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November Challenge: Bad Faith

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November 2007 Writing Challenge: Bad Faith

Maximum Length: 5000 words

Contest Begins: When this is posted

Contest Ends and Voting Begins: 1200 EST 28 November

Voting Ends: 1200 EST 1 December

This month's challenge will be to write a story in which bad faith forms a central element.

This can mean one of two things.

On the one hand, your story can revolve around a character or characters who are deceived and betrayed by others.

Or, for a greater challenge and a more character-driven story, it can revolve around a character or characters who deceive and betray themselves--especially by refusing to recognize their own essential nature, or their own freedom of action. (This, IIRC, is the original existentialist meaning of mauvaise foi--bad faith)

For an example of the latter, consider the classic Clint Eastwood Western Unforgiven, which is full of characters who deceive themselves (and others) and act in bad faith.

On the one hand, the old killer William Munny lies to himself throughout the movie, telling himself that his late wife reformed him, that he's not really a bad man anymore, and that their mission to kill the two cowboys will have no consequences. On the other hand, the young Scofield Kid lies to himself and others that he really is a bad man--a hardened killer who can shoot a man without a second thought.

In the end, both Munny and the Scofield Kid are forced to confront their own self-deception and its consequences. The Kid shoots one of the cowboys, and is shattered by the experience: this forces him to realize that killing is a terrible thing, and that his carefully-cultivated persona is a lie.

Munny, on the other hand, loses his friend Ned, and is forced to realize that he hasn't reformed at all: that he's just as bad as he ever was, and that his decision to accept the 'contract' on the cowboys has led to the death of a good man who truly had reformed.

Distraught, Munny rides into town to avenge his friend, and to atone for his own actions by committing "suicide by sheriff's posse." But he winds up surviving--mostly because the members of the posse have also been fooling themselves about their own toughness, and are unable to cope with a truly violent, dangerous gunfighter.

Either approach is acceptable--you can even combine the two, if you're feeling ambitious. But some sort of deception and betrayal must be central to your story.

Okay--ready? Then--WRITE!
 
I don't know about the challenge, but you've made me want to watch Unforgiven again!

(must remember the closing date isn't the 30th Nov :) )
 
trampledamage said:
I don't know about the challenge, but you've made me want to watch Unforgiven again!

:lol:

I think I made myself want to watch Unforgiven again.

(must remember the closing date isn't the 30th Nov :) )

Yes. I wanted three full days for voting, without going too far into December.
 
I think It'll take a week or so for me to process the challenge..wow.. Now I remember why they call it challenge and not monthly easy story exercise.

Thanks..

And BTW no bad feelings on the close victory, my main concern with my story was that it would highlight the weknesses of TOS, which it did more than I planned, as I actually enjoy watching it.

Anyway, onto the challenge.
 
Dulak said:
I think It'll take a week or so for me to process the challenge..wow.. Now I remember why they call it challenge and not monthly easy story exercise.

Thanks..

No problem. I could make it more complicated, if you want.

"Write a 100-word drabble that explores Sartre's dictum that 'existence precedes essence.' Ready? Go!"

And BTW no bad feelings on the close victory, my main concern with my story was that it would highlight the weknesses of TOS, which it did more than I planned, as I actually enjoy watching it.

Cool. :thumbsup: I really did enjoy your story. That's why I voted for it!

Anyway, onto the challenge.

Excellent. I expect great things from you.
 
ANOTHER negative topic??????? I can't think of how I could POSSIBLY turn this to humor! *talking to self* Unless... No. I've already used that idea. Or maybe... Oh God that would be hard to decide on! And who would be involved? I could use... Aww man I don't want to use HIM! *is done expressing inner thoughts publicly for now*

This'll be tough. And I haven't participated in a challenge for a while, so I want to do one. But for the record... do practical jokes count as deception?

Or perhaps... hehehehe. That would be tricky, but potentially possible! No wait... if I did that then in the end no one would be decieved or betrayed. *is really done thinking out loud in this post now.*
 
^I HATE writing negative drama. That's why. Things either must be funny or have a happy ending.
 
K-Star said:
^I HATE writing negative drama. That's why. Things either must be funny or have a happy ending.

I would consider a triumph over bad faith a happy ending--wouldn't you?
 
K-Star said:
^I HATE writing negative drama. That's why. Things either must be funny or have a happy ending.
Life is pain. :( Abandon hope....

Or, to put it another way: "Oh, quit your moaning. That's why your deities gave you two kneecaps. That was your kneecap, right? Right?" :devil:

- Pava Lar'ragos, circa 1980 AD, Terran Calendar.

Seriously, though, how can you hope to create any dramatic tension in your stories if everything is either slapstick silly or always ends on a happy note for all concerned? That completely eliminates the ‘reality’ factor from your narrative, and leaves the reader without the means to feel empathy or concern for your characters.
 
Time to dust off the pen and paper, I need to get a few ideas down. I'm keeping mine in-universe with the Dauntless series and since the word count is acceptable to the little vignettes I'm doing, maybe one of them could be the challenge entry...
 
K-Star said:
ANOTHER negative topic???????

'Another'?

As captcalhoun demostrated quite well, the challenge I posed was quite amenable to humour. Camelopard's winning entry is also very funny. :)

Anyway, I think - and one is free to correct me if I'm wrong - that Camelopard's definition of bad faith extends to basic deception and lies. And lying to cover up something is a classic comedic technique. Everything from Plautus to Frasier's got it. ;)

I've sketched a few ideas; trouble is they have nothing to do with each other. Oh well, I'm sure I'll pick one out and coalesce it into something, or they'll run into each other and produce a glorious mess...
 
Well here's something I had in mind... There was going to be this one little descriptive fic, almost poetic in nature, that I had planned on writing for the hell of it. I could incorporate the kind of deception involved in a practical joke, but the way the main story turns out is that the prank never occurs because the one who would be pranked decides not to show up. Though I guess since the intent was always there it's still deception/betrayal... right?
 
Just can't get the staff these days. I remembered to unpin the old one... and got distracted!
 
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