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Should novels set in the JJVerse rectify the film's plot holes?

How come they can turn Starbuck and Boomer into women but can't have Kirk not becoming Captain by the end of the first new movie?

It's all a matter of opinion, there is no right or wrong about it. Both would have worked.
Because not having Captain (CAPTAIN) Kirk a Captain at the end of the movie would have totally gone against the whole point of the entire movie. This was an origin story for the TOS crew, so obviously they had to have the TOS crew together in the TOS crew positions on the bridge of the Enterprise.

Ok, let's look at it this way, this was an origin story for Capt. Kirk, not for James Kirk the person. Now, I will admit that perhaps they could have changed some stuff earlier in the movie so that he was in a better position to become Capt. at the end. But it HAD TO happen, since the whole point of the movie was to show how Capt. Kirk, became the Captain of the Enterprise.

As for not having Kirk Captain of the Enterprise until the second movie, that really wouldn't have worked. IMO it would be the same as doing a Batman origin movie, but just waiting until the hypothetical second movie which may never come out, to actually show him in the Batman suit.
 
How come they can turn Starbuck and Boomer into women but can't have Kirk not becoming Captain by the end of the first new movie?

It's all a matter of opinion, there is no right or wrong about it. Both would have worked.

Ask most moviegoers (or television viewers, since BSG isn't a big-screen franchise) who Starbuck and Boomer are and they would have no idea. Ask them who James T. Kirk is and their response would most likely be something along the lines of, "You mean Captain Kirk?" So, there you go. I agree with you, of course, that it's a matter of opinion. How can it be otherwise when you're discussing a hypothetical alternative? And I actually wish they hadn't felt the need to end the movie with Kirk as captain. But I see why they did, and your Starbuck/Boomer analogy actually helped solidify that for me. People know who Captain Kirk is. So they ended the movie with him becoming Captain Kirk. That's what an origin story is for. Seeing the character you know become the character you know. Kirk being captain of the Enterprise is an intrinsic part of the character.

They mentioned throughout the movie that he would eventually become Captain so that the promotion at the end wasn't needed.

And then again, nobody of the "average movie goer" knew who Pike was, yet they gave him a big role. Had you asked the average movie goer who Spock was and he would have said "The pointed eared emotionless guy?" and yet they showed the troubled, angry, screaming, fallen in love Spock in this movie.

You simply can't argue about this, as the movie itself isn't coherent in its decisions about what to do why and when.


As for not having Kirk Captain of the Enterprise until the second movie, that really wouldn't have worked. IMO it would be the same as doing a Batman origin movie, but just waiting until the hypothetical second movie which may never come out, to actually show him in the Batman suit.

But he WAS Captain of the Enterprise in this movie already. It's like having a full hour of Batman suit and Batmobile and in the end Bruce Wayne with the promise of much more Batman suit in the next movie.



With an attitude like this, it won't be a surprise if the next movie is Space Seed and TWOK all over again, because if you ask the "average movie goer" about villains and threats in Star Trek, they will answer "Khan" and "Genesis Device". "Klingons" if we are lucky. But interestingly enough, they already cut out the Klingons in the new movie because, I dunno, the average movie goer didn't know who the hell they are?


Am I the only one who is disturbed that the movie was written by market researchers and not writers? Probably the choice of the car and the ring tone was influenced by market research, too, just as was the choice for the car McClane was stealing in Die Hard 4 (that infamous onStar scene anyone?). Research showed that movies needed more BMWs, so they wrote the entire scene around that. It's ridiculous!
 
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^Heck, it was frustrating enough having to wait until the last two scenes to see Kirk in command gold. Not being captain at the end of the film? No way would that have worked. Now, as I've already said, I would've changed it so that there was a 4-year jump after the Kobayashi Maru and had Kirk be a lieutenant commander during the Vulcan incident, but I still would've ended it with him becoming captain. Heck, that was the whole point of the story: to tell how Kirk became captain of the Enterprise, how Spock became his first officer, etc.
 
