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Probing beyond Robert Sabaroff's 'The Immunity Syndrome'

No! There is no "real world!!1!" Everything must have an in-universe explanation! :P

Star Trek is unusual in another way. Television itself was still in its infancy, too. And a series with such a radically new "world" was also a novelty. So Star Trek's mistakes were a lesson for productions to come. "Standing on the shoulders of giants."
While television in 1966 might be considered "infancy" relative to television today, for innovation during the infancy of television, it might be worth looking five or ten years earlier to various incarnations of The Ernie Kovacs Show.
 
Television was more in its adolescence in 1966. And as stated above performers like Ernie Kovacs broke far more ground relative to the evolutionary stage of TV at the time. Trek took its cues from stories like Forbidden Planet, TV Westerns and Horatio Hornblower but Kovacs and those like him influenced both humor and television presentation for generations to come and turned early TV on its ear.
 
I don't think I've seen that picture before.
Yeah, it’s not one of the usual suspects. I’ll post a clean copy
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but the TrekCore image might be better.
https://www.trekcore.com/specials/rarephotos3.html
 
Chartreuse Alert would match his command tunic in-universe, irl, and maybe as seen on a Mediterranean console style RCA tv in 1966; but alas not by the time the reruns struck gold.
 
Television was more in its adolescence in 1966. And as stated above performers like Ernie Kovacs broke far more ground relative to the evolutionary stage of TV at the time. Trek took its cues from stories like Forbidden Planet, TV Westerns and Horatio Hornblower but Kovacs and those like him influenced both humor and television presentation for generations to come and turned early TV on its ear.
Even Steve Allen, quite the Herbert in some ways, could be surprisingly subversive.
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As we seen in Network (1976), the maverick early days of television took place in the mid-1950s.
 
Yeah, there'd have been no Johnny Carson, David Letterman, Jay Leno or any other talk show host interviewing famous guests at a desk and with acerbic wit without Steve Allen. He was the prototype for every other legend that followed.
 
already knowing there was danger at hand, the alert would normally be called before ordering beaming the thing aboard ship
Disagree. They didn't know that there was a danger ahead that could destroy ships until after they had brought the recorder-marker aboard. KIrk called the alert based on that and then explained to the crew why the crew was on alert once he reached the bridge, where he mentions the very same reason.

I also disagree with the assertion that alert automatically means emergency. Having served on three different Navy vessels during my active and reserve career, I can tell you that that is a false premise.

And, in cases like Star Trek - where the writing is for the most part very tight - when the realities of the heavy-hand of advertiser dollars needs trumps story-needs, it really shows; but without those advertiser dollars, there wouldn't have been a show - so, it's usually can't-win scenario for the writers.
Blame the editor then, because the pilot was edited for TV after the show was bought by NBC.

Just ask Harlan Ellison.
Ellison is an egotistical jerk; I wouldn't ask him for the time of day. :guffaw:

ETA:I didn't realized he had passed. Thanks for the heads up, @cooleddie74
 
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In the US Navy, there are five:
Condition I - General Quarters, all hands at battle stations

Condition II - Modified General Quarters, used in large ships to permit some relaxation among personnel

Condition III - Wartime Cruising, generally one third of the crew is on watch, and strategic stations are manned or partly manned. (e.g. weapons)

Condition IV - Optimum Peacetime Cruising, provides adequate watch manning, provides personnel economy. It is normal peacetime cruising condition.

Condition V - Not normally a condition, IN-PORT ROUTINE.


Not alerts but material conditions of readiness, i.e, increased level of water-tightness, with X-RAY being the least and ZEBRA the most. Each watertight door and hatch is labeled X, Y or Z and are required to be dogged closed if that level of readiness is set.

X-RAY allows YOKE and ZEBRA to be open, YOKE allows only ZEBRA to be open and ZEBRA requires all to be closed. Regardless of material condition, a log is kept in the Damage Control Office on whether a hatch or door is dogged open or close.

ETA: Material conditions of readiness are tied to the 'alerts' above but can also be set in other circumstances, such as UNREP ops, high-traffic areas or bad weather.
I of course oversimplified and failed to call out the distinction.


Be alert.
The world needs more lerts.
My friend Jennifer used to say that back in the 70s.
 
I of course oversimplified and failed to call out the distinction
My intent wasn't to correct, per se, but to clarify. Your initial point about there being multiple levels of alert is still valid. A key point of my post that I should have emphasized is that GQ, war-time cruising, etc, affect how a ship is manned and material conditions of readiness do not.

(And in fairness, I also simplified; I didn't talk about the implementation of the "circle" versions of X-RAY, YOKE and ZEBRA, or Dog ZEBRA, or WILLIAM and Circle WILLIAM.)
 
