That's a very good scale and a good mixture of the design elements. Love the look of the engine "core" too, very very nice. Similar color scheme to the bridge? Going by that image, would the
core color basically be the same as on NX-01, or would it be more that "splash of red" that's on the bridge, too?
I've been toying around with a few ideas as i'm refining details. I want to try and make one more big pass in the next 48 hours and bring her closer to finalised design. I've been tweaking the bridge module, decided to move it a little more close to the Kelvin style B deck. This makes more sense to me given some of the other design influences.
NOTE: A lot of the following is by the seat of my pants and needs to be refined.
I've also been toying with what kind of media this stuff could all actually appear in. I was thinking of a miniseries entitled
Ugly title card/intro test idea.
Key sources of inspiration : From The Earth To The Moon, Crimson Tide, "Star Trek : Crew", and little bits taken from the original 1964 pitch. Also a smidgen from nuBSG, Cosmos, and Interstellar.
Main characters
Captain Robert M April -
A battle-hardended frontier captain recalled to Earth to take charge and personally oversee The Constitution Project. Technically a "Fleet Captain."
Takes charge of the Constitution Program and sets things back on track after five years of floundering. Succeeds in successfully launching The Enterprise on schedule and getting the rest of the ships into full swing production. Commands The Enterprise with distinction for four years before passing her off to Captain Pike.
Doctor Sarah Gorman/April -
Comes along with April mostly as a consultant, but finds herself the chief surgeon on The Enterprise. Plays a crucial role in the plot in the pilot episodes in discovering the identities of the spies trying to sabotage the program. Butt's heads with April during two crucial missions later in the miniseries. Helped to develop modern tricorder technology based on her experiences aboard Enterprise.
Doctor Richard Daystrom -
"The Boy Wonder" who helped develop the revolutionary computer systems found aboard Constitution class starships. Is a key player early on, but leaves the ship mid-series due to political and social pressures.
Engineer Layla Tulley -
Chief engineer aboard the NX-1705 during the "Ticonderoga Incident." Hides her trauma throughout the series until Sarah has to intervene. Becomes the first Chief Engineer of the Enterprise during her maiden voyages.
1.01 "For Which It Stands"
Rumors of corruption, and mismanagement have plagued The Constitution Project for the overlong half a decade that it has been in operation. Everything comes to a head when during a training exercise a tragic accident aboard the NX-1705 Ticonderoga occurs. A massive explosion in her impulse reactors kills 25 engineers on board and turns the ship into a burned out scrap heap.
Fleet Captain Robert April, a hard edged battle tested Starfleet Captain is brought on board to shake out the corruption and lethargy and soon befriends Dr. Richard Daystrom "The Boy Wonder" behind the Constitutions revolutionary computer systems.
1.02 "Among the Red"
On the verge of it's completion, the prototype USS Constitution suddenly explodes during her shakedown cruise. April realizes this was no accident. When mutilated bodies are discovered in the middle of Starfleet, and with one Constitution class ship remaining, it quickly becomes a race to stop the hidden culprits before they destroy the ultimate Federation prize -
NX-1701.
'Director's Commentary' :
For the first two episodes, you're dealing with mostly a cross between a story similar to the movie "Lean On Me" and the miniseries "From the Earth to the Moon." April comes in to wash the walls of the operation and get rid of the people who have basically been falsifying claims of progress. He moves people around, fires others, and brings in other hard-liners to get shit done. He has no time to be political. All on the pretense that the accident would not have occurred had things been in the clear. Daystrom is a good, genius and young man who has basically resigned himself to the corruption around him until he see's April taking people to task and making himself very unpopular in the process.
Lot's of Apollo era inspired imagery here. Especially during the disaster aboard the Ticonderoga. Bulkheads closing, fires, men dying tragically as they slam their hands against the transparency. Heroes rising to save their friends and a lot of mission control type stuff.