They mentioned throughout the movie that he would eventually become Captain so that the promotion at the end wasn't needed.

And then again, nobody of the "average movie goer" knew who Pike was, yet they gave him a big role. Had you asked the average movie goer who Spock was and he would have said "The pointed eared emotionless guy?" and yet they showed the troubled, angry, screaming, fallen in love Spock in this movie.

You simply can't argue about this, as the movie itself isn't coherent in its decisions about what to do why and when.
Sure we can. Mostly because you have a rather odd take on how characters can be developed in fiction ( especially movies) and how audience expectations figure into the way a movie and its characters are developed and utilized. Pike was used as a mentor figure, his name recognition is a bone to the old fans. For new fans its the first time they're meeting him. He could have been named Winter, April or Smith with just as much ease. As for Spock, he was played as that emotionless, pointed eared guy and troubled, angry, screaming, fallen in love guy. (Stuff that happened to the TV version too)
 
With an attitude like this, it won't be a surprise if the next movie is Space Seed and TWOK all over again, because if you ask the "average movie goer" about villains and threats in Star Trek, they will answer "Khan" and "Genesis Device". "Klingons" if we are lucky. But interestingly enough, they already cut out the Klingons in the new movie because, I dunno, the average movie goer didn't know who the hell they are?

I was just responding to your Starbuck/Boomer comparison and saying why I feel it isn't valid in this case. Doesn't mean every single creative decision the writers made was based on what the average moviegoer knows about Star Trek, but the Captain Kirk thing? I think that was seen as essential because Kirk is best known as the captain of the Enterprise, and this reboot was his origin story. That's all I'm saying, and that seemed to me to be JD's point as well. Taking that point and stretching it to weird lengths doesn't really prove anything, and just obscures the discussion.
 
^Heck, it was frustrating enough having to wait until the last two scenes to see Kirk in command gold. Not being captain at the end of the film? No way would that have worked. Now, as I've already said, I would've changed it so that there was a 4-year jump after the Kobayashi Maru and had Kirk be a lieutenant commander during the Vulcan incident, but I still would've ended it with him becoming captain.

That's at least a better way. Sadly, you don't write scripts.
 
As for not having Kirk Captain of the Enterprise until the second movie, that really wouldn't have worked. IMO it would be the same as doing a Batman origin movie, but just waiting until the hypothetical second movie which may never come out, to actually show him in the Batman suit.
Oh, you mean the Smallville approach. :p
 
^Heck, it was frustrating enough having to wait until the last two scenes to see Kirk in command gold. Not being captain at the end of the film? No way would that have worked. Now, as I've already said, I would've changed it so that there was a 4-year jump after the Kobayashi Maru and had Kirk be a lieutenant commander during the Vulcan incident, but I still would've ended it with him becoming captain. Heck, that was the whole point of the story: to tell how Kirk became captain of the Enterprise, how Spock became his first officer, etc.

Agreed. However it all came down to them coming together on one mission. There was no journey, more like a stroll.

It should have been in chapters. Birth/Youth/Academy/Lt/Lt. Cmdr. ending up with Captain. Instead, because McCoy snuck him onto a ship he wasn't supposed to be on he became Captain overnight.

SHow him meeting these people and showing WHY he'd want them as his crew. The focus would still be on Kirk & Spock but the others would have a place to shine as well.
 
I can kind of see what you're saying, but I really think that would have dragged things out for too long. Sure you can do something like that for a TV show where you will (hopefully) have years and many many hours to slowly build up the the point you want to get them too, like in Smallville. But a movie really should get to the point withing it's 1.5-4 hour time limit, unless it is something like the last two Pirates of the Caribbean, and Matrix movies.
 
Then the writers should have cut back on how much they wanted to fit into the show. Show Kirk as a rebellious cadet, slightly less rebellious young office and then have him save Earth as a first or second officer. Packing Kirk's entire career as a Starfleet officer into a week's time just didn't work. He may have been a Lt. in the movie (the graphic is barely seen) but he was still at the academy as a cadet.

