This is a new version of the first story I posted in the DS9: the continuation thread on this forum. I went over the entire story, rejigged the plot, added new scenes, and spruced up to the best of my ability the exposition and dialogue. To view the whole story go here: http://www.adastrafanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=990
Here is a summary: On a remote planet in the Badlands called Tau Primia, and in the middle of nowhere, Megan Felpes and her colleague Jack Smith observe a prison manned by rebel Cardassians. But what starts as a simple mission goes horribly wrong, when she and Jack are captured and imprisoned, and for the next two years Megan's life becomes a living hell...
Fast forward two years and captain Ezri Dax is the new commander of Deep Space Nine, and on a personal level there are many challenges to overcome, as she comes to terms with her long term break-up with Bashir, and the friends she lost contact with during the many years away from the station. However shortly after arriving, Ezri faces a new problem when a fleet of Cardassian warships arrive at DS9.
Upon being contacted by one of the ships, Ezri encounters Garak, the president of the Cardassian government and general commander-in-chief of the Cardassian Union. During a private meeting, Garak gives to Ezri a very unusual offer...
This soon morphs into Ezri's first mission as captain to carry out a daring rescue operation to free the prisoners on Tau Primia...
///Set eighteen years after the Dominion War, this story sees the return of some the main characters from DS9: Kira, Odo, Bashir, Quark and Ezri. This universe is not based on the DS9 relaunch books, this is my own interpretation of events after the end of the Dominion war. This is DS9 but radically tweaked...
And now on to the story:
Secrets and Lies, Chapter 1, part 1
Stardate: 68453.2
Location: Tau Primia, M-class planet, Badlands
On top of the dusty mesa, the wind blew sand everywhere and some of it whipped into Megan Felpes's face as she looked through her optical scanner at the prison. For some time she had been doing this, all the while wearing some sort of suit which rendered her mostly invisible, although there was a faint shimmer which revealed the outline of Megan's body. Only her face was visible, and what could be seen was her lengthy brown hair, tanned skin and thin-looking face.
The prison was Cardassian controlled and even from a kilometre away it contrasted greatly with the surrounding landscape. It was a black mass in the middle of a sandstone landscape, while little pockets of dull green bushes were dotted all over the orangey red ground.
A river ran between the mesa and the prison, and on top of the mesa the bushes were a lot thicker. This provided amble cover for Megan and her fellow agent Jack Smith. However they had more than nature to hide themselves. With their camo suits and bio-dampener devices they were practically invisible to the naked eye.
Megan continued looking through the optical visor, her gaze drifted over the five metre high prison walls and into the major courtyard. Occasionally a Cardassian guard, who usually escorted a prisoner, would walk across the courtyard.
However Megan was waiting for Gul Bordak to enter the courtyard, and Bordak was the prison's prefect. Megan and Jack worked for Starfleet Intelligence and their job largely consisted of observing and tracking targets. Over the last two days, Megan had been mapping out the routine of the Cardassian guards.
Such a task was made far more easier thanks to Jack remotely hacking into the prison's computer database. Jack, with his sharp facial features, blue eyes and short black hair, was huddled over a console screen which showed the blueprint of the prison and the location of all the people inside. He to was wearing a camo suite, and that revealed a faint outline of his frame. He looked slightly hunched due to his tall and muscular frame.
As Megan observed, she thought about the mission and how pointless it seemed spying upon this prison. Sometimes though the missions Starfleet Intelligence gave to Megan made little sense to both herself and Jack. However, Megan was glad to have Jack with her as this made the job a lot more easier. Megan and Jack had worked together for close to four years in SI.
However they had known each other for over five years. At first they had a friendship and then it became a relationship. Nevertheless both had to keep this relationship a secret, for if SI ever found about the relationship Megan and Jack would never work together again.
Before Megan knew it, Bordak entered the courtyard, but he was not alone since he was talking to a humanoid.
Now this really intrigued Megan, so much so she looked a bit above the thin, binocular-shaped, optical visor she was holding. This revealed her brown eyes and a lot more of the slight frown on her face.
“Do you see that humanoid walking next to Bordak?” Megan asked quietly.
