I just saw the "Comedian" episode; and I gottya ask - did the producers just use a checklist because it just seems they were adding elements associated with previous TZ incarnations, but have ZERO CLUE why the elements are there or how they were effectively used to create a story with a point (as this partiocular story IMO really had none.)
I also gotta ask, given his girlfriend (who's life he changed by removing her mentor) broke up with him and moved out months before his 'final' standup routine; HTF did she suddenly show up at said routine with the notebook of people he thought sould be 'removed'? What? Did she suddenly forget that she left something at his apartment, broke in and decidied to rummage through the place, as well as a nondescript notebook he left lying around in there.
Plus the final scene where the 'Demon Comic' (my term as I don't recall what he was called) shows up and starts talking to the actually funny (I say that because she was supposedly the best comic in the place prior to what the Demon Comic did for the main character who WAS originally not funny at all) black female comic made little sense as she was already quite successful - so again the whole thing just seems random with a lot of previous TZ elements because "TZ" -- but zero clue as to what actually makes a good TZ type story. Plus at nearly 1 hour, it was too long for what they had in it.
Made me not want to bother with any of the other episodes.
I also gotta ask, given his girlfriend (who's life he changed by removing her mentor) broke up with him and moved out months before his 'final' standup routine; HTF did she suddenly show up at said routine with the notebook of people he thought sould be 'removed'? What? Did she suddenly forget that she left something at his apartment, broke in and decidied to rummage through the place, as well as a nondescript notebook he left lying around in there.
Plus the final scene where the 'Demon Comic' (my term as I don't recall what he was called) shows up and starts talking to the actually funny (I say that because she was supposedly the best comic in the place prior to what the Demon Comic did for the main character who WAS originally not funny at all) black female comic made little sense as she was already quite successful - so again the whole thing just seems random with a lot of previous TZ elements because "TZ" -- but zero clue as to what actually makes a good TZ type story. Plus at nearly 1 hour, it was too long for what they had in it.
Made me not want to bother with any of the other episodes.