What do they do to top this in the next movie, make him an Admiral? Or is this the highlight of his career? Nothing else from this point could top this?
 
Then the writers should have cut back on how much they wanted to fit into the show. Show Kirk as a rebellious cadet, slightly less rebellious young office and then have him save Earth as a first or second officer. Packing Kirk's entire career as a Starfleet officer into a week's time just didn't work. He may have been a Lt. in the movie (the graphic is barely seen) but he was still at the academy as a cadet.

What do they do to top this in the next movie, make him an Admiral? Or is this the highlight of his career? Nothing else from this point could top this?
The point is to get him to Captain. I suspect he'll remain a Captain in any future movies and bulk of his career is ahead of him. More enemies to defeat, planets to save and women to woo.

Saavik was at the academy as a Lieutenant as well. Starfleet operates differently than 21st Century militaries.
 
Saavik was at the academy as a Lieutenant as well. Starfleet operates differently than 21st Century militaries.

Yes, and in the Okuda Chronology's reconstruction of Kirk's Academy career, he was a lieutenant at his graduation in the Prime history as well. This is based on Gary Mitchell alluding to him holding lieutenant's rank while he was an instructor at the Academy.

For another example, we have Nog earning an ensign's commission while still a cadet. Heck, Wesley Crusher was given ensign's rank before he even went to the Academy.
 
As for not having Kirk Captain of the Enterprise until the second movie, that really wouldn't have worked. IMO it would be the same as doing a Batman origin movie, but just waiting until the hypothetical second movie which may never come out, to actually show him in the Batman suit.
Oh, you mean the Smallville approach. :p

Damn, why didn't I think of this? Smallville is the best precedent that it works.
 
Damn, why didn't I think of this? Smallville is the best precedent that it works.

You might not have thought of it because it's also not really a valid comparison. Smallville was an ongoing TV show whose entire premise was that it was the adventures of Clark Kent before he became Superman. (And now that it's about to begin its 10th season and Clark has been in Metropolis at the Daily Planet interacting with Lois Lane for years, that premise is way past its expiration point anyway.) We're talking about a big-screen movie that was meant to be a (rebooted) origin story of the Enterprise crew. There's a big difference, in my opinion.

Just to clarify, though, I also found it silly that they had Kirk go right from cadet to captain at the end of the movie. It's the one thing about the movie that really bothered me. I'm just saying I get why they felt the need to end it with him becoming captain of the Enterprise. But I also wish they'd found an effective way to have more years pass before they showed his promotion.
 
^Like I said, it wouldn't have materially affected the story to jump forward 4 years between the Kobayashi Maru and the attack on Vulcan (I choose 4 years because then Chekov would've been the correct age) and let Kirk gain some experience in the interim. However, I understand why they didn't do it that way, and it's the fault of the entire modern film industry, not of these specific filmmakers. Movies these days, as I think I commented above, are all about relentless pacing. They're not allowed to slow down, to have anything in them that would be seen as a break in the pace. That's why most of the scripted exposition that would've made more sense of a lot of things in this movie ended up on the cutting room floor. Pacing in movies has become a tyrannical master. In the minds of modern filmmakers, it takes priority over everything from vital exposition to character depth to fundamental story coherence. Which is just one of the reasons why movies in general today are not all that well-written or credible.

So I'm sure not going to blame this one movie for being unable to escape the irrational demands that are holding the entire film industry hostage these days. The modern motion picture industry is such a hostile environment to good storytelling that I consider it a triumph that the movie is as coherent as it is.
 
I agree. III did the best job of being true to the original, in most respects. (For one thing, it was the one film that made any subtantial use of "The Plot," the Lalo Schifrin musical motif that was an integral part of every episode's score.) However, I didn't like the way it, even more than the rest of the movies, turned the IMF into this massive government operation. It works against the feel of the original series, that this was a small, off-the-books operation being run out of a guy's apartment, recruiting actors and models and engineers and circus strongmen instead of professional agents, so that the government would have deniability for its actions.

