Viewed as a single narrative, it's a success. You have the only unacceptable thing about 2 fixed by 3, and the buildup from those two intriguingly pushed aside until the very end of the hugely entertaining 4.Viewed as a single narrative, it's a mess. You have the only interesting thing about 2 ruined by 3, and the buildup from those two pushed aside until the very end of the largely disconnected 4.
It's all a POV, now isn't it?![]()
What's the point of asking "Your review?" then? By this logic, I could've just taken your OP post and rewritten it, too instead of making an actual reply.