Jack moved away from the console and came over to Megan, while taking out his optical visor. “I see him, that humanoid is a Tren. Aside from occasional sightings of their ships in the Alpha Quadrant, Starfleet doesn't know anything about them. We're not even sure what a member of their species looks like... Well until now.”
Megan looked through the optical visor, and quickly spotted the Tren again. She had never seen such a hideous looking humanoid, but this was mainly due to his odd facial structure. “How many Starfleet encounters with the Tren have there been?”
“Less than eight I think,” answered Jack.
Megan removed her gaze from the optical visor and looked at Jack. “But that humanoid may have beamed down from a ship and there could be more like him! For we all know there could be a cloaked ship orbiting this planet!”
There was a slight hint of concern in Megan's voice and her posture tensed, though Jack did not seem perturbed by this. “I don't see how they can detect us,” he said calmly. “They would have to walk into us to spot us, so don't worry we're safe here.”
At this Megan relaxed somewhat, she never liked the unexpected and in Starfleet Intelligence the unexpected could harm you or worse...
***
Bordak leaned back into his chair after reading the daily report on the status of the prisoners. He was quite tall, thin and his face was very twisted. Bordak's face almost had a certain gaunt and reptilian quality about it, and for a Cardassian his facial ridges were unusually pronounced.
It was hard work for Bordak being the prefect of this prison. Even the prisoners needed rudimentary provisions, some food, water, and the cold floor of a prison cell to sleep on. Whenever he could, he always tried to find time to torture the prisoners, enemies of Cardassia did not deserve mercy or compassion.
The five Cardassian ships under his command were his most important assets, he used them to attack ships passing through the Badlands. Outsiders thought that many of the disappearances in the Badlands were due to the region's ferocious plasma storms, but Bordak knew better.
It was his ships which were responsible for most of the disappearances. This was how he kept the prison full of prisoners by capturing the crew of these ships. Through this process, Bordak had acquired all sorts of prisoners: humans, Klingons, Ferengi, Bajorans, Starfleet officers, slaves, and even a Bajoran vedek.
On one occasion, Bordak and his men captured a shapeshifter. It was an interesting challenge trying to imprison a shapeshifter. After torture, attacking unsuspecting ships was his second favourite activity.
However, Bordak did not look forward to the afternoon as the Tren captain Abarzjid was visiting the prison. Bordak felt certain that Abarzjid wanted to add some extra provisions to the long-standing deal that the two had reached.
The Tren supplied Bordak, and the men under his command, with all the supplies necessary to run and defend the prison. In return Bordak sometimes had to hand over some of the high value prisoners, something which he was reluctant to do. But Tren weaponry had the worth of a hundred high value prisoners, so it was a reasonable price to pay.
The door to his office opened, and one of his Glinn's came into the office.
“Sir, captain Abarzjid has arrived. He asks to speak with you immediately.”
Bordak sighed in annoyance, and he hated Abarzjid’s presumptuous manner. “Inform Abarzjid that I will come in five minute's time,” he answered struggling to keep out the irritation in his voice. “Dismissed.”
The Glinn left the office, he seemed to sense his commanding officer's dissatisfaction.
Getting to his feet, Bordak slowly made his way out of the office, since he was in no rush. Indeed what he really wanted was to sit down, relax, and drink some kanar. He had just spent three hours torturing a prisoner and he was tired from all that work.
Bordak left his office feeling greatly resentful of Abarzjid's contemptuous and arrogant manner towards him. The day when he did not have to converse with Abarzjid was a very welcome one indeed, however unlikely it seemed...
***
Bordak entered the outer part of the courtyard, his footfalls echoing off the stony floor which comprised of black flagstones. It was a sheltered area with severe-looking ceramic columns holding up the four-metre high roof. The inner part of the courtyard had three sides surrounded by the prison buildings, while the outer wall bounded the fourth side.
In the inner part there was a small fountain in the middle, gushing water via a holographic generator. Though the water may not have been real, the sound it made when it fell into the pool was very real indeed.
Abarzjid was waiting at one end of the courtyard, and as Bordak walked closer to the Tren he noticed that Abarzjid looked just as bored as he felt.
“Captain,” said Bordak trying to sound as polite as possible. “How was the trip from... well wherever it is that you come from?”