I concur, that was a weak point (I didn't really think Crudup's motivations made a lot of sense, either), but it's just one of those things you almost kinda expect from modern movies, unfortunately.

Well, that's the mark of a good character, isn't it? That he's complex enough that he's perceived differently by different people.

Now, I think that bad characters can be complex, too. But then, I guess we would just get into a semantic discussion about the definition of good or bad characters. But I think that a character doesn't necessarily have to be complex to be perceived differently by different viewers, because each viewer is putting in something different. In fact, one could argue that even the most basic characters will be perceived differently by each viewer, because such a stripped-down character would require people to put even more of their own perspectives into it.
I don't know if that makes sense, I'm just thinking out loud. But the point is, I don't think that different interpretations necessarily indicates complexity.

So who knows? Maybe the next movie will develop Kirk in a way that will enable you to see more "Kirkness" in him. After all, this movie was the origin story, about getting him and the crew into place. In the next movie, they don't have to deal with all that and can go deeper into the characters.

Yeah, I've said this before, but since it's one of the few positives things about the movie I have in my arsenal, I might as well repeat it; I'm still very hopeful about the next one. Assuming it doesn't start before the end of STXI, before he's in the center seat, then Kirk will certainly be in a very different situation (official command), and only God and Kurtzman & Orci know how that will affect his character. I'm trying to be guarded in my optimism, because it was a rather steep drop for me after getting my hopes up about this movie (the Kelvin scene was so good!), but I do still think there's a very good chance that I will like the next one a lot more.

Everyone in a capitalist society has to be concerned with profit on some level. Ultimately, no matter how much you may be doing it for the love of the craft, no matter how much you wish you could tell a certain kind of story, you won't be able to tell that kind of story if you can't stay in business.

$385 million far exceeds staying in business. They could've just made less profit. ;)
But anyway, that's really beside the point, because I wasn't saying it was wrong, as such. Aggravating at times, yes, but understandable. In fact, the point I was trying to make was essentially the same as yours, that it's just the nature of the movie business (I guess my bitterness did kinda creep in, though).

And no matter what your opinion about blockbusters, that's a good thing for the franchise. Because it's disproven the myth that ST was dead, and it's brought new attention and profit to the franchise, and that's probably good for the prospects of new TV shows, books, comics, etc. The movies are what raise the profile and create the buzz for the rest.

That's certainly one way to look at it. But I'm very much afraid that the success of Star Trek as an explosive summer blockbuster (much more successful than any of the first ten, right?) will just leave the suits thinking that this is the best medium for Star Trek, and they can just forget all that TV nonsense. Books, comics, t-shirts, fine; they're cheaper to make. But I'm starting to wonder if this success will actually make it much less likely that we'll see small-screen Trek any time soon.

Rookiebatman said:
Even when I was excited about the upcoming movie, and hoping it might have some depth to it, I knew it wasn't really going to be anything more than a big, explosive, action-fest.
I thought it had plenty of depth. The plot was full of logic holes, but I thought there was an effective focus on character and emotion, that the action beats served the emotional beats rather than vice-versa. Abrams has always been good at balancing intense action with character-driven storytelling. One of the reasons M:I:III is so much better than its predecessors is because it humanizes Ethan Hunt, gives him a life beyond the job, and makes his relationship with his fiancee/wife pivotal to the movie.

Agreed about M:I3, but the difference is that I liked Ethan Hunt. A movie giving sufficient focus to a character, when I don't even like that character, doesn't help me.
But what I was trying to say there, is that even when I know it was gonna be "a big, explosive, action-fest," I still did have some hope of depth. I wasn't trying to suggest that the two are mutually exclusive. That point was really just about the fact that it being a big action movie was a foregone conclusion, whether there was any depth or not.

