To start,
I think I've said before that I find the R-S's to be the best Trek writers ever, so I really want to like this book, but I haven't heard anything that makes me think it'll be good. So, like, say something (specific) that's good about it.
I agree, and most of this book was presumably written by then. From there:
So tell us some things you liked about it.
One of them is the talent the Reeves-Stevens have for running 3 or 4 different intriguing storylines and competently weaving them together for a satisfying ending. We start with a conspiracy young Spock investigaes involving Sarek stealing things, Kirk stealing a car with his girlfriend, Kirk's brother getting into trouble, and an investigation by Starfleet Command Intelligence of the conpsiracy Spock was investigating. These all get put together in an interesting way. Plus, my favorite part was a pretty neat investigation of how Kirk had been deeply emotionally scarred by his experience on Tarsus IV, told through flashbacks in the story, and that gets brought into the present too. Kirk learns something about himself through the course of the book- in a way much like Best Destiny, but in my opinion more interesting- and comes to terms with the Tarsus incident.
There's also a beautifully written scene between Kirk's father and the Starfleet intelligence guy about how Tarsus had affected Jim Kirk, and in turn his father. Kirk goes in a believable way from troubled teen to up-and-coming cadet. Plus the action scenes are good. Say what you will about Kirk and Spock stealing the Enterprise (and they're allowed to by Starfleet as part of these conspiracy scehmes, they don't just go and take it with no one trying to stop them) - it was exciting to read. Plus, the identity of the person manipulating the antagonists is left open in an intriguing way to pick up on in future novels
I would say that for me, the whole "small-universe" thing, not only Kirk and Spock meeting back then, but also cadet Kirk getting the Enterprise before anyone ever knew he would be commanding it (why didn't he get some other Connie, like the Lexington or Constellation?) is just to frustrating a coincidence for me. It's like Smallville; some of the same circumstances, just younger.
I suppose, but on the other hand, I like those sorts of coincidences. Think of Crossover, for example; wasn't it neat that Scotty got to use the cloaking device he helped steal? More to the point, why would they put it aboard the Constellation, for instance? If they did people would probably complain about howo they could have used the Enterprise instead. In any event the identity of the ship doesn't matter too much within the context of the story, so, why not the Enterprise? Give it a different name in your own mind if you want. Best Destiny used the Enterprise too. In fact, ,a whole lot of Trek stories use the Enterprise.
The Kirk-Spock thing makes more sense- after all, there's some reason why they're close friends, isn't there?
And I don't really buy young Kirk being so rebellious. Where's the "stack of books with legs" that Mitchell talked about. I've never seen any indication ever onscreen that Kirk would've been like that.
He develops into someone more like that character by the end; presumably after whatever story arc Shatner and co. go through he would be that character. Kirk was written very similarly in Best Destiny too; as long as you leave him an eager cadet going into Starfleet, it doesn't contradict anything onscreen to have him be a rebellious teenager becuase of Tarsus IV, and then learn something about himself along the way and develop into the stack of books with legs. No one ever said Kirk was an exemplary teenager.