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Remnants by Mistral

Joe gets around, doesn't he? ;) If the situation wasn't so grave, he might enjoy his travel through history.

Great job of writing. I like the small details you included, e.g. Riker running his finger through the condensation on the table. Very nice!
 
CHAPTER 14

Joe re-appeared in Daniels’s office. With the Everlight extinguished the office should have been pitch black but it wasn’t. Instead, light was filtering in through the frosted glass. It flickered as torchlight often does. Joe could make out humanoid figures, silhouettes through the glass, cavorting in the lab. Glass smashed and metal struck metal. A whine of power quickly rose and then detonated in a burst of blue light. Joe recognized it as Cherenkov radiation. It temporarily illuminated the entire lab. There were dozens of the savages there, and every one of them saw him through the door glass that had also become transparent in the glare. Several launched themselves at office ‘D’, enraged and pounding on the door. Joe hastily tapped in the activation sequence that he’d found on the padd. It was taking too long and the savages were about to break through when a column of light appeared next to him. The big Klingon that had rode the turbolift with him stood there, bat’leth at the ready. “Save Qu’onos!” he cried, lifting his weapon high. The door gave way under the weight of the attacking savages. The Klingon began mowing down the figures leaping in over the wreckage of the door but their numbers were too great. As he went down under the sheer press of bodies Joe disappeared in a rainbow of light.

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Joe re-appeared in a well-lit chamber of pure white stone. He glanced around and saw birthing crèches. Curious, he examined their contents. Each one contained a Klingon-Human hybrid fetus. It took a few moments to cycle through his medical files before he pulled up a Starfleet report from a Denobulan doctor who had served as the CMO on the NX-01. “Damn,” he said, heading for the open archway at one end of the chamber. “He’s here already.”

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“Will, you have to let me speak to your…source. Perhaps there is a way to avert what is coming.” Riker had excused himself for a moment and Picard had taken the time to consider what had transpired at the Preserver sight. He’d waited until Riker returned from the restroom to speak.

“Captain, I’m sorry but my…source has departed.” Will retook his seat and swallowed a large drink from his mug. “I’m sorry, Captain, but I really don’t know how this sort of thing works. Either he was successful and we are merely waiting for things to change or he failed and all is as it was. Either way, there’s nothing we can do now.”

Vash looked at Riker. “I hope what I told you was useful.” Picard glanced at her and then back to Riker.

“So do I, Vash, so do I,” Riker replied. As he took another drink of his ale Vash looked at Picard. He seemed frustrated. She frowned when he finished his margarita in one gulp and held the glass out for her to fetch a refill.

“Get it yourself,” she snapped, and flounced out of the room.

Riker raised one eyebrow, first at Picard and then at Vash’s departing figure.

Picard just bowed his head over his empty glass.

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The cave was dark and there wasn’t any atmosphere. Joe tested the ambient gravity.

“About .33 Earth norm,” he thought. He adjusted his personal gravity to compensate by rerouting energy to his surface so as to produce a higher differential between his apparent mass and the ability of the moon to keep him from tripping and being placed into orbit.

He stood for a moment, considering his options. If he had made his target destination as described in the padd he’d read, he would be a day or less in front of Picard. He stepped forward and immediately ran into something. Examining the object in question, he was struck by how similar the black casing on the cradle that held it looked so very much like a Federation photon torpedo. Then it launched. A transporter effect gripped the cradle and another torpedo fired. Joe looked down at his middle, which had been disrupted by the ion pulse wash that tore out of the rear of the projectile. The process repeated. As a doctor, it ripped him apart to know that people were dying. Joe simply let them fire, knowing any change in history had to be a delicate one. He waited for it to end and an old friend to retrieve him. He tried to pull himself together in anticipation of that moment.

***********************************

Joe stepped out into the anteroom and saw a very pretty Human woman in her late forties striding in. His instant diagnostic was that she exercised frequently and took very good care of herself. His instincts told him it was Picard’s girlfriend, Vash, who had accompanied him to the Preserver site. “Just don’t destroy the universe or anything like that!” she called out behind her.

Joe stepped in front of her. “He may be doing exactly that.” Vash almost peed her pants.

“Who the hell are you?” Vash asked. Her left hand slowly groped for the bush knife at her hip.

Joe felt very uncomfortable. “That’s a funny story,” Taking her right elbow, he guided her away from the chamber that Picard was in. He said, “Do you have a moment?” Vash looked at him in surprise, her knife embedded in his kidney up to the hilt. She looked down at the knife.