I mean, nothing shows this better than the Kelvin sequence. With all that big battle stuff going on, the real focus, of the script, the direction, the cinematography, the music, everything, is on the agonizing emotion of George and Winona leading up to the moment of Jim's birth. When I watched that sequence, I wasn't going "Gee whiz, look at all the bright explodey things," I was bawling my eyes out at the very human tragedy that the film clearly regarded as more important than the action.

Again, I loved the Kelvin scene. You'll get no arguments from me there.

And yet the fans' hunger for origin stories has given us Enterprise: The First Adventure, Vulcan's Forge, Mike Barr's superb "All Those Years Ago..." annual from DC, Marvel's Early Voyages series, IDW's Crew, etc. It's not just viewers, it's readers.

I don't have a problem with origin stories in general. And despite the fact that I used TOS as an example of not needing an origin, I don't even mind them in TV shows. Note that I said "I hate origin movies." The problem I have is when you spend the better part of a whole movie explaining the origins of a character or group, when we won't get another one for three years, and there probably won't be more than three before the whole thing is reinvented. It's almost like Tristram Shandy spending half of his book getting born.
Essentially, my line of thought is "time is short, let's get into it." And I don't for a moment believe that you can't give a character depth and meaning without explaining his whole backstory. Look at Casablanca; it doesn't start out by explaining how Rick got there or why he's so selfish; we get little glimpses of it throughout the movie, but in the meantime, we're telling the real story, instead of the story of how everyone got to the story. And the little glimpses we do get might make the basis for a good tie-in novel, but I'm glad they weren't in the movie itself, because that would've taken away from the excellent movie it ended up being without that.

This is the second time this week that's come up and I've had to debunk it. "Court-martial" showed a number of non-Enterprise personnel wearing the delta insignia (or arrowhead, as I prefer to call it), and VGR: "Friendship One" established it as a UESPA logo in use in 2067. Not to mention the new movie further debunking it by showing the Kelvin crew using the arrowhead in 2233.

You can't "debunk" something that's completely fabricated anyway. I'm not purporting this as something that could be canonical, it's just a fun part of my personal continuity. But it seems very likely to me that the intent in TOS was for other ships/stations to have their own insignia, and when they didn't (as in Court Martial) that was just due to the budgetary limitations they had at the time. Contraindications from Voyager or STXI don't sway me therefore, since that has nothing to do with the intent of the TOS production staff. Again, I'm not trying to prove this as something that should be accepted as a fact of the greater Star Trek universe. It's just a part of my personal, purely subjective Star Trek "tapestry" (just like someone else might say that this or that episode isn't a part of their personal continuity). Perhaps I shouldn't have shared something so personal, or anecdotal, but I thought some people might be entertained by it (as I have been entertained by many other completely unnecessary pieces of continuity-Spackle I've read here). So sue me.
So, yeah, I'll grant you that in the greater Star Trek continuity, the Enterprise wasn't the only one to have the delta (even without the new movie, since I just considered that a continuity error anyway). But, if you want to argue the intent of Roddenberry and the TOS production crew, we should probably start a separate thread.

Besides, the idea of Starfleet adopting one ship's logo to honor it is fannish and ridiculous. Wouldn't that be a huge insult to the valiant crews of all the other ships in the fleet? And I don't buy the idea that the E was the first ship to return intact from a 5-year mission, for one thing because I don't buy the unsupported assumption that 5-year missions are in any way standard. We have evidence that one ship had one 5-year mission. One data point is not evidence of a pattern. It's also a bad case of small-universe syndrome, the assumption that the events we were presented with on a television series were the only important things that happened in the entire universe.