“The same Bordak,” Abarzjid replied, he sounded bored out of his mind. “The same monotonous sights that I have seen for the last eight years of my assignment.”
“Of course, how foolish of me,” said Bordak, while a faint smile lingered on his face. “But we Cardassians have a thing for manners and decorum.”
“And torture, cruelty and back-stabbing,” said Abarzjid quietly.
“Now come on captain,” said Bordak, his voice rife with mock indignation. “Aside from your tasteless remarks, what is your business here?”
Abarzjid scowled at Bordak before replying. “I-that is to say the Tren military-want forty of your prisoners for...” Abarzjid paused, searching for a reason. “Let's say 'medical' purposes for-”
“Why so many prisoners?” interrupted Bordak. “The deal was I captured people, crews and so forth from within the Badlands, and handed them over to you. In exchange my unit received Tren weaponry for our troubles... So what has changed now?”
“Nothing has changed,” Abarzjid hissed, showing his sharp teeth. “The Tren military have benefited from your little rebel shenanigans, we are only extending the terms of your deal-”
All of a sudden, the sound of an explosion muted Abarzjid's voice. Bordak instantly crouched down as he felt a terrific streak of heat run across his back. “Get down and take cover!” he yelled.
Behind his back one of the courtyard's columns had been damaged badly, and where the phaser beam had struck, a thin layer of molten metal oozed from the struck part of the column.
When Bordak got to his feet, he was pleased to see that Abarzjid looked a little shaken. However his vindictive pleasure rapidly faded when he heard the sizzling noise coming from the column. He had escaped death by millimetres, but where was the shooter?
Bordak quickly looked around, someone had definitely fired a phaser beam, more than likely tracerless, and that someone could only be outside the prison... Instinctively Bordak knew that he had to get inside immediately. “Someone is firing from outside of this prison!” he warned Abarzjid. “Come on, get inside!”
With the initial shock wearing off, rage built up inside Bordak. Who had the audacity to attack his prison and try to kill him? Was this some sort of botched assassination attempt on Starfleet's part?
In any case, the prison sensors would have detected the beam, and the telemetry of the heat signature would give the location of where the beam originated. Moreover, when Bordak captured whoever it was who tried to assassinate him, he would punish them severely...
Here is a summary: On a remote planet in the Badlands called Tau Primia, and in the middle of nowhere, Megan Felpes and her colleague Jack Smith observe a prison manned by rebel Cardassians. But what starts as a simple mission goes horribly wrong, when she and Jack are captured and imprisoned, and for the next two years Megan's life becomes a living hell...
Fast forward two years and captain Ezri Dax is the new commander of Deep Space Nine, and on a personal level there are many challenges to overcome, as she comes to terms with her long term break-up with Bashir, and the friends she lost contact with during the many years away from the station. However shortly after arriving, Ezri faces a new problem when a fleet of Cardassian warships arrive at DS9.
Upon being contacted by one of the ships, Ezri encounters Garak, the president of the Cardassian government and general commander-in-chief of the Cardassian Union. During a private meeting, Garak gives to Ezri a very unusual offer...
This soon morphs into Ezri's first mission as captain to carry out a daring rescue operation to free the prisoners on Tau Primia...
///Set eighteen years after the Dominion War, this story sees the return of some the main characters from DS9: Kira, Odo, Bashir, Quark and Ezri. This universe is not based on the DS9 relaunch books, this is my own interpretation of events after the end of the Dominion war. This is DS9 but radically tweaked...
And now on to the story:
Secrets and Lies, Chapter 1, part 1
Stardate: 68453.2
Location: Tau Primia, M-class planet, Badlands
On top of the dusty mesa, the wind blew sand everywhere and some of it whipped into Megan Felpes's face as she looked through her optical scanner at the prison. For some time she had been doing this, all the while wearing some sort of suit which rendered her mostly invisible, although there was a faint shimmer which revealed the outline of Megan's body. Only her face was visible, and what could be seen was her lengthy brown hair, tanned skin and thin-looking face.
The prison was Cardassian controlled and even from a kilometre away it contrasted greatly with the surrounding landscape. It was a black mass in the middle of a sandstone landscape, while little pockets of dull green bushes were dotted all over the orangey red ground.
