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My Star Trek CONFESSION

FOXHOT - You're right LOL!! Have you ever been to an Opera an actually witnessed one of those endings. wherein they lower the big black box down on ropes, with one of those horn-helmet ladies inside, and she waves her sword around, and everything just,.. sort of,... ends? LOL!

Yep, you pegged it,... same thing LOL!
 
FOXHOT - Woah,.. nice!

You know, I always wanted to date one of the Opera Diva with the pointy, steel Brassiere.

I can't explain the whole Valkyrie attraction thing LOL!

So, are we done with 'And The Children Shall Lead'?, and are you ready to pop open another so-called, 'Classic Stinker' and see what makes it tick?
 
FOXHOT - Well, in that case,... ahem,... let's press onwards to the next one.

As the guest of honor. FOXHOT, would you choose the next so-called 'Classic Stinker', and start the ball rolling with your opening dissertation, and we'll start the process of analysis to determine exactly where and how the episode of your choice went off the rails.

Thanks.
 
There is ONE episode of classic TREK I feverishly hate beyond all others, even though it has an unusual appealing guest character and a good moral message involving the friendship of the Big Three. It's THE EMPATH. I'm not sure I'm in the mood to begin a dissertation on it, but I'd be delighted to begin a back-and-forth discussion on why watching corpses decompose is ten times as entertaining. Here are some of the things in it I hate most:

The unrelenting low-budget darkness from scene to scene.

The trickery of the false escape in Act Two, making us believe we'll see some actual sets, with the tacky illusion of Scotty pretending to save the others (Scotty never saves ANYBODY in the third season), then taking that all away before plunging us all back into darkness.

Act Two's abysmal-beyond-belief moments of Shatner's facial grimaces while listening to the emotional, slowed-down music. I couldn't tell whether I was watching an Ivory Snow commercial or an enema in progress.

And especially the endless, TORTUROUSLY long fourth act eternity in which Kirk and Spock do nothing, held back by a bunch of pink energy.

Plus, the aliens get away with torture AND two deaths, and we're supposed to understand their reasoning for preparing Gem to save her world? Needs of the many or not, I found it grossly offensive......just as I did the end of THE MARK OF GIDEON, in which the guest star blonde will survive, and best of all, infect her offscreen population and cut down on the population. I'm very confused at these sort of messages.

Begin!

FOXHOT - I am really happy you picked 'The Empath', as I, also feeling it was the biggest stinker of the all, watched this episode last night! - and I have a very different perspective on the premise than the one I held since I first saw it.

This should make for a good on,... much 'meat' to go through!

Good opening opinion on your part, but before we dig in,

Let us re-establish our 'Rules of Analysis':


1) We are looking at premise, script, and story elements which failed to translate as satisfying in the end.

2) We must not point to bad acting, scenery, or an obviously cheap-hokey props,.. although they are everywhere - as no actor, scenery, or prop has the power to bring about a BAD FABLE.

3) To keep things orderly, I suggest we work through in Chronological Order, so as to cover all bases, and avoid jumping about.

4) Keep firmly in our minds to try not to BASH, but to reveal weaknesses, to learn where and how it went bad, and how it could have worked, but ultimately failed as an aired episode.

Okay, that's what I suggest, and I want to get your thoughts on the above before I comment.

Please amend, alter, approve, or what-have-you to the guidelines above, signaling we are ready.

Thanks
 
FOXHOT - LOL!!! BRILLIANT observation,.... "Vanish in reverse order of star billing" LOL!! Of course, the camera usually closes on KIRK,.. but having never noticed what you are pointing out, is hysterical.

I wonder if the actors fought over this point LOL!

TEASER:

I really like the straight forward set-up, well motivated, and very clean.

I always like seeming those little steel research huts out on those lonely planets,... gives real substance to the completeness of what SFC is doing besides fighting Klingons.

The motive for the story is a good one; Evacuation, plus we have the all important mystery of what became of the research team.

Furthermore, I am even good with the idea of the cosmic eays being emitted by the giant solar-flare - good tie back to the set-up - which of course causes SCOTTY to drive away with the ship, isolating KIRK and crew in the story.

I am even good with KIRKs justification for not beaming back to the ship.

So except for the incredible dust and cob-web build up in just three months time (LOL!) I really like the background and set-up on this episode.

The like the use of the classic 'foreshadowing the doom' with seeing the playback tape left behind (same thing used in The Omega Glory).

However, rather than have KIRK, SPOCK, and McCOY being kidnapped in the teaser, I would have preferred to see the mystery investigated - WITH THE FEAR of being kidnapped looming over their heads, as the story unfolds, while K,S, and McC, are picked-off, one by one, PLAYING THIS OUT AS ACT I, and the hold back the revealing 'GEM' at all, until all are assembled together again at the beginning of ACT II.

Other than that (!),.. I am good with it so far -except for the over playing of dust and cob-webs denoting only 3 months with no house-keeping LOL!
 
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