Again, since this was only my personal continuity, and I didn't expect to have to prove it to anyone else, I considered the noncanonical intent of people like Roddenberry. He said in the TMP novelization (and I think the Phase II writer's guide) that the Ent was the first ship to come back relatively intact from a five-year mission, so I decided to assimilate that into my personal continuity. You are certainly correct that there's no canonical evidence that any ship besides the Enterprise went on five-year missions, but that doesn't mean it can't be a part of my own version of Star Trek. That's all this ever was, just an amusing anecdote. Like saying Khan recognized Chekov because he tried to retake engineering. It's just for fun. With all due respect to your zeal for accuracy, you could probably stand to lighten up just a little in this case. (But if you want to start another thread, I'll be glad to engage in a purely academic discussion with you.)


Rookiebatman said:
But yeah, while I wouldn't call it "a thousand times more believable," I'm sure nuKirk's promotion could be explained just as easily.
You're right. It's at least fifty thousand times more believable. :p

I wonder if, back in 1986, you were saying that what happened in TVH was 50,000 times more believable than "Spock's Brain." :p Making fun of TVH isn't gonna make me like STXI any more, you know. I'm not sure what you think this will prove.
 
IMO it would be the same as doing a Batman origin movie, but just waiting until the hypothetical second movie which may never come out, to actually show him in the Batman suit.

Yeah, imagine how annoying it would be if the iconic main character was just wearing a nondescript black shirt and pants for most of the movie. :vulcan:

I can kind of see what you're saying, but I really think that would have dragged things out for too long. Sure you can do something like that for a TV show where you will (hopefully) have years and many many hours to slowly build up the the point you want to get them too, like in Smallville. But a movie really should get to the point withing it's 1.5-4 hour time limit, unless it is something like the last two Pirates of the Caribbean, and Matrix movies.

I don't know, that was kinda how they did it in "Batman Begins," but they didn't do it linearly, they used flashbacks instead. I think something like that could've worked, and it's pretty popular these days, so audiences probably wouldn't be too confused by it.
 
Well, that's the mark of a good character, isn't it? That he's complex enough that he's perceived differently by different people.

Now, I think that bad characters can be complex, too. But then, I guess we would just get into a semantic discussion about the definition of good or bad characters. But I think that a character doesn't necessarily have to be complex to be perceived differently by different viewers, because each viewer is putting in something different. In fact, one could argue that even the most basic characters will be perceived differently by each viewer, because such a stripped-down character would require people to put even more of their own perspectives into it.

Well, we're talking about the character of James T. Kirk here. What I mean is that that character has been featured in many different stories and been interpreted in many different ways by writers, directors, and actors (since even Shatner had more than one interpretation of Kirk over the years) as well as by audiences. This is an interpretation of Kirk by a team of actor, writers, and director who haven't interpreted the character before, so naturally they bring something new in their approach to that character. What they see in the character isn't going to be the same thing other people see, so not every fan is going to agree with their way of interpreting the character. There have been stories that have interpreted Kirk in ways I don't agree with. But Kirk is not a character defined by a single story. All the different interpretations are just different facets of the whole.


$385 million far exceeds staying in business. They could've just made less profit. ;)

And been fired by the bosses and/or stockholders who demand that they do everything they can to make more profit. After all, they're in competition with other businesses, and if they underperform, they get outcompeted and suffer for it. That's how business works.


That's certainly one way to look at it. But I'm very much afraid that the success of Star Trek as an explosive summer blockbuster (much more successful than any of the first ten, right?) will just leave the suits thinking that this is the best medium for Star Trek, and they can just forget all that TV nonsense.

That doesn't make any sense. It was the consistent success of the first four ST movies that led to Paramount bringing ST back to television with TNG. And there are tons of other examples of studios developing TV spinoffs and tie-ins to try to build on the success of movie franchises.

