Roman Reviews "Resistance" (Hey - Alliteration!)
I finished J.M. Dillard’s Resistance the other day, and took a bit of time to gather my thoughts. It’s a hell of a ride, fast paced all the way through, but also rather bumpy. Ultimately, looking at the whole package, I’d have to say that there’s more I disliked about the book than otherwise, despite the break-neck pace and (mostly) engrossing plot. There were just too many moments that make me go ‘guh?’, too many… not exactly holes in the plot, but by the end of the novel there’s so much suspension of disbelief that has to occur you could build a bridge out of it (get it? Suspension bridge? Oh, never mind.)
I guess I should start with the Borg. If the goal of this book was to make the Borg scary again, as I’ve heard comments to the effect of, let me say this was a spectacular failure. I understand that the intent was to rob the Borg of their predictability, but mindlessly violent, stupid Borg are less threatening than predictable Borg with the full drive of the Collective at their disposal. And the big ‘shock’ that the Borg now kill on sight is just disappointing. One of the great things about the Borg is that they weren’t like your usual sadistic, bloodthirsty villains; standing against them is like standing against a natural disaster: vast, impersonal, without malice but devastatingly destructive. Voyager did a good job fleshing the Borg out, giving context to the imperatives that drive the hive mind. And though survivable, assimilation, and the menace of a zombie-like existence fighting your former peers, is still a more frightening prospect than death. Resistance tosses all that out, and for what? Borg with the mentality of berserkers (although it was nice to finally see all those serrated appendages put to logical use – I always wondered what function those spindly doodads were supposed to serve).
And dumb. It’s been, what, two or three years since “Endgame”? Does it really take that long to create a new queen, or did doing so only just occur to them recently? Bad luck, that—by sheer coincidence, the Enterprise just happened to be in the neighbourhood. By book tries to make the point that the Borg are programmed to protect the queen, but they don’t put much effort into it, do they? Even after two infiltration attempts and assimilating Picard, it never occurs to them to actually raise shields to prevent anybody else from beaming over and trying again! And why wouldn’t the Borg be able to see through a cloak? Not exactly the advanced technological menace we think they are, if they can’t detect a ship under a slapped-together cloaking field.
The Borg themselves are oddly portrayed, and the fact that they are severed from the Collective and thus erratic can only explain so much. Even if you’re protecting the queen at all costs, it’s not resources effective to kill intruders—if you’re close enough to cut into them with your appendages, then you’re close enough to launch assimilation tubules, which will disable their victim pretty quickly. And since when do the Borg have proprietary DNA? To the best of my knowledge, assimilation hijacks body and mind, but it doesn’t re-write the victim’s genetic code. You’re still the same species you are before—we’ve seen plenty of examples of Borg drones retaining their characteristic racial features (Klingons, Bajorans, etc).
For that matter, you’re still the same sex, which is another point Resistance trips on. The Borg are genderless, yes; they don’t reproduce biologically, so a drone’s a drone regardless of the victim’s prior gender identity. But sex is physical and doesn’t disappear any more than species; there are assimilated men and women (Seven was clearly female when still part of the Collective, as was the Bajoran from “Brief Candle”, etc.), and if they ever get to assimilate Andorians, chan drones and zhen drones and all the rest. So why would they need to ‘feminize’ a drone rather than using a drone that’s already female? For that matter, why feminize a drone at all? I always thought that the whole ‘queen’ thing was just a conceit to the insect analogy; the body is artificial, so only the controlling mind matters, and sex has little impact there—at least, the biological differences in brain construction between the sexes can’t be greater than that between species, and obvious the Borg would need to have conquered that problem a long time ago. Personally, I think the whole notion to the queen needing to develop in ‘royal jelly’ was taking the analogy too far, and a ‘testosterone poison’ was just silly given how hard to swallow the initial premise was to begin with.