Glancing down at himself, he said ,“Oh, sorry, I didn’t mean to startle you.” He blinked, and the knife fell to the ground, seemingly passing through his body on the way to the floor. In a cheerful voice he added, “There you go. Now, can we talk? I think you are going to have to stop him or things could get quite…depressing.” Vash picked up her knife and walked with him deeper into the main chamber.

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“Riker to Troi,” Will said. “Did our guest…depart?”

“Yes, Will, he’s, um, left. I passed along your message.”

Riker looked at Picard. “Captain, our…herald of doom, if you will, has departed to try to avert whatever it was that you did. Can you tell me what transpired on your trip with Vash?”

Picard began to relate the details of his vacation. When he was done Riker said, “Captain, I can’t tell if anything changed. Maybe my memories changed when Joe-our visitor went on his ah, journey. If so, I have no way to tell what’s different-but what you’ve just told me seems to be what I already knew.”

Picard looked into Riker’s eyes. “Will, we have to warn the Federation. Possibly every major power in the Alpha Quadrant. If your…visitor failed to fix my mistake then the Federation is living on borrowed time.” Riker was heartened to see a look of resolve cross Picard’s face, replacing the despair. “I will not let us be destroyed by my actions. They may be the Demons of Air and Darkness but when they come we shall be prepared!” Picard rose from his seat.

Riker cocked an eyebrow at him. “Captain?”

“Number One, excuse me. I’m going to contact Starfleet Command. And then,” he grinned slightly, “I’m going to my quarters to make amends with Vash. Honestly, Number One, I’m not sure which task fills me with more dread.”

Riker lifted his mug in salute. “Good luck with that, Captain.”

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“Who I am is not important right now,” Joe said. “Vash, you have to stop him! Don’t let Captain Picard activate the gate system! Hurry!”

Vash had recovered her composure. “Go ahead and stop him yourself. Jean-Luc gets an idea in his head and nothing stops him.” She put her hands on her hips. “And you never did say who you are.”

“I can’t, the chip…” Joe’s image wavered in a rainbow effect. “The chip is failing. I’m going to …” Joe vanished.

He reappeared in the office labeled “D”. The Everlite was lit and there was the smell of fresh Aruba coffee in the air. Confused, Joe quickly looked around. The man behind the desk smiled at him.

“Hello, Joe,” he said. Joe looked at the nametag on his uniform.

“Daniels!” he gasped. “What is going on? You were dead!”

Daniels smiled at him. "That happens sometimes," he replied.


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Oh, wow...I am finally beginning to get so confused I can hardly follow it anymore...!

Beginning? Really? I'm clearly way ahead then, because I started to get confused half a dozen chapters ago.

It's still quite intriguing though.

And Daniel's last comment was a riot.
 
Loved the scene in the chapter before last where Weyoun Ten gets killed - it was just like a Western, one man tries to make a play only to have the tables turned on him by someone else. So cool! :techman:

And yeah, I'm totally confused! :lol:
 
CHAPTER 14
“Number One, excuse me. I’m going to contact Starfleet Command. And then,” he grinned slightly, “I’m going to my quarters to make amends with Vash. Honestly, Number One, I’m not sure which task fills me with more dread.”

Riker lifted his mug in salute. “Good luck with that, Captain.”

:guffaw: This little bit was wonderfully funny. It brought to mind a line from a favorite of Mr. Whoa Nellie's "The Man Song" by Sean Morey.

"And don't expect any flowers from me! ... because if I'm not mistaken you prefer jewelry."


:techman: This was another very nicely done installment. I'm looking forward to more.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
Just got caught up and am loving the story. the Doctor was always a great character and to see him utilised so here is fantastic - he has a unique perspective as a holograpghic program never mind hundreds of years after the Federation has been destroyed. A truly brilliant story - big in scale and great execution. Just hope Picard can redeem himself - so far he's a bit of wimp in his reaction - then again he has learned he has destroyed the Federation - I guess that would depress anybody
 
Continued greatness here! This story keeps getting more and more complex as the strings of temporal causality woven around Joe Smith pull tighter and tighter. Picard is, of course, beside himself with grief at what he may have unleashed, and Vash is dealing with it the only way she knows how... primarily by not dealing with it.

Now I guess it rests with Vash, and whether she heeded Joe's message or not. The fate of the galaxy in Vash's hands. One shudders to think of it... ;)
 
And here is the finale. I'm probably going to piss a few readers off but this was the ending I've been planning for a couple of months...

CHAPTER 15

“I don’t understand,” said Joe. He glanced around again. “I know where I am but I don’t know when. What is today’s date?”

Daniels continued to grin. “It’s about thirty seconds after you left this office the last time,” he replied.

“So I’m back in my own time?” Joe asked.