Besides, you're forgetting who the "suits" in charge of the franchise are these days. When CBS and Paramount split, the former got the TV properties and the latter got the movie properties. And ST is intrinsically, primarily a TV property, so CBS got ownership of the whole franchise. Because it's also a movie property, Paramount got to keep a license to make more ST movies (similarly to how CBS licenses Pocket to make ST novels, IDW to make ST comics, and so on). But it's still CBS, the television side of the corporate split, that owns Star Trek and decides its future. Paramount retains the motion picture rights as long as it keeps making movies, but it can't stop CBS from deciding to make a TV series. And I can't see why CBS wouldn't want to make a new series to increase their profits from the franchise's new life. It doesn't make sense that they'd leave it exclusively in the hands of a licensee. As I said the other day (though maybe not in this thread, I forget), I think I've read that they're holding off on a new TV series until after the next movie or two, just to give the movie series more traction, but I don't see them holding off perpetually.


You can't "debunk" something that's completely fabricated anyway.

Within the context of the fictional "reality," of course you can. If someone says that Spock had four arms, that can be conclusively debunked with a single screencap. If someone says that Starfleet's first major battle with the Borg was at Wolf 358, that can be debunked by pointing out all the references to Wolf 359. And if someone says that the arrowhead insignia was exclusively or originally the Enterprise's insignia until after TOS, that can be conclusively disproven by reference to "Court-martial," "Friendship One," and now ST XI.

But, if you want to argue the intent of Roddenberry and the TOS production crew, we should probably start a separate thread.

No, I don't. ST canon is the collective creation of hundreds of different storytellers with many conflicting intents, and later intents often trump earlier intents. For instance, Roddenberry's intent in TMP was that Klingons had always had ridges and the depiction of smooth-headed Klingons in TOS was only an inaccurate approximation of what they "really" looked like. But "Trials and Tribble-ations" and "Affliction"/"Divergence" rendered that intent unfeasible, and now any postulates about in-universe Trek continuity have to incorporate the premise that Klingons did once have a smooth-headed subspecies.

Similarly, maybe before "Friendship One" was made, you could've made a case for the idea that the arrowhead was only the Enterprise's before TMP, if you were willing to ignore "Court-martial" as a production error. And I don't deny that that probably was the intent of the producers at the time. But the way things stand now, given what's been subsequently established in "Friendship One" and the new movie, that is no longer a valid hypothesis, just as most of the fan hypotheses about Klingons were rendered invalid once "Affliction"/"Divergence" was made. New canon contradicts fan theories all the time, and sometimes it contradicts past intent. Either way, the hypothesis that the arrowhead was the Enterprise's insignia first is totally dead now. Canonically, the arrowhead was originally a UESPA insignia that was in use 200 years before TOS. So it is no longer logical to assume that Starfleet perceives that emblem as representing the Enterprise in particular. Rather, we must now conclude that the Enterprise's use of that insignia was a tribute to a famous UESPA emblem. And it logically follows that the fleetwide use of that emblem, regardless of when it occurred, is in honor of UESPA rather than the Enterprise.




I wonder if, back in 1986, you were saying that what happened in TVH was 50,000 times more believable than "Spock's Brain." :p Making fun of TVH isn't gonna make me like STXI any more, you know. I'm not sure what you think this will prove.

I wasn't directing it at you. JarodRussell has been insisting that Kirk's rapid promotion makes no sense. I'm pointing out that, as contrived as it admittedly was, it wasn't as bad as some of the contrivances we've seen in past Trek movies.

The bottom line is, movies cannot be expected to be entirely logical, coherent, or intelligent stories, especially in this day and age. They're a particular class of storytelling that demands extreme narrative shorthand and an emphasis on the immediacy of the moment. They make huge leaps of plot and logic that you typically wouldn't find in a book or a TV series. That's because they have such a limited amount of time to tell such big stories. It's just an inherent attribute of the medium. And the modern climate of moviemaking exacerbates it in a lot of ways -- by the demands of relentless pacing, and by a climate where the director is god and scripts are considered disposable so that narrative logic is routinely discarded in favor of moments of coolness.