A river ran between the mesa and the prison, and on top of the mesa the bushes were a lot thicker. This provided amble cover for Megan and her fellow agent Jack Smith. However they had more than nature to hide themselves. With their camo suits and bio-dampener devices they were practically invisible to the naked eye.
Megan continued looking through the optical visor, her gaze drifted over the five metre high prison walls and into the major courtyard. Occasionally a Cardassian guard, who usually escorted a prisoner, would walk across the courtyard.
However Megan was waiting for Gul Bordak to enter the courtyard, and Bordak was the prison's prefect. Megan and Jack worked for Starfleet Intelligence and their job largely consisted of observing and tracking targets. Over the last two days, Megan had been mapping out the routine of the Cardassian guards.
Such a task was made far more easier thanks to Jack remotely hacking into the prison's computer database. Jack, with his sharp facial features, blue eyes and short black hair, was huddled over a console screen which showed the blueprint of the prison and the location of all the people inside. He to was wearing a camo suite, and that revealed a faint outline of his frame. He looked slightly hunched due to his tall and muscular frame.
As Megan observed, she thought about the mission and how pointless it seemed spying upon this prison. Sometimes though the missions Starfleet Intelligence gave to Megan made little sense to both herself and Jack. However, Megan was glad to have Jack with her as this made the job a lot more easier. Megan and Jack had worked together for close to four years in SI.
However they had known each other for over five years. At first they had a friendship and then it became a relationship. Nevertheless both had to keep this relationship a secret, for if SI ever found about the relationship Megan and Jack would never work together again.
Before Megan knew it, Bordak entered the courtyard, but he was not alone since he was talking to a humanoid.
Now this really intrigued Megan, so much so she looked a bit above the thin, binocular-shaped, optical visor she was holding. This revealed her brown eyes and a lot more of the slight frown on her face.
“Do you see that humanoid walking next to Bordak?” Megan asked quietly.
Jack moved away from the console and came over to Megan, while taking out his optical visor. “I see him, that humanoid is a Tren. Aside from occasional sightings of their ships in the Alpha Quadrant, Starfleet doesn't know anything about them. We're not even sure what a member of their species looks like... Well until now.”
Megan looked through the optical visor, and quickly spotted the Tren again. She had never seen such a hideous looking humanoid, but this was mainly due to his odd facial structure. “How many Starfleet encounters with the Tren have there been?”
“Less than eight I think,” answered Jack.
Megan removed her gaze from the optical visor and looked at Jack. “But that humanoid may have beamed down from a ship and there could be more like him! For we all know there could be a cloaked ship orbiting this planet!”
There was a slight hint of concern in Megan's voice and her posture tensed, though Jack did not seem perturbed by this. “I don't see how they can detect us,” he said calmly. “They would have to walk into us to spot us, so don't worry we're safe here.”
At this Megan relaxed somewhat, she never liked the unexpected and in Starfleet Intelligence the unexpected could harm you or worse...
***
Bordak leaned back into his chair after reading the daily report on the status of the prisoners. He was quite tall, thin and his face was very twisted. Bordak's face almost had a certain gaunt and reptilian quality about it, and for a Cardassian his facial ridges were unusually pronounced.
It was hard work for Bordak being the prefect of this prison. Even the prisoners needed rudimentary provisions, some food, water, and the cold floor of a prison cell to sleep on. Whenever he could, he always tried to find time to torture the prisoners, enemies of Cardassia did not deserve mercy or compassion.
The five Cardassian ships under his command were his most important assets, he used them to attack ships passing through the Badlands. Outsiders thought that many of the disappearances in the Badlands were due to the region's ferocious plasma storms, but Bordak knew better.
It was his ships which were responsible for most of the disappearances. This was how he kept the prison full of prisoners by capturing the crew of these ships. Through this process, Bordak had acquired all sorts of prisoners: humans, Klingons, Ferengi, Bajorans, Starfleet officers, slaves, and even a Bajoran vedek.
On one occasion, Bordak and his men captured a shapeshifter. It was an interesting challenge trying to imprison a shapeshifter. After torture, attacking unsuspecting ships was his second favourite activity.