The plot suffers from an overabundance of such cutesy, rabbit-out-of-the-hat solutions. The aforementioned cloak is another example. Suddenly, the schematics for building a cloaking device that would work on a Federation starship happen to be in the computer, and the device itself is so astoundingly rudimentary that it can be replicated, assembled and installed on a starship in the space of a few hours. I guess cloaking scientists in the Romulan Empire must be bored a lot of the time if the technology is that basic and universally compatible. Then again, it’s not the full starship, because Worf orders saucer separation. Frankly, I didn’t know the E-E could do that, though I admit that might have been established elsewhere and I missed it (although the Sovereign-class looks a lot more integral and compact than swan-necked Galaxy ever did). But why do it? He tells T’Lana that if they see the Borg coming—meaning the rest had failed in their mission—to turn tail and run to the nearest starbase. Uh, great, except how does that work without warp engines? If you can see the Borg, they’ve certainly seen you, and since they’re on a ‘destroy everything human’ mission, the saucer section would be pretty much done for, so that’s really quite useless.
Another surprise: Crusher just happens to have the Locutus line of accessories with her. I guess she kept them in sickbay for ten years and across at least one change of starship and a stint at Starfleet Medical… just in case Picard gets nostalgic for his days as a homicidal zombie, I guess. Certainly I would have imagined Locutus’ parts would have been at a dedicated Borg research center. But hey, while we’re on the topic, how about Picard’s out-of-left-field decision to turn back into Locutus. Well, maybe that’s an exaggeration, but certainly it’s the kind of decision that we ought to see some precursors for and not sprung on the reader for dramatic effect. I actually don’t think it was a bad plan—we’ve seen that kind of subterfuge work with the Borg before (“Unimatrix Zero”) and it’s creative enough that the individualism-blind Borg might not have immediately developed countermeasures—with one exception: Picard was the last person on that ship that should have carried out such a mission. Locutus is, after all, one of the rare Borg individuals, and as such would very recognizable to other Borg. Hey, there’s Locutus walking down the corridor! When did he get back, and how come I can’t hear him in the Collective? That Picard managed to get away with it as long as he did is a testament to just how deeply stupid these new Borg are.
On the character front, that was mostly good. T’Lana as a voice of dissent could work, though I admit by the end I was getting a bit annoyed at how mule-headedly she clung to her views, and I have to wonder about somebody who claims to have reached a degree of comfort with emotional decision making but can’t suppress obvious emotional reactions to Worf because of his allegedly emotional command style (Worf? Come on, he might do things in the heat of the moment from time to time, like that thing with Jadzia, but overall there are scarecrows less stuffy than Worf). Battaglia and Nave were well fleshed out for redshirts, but it was pretty obvious that redshirts they were (Battaglia when he recounted his past experiences with the Borg, Nave when the author introduced her with an info-dump of how super-dee-duper Nave was instead of fleshing out the character gradually like she did T’Lana). I’ll agree with those who found Janeway out of character—she should know better than most not to take any threat of the Borg lightly, particularly since she has actually had a Borg-related crisis even after ‘killing’ the queen. Then coming down on Picard like that, after he succeeded… weird. I can understand being angry that her orders were defied, but to get all anal about the chain of command after Picard had come through for them all is hypocritical at best. I hope this is part of some plot arc for Janeway, like Shakaar’s odd behaviour was (though I would imagine Janeway's will be a little less fatal, ha).
Wow. I’m looking back at all the above now, and its pretty dang critical. It’s just that there were so many of these individual ‘bumps’ in the story. Because Resistance did keep me interested, coming back for more, which is a hell of a step up on the dull Death in Winter. The scenes on the cube, particularly in the last mission, were gripping, and I liked that I couldn’t tell who would live and die among the extras.
Also, I want to make particular mention of how well done the Picard/Crusher dynamic was. Death in Winter totally failed to make an impact on the relevance of their now being a couple. But their opening scene together—the tranquil, comfortable love—was a sensible depiction of a friendship evolved, and I was surprised to find myself pleased that they had finally found some happiness. No torrid melodrama here, but the deep caring of two mature individuals. Even the later scenes, when Picard goes off on a risky mission, are commendable for avoiding any radical shifts in temperament from either of them, keeping them professional—after all, they’ve always cared about each other, so really not much has changed. Resistance does a good job keeping that in perspective.
Fictitiously yours, Trent Roman