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OT: My Design Logo

Tiberius Jim

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I thought that aside from close friends and family that I would "debut" my personal graphic design portfolio logo here. It took me a while to finally come up with just a concept for a logo and have just been using a wordmark until now. Anyway, here's my logo for my portfolio and (currently unfinished) website, James Hodge Design. Let me know what you think.

logo_whiteonblack.jpg

On dark background

logo_blackonwhite.jpg

On light background
logo_full.jpg

"Full" logo
 
I also like it :techman:

I am concerned, though, about the thin text being lost if you scale it down to, say, a half inch for a business card or other print media

I used to work in a print shop, and we frequently had to touch up customer's artwork so that the text wouldn't be lost when it went to press
 
I like the logo, FC. But as backstept has pointed out, the text might be a little too thin. The same goes for the lines deviding the three segments of the logo. They look a little too thin; I guess a printer wouldn't be able to display that.
 
I'm usually more a fan of logo's that don't incorporate such important details as the first letters of the "company" name; should you change the name, the logo will have to change as well. Apart from that, it's a nice one, and the ditching ofthe gradient helped a lot :)
 
The logo looks "cool" enough, but the strategist in me wants to see how it'll be applied to / used within a larger brand scheme. Is there any chance that we might see a stationery package, some kind of ad or other collateral piece, to see the logo (and your other conventions) "in context"?
 
I'm usually more a fan of logo's that don't incorporate such important details as the first letters of the "company" name; should you change the name, the logo will have to change as well. Apart from that, it's a nice one, and the ditching ofthe gradient helped a lot :)

Well, I don't think I'll be changing my name any time soon. :)

The logo looks "cool" enough, but the strategist in me wants to see how it'll be applied to / used within a larger brand scheme. Is there any chance that we might see a stationery package, some kind of ad or other collateral piece, to see the logo (and your other conventions) "in context"?

I have been doing some preliminary work on business cards. It can also be seen in context on my website, which is almost fully functional.
 
The logo looks "cool" enough, but the strategist in me wants to see how it'll be applied to / used within a larger brand scheme. Is there any chance that we might see a stationery package, some kind of ad or other collateral piece, to see the logo (and your other conventions) "in context"?

I have been doing some preliminary work on business cards. It can also be seen in context on my website, which is almost fully functional.

I don't usually evaluate brands by their web implementations, since branding is often rooted out of the average (especially B2B) website by important considerations of the medium. Search engine optimization, clear and standard navigation, correct rendering on alternate/text/auditory browsers and systems, variable screen sizes and resolutions, light-based color contrast (and color blindness), and etc, all tend to squeeze out the finer details that make a creative piece branded.

It's gotten to a point in which a great many websites have become templatized; sacrificed creativity in favor of maximized usability. The main evidence of brand being a logo, color scheme, perhaps a few detail points like backgrounds, bullet shapes/colors, icons, and prominent images (like front-page slideshows).

Whether templatization is a good thing or not is a different topic. But for the purposes of your topic:

If you're looking for compliments only, you might consider reading no further. If you do read on, please consider my 2 cents as unsolicited advice that you should feel free to throw away if you don't agree. I won't be hurt. :)

I believe the logo's use in this setup is a bit too overt. It seems to draw attention to it in a rather unnatural way. People tend to read websites in an F Pattern, and the logo, being an object of significant prominence within the design (perhaps too significant?) disrupts that pattern by drawing attention outside the pattern.

I don't know how you intend to use the logo in other works, but, for the site, I would suggest disconnecting it from the navigation bar and using it in a less prominent way. Ideally, the logo's placement should be subtle - used as something people will recognize as an identifier of work, but not a part major of that work itself.

Think about your message first, and design second. The layout, to my eyes at least, screams "You are on James Hodge's Website!" with "View the portfolio," "Here's how to contact the artist," and etc only as secondary elements. Is this really the prioritization you want -- especially given that most people will probably know they're on your website?

I also find that it helps to design a complete campaign along with a brand. Even if other elements never get used because of time or budget, they're helpful to have, and you can mix and match components -- as in the case of an ad appearing on the front-page of a website, or a corporate brochure layout being reused for an email campaign.

Good luck!
 
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