However, Bordak did not look forward to the afternoon as the Tren captain Abarzjid was visiting the prison. Bordak felt certain that Abarzjid wanted to add some extra provisions to the long-standing deal that the two had reached.
The Tren supplied Bordak, and the men under his command, with all the supplies necessary to run and defend the prison. In return Bordak sometimes had to hand over some of the high value prisoners, something which he was reluctant to do. But Tren weaponry had the worth of a hundred high value prisoners, so it was a reasonable price to pay.
The door to his office opened, and one of his Glinn's came into the office.
“Sir, captain Abarzjid has arrived. He asks to speak with you immediately.”
Bordak sighed in annoyance, and he hated Abarzjid’s presumptuous manner. “Inform Abarzjid that I will come in five minute's time,” he answered struggling to keep out the irritation in his voice. “Dismissed.”
The Glinn left the office, he seemed to sense his commanding officer's dissatisfaction.
Getting to his feet, Bordak slowly made his way out of the office, since he was in no rush. Indeed what he really wanted was to sit down, relax, and drink some kanar. He had just spent three hours torturing a prisoner and he was tired from all that work.
Bordak left his office feeling greatly resentful of Abarzjid's contemptuous and arrogant manner towards him. The day when he did not have to converse with Abarzjid was a very welcome one indeed, however unlikely it seemed...
***
Bordak entered the outer part of the courtyard, his footfalls echoing off the stony floor which comprised of black flagstones. It was a sheltered area with severe-looking ceramic columns holding up the four-metre high roof. The inner part of the courtyard had three sides surrounded by the prison buildings, while the outer wall bounded the fourth side.
In the inner part there was a small fountain in the middle, gushing water via a holographic generator. Though the water may not have been real, the sound it made when it fell into the pool was very real indeed.
Abarzjid was waiting at one end of the courtyard, and as Bordak walked closer to the Tren he noticed that Abarzjid looked just as bored as he felt.
“Captain,” said Bordak trying to sound as polite as possible. “How was the trip from... well wherever it is that you come from?”
“The same Bordak,” Abarzjid replied, he sounded bored out of his mind. “The same monotonous sights that I have seen for the last eight years of my assignment.”
“Of course, how foolish of me,” said Bordak, while a faint smile lingered on his face. “But we Cardassians have a thing for manners and decorum.”
“And torture, cruelty and back-stabbing,” said Abarzjid quietly.
“Now come on captain,” said Bordak, his voice rife with mock indignation. “Aside from your tasteless remarks, what is your business here?”
Abarzjid scowled at Bordak before replying. “I-that is to say the Tren military-want forty of your prisoners for...” Abarzjid paused, searching for a reason. “Let's say 'medical' purposes for-”
“Why so many prisoners?” interrupted Bordak. “The deal was I captured people, crews and so forth from within the Badlands, and handed them over to you. In exchange my unit received Tren weaponry for our troubles... So what has changed now?”
“Nothing has changed,” Abarzjid hissed, showing his sharp teeth. “The Tren military have benefited from your little rebel shenanigans, we are only extending the terms of your deal-”
All of a sudden, the sound of an explosion muted Abarzjid's voice. Bordak instantly crouched down as he felt a terrific streak of heat run across his back. “Get down and take cover!” he yelled.
Behind his back one of the courtyard's columns had been damaged badly, and where the phaser beam had struck, a thin layer of molten metal oozed from the struck part of the column.
When Bordak got to his feet, he was pleased to see that Abarzjid looked a little shaken. However his vindictive pleasure rapidly faded when he heard the sizzling noise coming from the column. He had escaped death by millimetres, but where was the shooter?
Bordak quickly looked around, someone had definitely fired a phaser beam, more than likely tracerless, and that someone could only be outside the prison... Instinctively Bordak knew that he had to get inside immediately. “Someone is firing from outside of this prison!” he warned Abarzjid. “Come on, get inside!”
With the initial shock wearing off, rage built up inside Bordak. Who had the audacity to attack his prison and try to kill him? Was this some sort of botched assassination attempt on Starfleet's part?
In any case, the prison sensors would have detected the beam, and the telemetry of the heat signature would give the location of where the beam originated. Moreover, when Bordak captured whoever it was who tried to assassinate him, he would punish them severely...