Back on topic..I think part of this discussion is Ship Sensors versus Probes versus Manned Ships. From The Immunity Syndrome:
CHEKOV: Captain I have just completed a full long-range scan of Gamma Seven-A system. It is dead.
KIRK: Dead? It's a fourth magnitude sun. There are billions of inhabitants there.
CHEKOV: It is dead.
KIRK: No. You'd be able to see stars through a dust cloud. Looks like a hole in space. Readings, Mister Spock.
SPOCK: Still not able to analyse, Captain. Sensors are feeding data to the computers now. Whatever this dark zone is, it lies directly in line with the course I calculate for the Intrepid and the Gamma Seven-A system.
KIRK: Spock, give me an update on the dark area ahead.
SPOCK: No analysis due to insufficient information.
With the space ameba, vision and ship sensors can't penetrate it's zone of blackness. Since Chekov was able to scan the Gamma Seven-A system and confirm its is "dead", we can assume one of two things, one, the ameba has passed through the system, moved on and left it behind, or two, "dead" meant that no information was seen and the star system was simply masked behind the zone. The zone size is not given, but it seems to be around 1 AU to solar system size since later we find out that the ameba itself is planet size.
KIRK: Mister Chekov, prepare to launch a telemetry probe into that zone. Direct computer feed to Mister Spock.
CHEKOV: Aye, sir. Probe ready. Switching data feed to library computer.
KIRK: Launch probe.
CHEKOV: Probe launched, sir.
(A high pitched sound comes over the speakers.)
KIRK: What was that?
UHURA: The telemetry probe, sir. There's no signal from it.
Telemetry inside the zone can't be detected outside the zone. But once inside the zone, telemetry and vision works:
KIRK: Prepare to launch a probe, Mister Chekov.
CHEKOV: Aye, sir. Probe ready for launch, sir.
SPOCK: Getting very confused readings, Captain, but this is definitely the source of the energy drain.
KIRK: Launch probe.
CHEKOV: Probe launched, sir.
SPOCK: Probe will impact in seven point three seconds.
KYLE: Six, five, four, three, two, one.
(The ship shudders.)
KIRK: Are we still in contact with the probe?
CHEKOV: Yes, sir. Data being relayed to Mister Spock.
SPOCK: Readings coming in now, Captain. Length, approximately eleven thousand miles. Width varying from two thousand to three thousand miles. Outer layer studded with space debris and waste. Interior consists of protoplasm, varying from a firmer gelatinous layer to a semi-fluid central mass. Condition, living.
MCCOY: Perhaps we could risk the shuttlecraft. Perhaps with a protective shield
KIRK: I'm not sending anyone anywhere. Unmanned probes can give us the information we need to destroy this thing, if it can be destroyed.
SPOCK: I must differ with you, Captain. We have sent unmanned probes into it. They have given us some information but they have not told us what we need to know, and we cannot afford the power to take blind shots at it, hoping to kill it.
MCCOY: We could send one man in, pinpoint its vulnerable spots.
KIRK: Captain's personal log, stardate 4309.2. We have established that the thing which destroyed the USS Intrepid and the Gamma Seven=A system is an incredibly huge but simple cellular being whose energies are totally destructive to all known life. Both Mister Spock and Doctor McCoy have volunteered to go in a specially equipped shuttlecraft to penetrate the cell, find a way to destroy it, and free the ship.
SPOCK: Power drain is enormous and growing worse.
KIRK: Chekov.
(Chekov goes to the science station.)
SPOCK [OC]: Diverting all secondary power to the shields. (McCoy enters) I'll continue communications as long as there is power to transmit.
KIRK: This thing has a negative energy charge. Everything seems to work in reverse. We'll use anti-matter.
SCOTT: Aye, it couldn't swallow that.
KIRK: Mister Chekov, prepare a probe. Scotty, we'll need a magnetic bottle for the charge. How soon?
SCOTT: It's on its way, sir.
KIRK: Mister Chekov, we'll use a timing detonator for the probe. Work out a setting.
CHEKOV: Aye, sir.
KIRK: Helmsman, when do you estimate arrival at nucleus?
KYLE: Seven minutes, sir.
MCCOY: How close are you going to it?
KIRK: Point blank range. We'll implant it then back away.
MCCOY: Why? The probe has a range of
KIRK: With the eddies and currents in that protoplasm, the probe could drift thousands of kilometres. We must be exactly on target, because we won't have a second chance.
The difference between the probe and manned shuttlecraft is firstly, the shuttlecraft has shields and has a more capable drive to travel around inside the ameba. This could also imply longer lasting due to its more powerful power systems. Also, the specially equipped sensors may be more diverse and powerful implying they take up more space than a probe can carry. Up to this point in the series, TOS has not demonstrated full robotic control of shuttlecraft, so, the man interface will be needed. To precisely target a probe, the Enterprise needed to get point blank due to eddies and currents that the probe's weak drive system can't handle.
I find it interesting that this episode showed the audience the progression of sensors-to-probes-to-manned ships to investigate the space ameba. Good science fiction writing! :techman:
 
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