“Well, that’s kind of a slippery subject. You’re in your own chronological time. It’s been nearly nine hundred years since the return of Voyager from the Delta Quadrant.”

Joe considered for a moment. “Then Vash was able to stop Captain Picard. Oh, thank God! I was worried that I’d arrived too late.”

Daniels glanced down at his desk for a moment, then lifted his head and said, “Actually, you did and she didn’t.” Joe just looked at him, his mouth hanging open.

“Time is a tricky beast,” Daniels said, “And even when you deal with it as I do on a daily basis,” he smirked a little, “it can get slippery. You returned to your origin time when the chip failed but…” The smirked slipped off of his face. “Time re-adjusted but you didn’t. You remember a time that never was.”

Joe stared at him, confused. “But you said I was too late to, I mean, Vash couldn’t stop Captain Picard…” he trailed off.

Daniels stood up and walked around Joe to the coffee press. He dumped the old grounds and began preparing a new pot. “That’s correct. The Iconian crèche was activated.”

“Well, what happened?” Joe inquired, still somewhat stunned about his recent arrival.

Daniels paused for a moment in what he was doing and glanced back at Joe. “Why, the Iconians eventually attacked the Federation. It wasn’t pretty.” For a moment his eyes grew distant, as he relived old memories. “But you fixed it after everything was lost so, I guess, all’s well that ends well.” He grinned and returned to his task. Pouring water into the press, he squeezed the piston down into the pot.

“From what I saw of this time, the Federation didn’t fare so well. Nor anyone else, for that matter.” Joe crossed his arms over his chest and cocked his head slightly to the side.
“Would you care to explain?”

Daniels stepped back to his desk for his mug. “I’ll do what I can. Things aren’t quite the way you remember around here. You didn’t stop Picard but you did do something almost as important.” He flipped open a paper file lying on the desk and perused it a moment. “Yes, that looks like the key event.” He closed the file and returned to the coffee pot to fill his mug.

Joe just looked at him, perplexed. “What are you talking about?” he asked in an annoyed tone.

“You made a difference just by being there.” Daniels took a sip.

Joe looked at the ceiling. “Well, it wouldn’t be the first time,” he commented.

“You don’t understand. Commander Riker, Picard’s first officer, was emotionally and ethically unable to keep a secret from his Captain. He not only told Picard everything he learned from you, he turned over every bit of evidence that Seven of Nine had gathered about you. That proved useful to my predecessors in Starfleet Temporal Investigations, the precursor to the organization I work for. We were able to track the dead line and predict your re-entry into the primary time stream. That’s why I was here today, in this year, month, day and time to greet you. And it saved the Federation.” He took another sip of his coffee.

Joe just gaped at him. “How did that help?”

“”Picard was depressed at first, not knowing everything that had transpired. He even sent in his resignation but a thoughtful admiral held it up for administrative reasons until after Riker cracked.” Daniels smiled at Joe, and it was as if the sun had come out. “Picard hammered at the Admiralty for years and, when he was finally promoted himself, fought the good fight from the inside. He made Starfleet listen until they were willing to hear the warning he offered. Then he went at the other major powers in the Alpha Quadrant. He formed unions and helped write treaties. By the time he died, the Alpha Quadrant was virtually unified in their quest to find a defense against the Iconians. Ironically, they showed up on his birthday, eighty-one years after his death.” Daniels glanced at the frosted glass of his door. “When the Iconians did show up they got quite the surprise.” He looked at Joe soberly. “We lost an unbelievable amount of people but we stopped them. It made the Borg Incursions of the 24th century look like a children’s brawl in the schoolyard.” He flashed his smile again. “And we only did it because of your warning. Thank you, Joe!” Daniels lifted his mug in a salute.

Joe took a moment to absorb all of this. Finally, comfortable with what he’d heard, he asked, “In the world I found, my ‘other’ self was virtually destroyed.” He grimaced at the unintentional pun and continued, “Is he still…around…now?” The look on his face was almost pathetically eager as he asked this.

“He is,” Daniels answered “but there is someone you might want to meet up with first. You remember I mentioned ‘dead lines’?” Joe nodded. “Well, we have a way to track aberrations in the time stream, uncompleted time lines from their point of divergence to the end. One of our most brilliant, young scientists discovered the method recently in terms of chronological time. Because of him, we could find you and arrange for me to be here to greet you. His work enabled us to ease you out of the dead line and into the primary time line. You’re actually only the second recorded recovery.” Daniels walked to the edge of his desk. “Send him in,” he said aloud.

The door to office ‘D’ opened and a Vulcan in a blue tunic stepped in. He approached Joe and held up his left hand in the Vulcan salute. “Joe Smith, live long and prosper.” It was S’ton. Joe smiled at him.

