My entry for Enterprise-F contest

[Redstang]

Okay, this is for a contest to design the next enterprise-f for star trek online. Its being done in conjunction with CBS so the winning design will be the official enterprise-f. I just heard about this contest yesterday, and here is my first real quick sketch's of my ship. Please be brutally honest, and tell me what you think.

These are early sketch's and some of the details are not the same. The last images were the first sketch's while the first image is the latest. I think im partial to the more rounded saucer section in the fourth drawing than in the first and third, but tell me what yall think.


Here is how it will be judged

50 percent for originality
25 percent for adaptability to star trek history
25 percent for creativity

Please be brutally honest. time is ticking and I need to know if this is worth a real drawing or if I should scrap it and start over.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/57491572@N06/

 

[The Axeman]

I think first you should have looked at the board first, so you would have seen this...

http://trekbbs.com/showthread.php?t=132240

where there are 30 pages of designs. I think you should also read the contest rules again, because you sure as hell are not designing the official next Enterprise. Your design has some merit, but looks a little old fashioned right now for an ENT-F.

 

[Dac]

The detailing is old fashioned, but the shape could definitely work.

Of course, i'm also fairly sure the competition states the design must not be posted online prior to submission....