Moving into the second episode we would see our characters working together to discover there is more behind the corruption and why we are seeing this destruction now. Spies have infiltrated the project and are actively working to destroy the entire Constitution fleet from within! This part would play a little more like a action-mystery-thriller. Sarah would play a big part in figuring out who is responsible while April and Daystrom attempt to intercept and stop them.
1.03 "Espionage and Matrimony."
As an elite Starfleet recon team makes a critical discovery, the third Constitution prototype has officially been Christened, NCC-1701. For his gallant efforts and service, April is awarded command and begins the task of assembling the first command crew to ever grace The Enterprise. Tulley assumes role as Chief Engineer, Sarah joins as CMO, and Doctor Daystrom joins the crew as a scientific adviser.
1.04 "Thy Sea So Great"
Pushed into service with great pomp and circumstance, Captain April takes command of the Enterprise. Unbeknownst to the rest of the crew, The Enterprise is The Big Stick in an effort to show Federation Rivals, namely the Klingon Empire, that Starfleet means business, and April will find himself relieving a scenario he hadn't face since his Academy days.
1.04 "Event Horizon"
The Enterprise patrols through a hazardous region of space when her computer core suddenly shuts down on a near approach to a blackhole singularity. As Daystrom struggles to find a solution to the computer failure, the crew must work fast to gain manual control of the ship. In the process, a crew member is lost to the black hole.
1.05 "The Boy Wonder"
The Enterprise has returned to Earth in critical condition with jury rigged systems and a travel weary crew. Worried his revolutionary duotronic computer systems may be critically flawed, Daystrom returns to his Earth-bound Academia only to find himself facing ridicule and mockery from his peers. April and Tulley work with Starfleet to get the second wave of Constitution ships ready for launch.
1.06 "80 A.B."
Patrolling an unexplored star system, the crew finds evidence of what they believe to be an ancient civilization, but when landing parties descend on the ruins of a city, they find themselves poisoned with high levels of surface radiation that went undetected by the ships sensor systems. After running refined scans and tests it is discovered the population bombed themselves into extinction only 80 years prior. *
*Based on one of the original pitch episode concepts. In certain respects this episode would act as a foreshadowing to the kind of destruction all out war with the Klingons could bring. April and Sarah spend a great deal of this episode against each other when dealing with the poisoned away teams.
1.07 "War Path"
A splinter group of Klingons, worried for the safety of their homeworld, launch an unsanctioned offensive into Federation territory and begin raids on several Federation Colonial Systems. The Enterprise is relaunched and placed on the front lines, taking part in the infamous Battle of Donatu V.
1.08 "Exit Strategy"
April and crew have grown into a tight knit team over the last year, but emotions run high when Klingon raids see the slaughter of the Archanis IV research outpost. Now they must fight not to merely win a battle, but to prevent interstellar war.
1.09 "Marriage and Mercy."
In the midst of a heated argument over the treatment of Klingon prisoners with Sarah, April shockingly asks for her hand in marriage.
1.10 "Tall Ship"
The Enterprise explores a highly dangerous region of space and makes a
discovery that forever changes some of the crew.
The Constitution fleet was fourteen, not
twelve. Listed in no particular order.
USS Constitution NCC-1700 (initially NX-1700, destroyed in drydock)**
USS Enterprise NCC-1701 (initially NX-1701)
USS Constellation NCC-1017
USS Hood NCC-1703
USS Potemkin NCC-1657
USS Defiant NCC-1764
USS Exeter NCC-1672
USS Intrepid NCC-1631
USS Excalibur NCC-1664
USS Lexington NCC-1709
USS Yorktown NCC-1704
USS Farrugut NCC-1702
USS Ticonderoga NCC 1705 (initially NX-1705, destroyed in drydock.)**
My thoughts/head canon on the construction of the Connies. They were built mostly in trios at two different locations. Some near Mars, some near Earth. Intrepid was built at Vulcan and crewed completely by Vulcans. The first three Earth borne ships were the Constitution, Enterprise, and Ticonderoga. (Defiant would be the 4th, built in Lunar orbit once the facility was repaired after the Ticonderoga incident.)