“I kept my promise to you,” he said. “It is better.” S’ton looked at him with a confused expression on his face. Daniels just grinned.

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Joe stood out in Boothby’s Garden, looking up at the O’Neill habitat ring circling the Earth. He could hear crickets chirping in the distance. He turned his glance towards the Bay, the civilian ships drifting across the water, only identifiable by the running lights that prevented collisions in the night. He looked at the autonomous power supply embedded in his IHP out of habit. Thirty hours until he needed a re-charge. It would allow him to watch the sunrise in a few hours. He smiled, satisfied. Off in the distance he could see the Union Tower where it sat above Starfleet’s headquarters, the spire twisting up into Earth’s lower atmosphere. The reflected moonlight from McKinley Grand lit it up like a candle burning from the inside. Joe thought about all he’d done and smiled. Earth had taken a beating by the Iconians but in the six hundred and fifty or so years since she’d recovered in style. Joe heard footsteps walking down the little side path he’d ventured onto. “Once, a long time ago,” he thought, “I found the bones of dead lovers here. Now, living people stroll down it, enjoying the flowers.” He glanced down at the bench at the arc of the curve. “I wonder how many lovers have sat at this bench?” he thought. The bench he had seen so many years ‘away’ from now looked somehow older , more worn, with the edges smoothed by thousands of occupants. People who had lived because of him. The person walking the path stopped next to Joe. He was dressed in comfortable clothes and had an interesting device attached to his right bicep. It closely resembled the IHP on Joe’s arm. His face reminded Joe of one he’d seen in mirrors.

“Hello,” said The Doctor, “Been here long?” Joe smiled at him. They both looked out at Union Tower. Joe considered for a moment.

“Forever,” he answered.

END

There’s an interesting story behind this story. I will wait for reader comments and then my next post will be a reaction and an explanation that most of you will either find amusing, amazing or interesting. A few may find it sad. Watch for it. :)
 
I promise, this will be next on my reading list; then I'll let ya know what I think!
 
Actually, I think this ending is the best one you could have done. It fits with all the characters involved.
Riker would not be able to keep such a secret from Picard, and Picard, once he knew, would do all in his power to build a force to fight back. Diplomacy on the galactic scale is what Picard has always been good at.

Anything else would have been too neat, I think.

The fact that S'ton survived made me cry.


I've put my thoughts behind a spoiler because I don't want anyone to see my comment before reading the final chapter.

Awesome story :techman:
 
Joe Smith walked through the ruins. Pieces of concrete impeded his way. “900 years,” he thought. “Is that all it took for all of this to go away? What of the dreams we had? Where is our Federation now?” In the distance, a trilling noise answered him, some bird that heard his anguish.

Holy crap, that is one very eye-catching way to start a story! It is very surreal, yes, the flashbacks. And very good work on hitting home the impact the Dominion War had on Betazed, too.
 
CHAPTER TWO

It's the stuff that takes place in San Fran that intrigues me the most -- your Joe, the now returned twin of the holodoc, is a great viewpoint character. The rest is all right, certainly, but I LOVE how you write this San Francisco; you make it come alive, painting in the ruins and the remnants of civilization.

Awesome.
 
An excellent tale, Mistral. That was a masterful weaving of various characters, plots, and timelines, no easy task given the level of complexity you were working with. Very nicely done, sir! :)
 
Time travel stories are notoriously difficult to follow but in a strange way that is also what gives them their appeal. What would Back To The Future have been with an arrow straight plot-line? Boring, probably.

I liked this story for exactly this reason. And of course its epic backdrop. My one and only gripe is probably the same I had in the beginning. The main trigger for this story was that Picard did something I felt was rather stupid and slightly out of character.

It's a minor issue for me however as you more than made up for that with quite an exotic adventure that you took in such wild directions that it turned out to be a surprise at every turn.

The ending felt a tiny bit rushed but I thought it was overall quite befitting the story. The final imagery was especially well done and very complementary to the opening.

Very well done!
 
To echo comments from CeJay it does seem a bit rushed but sometimes you do need to know which bits to tell in a story and which bits are perhaps superfluous. From Joe's perspective he simply would be filled in on the details of what happened though they could have been expanded on.

It is fitting that Picard found a diplomatic solution and it redeems him largely though he did seem to be quite weak and pathetic in being so resigned and defeatist initially. But he came through in the end and showed some character development through the story.

It would maybe have been nice to know if Seven, Riker played any part in the future defence of the Alpha Quadrant since they featured in the story.

Anyway a great story very enjoyable to read.
 
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