What I'm saying is that any ST movie these days would've had similar logic holes, just as every prior ST movie has logic holes. It's the nature of the medium. In fact, this movie turned out far better storytelling-wise than it would have in most other filmmakers' hands, because Abrams and his team come from television, a medium where writers are actually considered important and scripts worth taking remotely seriously. The screenwriters were actually producers of the film, which is rare in cinema. Not to mention that the fact that it was filmed during the writers' strike means that the script was "locked down" to a degree very rare in Hollywood, and thus had to be shot pretty much as scripted (although it was revised significantly in editing and post-production). So this is probably the smartest, most coherent ST feature film we could've realistically expected anyone in Hollywood to make. Yes, it has logic flaws, but in the hands of a typical Hollywood feature director and production team they would've probably been far worse. So me, I'm grateful we got as good a movie as we did. I don't think anyone could've realistically done better given the nature of the feature film industry today.
 
so audiences probably wouldn't be too confused by it.

I can't say it often enough: audiences are not dumb.

So this is probably the smartest, most coherent ST feature film we could've realistically expected anyone in Hollywood to make. Yes, it has logic flaws, but in the hands of a typical Hollywood director they would've probably been far worse. So me, I'm grateful we got as good a movie as we did. I don't think anyone could've realistically done better given the nature of the feature film industry today.

I think you have a rather weird prejudiced impression of "Hollywood".

The screenwriters were actually producers of the film, which is rare in cinema.

Which explains a lot about how the script was written. ;)
 
It could have been partly redeemed if, at the end, when Tom Cruise's character gets the recording on the plane it had said "Good afternoon, Mr. Phelps.", thus making the name an alias for the prime agent. Instead, it treated the original character very badly indeed.

Nice idea, but it wouldn't have been consistent with the series. The lead agent in the first season was named Dan Briggs. And we know Jim Phelps was really named Jim Phelps, because he was called that by old friends from his youth in more than one episode.

What could've worked to salvage it would be if the Phelps of the movie had been an impostor. M:I lore is full of impostors.


I mean, nothing shows this better than the Kelvin sequence. With all that big battle stuff going on, the real focus, of the script, the direction, the cinematography, the music, everything, is on the agonizing emotion of George and Winona leading up to the moment of Jim's birth. When I watched that sequence, I wasn't going "Gee whiz, look at all the bright explodey things," I was bawling my eyes out at the very human tragedy that the film clearly regarded as more important than the action.

And that's paralleled at the end. When Nero is finally defeated, the movie doesn't gloat over his fiery death and treat it as a triumph; rather, the music gets somber and elegiac and we're treated to a poignant close-up of a man who's lost everything and deserves our sympathy. That's just brilliant, emotion-driven filmmaking there, in the middle of intense, frenetic action. That's the work of a director who knows what's really important.


This is the second time this week that's come up and I've had to debunk it. "Court-martial" showed a number of non-Enterprise personnel wearing the delta insignia (or arrowhead, as I prefer to call it), and VGR: "Friendship One" established it as a UESPA logo in use in 2067. Not to mention the new movie further debunking it by showing the Kelvin crew using the arrowhead in 2233.


I agree about the Kelvin sequence. My hopes were quite high at that point. A very nice character moment amidst all the death & destruction. A quiet goodbye and a too brief hello. The movie could have used more scenes like that.

The scene with the Vulcan children taunting Spock could have come close but it was played too emotionally. The line "He's a traitor, you know. Your father. For marrying her. That human whore." was over the top. It would have been much more effective if the Vulcans remained relatively emotionless in their attacks on Spock and he slowly became more and more emotional in response. Imagine Spock at his most logical and McCoy at his most emotional translated to children. As it was, it was too abrupt.

The movie doesn't gloat over his defeat? Spock is opposed to offering to save not only Nero but the rest of his crew and Kirk, after being turned down, delivers the Coup de grâce? They both seemed to get a fair amount of satisfaction out of it. Nero wasn't developed enough to get a sympathetic reaction from me. YMMV.

And, not that it's worth anything, my opinion of the insignia is that it was more of a fleet emblem rather than an individual ship. The Seventh Fleet had the Delta, the Second Fleet that the rectangle, etc. Works for me.
 
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