinola breathed, voice dripping with contempt. “That’s what I thought.” He stepped out of the cell, reactivated the field, and walked towards the exit. Pausing on the threshold, he turned back. “And on those cold nights in whatever hole they stick you for the rest of your days, I hope the fact that you were beaten by a seventy-year old cutter commanded by a former enlisted man keeps you warm at night.”

*****

Starbase 371
Surface Complex, Galleria Commercial Zone
Bons Temps De Café


Pell found her sitting at an outdoor table at the café, a nibbled-on croissant and half-empty cup of coffee in front of her and an array of padds littering the table top.

Approaching Ramirez’s table, Pell asked, “You up for company, Liana?”

Pulling herself away from one of the padds, Ramirez looked up, smiling. “Of course, Ojana. Please, have a seat.”

A waiter approached, and Pell asked for a cup of raktajino, eliciting a disapproving frown from a haughty Tiburonian waiter whom Pell mused must have come from his planet’s own version of France.

Inclining her head towards the assortment of padds cluttering the table, Pell remarked, “You look like you’re cramming for an academy final.”

Her smile widening, Ramirez shook her head lightly, “It almost feels like that, but no.” She held up one of the padds, which displayed a rotating view of a Norway-class starship.

Pell examined it curiously, “USS Yassim… is that named after Vedek Yassim?”

“In fact it is. A brave woman, that. Did you know that Colonel Kira credits Yassim’s suicide on DS9’s promenade with sparking her resistance cell?”

“Yes, actually. Yassim’s a bit of a celebrity on Bajor right now, but I’m pleased a Bajoran martyr is receiving that kind of recognition by the Federation.” Pell accepted her Klingon coffee from the waiter, who carried the drink as if it were radioactive. “Who’s the Yassim belong to?”

“She’s finishing her final phase of construction at Utopia Planitia right now, and after she finishes trials in two months, she’ll belong to me.”

Her eyes widening with surprise, Pell laughed. “Liana, that’s wonderful. Congratulations!”

Beaming, Ramirez accepted the padd back from Pell, “It’s not official yet, but I have it on good authority that both the Yassim commission and my promotion to captain are a done deal.” She eyed the Bajoran officer meaningfully, “Of course, this means the captain will have to find another XO.”

Suddenly finding the table top endlessly fascinating, Pell dipped her head. “That’s… not for me, Liana. I’ve been first officer before, more out of obligation and friendship than anything else. It wasn’t for me.”

Ramirez scrutinized her, “Is this about the Maquis crippling the ship? I’ve read the logs, Pell, you did everything you could. You were up against Ben Maxwell. There’s no shame in losing to someone of that caliber. Gibraltar’s still here, battered but intact, and Maxwell’s in custody, so everything worked out.”

Pell, never one to fret obsessively about something, nodded reluctantly. “I suppose, but to be perfectly honest, I don’t want the job. I’m fine serving as second officer in addition to my diplomatic duties. Besides, Donald and I being involved would make my being exec very complicated.”

Conceding the point, Ramirez agreed, “That’s true enough. I suppose he’ll have to start burning the midnight oil and find himself some other ambitious young officer.”

Pell grinned, “You mean one he doesn’t have to Shanghai into the job against her will?”

Ramirez blushed, “I’ll admit, I was angry as hell when I was posted to Gibraltar. In the end, though, it’s been one hell of an education in command. Beats scheduling for an admiral and making sure her coffee is the right temperature.”

Raising her cup of raktajino, Pell smirked, “You’d better believe it. Monica’s very finicky about her coffee.”

*****

“I’m not sure how much pull I’ll have with regular Fleet Ops, Joseph, but I’m willing to give it a shot.” Admiral Morgan Bateson inspected his old friend carefully over the comlink, “Can I ask why this is so important to you?”

Seated in his ready room, Akinola had an unobstructed view of the Gibraltar, which shared the cavernous interior docking bay with Bluefin and a half dozen other ships of various classes. “They’re a good crew, Morgan, and they’re damn close to reaching the breaking point. I thought we’d been in some hot situations since the end of the war, but these people have been raked over the coals repeatedly. There’s no such thing as routine escort duties anywhere near occupied Cardassian territory. Insurgents, pirates, raiders, everybody’s shown up to the party out here.”

Bateson referenced a secondary data terminal, “There are dozens of ships assigned to those duties along the old DMZ, Joseph. Some Border Service, many regular Fleet. What makes this crew so special?”

Pausing to gather his thoughts, Akinola finally replied, “They remind me a lot of my own people. They’re brave, dedicated, and constantly in it up to their necks. I’d just like to see them get a break, even if just for a few weeks.”

Bateson looked unsure, “I’ll see what I can do. No promises though.”

Akinola smiled wearily, “Good enough for me, sir.”

Changing tacks, Bateson called up a split screen, his image on one half, and an abbreviated tactical chart of the former DMZ region. “Owing to the increased activity out there, the Border Service has been asked to step up and relieve some of the pressure on the regular Fleet. Apparently, the Talarians are taking the opportunity to start saber rattling again, and Starfleet’s sending additional resources to patrol our border with the Little Cousins.” It was an old deprecating nickname for the Talarian people, who had been so named a generation ago by Starfleet during the border skirmishes with their military. Due to their cranial ridges and warlike nature, people had likened them to ‘Little Cousins’ of the Klingons.

“After you’ve completed repairs, I’m tasking you to report to Point Station Gamma inside occupied Cardassian territory. I hear the place makes Star Station Echo look like an engineering marvel.”

Bobbing his head in assent, Akinola said, “How long will we be out here, Morgan? This place is making me homesick for the Molari Badlands.”

“Tough to say. I promise I’ll try to get you back here as soon as possible, but if the situation keeps deteriorating, there’s no telling.”

A weary smile on his lips, Joseph Akinola sighed, “The life of a cutter crew. We’ll get the job done, sir.”

“You always do, Captain.”

*****
 
Re: ST: Gibraltar - Backup - Part 12

Good stuff! Glad the Gibraltar is getting a new lease on life. She's like the proverbial cat that's used up 8 lives and better be careful with number 9.

A sad ending for Maxwell. I can understand Akinola's contempt. It's one thing to seek vengeance. It's another matter entirely to turn on your own. I half-way wished Akinola had tossed him out an air-lock.

And good for Ramirez! She's deserving of a command of her own (unless you have some sort of curveball coming our way).

Thanks for the repair job on Bluefin ;) She's no kitten herself! Looks like Akinola & Co. will have to get used to Cardassian territory for a while. *Furiously scribbling notes on coffee stained paper while muttering to himself - Now where the hell is Point Station Gamma? Where are those damn star charts?*

Very well done! :)
 
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